中考英语作文提分

精品文库2011三点让你的中考英语作文提分2011年中考已经进入紧张的阶段，很多同学都蓄势待发，准备就绪了，但是与此同时还有很多的同学正在纠结。英语写作部分成了他们的苦恼，不用担心无忧考网总结出一套2011中考英语高分作文的写作提高方法。其实，中考英语写作是很容易提高的，因此，同学们大可不必慌张，害怕。那么如何才可以在短时间内提高自己的写作水平呢?今天我们就从三点谈起。第一点是遣词的原则：1、 同学们一定要尽量使用高等词汇及短语，如果仅仅记住几个简单基础的词汇，而且一味的重复低水平的英语知识点，远远达不到要求。同时，也会给阅卷老师造成视觉疲劳，所以一定要“新颖”来抓住老师的眼球，只有这样，你的作文才能得到高分。比如： 最近深受同学们喜欢的畅销小说慕光之城中的男主角爱德华先生是那么的帅气，他冷峻的外表下藏着一颗炽热的心，也就是这一点让亿万女生为止动容。当我们想表达这个小伙儿十分帅气时，可能首先想到的是handsome， cool and good looking这三个词，但是，在你使用这三个词的同时，其他的同学也会使用，这样一来千篇一律，没有任何创意，这几个词汇也显得特别的乏味，判卷老师自然也不会对你的作文有任何印象，更不用想要得高分了。因此，在这个时刻，我们一定要用一些高级词汇，比如：attractive， charming等等，如果你非要用以上三个单词，完全可以加上一些等同于very的形容词加以修饰，比如：incredible handsome， extremely cool等等。再比如：我们在描述一个景点的时候，同学们首先想到的形容词是great， wonderful， amazing and interesting等词汇。这些词汇没有任何创新，因此，如果你用以下词汇，效果肯定会完全不同，例如：fantastic， fabulous， marvelous， extraordinary， remarkable等词。不但使判卷老师印象深刻，还可以归为高分那个层次，何乐而不为呢?2、 在使用高等词汇及短语的同时不要忘记使用俗词中的不俗意。比如：在09年重庆中考满分作文中写道这样一句话：Im afraid the food in the new school wont agree with me. 初看这句话似乎存在语法错误，怎么可以食物不同意我呢?其实不然，这是美国的一句俚语，意思是食物不合胃口。再来看看08年湖北省荆州市中考写作，以My Hometown 为主题写篇作文，其中一篇满分作文中写道I was born in a beautiful city with a rich culture. People in the town are hard-working though they are having a richer and better life. 在同一篇文章中用到了同样的词语rich但却是不同意，一个表达了丰富的文化，另一个则表示过着富裕的生活。这样巧妙的使用词语，怎能不让老师给满分或是高分呢?要想达到以上的写作水平就要求同学们在平时的训练中，有意识的强化“复杂，高级”这两个概念，使自己的作文能区别于普通的作文，使自己一下子就站在一个比较高的位置上，充分显示自己的实力。平时学习过程中就要注意总结各种各样的词汇，储备起来以备用。第二点是造句的原则：句子是表达达一个完整意思的最小单位，所以造句能力在英文写作中是非常重要的。好的英语句子能够生动，形象，准确的表达内容。所以要想写出漂亮的书面表达，必须从写好句子开始。如何才能写出好句子来呢?我们首先可以从山寨开始。比如轩尼诗XO有句广告语非常优美，它是这样说的：To me， the past was black and white，but the future is always colorful.再比如，我们众所周知两句话Nothing is impossible!和 Anything is possible!有很多同学在自己的作文中写过这两句话，但是太俗套了，现在又出现了另一句来自佳能广告中广告语Impossible made possible.如果可以在自己的作文中用上这句话，那一定是酷毙了，帅呆了!当然，我们不可以总是山寨，因此，可以借用一些句子，稍加修饰后变为自己的。比如：A diamond lasts forever. 钻石恒久远，一颗永流传。这是非常经典的一句话，但是离我们的生活有些远且作文中用到的几率比较小，不过我们可以稍加修饰就可以使用在自己的作文中了。比如：Friendship lasts forever. Maternal love lasts forever. The teachers love lasts forever. 不但老师看着开心，分数自然也就上去了。第三点是谋篇的原则：优秀的作文都有个共性就是有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。文章的连贯性和紧凑感是很重要的。句子作为最小的表达意思的语言单位，如果只是被随意的整合，是无法达到有效表达的目的。下面是总结出来的经典的十大连词，以及他们的替换用法，这样大家写作和阅读的时候，就可以用得更加多选择啦!十大关系代词替换一、And 并列关系(and)inaddition / and / similarly / likewise / aswellas / besides / furthermore / also / moreover / too/ notonlybut / even / besidesthis/that二、Sequence顺序 (then)出现的时候表示列举first/ initially / secondetc/ tobeginwith / then / next / earlier/later / followingthis/that / afterwards三、Consequence结果 (so)前面是后面的结果 / 也就是这些词后面就开始给出结论了。asaresult/ thus / so / therefore / consequently / itfollowsthat / thereby / eventually / inthatcase / admittedly四、Contrast转折 (but)表对前面论述的转折 / 一般后面才是作者观点however / ontheotherhand / despite / inspiteof /though / although / but / onthecontrary/ yet / insteadof / rather /whereas / nonetheless / incontrast重庆市2009年初中毕业暨高中招生考试中的作文题，一篇满分作文写道：I am super excited. On the other hand， I am a little bit nervous because I am afraid of facing problems at new school. 作者用On the other hand表示转折，我很激动，但是还是有些紧张，因为两个转折词的应用使得句子间的连接恰到好处，十分连贯。五、Certainty确定 (of course)强烈的确定 / 后面是作者的坚定论点obviously/ certainly / plainly / ofcourse / undoubtedly六、Condition条件/ 因为 (if )后面跟随着某种情况发生的前提或者是条件。if / unless / whether / providedthat / Given that / for / sothat / whether / depending on七、Time时间 (when )before/ since / as / until / meanwhile / atthemoment / when / whenever / assoonas / justas八、Summary总结 (in a word)作者的最后总结inconclusion/ insummary / lastly / finally / tosumup / toconclude / torecapitulate 重述 / inshort / in a word08年北京中考题中一篇满分作文在文章的结尾处写道：In a word， we can learn a lot form this little hero. 