中文论文中的写作问题.ppt

中文论文中的英文写作问题,中国医学科学院北京协和医学院,肿瘤研究所,周传农,2014.10.29,题目,题目太繁,二甲双胍体外诱导人肝癌Huh-7细胞凋亡的实验及其机制研究二甲双胍体外诱导人肝癌Huh-7细胞凋亡及其作用机制,题目不全,儿童单纯性肥胖模型的制作儿童单纯性肥胖小鼠模型的制作,不好的中文题目,去垂体幼鼠生物特性及激素水平的观察去垂体幼年大鼠的生物学特性与激素水平,不好的中文题目,中药松友饮对体内化疗后残余肝癌作用的实验研究中药松友饮对裸鼠体内化疗后残余肝癌的作用,不好的中文题目,IRP对无初乳仔鼠十二指肠IgG+和SIgA+细胞表达的影响板蓝根多糖对无初乳仔鼠十二指肠IgG+和SIgA+细胞表达的影响,题目错误,基因工程大鼠研究进展ProcessinRatGeneticsProgressinresearchonratgeneticengineering,题目太大,不同测压方法测试大鼠结肠破裂压AcomparisonofdifferentpressuretestingsystemsforholloworganoflaboratoryanimalsComparisonofdifferentmethodsfortestingthecolonrupturepressureinrats,不好的英文题目,儿童单纯性肥胖小鼠模型的制作EstablishmentofchildhoodsimpleobesityanimalmodelEstablishmentofamousemodelofchildhoodsimpleobesity,题目滥用缩写,哺乳动物ES细胞与EG细胞研究进展哺乳动物胚胎干细胞与胚胎生殖细胞研究进展ESembryonicstemcellsEGembryonicgermcells,不好的中文题目滥用缩写,反复冷冻与冠状动脉结扎法制作大鼠AMI模型方法对比研究反复冷冻与冠状动脉结扎法制作大鼠急性心肌梗死模型方法的比较,题目滥用缩写,乳酸调控大鼠肠黏膜微血管内皮细胞NF-B信号通路的研究LacticacidinhibitsNF-BsignalingpathwaysinRIMMVECs读者看不懂RIMMVECs,题目拼写错误、大小写,ComparisionofHematologicalParametersinGerm-freeandConventionalguineapigComparisonofHematologicalParametersinGerm-freeandConventionalguineapig,不好的中、英文题目,LPS和石墨粉诱导小鼠急性肺损伤病理形态学比较PathologicalcomparisonofLPSandGraphitepower-inducedacutelunginjury中文：应写明脂多糖英文：LPSLipopolysaccharide英文：powerpowder,英文题目拼写错误,GongH,ShuL,XuH,ChenB,MaoR,ZhangF,WangY.Bilateralinternalcarotidarteriesligationtemporaryimpairsbrainvasculaturevinyoungrats.AutonNeurosci.2013,173(1-2):39-44.此文已在国外正式发表,不好的英文题目,清脑方对缺血性眩晕大鼠脑损伤的保护作用ProtectiveeffectofQNFonbraininjuryinischemicvertigoratsProtectiveeffectoftheChinesemedicineQingnaofangonbraininjuryinischemicvertigorats,英文题目错误,改良半椎板切除法建立大鼠腰神经根压迫模型的研究Thestudyonratmodeloflumbarnevernerverootcompressionviamodifiedunilateralhemilaminectomyapproach啰嗦、缺建立、拼写错误,英文题目单复数,非人灵长类局部脑缺血动物模型研究现状述评Reviewoffocalcerebralischemiamodelinnon-humanprimateReviewoffocalcerebralischemiamodelsinnon-humanprimates,英文题目滥用缩写,小型猪体外循环下心脏手术的麻醉AnesthesiaofCardiacSurgeryUnderCPBonSwineAnesthesiainCardiacSurgeryUnderCardiopulmonaryBypassonPigs,英文题目拼写错误,ComparisionofHematologicalParametersinGerm-freeandConventionalguineapigComparisonofHematologicalParametersinGerm-freeandConventionalguineapig,很错误的英文题目,基因工程大鼠研究进展ProcessinRatGeneticsProgressinresearchonratgeneticengineering,英文题目错误用词,TheComparativeStudyonTumorGrowthandMetastasisofThereKindsofMiceBreastTumorCellswithLuc-labeledTheComparativeStudyonTumorGrowthandMetastasisofThreeKindsofMiceBreastTumorCellswithLuc-labeled,英文题目很大错误,常压缺氧致大鼠小脑浦肯野细胞急性病理改变的研究AcutepathologychangesofPurkinjecellsinmousecerebellumundernormobarichypoxia,署名与单位,署名大小写,Hebao-ming,wangzhizhong，liuxiaofei，yaohao,ouyangxiaohui,sujiaguiHeBao-ming,WangZhizhong，LiuXiaofei，YaoHao,OuyangXiaohui,SuJiagui姓名大写、标点符号,单位错词、错名、大小写,TheforthApplicatedHospitalofSuzhouUniversitytheForthAffiliatedHospitalofSoochowUniversity,单位不全,AcademyofMilitarySciencesAcademyofMilitaryMedicalSciences,单位大小写,Departmentof,TheFifthCentralHospitalofTianjin,Tianjin300162,china.Departmentof,theFifthCentralHospitalofTianjin,Tianjin300162,China.,署名、单位,Baiaiguo*，Zhengchuansheng，Zhouguofeng，Lianghuiming，Fenggansheng.Wantwanthospital,Changsha410016,China(WangWangHospital),人名的大小写。单位名称错误,署名、单位大小写、拼写错误、标点符号,WEIBing-yan,LIUTian-fu,GUOYong-chang,ZHANGYin-hong(thecenterofLaboratoryanimalofShanXiMendicalUniversity,taiyuan030001,China),英文摘要中滥用缩写,英文摘要滥用缩写,Objective：ToobservetheaffectofRGZandATRAonthegrowthofmyelomaxenograftinnudemiceandRGZrosiglitazoneATRAall-trans-retinoicacidaffecteffect,滥用缩写英文摘要,IHCanalysisonTMArevealedthatImmunohistochemicalanalysisontissuemicroarrayrevealedthat,英文摘要滥用缩写,Toscreenthegenesdifferentiallyexpressedinhumanrenalcellcarcinoma(RCC)celllinesusingSSH.Toscreenthegenesdifferentiallyexpressedinhumanrenalcellcarcinoma(RCC)celllinesusingsuppressionsubtractivehybridization(SSH).,（摘要首句）,用错词,错词,大鼠给予药液灌胃AllratswerelavagedwithKFLsolution.AllratsweregavagedwithKFLsolution.,错词,神经上皮移植NeuralepithelialtransplantationNeuroepithelialtransplantation,错词,巴马小型猪12只12Obamamini-pigswererandomlydividedinto12Bamamini-pigswererandomlydividedinto,错词,LowdoesLowdoseHighdoesHighdose,通篇如此,错词,RT-PCRwasusedtoamplificationthefull-lengthsequenceofRT-PCRwasusedtoamplifythefull-lengthsequenceof,错词,Otheradversereactionsincludeatrialpremature,oralmucositis,fatigueetal.Otheradversereactionsincludeatrialpremature,oralmucositis,fatigue,etc.,错词,GeneBankGenBank,错词意思反了,正常、特异抗原批内变异系数分别为8.3%和6.4%，批间平均变异系数分别为9.7%和11.5%.Theinter-assaycoefficientofvariationofnormalantigenandspecialantigenwas8.3%and6.4%,andtheintra-assayaveragecoefficientofvariationwas9.7%and11.5%,respectively,错词,评价其抗癌作用Toaccesstheanti-tumoreffectToassesstheanti-tumoreffect,错词,探讨其作用机理ToexplicitthemolecularmechanismofToexplorethemolecularmechanismof,英文摘要首句,错词,脂质体LipidosomeLiposome（该文论述基因治疗的主要手段）,错词,系统性感染SystematicinfectionSystemicinfection,错词,wasanalysisedwasanalyzed,错词、单复数,ThesequencewerecomparisedwiththeThesequenceswerecomparedwiththe,单复数,ThelevelofP24antigeninthesupernatantweretestedcontinuously.ThelevelofP24antigeninthesupernatantwastestedcontinuously.,频繁的错误注释,滥用注释,糖尿病(diabeticmellitus)糖尿病(diabetesmellitus),一篇关于小型猪糖尿病模型的论文,错误注释,腺病毒（adenoviral）腺病毒（adenovirus）,错误注释,单纯疱疹病毒（herpessimplevirus）单纯疱疹病毒（herpessimplexvirus）,错误注释,无特定病原体(specialpathogenfree，SPF)无特定病原体(specificpathogenfree，SPF),错误注释,独立通风笼具(Individuallywentilatecagesdul，IVC)(Individuallyventilatedcages，IVC),错误注释,热休克蛋白(Hotshockprotein,HSP)(Heatshockpreotein,HSP),错误注释,C反应蛋白（C-reactionprotein，CRP）C反应蛋白（C-reactiveprotein，CRP）,错误注释,集落形成抑制法(humantumorcellcloningassay,HTCA)(colonyformationinhibitionassay),错误注释,自然杀伤细胞(naturalkillcell，NK)自然杀伤细胞(naturalkillercell，NK),错误注释,神经生长因子（nevergrowthfactor，NGF）神经生长因子（nervegrowthfactor，NGF）,全文多处，一律错,错误注释,表皮生长因子受体2（humanepidermalgrowthfactor-2，HER-2）（humanepidermalgrowthfactorreceptor-2，HER-2）,滥用缩写,图1Ca.C中survivn阳性（一张照片的说明）（文内根本就没有见到过Ca.C）（猜想是癌细胞的意思）,参考文献,参考文献丢失第一作者、姓名颠倒,JeongmiAn,Hee-JinY,KimoonPark，etal.(原杂志)JeoumLee,JeongmiAn，Hee-JinYang，Byung-WooKim,KimoonPark.LeeJ,AnJ,YangHJ，etal.,参考文献作者姓名拼写错误,GordonMN,KingDL,DiamondDMetal.CorrelationbetweenGordonMN,KingDL,DiamondDM,etal.Correlationbetween,参考文献作者姓与名颠倒、标点,MariaWW,EdwardP,DennisL,etal.MariaWerner-Wasik，EdwardPequinot，DennisLeeper，etal.Werner-WasikM,PequinotE,LeeperD,etal.,参考文献作者格式怪异,GiuseppeVerdileSamuelEGandyRalphN.Martins.GiuseppeVerdileG,GandySE,MartinsRN.,参考文献作者etc./etal.,TylerKL,BartonES,IbachML,ETC.TylerKL,BartonES,IbachML,etal.etalii(andothers)人etcetera(andtherest,andtheothers)物,参考文献作者人数多、人名繁、出现号码,KunihiroNishida1,GeorghiaMichael1,DobromirDobrev2.andStanleyNattel1NishidaK,MichaelG,DobrevD,etal.,参考文献出现两批作者?,VaniniG,WathenBL,LydicR,etal.Baghdoyan,etal.EndogenousGABALevelsinthepotineVaniniG,WathenBL,LydicR,BaghdoyanHA.EndogenousGABALevelsinthepotine,参考文献作者11ll、姓名颠倒、大小写、etc.,Wi11iamLuyties,PeterJ.Bredenbeek,AnsF.H.notenetc.LuytjesW,BredenbeekPJ,NotenAF,etal.,参考文献错写中国作者、标点,YuhuanW,XinmingT,CharlesH,etal.WangYH,TuXM,HumphreyC,etal.原文：YuhuanWang,XinmingTu,CharlesHumphrey,参考文献作者、文题、标点,BakemanRQV.OTS.AprogramforconvertingBakemanR,QueraV.OTS:aprogramforconverting,参考文献作者、文题、杂志、标点,QuinnP,KerinJ.F.,WarnersG.M.Improverdpregnancyrateinhunmaninvitrofertilizationwiththeuseofmediumbasedonthecompositionofhunmantubalfluid.Fertil.Steril.,1985,44:493-498.,参考文献引错作者、文题有错、杂志拼错,SchmittCA,LoweSW.Apoptosiscelldeathfollowingexposuretofluorideinratalveolarmacrophage.ArchToxical,1996,70:249-251HiranoS,AndoM.Apoptoticcelldeathfollowingexposuretofluorideinratalveolarmacrophages.ArchToxicol,1996,70:249-251,参考文献卷号怪异,ComprTher,2010,V36N:3-13.ComprTher,2010,36:3-13.,参考文献丢失问号、错误的卷号页码,Inferiorvenacavaleiomyosarcoma:isreconstructionnecessaryafterresection.JAmCollSurg,2010,211(1):145-146.DaylamiR,AmiriA,GoldsmithB,etal.Inferiorvenacavaleiomyosarcoma:isreconstructionnecessaryafterresection?JAmCollSurg,2010,210:185-190.,参考文献同一本杂志两种写法,ChishimaT,YangM,MiyagiY,etal.ProcNatlAcadSciUSA.1997,94(11):573-576.HumpherysD,EgganK,AkutsuH,etal.Proc.Natl.Acad.Sci.USA.2002,99(20):12889-12894.,参考文献缺杂志、缺标点,Age-relatedincreaseinducibleatrialfibrillation201021(1):88-93.Age-relatedincreaseinducibleatrialfibrillation.JCardiovascElectrophysiol2010，21(1):88-93.,参考文献作者姓名书写错误,LiJHWQS.AllogroominginwildTibetanmacaquesLiJH，WangQS.AllogroominginwildTibetanmacaques,参考文献学位、杂志全称、标点、大小写、拼写错误,ShanglongYao,Ph.D,DanFeng,M.D.LosartanAttenuatesVentilator-InducedLungInjury.JournalofsurjicalResearch,2008,145(1):25-32.,KTA,RM,BC,etal.Poly(ADP-ribose)polymeraseinhibitionimprovespostischemicmyocardialfunctionaftercardiople-giacardiopulmonarybypass.JAmCollSurg,2003,197(2):270-277.KhanTA,RuelM,BianchiC,etal.,参考文献缺姓名、拼写错误,参考文献文题首词丢失,CampylobacterjejuniinfectionindifferentmicestrainsPrimaryCampylobacterjejuniinfectionindifferentmicestrains,参考文献丢了作者、写了单位,ClevelandClinicFoundation,Cleveland,OH,USA.Theglobalepidemiologyofheartfailure.MedClinNAm2004,88:1135-1143.YoungJB.Theglobalepidemiologyofheartfailure.MedClinNAm2004,88:1135-1143.,参考文献文题脱漏,FossellaFV,DeVoreR,KerrRN,etal.RandomizedphaseIIItrialofdocetaxelversusvinorelbineorifosfamideinpatientswithadvancednon-small-celllungcancerpreviouslytreatedwithplatinum-containingchemotherapyregimens.TheTAX320Non-SmallCellLungCancerStudyGroup.JClinOncol,2000，18:2354-2362.,参考文献格式颠倒,Circulation.2003Sep9;108Suppl1:II230-6.Genetransferofhepatocytegrowthfactorattenuatespostinfarctionheartfailure.JayasankarV,WooYJ,BishLT,PirolliTJ,ChatterjeeS,BerryMF,BurdickJ,GardnerTJ,SweeneyHL.,其他,不好的文章首句,MG患者通常有眼肌受累，重症肌无力（myastheniagravis，MG）患者通常有眼肌受累，,不好的摘要首句,ToInvestigatethemechanismofNAFLDingerbilsToInvestigatethemechanismofnon-alcoholicfattyliverdisease(NAFLD)ingerbils,中英文的语气应该一致,结论Ezrin、E-cadherin和CD44V6在NSCLC的生长和转移过程中发挥着重要的调控作用，Ezrin,E-cadherinandCD44V6probablyplayanimportantroleintheregulationofgrowthandmeastasisoflungcancer.,材料