大学英语四级写作.doc

大学英语四级写作 续智贤四级考试题型比例听力（35%）阅读（35%）、完型填空或改错（10%）、作文和翻译（20%）。四级考试各题型分值听力249分，阅读249分，完型填空或改错70分，作文142分。 2008年6月四级范文Recreational activities1 娱乐活动多种多样2 娱乐活动可能使人们受益，也可能有危害性3 作为大学生，我的看法。Recreational activities never fail to fascinate human beings, we always consider recreational activities as something to relax ourselves or something that can add color to the dull routine of every day life.Most of us, however, have formed a different picture of recreational activities. Some people think that they are useful and can offer us something of value or keep us fit. You will never feel bored. Your life will always be colorful.The other side of the picture is quite the opposite. Others hold the opinion that recreational activities take up limited precious students time which can otherwise be used for study. Therefore, results in poor academic performance and self-humiliation. Perhaps there is an element of truth in both these pictures. After a thorough consideration, for my part, I am in favor of the former view. One of the things that fascinates me most about recreational activities is the popular belief that they, by occupying spare time so constructively ,makes a person contented ,with no time for boredom!Limiting The Use of Disposable Plastic Bags 1.一次性塑料袋曾被广泛的使用 2.造成的问题 3.限制使用的意义 There was a time when disposable plastic bags were widely used in China. Wherever you wanted to buy something, this kind of bags were offered for free for the sake of your convenience. And recently the problems of using disposable plastic bags have been brought into public focus.For a start, our environment has been greatly polluted by so-called “white pollution”, the truth is beyond question. And the reason is not far to seek, these bags are thrown away after the first use, and we often see the bags flying in the sky in windy days.Whats more, plastic bags may do great harm to our health, for most of them are made of some certain chemical materials that may cause serious disease. And such cases often appear in news broadcast or in newspapers. In the light of the seriousness, some proper measures have been taken in our country. A strict limit on the using of disposable plastic bags has been taken officially, not only in big supermarkets but in small shops as well. Admittedly, this limit has made it possible for the public to realize the importance of environmental protection and enable we Chinese people to cherish the beauty of our communities. Meanwhile, to some degree, the chances that we will be knocked down by some certain illnesses are remote.n 结构合理三段式; 中心突出主题句；层次清晰导航语；词汇闪光亮点句。 写作常用角度n 生活角度n we always consider recreational activities as something to relax ourselves or something that can add color to the dull routine of every day life.排列组合n Sth will make our life more enjoyable, that is to say, sth can add color to the dull routine of every day life.生活的乐趣n For the majority of people, reading or learning a new skill has become the source of their happiness and contentment n 对大多数人来讲，阅读或学习一项新技术已成为他们快乐的来源 n Furthermore, students living in their own home would have access to a comfortable life and have more opportunities to communicate with their parents, which have beneficial impact on development of their personal character.n 而且，学生生活在自己家中，有舒适的生活，并有更多机会和父母交流，这对他们个性的培养是有利的。时间角度n Collecting, by occupying spare time so constructively, makes a person contented, with no time for boredom. n It provides relaxation for leisure hours, as just looking at ones treasures is always a joy.n A proper part-time job does not occupy students too much time. In fact, it is unhealthy for them to spend all of time on their study. As an old saying goes: All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.n Whats more, living in school can save them a great deal of time on the way between home and school everyday, so they would be able to concentrate more time and energy on their academic work.n 而且，生活在学校里能节省大量每天往返于学校和家的路上的时间，这会使他们有更多的时间和精力放在学习上。n Furthermore, students living in their own home would have access to a comfortable life and have more opportunities to communicate with their parents, which have beneficial impact on development of their personal character.n 而且，学生生活在自己家中，有舒适的生活，并有更多机会和父母交流，这对他们个性的培养是有利的。