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.介词：1. They tend to be more independent, which is a very important factor in academic study and research, ad well as giving them an advantage in terms of coping with the challenges of sudent life.2. The children are often spoilt, not in terms of love and attention becaause working parents do not have time for this, but in more material ways.3. I find myself in complete agreement with them with regard to experiments for new medicine.4. Physical punishments damaging the health of children should be dealt with according to laws regarding child abuse and physical assult.5. They are allowed to have whatever they want, regardless of price, and to behave as they please.举例、列举6. Even when children use a computer for other purposes, such as getting information or emailing friends, it is no substitute for human interaction.7. There are plenty of well-made TV programmes that provide viewers with information on such diverse topics as history, science, medicine, foreign languages and economics.8. Many people find their rewards unfair, especially when compring these super salaries with those of top surgeons or research scientists, or even leading politicians who have the responsibility of governing the country.（直接列举）9. In spite of all this, there are certain occasions when letters are still the number one choice. The wedding invitations always seem more formal and sincere if hand-written; holidy cards with ink will often delight us more; and a carefully written love letter may intrigue or move your beloved one more easily.（排比）进行释义10. Talent is what distinguishes a person who has been trained to play a sport or instrument, from those who become good players. In other words, there is more to the skill than a learned technique.11. Overall, I think the ability to keep a clear perspective in life is a more essential factor in achieving happiness. By that I mean an ability to have a clear sense of what is improtant in our lives and what is not.(or) more percisely/ i.e./ that is to say/ or rather12. This is a poem about death, or more precisely, dying.13. Some poems are mnemonics, I.e. they are designed to help you remember something.14. Some poems are mnemonics, that is to say, they are designed to help you remember something.Using fertilisers too much may damage peoples health. According to some research by agricultural scientists, a large proportion of common diseases troubing the elderly result from the excessive chemical residues contained in the food they consume everyday.度的把握1. If they could raise them to be considerate of others and to be social, responsible individuals, the whole community would benefit.2. High quality nursery schools could be established that would surpport families more in terms of raising the next generation. The government should fund this kind of parental surport, because this is no longer a problem for individual families, but for socirty as a whole.3. As the policy would also affect the cost of public transport, it would be very unpopular with everyone needs to travel on the roads.频率词：always often usually sometimes seldom rarely scarcely never4. These are often electronic games that tend to be very intense and rather violet. The player is usually the hero of the game and too much exposure can encourage children to be self-centered and insensitive to others.5. A childs education has never been about learning information and basic skills only.程度副词： possibly probably perhaps generally in general by and large In some circumstances/cases to some extent to a large ectent6. They are generally more confident and independent than children who stay at home with their parents.7. Good musicians or artists and exceptional sports stars have probably succeeded because of both good training and natural talent.8. This is probably ture to some extent.可能性动词：seem/appear/tend to/. be more/less likelt to.9. Boys in single-sex schools are more likely to take cookery classes and to study languages, which are often thought of as traditional subjects for girls.10. They tend to be more independent, which is a very important factor in academic study and research.可能性句型：it is possible that it is likely that it is said that11. Because it is more likely now that both parents work, there is little opportunity for children to stay in their own home up to that age.12. Even though it is unlikely that all workers will feel happy in their work, I think it is not unrealistic to promote job satisfaction in any job.13. Attending school from a young age is good for most children.14. This relatively short working life may be some justification for the very high pay.15. Today, education has become the most important thing for all the parents.比较、对比1. They are generally more confident and independent than children who stay at home with their parents and who are not used to strangers or new situations.2. Another advantage of going to school at an early age is that children devolop faster socially.3. I think the solution to the problem lies with the families, who need to be more aware of the future consequences of spoiling their children.4. Yet others think that spiritual paths, rather than either the material worlds or relationships with people, are the only way to ture happiness.Yet others think that spiritual paths, instead of either the material worlds or relationships with people, are the only way to ture happiness.Yet others think it is neither the material world nor relationships with people, but spiritual paths that are the only way to ture happiness.5. My own view is that there is no one major influence in a persons life. Instead, the traits we inherit from our parents and the situations and experiences that we encounter in life are constantly interacting.6. That is to say the information in such commercials is far from useful, but rather harmful.平行结构（用好and/or，6.5+建议掌握）1. Young adults may end up never returning to their studies or finding it difficult to readapt to an academic environment.2. They may think that it is better to continue in particular job, or to do something completely different from a university course.3. Satisfaction is also increased by a sense of responsibility for and loyalty to a team.4. In conclusion, I think that long-term traffic and pollution reductions would depend on educating the public to use public transport more, and on gavernments using public money to construct and run efficient systems.5. Without the natural talent, continuous training would be neither attractive nor productive, and without the training, the children would not learn how to exploit and develop their talent.简单句：Pattern1: 主系表（主语+be+.的形式，即A，B为升级版）1. A: His statement is somewhat exaggerating.B: His astatement sounds somewhat exaggerating.2. A: People are more and more self-centred.B: People have become increasingly self-centred.3. A: The nuclear weapon is still a threat to the world.B: The nuclear wepon remains a threat to the world.4. A: The use of cars was constant in the 1990s.B: the use of cars stayed constant in the 1990s.5. A: As an energy, the nuclear technology is too expensive and risky.B: As an energy, the nuclear technology has proven too expensive