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HOWTOCOMPLETEASTORY 读后续写之阅读与构思 WARMING UP Avacationwithmymother Atripfilledwithsurprisesandamusements Absent mindedandforgetfulyetnice sweet Accordingtothetitle whatkindofquestionscomeintoyourmind e g Whatwouldhappeninthevacation Readforstructure Whatisthewritingstyle A Narrativewriting 记叙文 B Argumentativewriting 议论文 C Expositorywriting 说明文 D Play A Narrativewriting 记叙文 Who Mom Dad DavidandI When Iwaseleven Where FromColoradotoNorthDakota What Astrangefamilytrip Characters Plots Theme Ihadaninterestingchildhood Itwasfilledwithsurprisesandamusements allbecauseofmymother loving sweet yetabsent mindedandforgetful OnestrangefamilytripwetookwhenIwaseleventellsalotabouther CHILDHOOD MOTHER cause effect FAMILYTRIP ReadforDetails Para1 strange abouther Setting Writingtip1 Comestraighttothepointtoattractreadersinterests Organizationofthetext Para1setting aninterestingchildhood loving sweet absent minded forgetfulmom ReadforDetails Para2 Asthefirstdayofourtripapproached DavidandI unwillinglysaidgood byetoallofourfriends Whoknewifwe deverseethemagain bravelydroveoff Humoroustone Mom Forgotthepurseandtraveler scheck unwilling Forgetful Directdescription Beforethetrip Organizationofthetext Para1setting aninterestingchildhood loving sweet absent minded forgetfulmom Para2beforethetrip forgotthepurse travelerscheks unwilling ReadforDetails Para3 onestandsoutsidethedoorandplaylookoutwhiletheothergoestothebathroom Ihadterriblepicturesinmymind DavidandI sidedescription nervous Mom Forgetful Writingtip2 Combinethedirectdescriptionwithsidedescriptiontohighlightcharactertraits ReadforDetails Para4 Father DavidandI Mother Momsuddenlygotagreatidea Ifastrangefamilyshoweduponherfrontdoorstep Momwouldhavebeendelighted Shethinkseveryoneintheworldisasniceassheis Toourgreatrelief Dadturneddowntheidea be tostrangers defensive be tostrangers nice gapofthought relieved nice Organizationofthetext Para1setting aninterestingchildhood loving sweet absent minded forgetfulmom Para2beforethetrip forgotthepurse travelerscheks unwilling Para3 4duringthetrip playedlookout setuptent foundavacancy nervousrelieved Para5 6duringthetrip afterthetrip Readthegivensentencesandinfer Para5 Thenextdaywerememberedthebrand newtentwehadbroughtwithus Para6 Wedrovethroughseveralstatesandsawlotsofgreatsightsalongtheway drovethrough sawlotsofgreatsights Aconclusionforthetrip VS Thebeginningofthenewtrip Theendingofthetrip Separatepartofthetrip introduction para1 beforethetrip para2 duringthetrip para3 duringthetrip para4 duringthetrip para5 conclusion para6 Onepossiblestructure Readthegivensentencesandinfer Para5 Thenextdaywerememberedthebrand newtentwehadbroughtwithus Q1 Whydidtheyrememberthebrand newtent Q4 Howwouldtheyfeel Q2 Whatwouldtheydo Q3 Whatwouldmotherdo Somethingwasrelatedtotent Somethingwasforgottenbymom Writingtip3 Analyzethecloselinkbetweenthegiveninformationtohaveasuitablelogic Readthegivensentencesandinfer Q1 Whatsightswouldtheysee Q4 Howdidtheyfeelattheendofthestory Q2 Whatdidthesightslooklike Q3 Whatwouldtheydo Para6 Wedrovethroughseveralstatesandsawlotsofgreatsightsalongtheway Thebeautifulsights Arrivedatdestination Echowith 呼应 theParagraph1 Writingtip4 Echowith 呼应 thebeginningtomakeyourarticlemorecoherent Clarifytheunderlinedwords Characters forgetful absent minded nice Event trip camping trouble Charactertrait Mom Dad David tool tent Writingtip5 Choosingtheproperwordscarefullybasedonthecloselinkbetweenthecontentandthegivenwords Don tforgettounderlinethem Readforthetitleandtheme Avacationwithmymother amusementandsurprise absent mindedandforgetfulyetnice sweet unwilling nervous relieved Thinking Whatwillbethebestthemeforthisstory Writingtip6 Havingcreativeplottingneedstohaveaproperthemetomatchthestory Tipsforcontinuationwriting 4C forwriting CarefulreadingCreativeplottingCarefulpolishingClearwriting Thecloselinkamongthegivenparagraphs Writingtip1 Combinethedirectdescriptionwithsidedescriptiontohighlightcharactertraits Writingtip2 Analyzethecloselinkbetweenthegiveninformationtohaveasuitablelogic Writingtip3 Havingcreativeplottingneedstohaveaproperthemetomatchthestory Writingtip4 Choosingtheproperwordscarefullybasedonthecloselinkbetweenthecontentandthegivenwords Don tforgettounderlinethem Story Logic Plot Onepossibleverision Thenextdaywerememberedthebrand newtentwehadbroughtwithus Thinkingofthistent Momsuggestedthatwegocampinginthenextvillageinexcitement withhereyesglittering Consideringherenthusiasm weallagreed Whenthedoorofourcaropened Momstormedoutinstantlyandurgedustoputupthetent DavidandIwereaskedtopickupsomebranchestobuildafire Andwhenwecameback DadandMomhadalreadylaindownthegrasscomfortablyinfrontofthetent talkingmerrilywithalocalboyatourage whokeptglancingatthistentcuriously Soonwelearntthattheboyinragsevendidn thaveahometolivein Ofcourse Mom forgot totakethistentwithusagain Wedrovethroughseveralstatesandsawlotsofgreatsightsalongtheway Andwealsohadanicetimelivingwithmygrandparentsduringthattrip Butwhatimpressedmemostwasthattent whichwasforgottendeliberatelybyMom Thoughshedidlovegoingcamping shepresentedthatpoorboywiththistentoutofsympathy ItwasMomthatmademychildhoodcolorful Anditwasalsoshethatshowedmethetruemeaningofgiving Tomakeyourarticlemorevividandattractive youcanuse vividwordsandexpressions so thatstructure with struc