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写作专项辅导第一章 2010年4月作文考试技巧：1、考试前要熟悉常考的作文题目和范文。2、遇到不完全一样的题目，或者题目要求与所复习的内容不完全一致，不要慌张，尽量找类似的题目模仿； 3、写信和通知时要遵循固定的格式。4、第一段一定要点题；5、如果作文没有具体要求，也最好分为三段。第一类：写信和通知1、A letter to a friend给一位朋友的一封信Mar.16,2010Dear Li Hua,Its long time we havent seen each other. I miss you very much. Hows everything going on with you ? I am busy preparing for PETS 4.I would appreciate if you could help me buy PETS 4 English oral textbook which was issued by the Beijing Press, because the books were sold out here.Drop in when you are free. I often think of those happy days we spent together when we were at University.Please let me know as soon as possible once you get the book.My best wishes. Yours truly,基本格式 April 3, 2010 Dear XX, 称呼（正文部分）Best wishes! 结束语 Sincerely yours, 签名 XX 注意问题（1）日期写在右上角，年份必须是放在最后；（2）称呼应与左边线对齐，后面的标点一定是用逗号；（3）结束语Yours Sincerely, Sincerely yours, Yours Faithfully, Faithfully yours, Yours Truly, Truly yours，第一个字母要大写，结束语后要用逗号（4） 署名一般低于结束语一两行，从信纸中间偏右的地方开始（注意：考生在答卷时不要使用自己的真实姓名）；（5）如果是要求写电子邮件，在前面所讲的基本格式前面还要加上以下内容：From: 任意一个电子邮箱地址To:任意一个电子邮箱地址Subject: Greetings / Invitation / Thanks 2、写通知1请按下列要求写一个通知1. 我们的英语老师将举行晚会，请全班同学参加。2. 晚会时间：晚上六点；地点：在102教室。请每个同学准备唱一首英文歌曲或用英语讲一个笑话。 NoticeSubject: Our English teacher will hold an English Party, and all the classmates are invited.Time: 6 pmPlace: Classroom 102Note: Every student should prepare an English song or an English joke.3、给报社的一封信假如你叫李华，你的同学正在开展一场讨论，主题是：学生要不要参加体育锻炼。请根据下面所提供的信息，给某英语报社写一封信，介绍讨论情况。60%的学生 40%的学生1.应该每天进行体育锻炼 1. 锻炼浪费时间2.做早操、打乒乓、打篮球，但不要时间过长 2. 锻炼使人疲劳3.锻炼能增强体质减少疾病 3. 锻炼以后很兴奋，较长时间不能投入学习4. 锻炼能使大脑休息，使学习效果更好 4. 锻炼中可能会受伤注意：1. 信的开头已经为你写好，但不计入总词数 2. 词数：80字左右 参考单词：reduce vt. 减少I am writing to tell you something about one of the discussion among our classmates. The main topic is whether the students should do some sports or not.60% of the classmates think that the students should do some sports everyday. They suggest that the students do morning exercises, play table tennis, or play basketball, but not for a long time. They believe that will make them more healthy, and reduce the chances to get ill, and so they can study better. However, 40% of the classmates disagree with those students. They think doing sports is wasting time. And they think doing sports will make them tired. Sometimes sports will make them too excited to sit down for study. Moreover, people are easy to hurt themselves when doing sports.I want to know your opinion on this matter. Your Truly, Li Hua4、给David的一封email假如你叫李华，在因特网上找到一个叫David的网友，请根据下列要点给David写个e-mail, 介绍你自己的一些情况。1. 李华，在职学生，家住上海。2. 喜欢集邮和运动。3.对英语很感兴趣，会唱不少英文歌曲。4. 班里同学也很想找网友，希望得到帮助。5.想去英国看看。注意：1. 开头部分已写好，只需接着写。2. 词数：80个左右。David,I am Li Hua. I am a student, living in Shanghai. I like collecting stamps and doing sports. I often go swimming after school. And on the weekends, I often play football with my friends. I have been collecting stamps since I was 5, so I have got about 3000 stamps.I like English very much. I often read English newspapers and listen to the English songs. So I can sing a lot of English songs. Among them, “You and Me” is my favorite. I am very glad to have you as my key pal. Now some of my classmates want to find a foreign key pal, too. I dont know whether you can help them.Reading your emails is very interesting, and the photos of U.K. you sent me last time are so beautiful. I am eager to go there to see you. 5、写通知2明天（星期五）全班同学将去参观科学博物馆（the Science Museum），由你（班长）通知全体同学（通知的开头和结尾已经给给出）。具体内容如下：1. 早上8点钟在校门口集合，不行前往；2. 参观时要认真听，仔细看，并记下有趣的东西；3. 不可在博物馆内大声喧哗及拍照；4. 携带钢笔和笔记本；5. 下星期一交一份有关参观的报告。要求：1. 不要逐句翻译；2. 词数80个左右。 NoticeAll the classmates will visit the Science Museum tomorrow (Friday), and everyone has to go to the school gate at 8 in the morning. We will go there on foot. We should take our notebook and pen so that we can write down what we are interested in. When visiting, we should listen and look carefully. In the museum, we cant shout and take photos. The most important, we have to hand in a visiting report next Monday.6、写信讲述乐施会毅行者活动情况Oxfam Trailwalker（乐施会毅行者）是一个非常著名的慈善机构。假如你是Lucy，现在要写封信给你澳大利亚的好友，向他介绍你哥哥和他的朋友们上个星期参加乐施会毅行者活动的情况。信中要包括以下内容，信的开头和结尾已经写好。词数80左右。概况：自从1981来是香港最大的资金募集活动之一。目的：帮助香港以及亚洲（Asia）、非洲（Africa）其它地区的穷人。有关远足的信息：上个星期，哥哥和他朋友们在48小时内走完了100公里的路。在途中，他们互相支持和帮助。为什么呢？因为只有团队的结束时间才被记录下来。后援队给他们拿来食物和干衣服。