作者用In a word概括全篇文章，显得简洁，概括并且具体。九、Example举例 (for example)forexample / forinstance / justas / inparticular / suchas / namely来看看2009年北京中考作文中的一篇满分作文这样写道：I often help my parents do housework， such as， washing clothes， cleaning the room and watering flowers. 笔者用了such as进行举例，补充说明帮助父母做家务的种类，显得十分详细。十、Reason原因 ( because)since / as / so / because(of) / dueto / owingto / thereasonwhy / inotherwords / leadsto / cause我们来看这样一个例子，在2007年中考满分作文中，有个同学这样写道：But I dont think what you do is right since you are a student. 他自如的运用了but 和since这两个连词，使整句话变得非常连贯。2011年中考英语作文预测及范文保护环境从2008年6月1日起，国家将禁止商家免费提供塑料袋，掀起全国“拒塑”的环保运动。假如你是李华，准备以“What Can We Do for the Environment” 为题，写一篇保护环境的英语演讲稿。内容包含：1.在购物时用布袋子替代塑料袋;2.尽可能地再利用使用过的课本;3.离开教室应关灯;4.最好走路或骑自行车上学;5.简述理由：保护环境，减少污染，节约能源等注意：1.词数：80词左右。开头和结尾已经为你写好，不计入总词数;2.可根据要点适当增加细节，使行文连贯;3.文章中不能出现真实姓名和校名，否则以零分处理。4.参考词汇：布袋子cloth bag塑料袋plastic bag保护protect能源energy污染pollution课本textbookWhat Can We Do for the EnvironmentHello, everyone. Im Li Hua. Its nice to speak about what we can do for the environment,and I think each of us can do a little bit to help with this problem._In fact, even the simplest everyday activities can make a real difference to the environment. I believe we can make the world a better place to live in.Thank you for your listening!参考作文：What Can We Do for the EnvironmentHello, everyone. Im Li Hua. Its nice to speak about what we can do for the environment, and I think each of us can do a little bit to help with this problem.The first thing we can do is to use cloth bags in stead of plastic bags when we go shopping. It helps to protect the environment. The second thing we can do is to reuse(再利用) the old textbooks as possible as we can. We should also never forget to turn off the lights when we leave the classrooms in order to save energy. Whats more, it would be better if we walk or ride a bike too school. We should try our best to reduce pollution and waste.In fact, even the simplest everyday activities(日常活动) can make a real difference to(对有影响) the environment. I believe we can make the world a better place to live in.Thank you for your listening!5、.环境问题：今天环境变得越来越糟糕,环境问题影响着人们的工作,学习,生活等,而我们的工作,生活,生产等又使环境污染越来越严重.,如何保护我们的环境?请以“ How to protect/save our environment/world? ”为题写一篇短文。提示：存在问题: 1.水污染越来越严重 2.砍伐森林严重 3. 大气污染严重 4. 白色垃圾等。要求：如何改善/保护环境? 至少:3-4个方面， 80字左右的。范文：How to protect/save our environment/world?The environmental pollution is worse and worse /more and more seriously today . Water is polluted ,we have no clean water to drink. Many trees are cutting down, some animals is getting less and less. Some factories is pouring(排出) dirty air into the sky , the population is increasing faster and faster , resources is getting less and lessetc. Not only does it affect our lives and health, it also has a great affection in the future. Peoples health has been greatly affected by air, noise and water pollution. Many people died of diseases. In order to live a better life, we need protect our world.We shouldnt throw away rubbish everywhere. We want to recycle(回收), reduce(减少), reuse(再利用) things . Dont waste things ,This saves money and reduces pollution. Use things for as long as possible. We dont use plastic bags . We mus plant more trees and stop the people cutting them. We hope our world will be more and more beautiful .6、为了保护地球有限的资源，我们应该采取什么措施呢?