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附录 写作练习答案二、写作常见错误分析一、语法错误（一）句子结构错误1 主从句叠置1) There are more and more students who like to use the computer. / More and more students like to use the computer.2) There are still many problems that should be noted and resolved. / Many problems still should be noted and resolved.2 简单句叠置I like chatting on line very much, so I go to the net bar almost every weekend. / I like chatting on line very much. I go to the net bar almost every weekend.3 从句叠置It is known to all that computers play an important role in many fields of our life. / As is known to all, computers play an important role in many fields of our life.4 句子成分缺失If we work hard, we will surely be successful. /Working hard, we will surely be successful.5 语序错误1) Why do college students spend more and more time on the computer?1) I often wonder where they have got their money.（二）动词形式错误1时态错误Many people think that the Internet will be more useful in the future. 2语态形式错误1) I have been excited several days at the news that you will come here.2) Most of the students are satisfied with the service in the dining hall.3单复数形式错误1) Wise men seek opportunities rather than wait for them. / A wise man seeks opportunities rather than wait for them.2) Some people are afraid that computers may control men in the future. 4非谓语动词形式错误1) Let me say “hello” to you on behalf of everyone.2) Doing exercise in the morning is good for ones health.3) Having studied in our school for 3 years, I find that the canteen service has changed a lot.（三）代词错误1) We can use computers in doing everything we like.2) A college student should be able to do his washing on his own.（四）冠词错误1) A/The horse is a useful animal.2) The exam will be held in December, 2004. （五）词性错误1) I wish you can consider my suggestions.2) If a person wants to succeed, he must learn to endure sufferings and setbacks.二、用词错误1) Students must know how to operate a computer. / Students must know how to work on a computer.2) People can be exposed to many new things on the Internet. / People can learn many new things on the Internet.3) The purpose of this letter is to express some opinions on the service in the dining hall. / The purpose of this letter is to make some complaints about the service in the dining hall.三、表达习惯错误1) What generated so large a change? / Why is there so large a change?2) Now 6000 yuan is enough for you to buy a P4 computer. / Now you can buy a P4 computer for 6000 yuan.3) In a room often live 6-8 students. 4) I think there are three reasons for this great change. 5) The prices of the food are too high. / The food is too expensive.6) The reason for this is that some people want to earn plenty of money without working hard. / This is because some people want to earn plenty of money without working hard.四、标点符号及大小写错误1) However, every coin has two sides. I think the surroundings in our canteen are the best among all universities.2) The man was racing down the street because he was late for the class.3) At last I want to let you know that I love our university very much.4) My favorite sports are swimming, jogging, mountaineering and playing table tennis.5) The best English film in my eyes is Forrest Gump.五、冠词用法讲练EXERCISE 1A. 1. a2. an3. an 4. an5. an 6. an7. a8. anB. 1. a new office building2. travel agent3. an American scientist4. a days outing5. an Indian stamp6. a heart attack7. an advanced country8. an interesting playEXERCISE 21. A (telephone); a2.x; x; x3. a; a; an; a4.a; a; a; an5. a; a; a; a; a6.an; a; x; an; x; a; a7. a; an8.xEXERCISE 3A.1. a (very bad night); a (wink)2. an (honesty)3. a (vision of a new and happier Europe)4. a (holiday); a (day off); a (month)5. an (hourly service)6. a (great honour); a (gathering)7. a (mountain); a (horror)8. an (early age)9. a (word)10.a (boy)B.1. a (big problem); (not too big) a (problem)2. a (square nose); (so handsome) a (man)3. (However great) a (disaster)4. (Many) a (shipwrecked sailor)5. (Such) an (urgent need)6. (So urgent) a (need)7. (as lovely)a (picture)8. (what) a (serious crisis)9. (many) a (greater man)10. (How serious) a (crime)EXERCISE 41. the; x2. x; The(forests)3. x; The(nature)4. The (education); x7. x; the8. the; xEXERCISE 5A.1.x; a; the2. The (steam-engine); the3. The (bat); a4. x; the; x; a5. the6. a; the; x; x7. The(prison);a8. The (youngest); x; the; xB. 1.The (horse); a (noble animal); a (faithful servant)2. a (game)3. the (school); the (behaviour);the (pupils)4. The (dinner); the (speeches)5. the (setting of goals)6. the (hospital); (at) the (end of)t he (week)7. the (radio)8. The (flute)9. (have) a; the (city center); (get) a; (on) the (bus)10. the (ground); the (wood)EXERCISE 6A.1.The; the; the2. The; the3. The; the4. The (wool); the5. x; the; x6. the; the; the; x7. the; the8. x; x; x9. the; the10. xB.1. the British Museum2. the Suez Canal3. the difference between4. the Wilsons these two words5. in the first row6. the year 1949EXERCISE 7(The) People everywhere When (the) strangers (The) Good manners in (the) different parts accepting (the) gifts shows (the) bad manners even (the) rudeness with (the) good manners accept (the) important things with (the) both hands to accept (the) important things shows not only (the) discourtesy In (the) Europe and (the) North America, however, (the) people六、标点符号用法讲练EXERCISE 11. Theidentity: Lt, Henry Bedell, Company D, 11th Vermont Volunteersold.2. Itthat Dadalreadyfarming 80 acresjob.3. Now Impointbut what there?4. Rain, snow, sleet, fogworld.5. Duringtourists; during the winterbeach.6. Toextent, mankindearth.7. Likewild life,reproduce, growfall.8. TheJim Thorpe, the greatest Americantimes.9. Theenormous, juicyappetizing.10. Ikidseducatedthe