知识角度 Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. n For people who want to adopt a healthy and meaningful life style, it is important to find time to learn certain new knowledge. Just as an old saying goes: it is never too late to learn.n 对于那些想过上健康而有意义的生活的人们来说，找时间学习一些新知识是很重要的，正如那句老话：活到老，学到老 n The majority of students believe that part-time job will provide them with more opportunities to develop their interpersonal skills, which may put them in a favorable position in the future job markets.n 大部分学生相信业余工作会使他们有更多机会发展人际交往能力，而这对他们未来找工作是非常有好处的。n Many parents believe that additional educational activities enjoy obvious advantage. By extra studies, they maintain, their children are able to obtain many kinds of practical skills and useful knowledge, which will put them in a beneficial position in the future job markets when they grow up.n 许多家长相信额外的教育活动有许多优点，通过学习，他们的孩子可以获得很多实践技能和有用的知识，当他们长大后，这些对他们就业是大有好处的。E 角度n By taking a major-related part-job, students can not only improve their academic studies, but gain much experience, experience they will never be able to get from the textbooks.n 通过做一份和专业相关的工作，学生不仅能够提高他们的专业能力，而且能获得从课本上得不到n Now people in growing numbers are beginning to believe that learning new skills and knowledge contributes directly to enhancing their job opportunities or promotion opportunities.n 现在越来越多的人开始相信学习新的技术和知识能直接帮助他们获得工作就会或提升的机会。健康角度n Now people in growing numbers are beginning to believe that some certain sports contribute directly to our body health by giving us some physical exercises.主题句的写法n Many people believe that international tourism produce positive effects on economic growth and local government should be encouraged to promote international tourism.n 许多人认为国际旅游对经济发展有积极作用，应鼓励地方政府发展国际旅游。主题句一n Sth is very important.n Sth is of great importance.n Sth plays an important role in peoples life/study主题句二n Sth can produce positive effects on in more than one way.n Sth may bring about negative impacts on 万能理由之坏处 TV takes up limited precious childrens time which can otherwise be used for more valuable activities such as sports or homework. Therefore, results in poor academic performance and self-humiliation .n 如今，很多年轻人沉浸在电脑游戏中，以至于废寝忘食，产生了许多消极结果。n Many youngsters today are so preoccupied with computer games as to for sake food and sleep, resulting in a host of adverse consequences. 坏处之-压力n Under considerable pressure from thereforewill only add to their burden.坏处之-钱，精力n calls for money and energy, both of which are not affordable for us.坏处之-环境污染n Pollution poses a great threat to our existence.n 污染对我们的生存造成巨大威胁。n Some of theare poisonous and dangerous to health.坏处之-犯罪n are likely to commit a crime个性，技能，孤僻，心理n Moreover, children will have less time to play and communicate with their peers due to extra studies, consequently, it is difficult to develop and cultivate their character and interpersonal skills. They may become more solitary and even suffer from certain mental illness.n 而且，由于要额外地学习，孩子们没有多少时间和同龄的孩子玩耍和交流，很难培养他们的个性和交际能力。他们可能变得孤僻甚至产生某些心理疾病。万能理由之重要性 Punctuality is a necessary habit in all public affairs in civilized society. Without it, nothing could ever be brought to a conclusion; everything would be in a state of chaos. (抽象)n Keeping mental health is an important condition in all public affairs in civilized society, especially to university students. Without it nothing could be brought to a conclusion, everything would be in a state of chaos. n And recently the issue of disorder in brains has been aroused wide concern on campus. 具体 n It is widely acknowledged that computer and other machines have become an indispensable part of our society, which make our life and work more comfortable and less laborious.n 人们普遍认为计算机和其他机器已经成为我们社会必不可少的一部分。 它们使我们的生活更舒适，减少了大量劳动。机会n As she is not rich, the chances that she will ever be able to afford such purchases are remote.2008年12月四级n The chances that we will be knocked down by some certain illnesses are remote.2008年12月六级n Therefore, the chances that I will suffer from mental disease are remote.万能理由之喜欢n Cats never fail to fascinate human beings.n The latest surveys show that quite a few children have unpleasant associations with homework.n 最近的调查显示相当多的孩子对家庭作业没什么好感。n An investigation shows that female workers tend to have a favorable attitude toward retirement.n 一项调查显示妇女欢迎退休。