请根据下面提示写一篇约80词的短文，短文开头已经给出。提示词：1.save water, the source of life , protect drinking water, stop polluting, make full use of it;2.save electricity, crucial, turn off, other electric machines;3. save forests, useful ,stop cutting down;4.recycle useful rubbish, save resources参考作文：Although the world develops much faster and better, the resources on the earth get fewer and fewer. In order to protect them,something must be done.Save water. Water is the source of life.(水是生命之源) No water, no life.(没有水，就没有生命) So its very important for us to do so. Not only should we(我们不仅应该)protect drinking-water(饮用水) and stop polluting it, but also make full use of(充分利用) it.Save electricity. It is crucial(关键的，至关重要的). We cant imagine what the life will be like without it. Everyone should do his best to save electricity. Dont forget to turn off lights or other electric machines(电器)when we finish working.Save forests. They are useful .Please stop cutting them down and use recycled paper instead. Make our world a green one to live in.Recycle useful rubbish. Plenty of rubbish can be recycled like cans, paper, bottles, and so on. We can save resources in this way.2011年中考英语作文预测英语作文预测:低碳生活Presently, a new lifestyle called low carbon life is spreading every corner of our country. The concepts of low carbon are low energy and no waste. It is such a significant project that I cant wait to present my ideas on how to promote it.On the first place, a no-car day is supposed to set up every week in our school. Because cars not only cause serious air pollution but also waste energy. On no-car day, neither students nor teachers are allowed to drive to school. Meanwhile, just walk, jump, cycle or run. Use our legs and enjoy the fun.On the second place, we had best not use plastic bags any more. No one can stand the “white pollution”. So, it is wise to use bags which can be reused again and again.Finally, one thing that we should keep in mind: every big thing comes from the subtle. Therefore, as students, we ought to turn out the lights the moment we leave, turn off the tap in time, and reuse our textbook and so on.All in all, it weighs greatly for all of us to put the low carbon lifestyle into practice. Just set our mind to these: no-car day, no plastic bags, and no waste. Lets do it now.环境保护问题是中考热门话题，出现频率高，难度较大，必须掌握。典型句子：1. Its our duty to save water2. As we know, water is very important to man,3. we cant live without water.4. The amount of water which is suitable to drink is less and less.5. But some people dont care about it .6. Many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted.Something must be done to stop the pollution.7. Its our duty to protect our environment。8. It is very important to take care of our environment9. We should not throw litter onto the ground10. We should not spit in a public place/ cut down the trees11. We should plant more flowers and trees。12. We must pick up some rubbish and throw it into a dustbin13. If everyone makes contribution to protecting the environment, the world will become much more beautiful.14. Trees are very helpful and important for us.15. We should plant more and more trees in order to live better and more healthy in the future.Its everyones duty to love and protect the environment.例文:1、假如你是新华中学的学生，名叫MIKE。去年6月1日我国已经禁止使用塑料袋，你对此有何看法和什么好的建议?