感想：这是一次极好的学习团队精神的机会。我们为什么不尽力去帮助那些需要中的人呢？等我满了18岁，我也要参加香港乐施会毅行者。Maybe you have never heard the term-Oxfam Trailwalker. So I want to tell you something about it. It has become one of the greatest fund raising activities since 1981. Its aim is to help the poor in Hong Kong and other places in Asia and Africa.Last week, the friends of my elder brothers and he walked 100 km in 48hours. During the time, they supported and helped each other. Why so? Because only the finish time of teams will be recorded. The supporters brought them food and dry clothes.We all think it is a good chance to learn what team spirit is. Why dont we try our best to help those in need? When I am 18, I will join Oxfam Trailwalker.第二类：写人写人可以采用某个模板，这样可以用最短时间记忆最有用的内容，不论遇到什么样写人的题目，都可以适当地运用这样的模板。不过要注意，在使用时要确定这个人的性别，然后在she和he，him和her，his和her之间确定其中的一个系列：My father/mother is the one I love most. ( 或者 Lisa/John is my best workmate/friend/ classmate/teacher. )Why so? Firstly I think s/he is the best wo/man in the world since s/he is very kind. Secondly, s/he is the top worker in his/her/the company. S/He is good at his/her work and always ready to help his/her/the workmates. I am proud of him/her. Thirdly, s/he studies hard. S/He is a good student. S/He always thinks its never too late to learn. So s/he comes together with me to study English in TV University. And s/he always gets the first place in class. I admire him/her very much.Just because the above reasons, I love him/her very much. 这个模板十分有用，下面大家可以从不同范文中找到模板中的内容。1、 My best workmate我最好的同事Mary is my best workmate. Why so? Firstly I think she is the best man in the world. She is always very kind. Secondly, she is the top worker in her company. She is good at her work and always ready to help her workmates. I am proud of her. Thirdly, she studies hard. She is a good student. She always thinks its never too late to learn. So she comes together with me to study English in TV University. And she always gets the first place in class. I admire her very much. Because of the above reasons, I like her very much, and she is my best workmate.2、The man I love most in my life我人生中最爱的一个人My father is the one I love most. Why so? Firstly I think he is the best man in the world since I was a little girl. He takes good care of me. Secondly, he is the top worker in his company. He is good at his work and always ready to help his workmates. I am proud of him. Thirdly, he studies hard. He is a good student. He always thinks its never too late to learn. So he comes together with me to study English in TV University. And he always gets the first place in class. I admire him very much. Because of the above reasons, I love my father very much.3、假设20年后的自己假如你是以下内容是你未来20年的设想。请以此为题写一篇短文，介绍20年后的你。内容可适当发挥。 In 20 years JobAppearancePlaceSportsFamilyPolice officerTall, strong Short straight hairBeijingSwimming Table tennisTwo childrenI am a strong tall police officer, with short straight hair. I live in Beijingthe capital of China. There are many people in the city, so my work is very busy. Every day I will go to work by car. And my work is mainly trying to catch the thieves. Although I am busy, I have a lot of hobbies, such as swimming and table tennis. I often go swimming or play table tennis with my workmates. I am married, and I have two children: a boy and a girl. They are both very lovely, so I love them very much. 4、My teacher in high school高中的老师My favorite teacher is Miss Huang. She is a beautiful lady. She teaches us English, and she has a lot of hobbies. Miss Huang likes singing and collecting posters. She is good at playing the piano. In the evening, she always sits in front of the piano and plays nice music. She is good at dancing, too. Sometimes she teaches us dancing. Miss Huang likes dogs very much because the dog is very friendly and cute. Her favorite color is blue. Because blue is the color of the sky and the sea. This is my favourite teacher in high school. Our classmates all like her very much.5、My beloved grandparents我爱着的祖父母I love my grandparents very much. They are two kind old people.When I was a little boy, my parents were very busy, so I was brought up by my grandparents. They took care of mecooking for me, washing my clothes, cleaning my room, and playing with me. So, they were very important in my childhood. Now, they