万能理由之影响n Antique shops exert a great fascination on a great many people.2008-6 四级写作n Recreational activities exert a great fascination on a great many people.n 2007-12 六级写作n Digital products have exerted a profound influence on us in more than one way.2008-6 六级写作n Additionally, e-products exert a subtle influence on the teenagers, because of this， they often prefer to choose modern e-books than traditional books万能理由之表示结论n From what has been mentioned above，we can come to the conclusion that .n From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion thatn From what has been discussed above, I am fully convinced that n 从上述讨论中，我们可以自然地得出这样的结论_ n From what has been discussed above, we may reasonably arrive at the conclusion that _. 单一内容，论述好坏 n From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that advantages of bicycle far outweigh its disadvantages and it will still play essential roles in modern society.n 通过以上讨论，我们可以得出结论：自行车的优点远大于缺点，并且在现代社会它仍将发挥重要作用。单一内容，趋利避害n Computers do play a positive role in the development of people lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts. We should，therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.（有替换表达） n What we must do is to encourage the strength and diminish the weaknesses to the least extent.n 我们必须尽可能发挥其优势，趋吉避凶。 单一内容，无伤无害n In a word, digital products, like everything else, have both favorable and unfavorable aspects. Whatever effects they have, one thing is certain: digital products in themselves are neither good nor bad. It is the uses to which it is put that determine their value to the society. 单一内容，发表观点n From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw a conclusion that part-time job can produce a far-reaching impact on students and they should be encouraged to take part-time job, which will benefit students and their family, even the society as a whole.n 通过上面的讨论，我们不难得出结论：业余工作对学生们会产生深远的影响，我们应鼓励学生从事业余工作，这将有利于学生和他们的家庭，甚至整个社会。二、万能短语n 欣赏大自然的风景n to appreciate the scenery of naturen 欣赏古典文学n to appreciate the classical literatun 开拓视野 n to broaden the horizonn 开拓心胸 n to broaden the mindn 扩大知识面 n expand ones scope of knowledge n grasp good communication skillsn 掌握良好的交流技能n 启迪心灵n to enlighten the mindn 陶冶品德 n to cultivate the charactern 培养公德心 n to cultivate the public mindednessn cultivate a strong sense of responsibilityn 培养了强烈的责任感 n undertake the due obligationsn 承担责任 n promote social skills and competencen 提高了社会能力和竞争力n 维护健康n to maintain healthn 松散身心n to relax oneselfn 调剂生活 n to make life pleasantn 提升生活质量 n to promote the qualities of lifen 提升生活的水平 n to raise the standard of living （比较少）n 增加生活的情趣 n to increase the pleasures of life n 解除紧张和焦虑 n to relieve the tension and anxiety both from the society and the schoolwork n lighten the burden ofn 减轻了的负担n financial burden n psychological burden n 经济/心理负担 n 较好地驾驭生活n be a better pilot of ones life n 关心社会 n to be concerned about the societyn 贡献国家n to contribute oneself to the countryn adapt oneself to the development ofn 使自己适应的发展n 面临困难n to be confronted with the difficultyn 克服困难 n to overcome the difficultyn 注意卫生n to emphasize the importance of hygienen 重视：n attach much importance/significance to n 对有益n to be beneficial ton 对有害n to be harmful ton 采取步骤 n to take stepsn to take measures n 有很深的了解n to have a deep understanding of n 有广泛的知识n to have a wide range of knowledgen give a big push to the development of educationn 给予教育极大的推动 n 扮演重要角色 n to play an important role inn 强烈愿望n express a strong desire to n According to a recent survey, a growing number of people express a strong desire to take another job or spend more time on their job in order to get more money to support their family.n 根据最近的一项调查，越来越多的人表达了想从事另外的工作或加班以赚取更多的钱来补贴家用的强烈愿望。n 不遗余力n to spare no efforts to n 不辞辛劳n to take the pains ton 竞争与合作精神n sense of competition and cooperation n 经不起推敲 n cannot bear closer analysis n cannot hold water n 社会进步的反映n mirror of social progress n 提高大众的环保意识 n promote the public awareness of environmental protection; n arouse peoples awareness of environmental protection n 考虑到诸多因素 n take many factors into account/ consideration n 从另一个角度 n from another perspective n 在人类生活的方方面面 n in all aspects of human life n 社会进步的体现n a symbol of society progress n 社会进步的反映n mirror of social progress n 科技的飞速更新 n the ever-accelerated updating of science and technology n 日益激烈的社会竞争 n the increasingly fierce social competition n 有其自身的优缺点 n has its merits and demeritsn advantages and disadvantages n 把时间和精力放在上 n focus time and energy on n 许多问题：n a host of problems n 接触社会：n come into frequent contact with the society 万能模板n 对立观点型背景句展现问题n 问题的常用词：question, problem, issue 第一段n 1.Recently, the issue of . has been brought into public focus. 