初三英语写作课.ppt

Loveanimals lovetheworld Awritingclass HangzhouZoo地址 杭州虎跑路 西湖之南 tothesouthof 建园时间 1958年1 有种类170多种 如老虎 狮子 熊猫等2 有很多花草树木 因此非常漂亮 3 附近有许多宾馆 可以住宿 离西湖很近4 有许多公交车直达 交通便利 It sonHupaoRoad ItistothesouthoftheWestLake Itwasbuiltin1958 Therearemorethan170kindsofanimals suchastigers lions pandasandsoon Therearemanyflowersandtrees Itisverybeautiful Therearemanyhotelsnearbytolivein TheyareneartheWestLake Itisveryconvenienttogetthere Alotofbusesgothere 1 覆盖了所有信息点 2 注重文章的开头与结尾 做到开头 开门见山 收尾 干净利落 3 注意文章信息的自然过渡 以提升文章的文采 增强文章的可读性 可适当使用一些连词或过渡词 如 and so then but what smore ofcourse bytheway ontheotherhand asyouknow inaddition asfor 等 4 避免同种句型连续多次使用 可采用变通的方法 用不同的句式表达同一种意思 如何算是一篇好文章 ItisonHupaoRoad ItistothenorthoftheWestLake Itwasbuiltin1958 Thereare170kindsofanimals suchastigers lions pandasandsoon Therearemanyflowesandtrees Itisverybeautiful Therearemanyhotelsnearbytolivein TheyareneartheWestLake Itisveryconvenienttogetthere Alotofbusesgothere I dliketotellyousomethingaboutHangzhouZoo ItliesonHupaoRoad andistothesouthoftheWestLake Asamodernzoo itwasbuiltin1958 Nowtherearemorethan170kindsofanimals suchastigers lions pandasandsoon Treesandflowersareallaroundthere soitisverybeautiful Ifyouwanttostayinhangzhouforsomedays thehotelsnearbyareyourbestchoice whicharenotfarfromtheWestLake What smore alotofbusesgothere youcantakeanyofthem Itisveryconvenient Anyonewhocomesherewillhaveagoodtime Hangzhou It onHupaoRoad istothesouthoftheWestLake As itwasbuiltin1958 therearemorethan170kindsofanimals suchastigers lions pandasandsoon Treesandflowersare itisverybeautiful IfyouwanttostayinHangzhouforsomedays thehotelsnearbyonNanshanRoadare arenotfarfromtheWestLake alotofbusesgothere youcantakeanyofthem Itisveryconvenient I dliketotellyousomethingabout lies and amodernzoo Now allaroundthere So yourbestchoice which What smore Anyonewhocomesherewillhaveagoodtime 1 禁止投食2 不要离凶猛动物太近3 禁止恐吓动物 frighten 4 保持环境清洁 不乱扔垃圾 v ARule 假如你是杭州动物园维护队的一名志愿者 请你为动物园用英语写一个维护规则 1 禁止投食2 不要离凶猛动物太近3 禁止恐吓动物 frighten 4 保持环境清洁 不乱扔垃圾 1 Don tfeedtheanimals 2 Stayawayfromthoseaggressiveanimals 3 Youarenotsupposedtofrightentheanimals 4 Don tthrowlitterabout Keeptheenvironmentclean v ARule 今天 你陪一位来自美国的笔友汤姆参观杭州动物园 请你用英语向他解释这个木牌上的内容 开头已给出 并适当增加解释 Tom Itisjustaruleofthezoo Itsays 1 Don tfeedtheanimals 2 Stayawayfromthoseaggressiveanimals 3 Youarenotsupposedtofrightentheanimals 4 Don tthrowlitterabout Keeptheenvironmentclean Tom Itisjustaruleofthezoo Itsaysthatyoushouldn tfeedtheanimals thatisbecausesomefoodmightbebadforthem Andkeepawayfromthoseaggressiveanimals fortheymayattackyou Itistoodangerous Alsoyouarenotsupposedtofrightenthem eveniftheysometimesarenotfriendlytoyou What smore don tthrowthelitterabout Itisourdutytokeeptheenvironmentclean 审题要 三审 1 审话题信息 切忌粗枝大叶 东遗西漏 2 审话题范围 准确把握出题者用意 搞清写作重点 3 审文体形式 Let swatchashortvideo Whyaremoreandmoreanimalsbecomingendangered Writing Writing 假设你是学校动物保护协会的成员 请你以Whatshouldwedotoprotectthewildanimals 为话题 根据中文提示叙述动物濒临灭绝的原因并阐述保护措施 用英语写一份发言稿 注意 开头和结尾部分已写好 可适当增加谈论话题时常用的话语 使所写内容连贯 所写内容必须包括上面表格中观点和你自己的至少三个观点 词数 个左右 Hello everyone Animalsareourbestfriends buttheseyearsmoreandmoreanimalsbecomeendangered Whatcausedthisproblem Inmyopinion firstly Ithinkcuttingdownthetreesbythefarmersisoneofthereasons Asaresult animalscannolongerhideorhavenoplacetolivein Also manyanimalsarekilledbypeoplewhowanttoselltheirfursformoney Besides somepollutionlikewaterandairpollutionhasmadethesituationsmoreserious Sowehumanbeingsshouldtryourbesttoprotectthem Ithinkthebestwaytotakegoodcareofthemisbuildingmorewildlifezoos Andthegovernmentshouldpassmorelawstopunishthepeoplewhohuntthewildlifeorcutdowntoomanytreeswithoutpermission Finally keepingtheenvironmentcleanisalsoaquiteeffectivewaytoprotectthewildlife Thankyouforlistening Thankyouforliste