Westmovieswould be disappointed.11. Istatue. Its soul, so to speak, isbeauty.12. Thestudents, teachers, doctors, businessmen, factory workerspeoplelife.13. Isundergroundin newcaves?14. Iby correspondencethat Iher at Beijing HotelThursday.15. Passengersbeverages: coffee, tea, milk or soda.16. PresentMr. Ho, ChairmanEnglish Department; Mr. Brown, a visitingDenmark; andus.17. Thepatients; itof “defensive medicine”.18. Hiswith themhe hadonce madehelp.EXERCISE 21.work, for2.down; as a result, we3.note; it4.watch, yet5.tired, so6. booming; consequently, the company7. in it, and it was8. looking; the food, however, pulsory; the students choice, therefore10coffee; others11costly; nevertheless, we12weightlessness; moreover, theyEXERCISE 31. death; 2. sunlight. We/sunlight; we3. May, yet/but snow4. years; for example, 5. quiet; 6. night; I/.night, and/so I7. punished; in fact/punished. In fact8. food, and so./food; therefore, I.9. very; what./vary. What10. TV; Marie/TV, and MarieEXERCISE 41. “On Friday,” the teacher announced, “well take up a new lesson.”2. “ What,” he asked, “do we have to prepare for the camping trip?”3. C4. He greets everyone with “Hi!”5. “You may think I have a lot of garbage in these bags,” one shopping-bag lady volunteered in a church soup kitchen, “but its everything I need.”6. C7. “It pains me,” I said, “to find that you both have been panhandling so long that it no longer embarrasses you.”8. Retirement often brings many problems surrounding the “What do I do with myself?” question, even though there may be no financial worries.EXERCISE 51. At one oclock on September 2, 1666, the Great Fire of London started inside a bakers shop in Pudding Lane. It lasted five days, and nearly 80% of all the buildings within the London Wall were razed. According to the official report, 13,200 houses, 87 parish churches, over 400 streets, and the enormous old St. Pauls Cathedralone of the wonders of the medieval worldwere in ruins. Out of Londons 450 acres, only 75 remained untouched.Robert Hubert, a French watchmaker from Rouen, was accused of the fire. The sentence said he “had deliberately started the fire”. After he was hanged, it was conclusively proved that he had not even arrived in London until two days after the fire broke out.2. Mr. Jones was very fond of climbing mountains, so one year he went to Switzerland for his holidays. After he had climbed some easy mountains, he decided one day to climb a more difficult one; but he did not want to go up it alone, so he found a good Swiss guide, who had often climbed that mountain.At first it was not a difficult climb, but then they came to a place which was not so easy. The guide stopped, turned round and warned Mr Jones. “Be careful here,”he said “This is a dangerous place. You can easily fall, and if you do, you will fall straight down a very long way.” “But,”he continued calmly, “if you do fall here, dont forget to look to the right while you are going down. There is a quite extraordinarily beautiful view theremuch more beautiful than the one you can see from here.”3. It is the simple things that really matter. If a man delights in his wife and children, has success in work, and finds pleasure in the alternation of day and night, spring and autumn, he will be happy whatever his philosophy may be. If, on the other hand, he finds his wife hateful, his childrens noise unendurable, and the office a nightmare, if in the daytime he longs for night, and at night he sighs for the light of daythen what he needs is not a new philosophy but a new pattern of lifea different diet, or more exercise. Man is an animal, and his happiness depends on his physiology more than he likes to think. Unhappy business men, I am convinced, would increase their happiness more by walking six miles every day than by any conceivable change of philosophy.七、句型写作练习（一）并列句1) It was a cold snowy day and he had no money left for food.2) Hurry up or youll be late.3) It rained heavily last night but I went to the show anyway.4) I enjoy classical music, so does she.5) He must be ill, for he is absent today.6) Some people waste food while others havent enough.7) She is fat whereas her husband is thin. 8) She cannot read, neither can she write.（二）复合句11) It is quite obvious that they need more help in English.2) It is good news that she is still alive.3) It doesnt seem likely that she will come here.4) What the children like the best in the zoo are the pandas. 5) What we are badly in need of is raw material.21) Its a pity that he did not come earlier.2) It is a well-known fact that smoking can cause lung cancer.3) It is true that I encouraged him, but I didnt actually help him.4) It didnt seem likely that they would ever keep their promise.5) It was hard to understand why Prof. Hardy had singled out Mary for criticism.31) Can you tell me what kind of show they are putting on?2) Im wondering if the letter is overweight.3) I am thinking how we can improve our study habits.4) We are still uncertain whether Henry is the right person for the job.5) Peter has always been in good health except that he has a slight headache sometimes.6) He suddenly remembered that he had forgotten to take his notebook with him.4. 1) I always took it for granted that I was far more intelligent than he was. 2) We all thought it a pity that you were unable to attend our meeting.3) We consider it important that you should mind your manners.4) He didnt want it known that he was too ill to go on working.5) I regard it important that every one of you should finish your homework on time.6) He took it for granted that his father would come to his help if he got into trouble.7) We thought it highly probable that he might change his mind at the last minute.8) I think it likely that the train will be delayed by the dense fog.9) The doctor thinks it advisable that you should stop smoking.5. 