英语周记写作.ppt

Writing a Diary,Revision 如何写英文日记,日记是用来叙述一天生活中发生的最有趣或感受最深的一些事情。 写英文日记要注意格式、时态和和人称的正确使用。英文日记的格式为：,日期(Date), 星期(Day) 天气(Weather) 正文(Body)：_ _,写作指导 1. 通常是在左上角写出当天的日期和星期，在靠右的部分写上当天的天气情况。正文可有标题，也可不要。要注意正确书写月份和星期的名称；天气多用形容词表示。首字母通常要大写。,Days:,Monday 星期一 Tuesday 星期二 Wednesday 星期三 Thursday 星期四 Friday 星期五 Saturday 星期六 Sunday 星期日,Months:,1月 - January (Jan.) 2月 - February (Feb.) 3月 - March (Mar.) 4月 - April (Apr.) 5月 - May 6月 - June (Jun.),7月 -July (Jul.) 8月 -August (Aug.) 9月 -September (Sep.) 10月 -October (Oct.) 11月 -November (Nov.) 12月 -December (Dec.),晴 - Fine; Sunny; Shining； 雨 - Rainy; Raining; 雪 - Snowy 阴 - Overcast 雾 - foggy 多风 -Windy 多云 -Cloudy 暴风雨 - Stormy; Thundering 阵雨 - Shower,Weather:,2. 正文： 日记一般用过去时态。 使用第一人称。 经过：按事情发生的先后顺序来记述。所以常用at first, then, later on, soon, at last等单词或词组使整篇文章通顺贯。 结尾： 发表自己的感想或评论，可根据具体情况使用过去时态、现在时态或将来时态。,常用的单词或词组使整篇文章通顺贯：,Beginning of the event: first, firstly, in the beginning Course of the event: then, later on, after, meanwhile, at the same time, whats more, moreover Ending: at last, in the end, finally, in short, in a word, as a result,10月20日星期天，你和同学们到红星农场旅游。 根据下面的图表用英语写一篇日记。 6：30：起床、乘车出发去红星农场、一路欣赏风景、唱歌 8：30：到达农场、受到欢迎，参观、植树、了解自然 13：00：野炊、乘车回家 有点累，但是很开心 要求：用first、 next 、then和 finally等连词 使日记连贯,可适当加一些感受。,writing,写作过程 1. 审题确定格式、体裁、时态、人称等 写作要点。 2. 列出提纲，确定开头句、扩展句和总 结句，选择好适宜的句型。 3. 利用一些关联词或者过渡句把句子有 机地连接起来，必要时可适当增加细节。 4. 仔细检查，适当修改，保证句子结构完 整，要点齐全，人称时态主谓一致。 5. 认真誊写，卷面整洁。,Step 1: Form,_ _ _ 正文_,October, 20th.,Sunday,Sunny,时态：_ 人称：_ 体裁：_,一般过去时,第一人称,记叙文,Step 2: Write down the necessary simple sentences with your partners.,Some necessary words and phrases: set off /have a good time/ enjoy the scenery give sb.a warm welcome show sb. around get close to nature/be on the way back Discuss together,Today my classmates and I went to Hongxin Farm for travel. I got up at 6:30 We set off by bus. We had a good time singing and enjoying the beautiful scenery outside the window. We arrived at the gate of the farm. The farmers waited to give us a warm welcome. We were shown around the big farm.,We began to plant trees. It was really a good way to get close to nature and protect the environment. I had a delicious picnic with my classmates. We were on the way back. Although we were all very tired, our travel was really unforgettable.,Step 3: connect the sentences with conjunction words and make the article better with your partner,Oct. l0st, Sunday, sunny Today I as well as my classmates went to Hongxin Farm for travel. First, I got up at 6:30 and we set off by bus. On the bus, we had a good time singing and enjoying the beautiful scenery outside the window. Then two hours later, we arrived at the gate of the farm, where the farmers were waiting to give us a warm welcome. After we were shown around the big farm, we began to plant trees, which was really a good way to get close to nature and protect the environment at the same time. Next, we had a picnic and it was great fun to eat in the open air. The time went very fast. Finally, It was time for us to go back. Although we were all very tired, our travel was really unforgettable. .,行文要连贯流畅 语句要严谨、准确 表达要简明、清楚 句型结构要有变化 语言使用适当得体,牢记书面表达概要,总结常用句型：,外出活动、欣赏美景 We went out for a picnic with my friends yesterday. Early in the morning, we set off for the farm for a visit. On the way, we had a good time singing and beautiful scenery. We enjoying the were shown around the farm, where we saw many beautiful plants .,The moment we got to the top of the hill, we were attracted by the beautiful scenery. It was time for us to go back when the sun started to go down. 事故发生 Unfortunately an accident happened to him= Unfortunately he had an accident. I was walking when I met with an old friend of mine. He was so frightened that I could do nothing,Feelings: Although we were tired, we felt very happy. We enjoyed ourselves. = We had fun. =We had a good time. On the way back, we were laughing and talking all the time. What a wonderful weekend we had! Though I was late for school, Im proud of what I did. It wan an unforgettable experience for me.,常用过渡语 “启”first, first of all, firstly, in the beginning, generally speaking, now, recently,“承” second, secondly, also, then, meanwhile, still, at the same time, whats more, moreover, after a while, after a few days, for example, in fact, in other words, indeed, of course,“转”anyway, after all, but, nevertheless, on the contrary, otherwise, perhaps, unfortu