are really very old and not as healthy as before. So I will go to see them this summer. I am eager to see my beloved grandparents.6、Talking about yourself说说你自己（请注意与上面“高中的老师”的范文有很多相同之处，可以当作一个模板背诵）I am not very tall and not very fat. I have round face and big eyes, with short black hair. I am a worker, but I have a lot of hobbies. I like singing and collecting posters. And I am good at playing the piano. In the evening, I always sit in front of the piano and play nice music. I am also good at dancing. I like dogs very much because the dog is very friendly and cute. My favorite color is blue, because blue is the color of the sky and the sea. This is myself. 7、My teacher of English我的英语老师（可使用上面“高中的老师”的范文）8、My best friend 我最好的朋友（注意范文和“我最好的同事”基本一样，只要替换开头即可）Mary is my workmate. She is my best friend.Why so? Firstly I think she is the best man in the world. She is always very kind. Secondly, she is the top worker in her company. She is good at her work and always ready to help her workmates. I am proud of her. Thirdly, she studies hard. She is a good student. She always thinks its never too late to learn. So she comes together with me to study English in TV University. And she always gets the first place in class. I admire her very much. Because of the above reasons, I like her very much, and she is my best friend.第三类：我最喜欢的1、My favorite form of entertainment我最喜欢的娱乐形式1. 现代人越来越重视娱乐2. 娱乐方式丰富多彩，而我最喜欢的是3. 我选择的原因。My favorite form of entertainment is watching TV. There are several reasons. First, it makes us informed of daily news, and lets us know the outside world. Second, it can provide lessons for learners. Third, it has brought joy and interest into peoples lives. It makes our life colorful. At last, it is the best way of getting relaxed after a busy days work. I like watching TV.2、The man I love most in my life我人生中最爱的一个人（见第二类中相同的题目）3、My favorite season我最喜欢的季节内容需要包括以下方面：1.点出自己最喜欢的季节；2.陈述喜欢这一季节的原因，可以描写这一季节的景色，或是记述在这一季节最让人难忘的经历；3.以简单的文字总结全文。There are four seasons in a year. They are spring, summer, autumn and winter. Among the four seasons, I like spring best. Why so? Firstly, its neither cold nor hot in spring. It is getting warmer and warmer, so I like the weather in spring best. Secondly, many plants will turn green and come back to life in spring, so spring stands for hopes. Thirdly, we can go swimming in the river. All in all, I can do so many things in spring, so spring is my favorite season.4、My favorite book我最喜欢的书My favorite book is “Dream of The Red Chamber”. The book tries to tell us that there are different kinds of love, and only one kind should be considered as True Love. In our life, we should marry the true love instead of wealth and good looks. From this book, we also get to know a part of the noble peoples life in Qing Dynasty and find some life philosophies from it. So this book is very instructive to people. We should learn more from this book as well as other books.5、My favorite sport我最喜欢的体育项目Just as lots of teenagers take to pop music, I love basketball. Its part of my life. I began to play basketball in my childhood. I still remember the good old days when I played with my classmates after school. Later on, as I grew up, almost everything changed, but this sport-playing basketball remained and my love of it grew even stronger.I love this sport because it brings joys and health to my life. When I got tired from office work, I went to the sports ground and felt refreshed. If there were worries and cares from daily life, I went to the sports ground. There everything went away except basketball. It is basketball that keeps me in good shape and mood.6、My favorite Piece of Music我最喜欢的一首音乐My favorite piece of music is “To Alice”. There are a few reasons as follows. First of all, it is made by great musician Beethoven. I like him very much, so I like his music. Secondly, the music is very beautiful and soft. It showed his love to Alice. Thirdly, it is helpful to make you happy when you are listening to this piece of music. When I am very sad, I will listen to it. So, its my favorite piece of music.第四类：说明文与议论文1、Parents are the best teachers父母是最好的老师内容需要包括以下方面：1. 父母是最好的老师；2. 解释其中的原因；3. 重申观点。