1) Could you show me what you have written?2) This is what we should always keep in mind.3) What they saw in China made a deep impression on them.4) We must not put off till tomorrow what we can do today.6. 1) Nothing can hide the fact that he is growing old. 2) The fact that he works hard does not necessarily mean that he is a competent leader.3) I have a complacent feeling that Im highly intelligent. 4) The explanation that he didnt see the notice is unsatisfactory./ The explanation is unsatisfactory that he didnt see the notice.5) Most of us dont agree with his view that there is no advantage in introducing the new method.6) The news soon spread throughout the country that he won the first gold medal at the 23rd Olympic Games.7) His suggestion that intelligence is a relative matter is not universally accepted./His suggestion is not universally accepted that intelligence is a relative matter.8) He seconded my motion that the vote be postponed.9) The fear that he might not be able to finish the work disturbed him greatly./ The fear disturbed him greatly that he might not be able to finish the work.10) We expressed a hope that Mr. and Mrs. Morrison would come and visit China again. 11) Ive come from Mr. Lin with a message that he wont be able to see you this afternoon. 12) There can be no doubt that Suzy is the right person for the job.定语从句1) I went to visit the American author who wrote a number of books about China.2) I ate the soup my aunt prepared.3) I have an arrangement with my bank, by which they let me use their money and repay them next month.4) He sent her a letter, in which he said that he was sorry for what he had done to her. 5) Mr. Brown, who just came from Britain yesterday, will teach us accounting this term.6) She is going to spend the winter holidays in Hainan, where she has some relatives.7) The United States is known for its supermarkets, where huge quantities of all kinds of food and household articles are sold.8) The story happened in late 19th century, when China is suffering from the invasion of western powers. 状语从句1) Now that youve bought a new car, what are you going to do with the old one?2) Wed better take the telescope with us in case it is needed.3) We must hurry off, lest we should miss the bus. 4) The problem so very complicated that it took us nearly two weeks to solve it. 5) The aircraft was flying at such a high altitude that we could hardly see it. 6) Ill lend you my computer on condition that you keep it in good shape. 7) You can go out as long as you promise to be back before 11 at night. 8) I remember the whole thing as if it happened yesterday. 9) However hard he tried, he could not do the job satisfactorily. 10) Whether it takes an hour or even a whole day, I shall find out the answer. （三）复杂的简单句1.1) They looked both ways before they crossing the street.2) I made my decision after talking to Sir Francis.3) Despite/In spite of his illness, he was determined to carry out his plan. 4) Despite/In spite of their intelligence, they arent doing well in school. 5) Despite/In spite of his richness/wealth, he isnt very happy. 6) Despite/In spite of his height, he isnt a very good basketball player.7) Without your support, we might succeed in performing our task.8) Even with air and water, plants still couldnt grow on the moon.9) Without hard work, you will accomplish nothing.10) But for their assistance, he would have found himself in trouble.2.1) They wear layers of clothes even in summer time, with newspapers stuffed between the layers as further protection against bad weather.2) With more people helping them, they probably will be able to accomplish the task ahead of time.3) With all his savings gone, he started to look for a job.4) In the corner there is a table, with one of its legs shorter than the others.5) With the job finished, we went to the seaside for a holiday.6) With the pace of change quickening, more and more scientists find it hard to keep up with the latest developments even in their own disciplines.7) She looked in my face with tears streaming down her cheeks.3.1) She wont go home until after (taking) the exam.2) Because of his bad leg, he couldnt walk as fast as the others. 3) We are full aware of the seriousness of the situation.4) She hurried back to school for fear of missing too many lessons.5) Instead of criticizing Susan for what she has done, we ought to praise her for it.6) Instead of going straight home after school, Helen went to work as a waitress in a restaurant.7) Instead of going to send the book to Allan by post, I am going to take it to him myself.8) Instead of going to New York yesterday to attend his daughters wedding, Dr. Wilson flew to Florida for an emergency case.4.1) I love intelligent girls. 2) At the party, I got to know a professor in his thirties. 3) I hate to see letters written in pencil.4) The substance discovered almost by accident has revolutionized medicine.5) Among those taking part in the work, he is probably the most active.5.1) Every one of us left the meeting convinced that the project was feasible.2) Peter got home from the three-month-long journey to the Antarctic, looking tired out.3) They went hunting for hours, but they returned empty-handed.4) He entered the office, still annoyed by the way she spoke to him.5) Pressured by school work and encouraged by their peers, teenagers resort to smoking.6) Primarily interested in grades and eco