module6 unit3 a letter of advice 教案

Teaching planModule6 unit3 A healthy lifeA letter of advice 潘碧秀一、 教学目标Students will be able to1 Knowledge aim:1) learn to write a letter of advice.2) master the steps of writing.2 Ability aim:1) train the skills of discovering and correcting mistakes.2) learn to carry on self-assessment and peer-assessment.3) develop the sense of processfocused writing. 3 Moral aim: Friendship is valuable in our lives and we are supposed to help each other whenever help is needed.二、过程与方法： 1. Task-based teaching and learning.2 .Self and cooperative learning 3 . Discussion三、教学的重点和难点教学重点：通过阅读一封信来使学生学会如何写回信给出合理建议。教学难点：熟练运用写建议信的格式。四、教学资源人教版新课标英语模块六教科书计算机ppt幻灯片投影机五、教学步骤： 活动一：导入和写作前奏（Lead-in & Pre-writing）。After listening to a beautiful song -Thats what friends are forT: Its lucky if you have a best firend ,but can you always get on well with your best friend? Next, lets read a letter on p24 to find out whats happened to Xiaolei. Read for information: (individual work)Xiaolei has troubles with her best friend. List her troubles.(individual and group work)Its up to you to write a letter of advice.What advice can you give to her according to her troubles?(group discussions)Ok, discussion is over. Weve find out key points in our writing. Is it time to get down to our writing? Just wait.One more thing we have to do- how many paragraphs will we write?.in fact we are talking about Outline of a letter of advice. (段落安排）Outline of a letter of advice. (段落安排）Beginning (First paragraph) : 表明写作意图 (state writing purpose)Body ( Middle paragraphs): 针对具体情况提出具体建议.语言必须具有伸缩性和劝慰性 。依次陈述建议 ,可一个建议一个段落.(tips on her troubles-one tip can be one paragraph.)Ending (Last paragraph) :对提出的建议进行总结，要注意语气使读者容易接受。(make a conclusion) Which is the most important part?. the body,the middle paragraphs.A letter of advice的模板Dear Li Xiaolei, I am sorry you have found yourself in such a difficult situation. Im willing/glad to share some advice with you. Firstly, You might as well Secondly , as for me, you dont have to anything you dont want. ,why not Lastly, if I were you/in this situation, I would I hope you will take my advice into account and find it practical. Good luck and best wishes, Sun Gao更多句型：Beginning(表明写作意图。) 1)I am sorry you have found yourself in such a difficult situation. Im willing/glad to share some advice with you.2) Thanks for trusting me. Regarding your problem (about.), Id like to make some suggestions. Body: (针对具体情况提出具体建议或忠告，语言必须具有伸缩性和劝慰性 。）依次陈述建议 1)first(ly), second(ly), third(ly),.lastly2)to begin with/to start with, then, later【经典句型】1)As far as I am concerned / In my opinion / As for me, you dont have to do anything you dont want2)If I were you/in this situation, I would 3)Youd better/might as well Ending（对提出的建议进行总结，要注意语气使读者容易接受。)【经典句型】1)I will be more than happy to see improvements in this matter.2)If you have any more problems, please feel free to contact me at any time.3)I hope you will take my advice into account/consideration and find it practical / useful / helpful.活动二：写中（While-writing）。合作学习之后，学生们开始独立写作（individual work）。教师将引导学生们运用提纲及刚才小组讨论的成果（句型和文章结构）进行针对范文的模仿写作，来独立完成自己的一篇建议信的初稿。活动三：写后（Post-writing）。在这一过程中，评价系统会得以积极地利用。通过老师提供的评价表作为自评（self-assessment）和互评（peer-assessment）的依据。学生两人一组，将写完的建议信相互交换，根据评价表来评价，最为重要的是一定要给同伴写出评语，学生根据这些评语做出修改。之后，教师挑选一到二篇习作，利用投影机展示给全班同学，进行全班同学的评价（class-assessment）。之后，学生认真抄写修改，完成二稿。教师在这其中要指出出现的优点和不足。五、Assignment Polish your letter and hand in it the next day.六、板书设计：Unit3 A healthy lifeWritingEvaluation (评价)AspectsYour evaluation 评价人Layout(安排/分段)Excellent Good AcceptableAll the points have been coveredYes Some points missingIdeasExcellent Good AcceptableLanguageExcellent Good AcceptableHandwriting Excellent Good AcceptableDear：Can you help me please? My best friend has just started smoking. I dont like it and I told her what I thought. She laughed at me and said that I was not grown-up enough.Then she offered me a cigarette and I felt embarrassed and awkward. I did not know how to refuse it. Please help me. I do not want ot start smoking, but I dont want ot lose my best friend, either.Yous sincerely,Li Xiaolei附： （Thats what friend are for）那就是朋友相处之道狄翁沃薇克 & 朋友们（Dionne Warwick & Friends） 4And I never thought Id feel this way And as far as Im concerned Im glad I got the chance to say That I do believe I love you And if I should ever go away Well then close your eyes and try to feel the way we do today And then if you can remember Keep smiling, keep shining Knowing you can always count on me for sure Thats what friends are for For good times and bad times Ill be on your side forever more Thats what friends are for Well you came and opened me And now theres so much more I see A so by the way I thank you And then for the times when were apart Well then close your eyes and know These words are coming from my heart And then if you can remember Dear Li Xiaolei, I am sorry you have found yourself in such a difficult situation. Im willing/glad to share some advice with you. First, I think it right for you to tell her what you thought and it wrong for her to laugh at you because smoking or not has nothing to do with being grown-up. Second, there is no need for you to feel embarrassed and awkward. Just say no to her offer of a cigarette because you dont have to do anything you dont want even if she is your best friend. Third ,you might as well as give her advice on harmful effects smoking will have on her. Smoking will affect her appearance,for example,the ends of her fingers as well as her white teeth will turn yellow . Besides, its easy to start smoking but tough to quit because you will become addicted to it physically,mentally and through habit as well. Whats worse,smoing can do g