Parents are the best teachers. Firstly, parents stay with children every day. Children will regard them as examples and learn from them. If the parents are polite, the children will be polite. Secondly, parents influence children with their words. If parents always are nice to others and say good words about others, their children will also be kind to other children. If parents are good to old people, when the parents are getting older, the children will be good to them too. In a word, parents are the best teachers for their children.2、 Changes in my life我人生的变化I have got a lot of changes in my life.Firstly, I have learned a lot. I entered TV University to study English. Now I have learned a lot from my teachers and my classmates. Secondly, I am more confident. Because I have learned a lot and have more abilities, I feel more and more confident. Thirdly, I have more dreams for my life. I can speak and write English now, so I want to go abroad to work or study in the future. In different countries, I can make different friends, see different beautiful places, and try different food.I have changed a lot just since I entered TV University.3、 Choosing a job选择工作1. 别人选择工作时的考虑2. 自己在选择工作时考虑的因素；3. 为什么自己是这样考虑的。People will consider a lot when choosing a job, me too. Firstly, I will choose a job that I am interested in. Interest is the best teacher in our life. With interest, I can do the work well. Secondly, I will choose a job that I am qualified for. With such a job, I will have enough confidence to do it well. Thirdly, I will choose an easy job. I dont like being busy with work. With an easy job, I dont need to work overtime. So I will make my own choice.4、 East or west, home is best. 金窝银窝不如自家的草窝An old saying goes like “East, west, home is the best”. Home is very important to us. Firstly, home can offer us a place to have a rest. Every day, we can go back home after work and have a good rest. Secondly, when we are hurt outside, we can go back home and comfort ourselves with the love of our family members. Thirdly, when we meet with difficulties, we can go back home and ask family members for help. Therefore, home is one of the most important things in our life.5、Why do students learn English?为何学生要学英语？Why do we students learn English? Firstly, English is very useful. English is the most widely used language in the world. If we make a visit to foreign countries or do business with foreigners, we need to communicate with them in English. Secondly, China is becoming stronger and stronger, and we have more chances to go abroad. We can know the English-speaking countries much deeper if we know English. Above all, English is useful and important, we must master English.6、How to achieve success of distance learning如何实现远程学习的成功Now, I study English in TV university, in other words, I am a distance learner. But we have to answer the following question. How to achieve success of distance learning? For me, I think, firstly, we should be able to use computers. If we are good at computer, we can surf online and learn the online knowledge offered by distance education. Secondly, we should make a study plan before a new year begins. I believe, if we can have a good plan and know how to use computers, we can achieve success of distance learning.7、TV program and me我和电视节目The News Report has always been my favorite TV program. The News Report contains a large amount of information ranging from the international political situation to the latest football game. And the most important character is its fast pace. Because of this fast pace, news programs can contain much information in a short time. In my opinion, the News Report is more than a TV program. It is a way of communication. From this program, people can know and understand world affairs. I especially appreciate this benefit of watching the news.8、Should the university campus be open to the tourists?大学校园应该向游客开放吗？Nowadays many universities have become famous tourist sites, such as the Peking University and Tsinghua University. Then is it right or not? Some people say “yes”.However, my view on this matter is different. Firstly, university campus should be a quiet place for the students. Students work is to study, so a quiet place is necessary. Secondly, university is a place for teaching and learning. So we shouldnt link it with the tourism. Thirdly, with too many people on the campus, security will become a hard