参考答案:Im Mike. I am a student in Huaxing Middle School. Do you know the plastic bags? Do you often use the plastic bags? I dont like them. I think they use the wasting valuable oil their production. And they cant decompose(分解) in a short time. The plastic bags will make our world worse. I agree witth the rule, which people cant get the free plastic bags in the shops, supermarkets. It encourages people to use their cloth bags and baskets. Its good for our environment.So I hope all the students in our class stop to use the plastic bags, and use our own cloth bags. I hope we can take care of our environment. Lets make our world more and more beautiful.2 、6月5日( June 5)是世界环境保护日， 我们周围的环境变得越来越糟糕，污染越来越严重。假如你是学生Jone.，你校要进行“如何保护我们的环境?”专题演讲比赛。要求：1、举例说明环境存在的问题13方面;2、如何保护好我们的环境，采取怎样的措施，举例13方面进行说明，字数80左右。参考答案:Dear headmasters, teachers, classmates and friends:Im very proud that I have chosen to speak to you all today, Im a bit(=a little) nervous as Ive never made a speech before to so many people ,so please forgive me if it shows.As we all know, the environment around us is getting worse and worse. In some places we cant see fish swimming in the river or trees on the hills. Some people even have no clean water to drink. So I think we must do something to protect the environment. .But what can we do? How to protect our environment? For example, we can go to school on foot or by bike. we can use shopping baskets not plastic bags when we go shopping and we can use both sides of the paper when we write . In a word, if everyone pays more attention to our environment , there will be less pollution and our lives will be better.“There is only one earth”,I hope everyone will protect our environment well. Thanks!3、(江苏南通)目前南通市正在积极创建全国文明城市，中学生也在为之努力。假如你是你是某中学的一名学生张通，请根据下列图表所示内容，给笔友John写一封电子邮件，介绍有关情况。注意：1.邮件内容应包含所有要点，不要简单翻译，可适当发挥;2.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名等信息;3.词数90左右(邮件中已经写好了的部分，不计入总词数)。4.参考词汇：civilized 文明的 respect 尊敬Dear John,Im glad to hear from you. Now let me tell you something about our city. Nantong is trying to set up a national civilized city. We middle school students are also doing something for it. 结 束 兴趣爱好是中考常考话题，难度相对较小。1、介绍你的兴趣爱好My HobbyI am a 15-year-old student in junior Grade 3. Though I am occupied with my study（被占满了时间，很忙）， I would like to spend time on my hobbies， such as playingthe piano， surfing the Internet.One of my favourite hobby is reading. Reading has been in my life for manyyears，since I began to learn characters. It can not only kill the time（打发时间），but also， more importantly， help improve my comprehension ability. When reading，I can learn a lot.Reading Shakespears works， I know how Hamlet looks like.Reading Socrates， I can see how great ancient Greek philosophers are. ReadingLu Xu， I come back to the old time of China.Reading really affect my life.2、Different people， different hobbies. What hobbies do you have？My hobby is singing. Its a great hobby！ Its fun and it makes me feel proud.Singing can be used to relieve （解除） my fatigues （疲劳）， and can help meimprove my accent（腔调）。 Singing makes me happy when I“m sad. Singing songs canmake you clever. I am always singing at home to share each others joys andsorrow （悲痛） in our life and to learn many songs. I really enjoy singing.It goes without saying that（毫无疑问） there are many different kinds of hobbiesand they can not only （不仅） broaden （拓宽） our minds （智力） but also （而且）add more fun to our life.3、我的爱好（My hobby）Choose one of your hhobbies and write an article for the school magazineabout it.Tell the magazine readers.What exactly your hobby is;When and how you became interested in this hobby;Why you enjoy your hobby;About your hopes and plans for the future.