近来，_的问题引起了社会的广泛关注。 n Recently the issue of (whether or not) has been in the limelight（成为引人注目的中心） and has aroused wide concern in the public. 近来，是否_的问题已经非常明确而且引起了社会的广泛关注。 n Along with the advance of the society more and more problems are brought to our attention, one of which is . 随着社会的不断发展，出现了越来越多的问题，其中之一便是_。 Now we are entering a brand new era full of opportunities and innovations, and great changes have taken place in peoples attitude towards some traditional practice. 现在我们进入了一个充满机遇和创新的崭新时代，很多人对某些传统的看法也发生了很大改变。 n _已成为人的关注的热门话题，特别是在年青人当中，将引发激烈的辩论。 n _ has become a hot topic among people，especially among the young and heated debates are right on their way. 改写题目“花开两朵”句型n Most of us ，however，have formed an unrealistic picture of life on a desert island.n Most of us ，however，have formed a different picture ofsome people think they are beneficial, while others hold the opposite view.第三句n And we rarely reach an absolute consensus on such a controversial issue. 对于这种极具争议的话题，我们很难作出绝对的回答。 n People from different backgrounds would put different interpretations on the same case.n 不同行业的人对同一种问题的解释不尽相同。 第二段 n Some people take the attitude that can produce positive effects on us n Those who have already benefited from practicing it sing high praise of it.n First of all n Furthermore n Whats more 第三段n The other side of the picture is quite the opposite.n Others harbor the idea that, may bring about negative impacts on us. n Those who strongly disapprove of . have cogent reasons for it.n For one thing ,n For another,n 第四段第四段Perhaps there is an element of truth in both these pictures.n As far as I am concerned, I am inclined to be on the side of the former view. 在我看来，我较同意前一种观点。 n After a thorough consideration, for my part, I am in favor of the former view. n 经过深思熟虑，我较支持前一种看法，n One of the things that fascinates us most about cats is the popular belief that they have nine lives.处理方式二n From my own perspective, computers do play a positive role in the development of people lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts. We should，therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.n What we must do is to encourage the strength and diminish the weaknesses to the least extent.问题解决型n 注意： n 该题目不是针对问题的争议性，针对问题产生的原因和解决办法n 背景句相似，二三句不同What are the causes and solutions of the problem of the scarcity of water resource?n 背景句：n Recently the issue of (whether or not ) has been in the limelight and has aroused wide concern in the public. n 改写题目：关注原因：n A number of factors could account for the problem, but the following are the most critical ones.n 或者n 交待讨论内容：n There are some factors leading to this problem.n A number of factors are responsible for this problem.n Some of the most common factors will be discussed below, followed by some responsible/reasonable solutions.n First of all.n Furthermoren Whats more.法律，意识n In view of the seriousness of this problem, effective measures should be taken before things get worse.n For one thing, it is essential that laws and regulations be worked out and enforced to ban/reducen For another, the public should enhance their awareness of the importance of .n With these measures taken, it is reasonable for us to believe that the problem caused by will be solved in the near future.给定观点型n 一种看法或者观点一n Nowadays, with 现象，people are becoming increasingly aware of the significance of 主题词. n In my point of view, 改写题目. n There are numerous reasons to support my point of view, and I would explore only a few of the most important ones here.n One of the primary causes is that 支持论点的理由n Another reason that can be seen by every person is that 支持论点的理由， 阐述理由n Taking into account of all these factors, we may draw the conclusion that 重述标题. Therefore, 提出意见或建议The Importance of Keeping a Good Moodn Nowadays, with the surging cases of mental problem, committing suicide, or killing reported. People are becoming increasingly awa