写作要求：1.根据所提供的内容，适当拓展想象空间，灵活地将提供的信息体现在文章中。2.条理清楚，语句通顺，书写清晰、规范。3.词数60-80.范文：My hobby is reading books. When I was seven years old， I became interestedin reading books. I like reading books because there are a lot of useful things inbooks. I can learn a lot of knowledge from books. Books can also teach me howto be a good person. Books even can solve many problems for me.I will read moregood books to improve myself.学习 范文09.根据中文提示和英文书信内容，写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的回信，信的开头和结尾已经给出，其字数不计入所完成的回信内。假如你叫Zhang Fang，是美国中学生Lucy的笔友，你收到了她的电子邮件。请根据她来信的内容写一封回信。针对她的困惑，谈谈你的看法，同时提出一些建议，并表达对她的祝愿。Dear Zhang Fang，I have been in this school for two years. My schools not too bad. But I havent got used to it. Some of the teachers are very good， especially my science teachers. They try to make lessons interesting. I like to have their classes and spend much time on it. So I usually get A in science exams. But I dont like having English and history classes. There are too many things to memorize and theyre so boring. Besides， it seems that the teachers can only read again and again. They dont try to make lessons interesting. Whenever the lessons start， I feel sleepy. I often get C in the exams， sometimes D。The final exam of this term is coming. What shall I do？ Could you give me some advice？Yours，LucyDear Lucy，Im very happy to hear from you. Dont worry too much. Many students have the same problem like you. I think its very common for students to dislike memorizing. Heres my advice. But in fact English and history are not as boring as you think. If you try the following things， you may find they are interesting and you will not feel sleepy in class again.First you had better learn the new lessons by yourself and write down the difficult points before lessons. It can make you become interested in what the teachers say in class. Second you should listen carefully and try to answer the teachers questions. It can help you understand better and memorize more quickly. Whats more， you also need to review the lessons regularly after class. If you still feel unhappy， you can have a talk with your teacher to ask for help. I really hope my advice can help you out and get A in English and history exams. Keep trying， I believe you will enjoy the school life and make great progress with your study.Yours，Zhang Fang生活 范文10.假如你是韩梅，下面是一封你的笔友Alice 给你发来的e-mail， 请根据e-mail的内容，给他写一封回信。与她交流看法，并帮她排忧解难。提示词语：listen to， mothers love， care about， communicate with， get along with， smileDear Han Mei ，Im afraid Ive got a big problem recently. My mother talks too much to me. She always tells me， “Be careful while crossing the street.” “Put on more clothes.” “Did you do a good job at school？” and so on. Im annoyed（烦恼）。 What shall I do？ Can you give me some ideas？AliceDear Alice，As a teenager， I met the same problem as you. But now I can get on/ along better with my mother. Here are some ideas for you.Your mother talks much， because she cares about you. Im sure your mum loves you very much. Maybe it shows your mothers love. So I think you should listen to her. If your opinions are different from your mothers， you can communicate with her， and tell her what youre thinking about. If your moth