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情景作文讲解 校园活动类 1 社会实践类 2 家庭类 3 内容分类 传统文化类 4 叙事 1 抒情和表达观点 2 考查能力 试题分析 评分标准 怎么拿高分 段落设置 三段式 开头 1 4 结尾四段式 开头 1 2 3 4 结尾五段式 开头 1 2 3 4 结尾 句式要求 长短句错落有致 共约200词短句 8 10词长句 15 20词 14句话 语法要求 从句 定语从句 名词性从句 状语从句非谓语动词 主语 定语 状语特殊句式 倒装句 强调句 总说 1 分别描述图片 2 感想或意义 3 文章结构 1 总说 开头 总体要写出要做的事 从题目中提取信息 where when who what how why 5W1H 2 分别描述图片 1 列要点2 连词成句 where when who what how why 1 要点描述 1 心理活动描写2 对特殊图文的内容 伴随动作的描写3 周围的环境 2 细节描述 1 时间过渡2 逻辑过渡 引起 承接图片 活动的原因 目的 结果 3 衔接 过渡 3 感想和意义 结尾升华 总结性的写出做完此事的感想或意义 1 2句话 经典词句 过渡衔接词Afterwards Uponarrival onarrivingBeforeleaving Withoutanyhesitation TooursurpriseHardlyhadsb donesth whensbdidsth Nosooner than 2 感想Seeing weallhadasenseoffulfillment achievement N addedtoourexcitement Ifeel happy forthemandwishthem Itwasquiteanexperienceforus whichI llneverforgetfortherestofmylife Timepassedquicklybeforeweknewit Wehadtosaygoodbyeto Adj as 主语 谓语 wefeel adj ItwasnotuntilthenthatIreallyunderstood learntthemeaningof 经典词句 3 场景分类1 意外类 Sth caughtourattentionFacedwiththeunexpectedsituation Despitetheunexpected sb still 2 景色宜人 Thesunshinewassowarmtofeelandthemountainairissogoodtobreathe Nothingcanbecomparedwiththemerrysongofthebirds thegentlebreeze andthesightoftherisingsun ThatwasthefirsttimewehadseenthescenicspotsthatcouldonlybeseenfrombooksorTVbefore 经典词句 3 高兴Wecannothelpjumpingwithjoyandexcitement Sth hasgivenmeatremendous 惊人的 lift Wewerethrilledwhen Wewereoverwhelmed 受宠若惊 不知所措 withjoy Theairwasfilledwiththesoundofourlaughter 4 失望Ifoundsthreallytroublesome annoying disappointing5 时间飞逝 Threehourshadpassedbeforeweknewit Abusy butdelightfulmorningsoonpassed Timeflies Sooncamethe 经典词句 4 时间飞逝 Threehourshadpassedbeforeweknewit Abusy butdelightfulmorningsoonpassed Timeflies Sooncamethe 5 开始干活Wewereallreadytodoourassignedjob Assoonaslearningaboutourassignment allofuswereanxioustotryourchances Afterallthepreparationshadbeenmade wecarriedoutourplan 6 成就感Allofuswereveryhappytoseeitdone Asenseofachievementfloodedeveryinchofmyheart Atthesightoflovelytreesbehindus wefeltexcitedandcontentwithwhatwehaddone Tiredaswewere weallhadasenseoffulfillmentasallofourworkpaidoff 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华 上周学校举办了校园传统文化节 请给你英国笔友写一封邮件 按下图先后顺序 叙述你们班用报纸制作汉服参加展示活动的全过程 例文 2016北京丰台期末 题目中提取关键信息Where campusWhen lastweekWho ourclassWhat traditionalculturefestivalHow makeHanfuwithnewspaperWhy mindLastweek I aswellasmyclassmates hadfuninparticipatinginaTraditionalCultureFestivalorganizedbyourschoolthroughmakingHanfuwithnewspaper 1 总说 1 要点 SearchfortheinformationthroughInternet2 细节 BrowsethewebsiteofBaidu3 衔接过渡 时间 beforethefestival andthen gradually逻辑 whenwedecidedtomakeHanfu wedidn tknowwhattodobutturnedtotheInternetforhelp 引出描图 webegantogainanunderstandingofHanfuculture 承接下图 2 分别描述图片 描述第一幅图片 Beforethefestival whenwedecidedtomakeHanfu wedidn tknowwhattodobutturnedtotheInternetforhelp Andthen wesearchedforitsinformationabouttheHanfuculturebybrowsingthewebsiteofBaiduintheclassroom Gradually webegantogainanunderstandingofHanfuculture 1 要点 design drawasketch2 细节 Harderthanweexpected 心理活动 承接描图3 衔接过渡 时间 AftercollectingenoughinformationaboutHanfu逻辑 withasatisfyingonedone webegantomakethedesignareality 承接下图 2 分别描述图片 描述第二幅图片 AftercollectingenoughinformationaboutHanfu wedevotedourselvestothedesigningworkanddrewasketchonapieceofpaper Thoughitwasharderthanweexpected westilldidn tgiveupandsparednoefforttofinishit Withasatisfyingonedone webegantomakethedesignareality 1 要点 Measure cutnewspapers stick2 衔接过渡 时间 afterthat逻辑 whatwedidwastofindsomeabandonednewspaperasmaterials 引起描图 withourjointeffort wesucceededinmakingtheHanfuwithnewspaper 承接下图 2 分别描述图片 描述第三幅图片 Whatwedidafterthatwastofindsomeabandonednewspaperasmaterials Wemeasuredthelengthofeachpart cutnewspaperintopiecesandstuckthemtogetherstepbystep Withourjointeffort wesucceededinmakingtheHanfuwithnewspaper 1 要点 Bedisplayedontherunaway2 细节 Befilledwithprideandjoy 2 分别描述图片 描述第四幅图片 Thetraditionalcultureshowwehadbeenwaitingforeventuallycame whereourhand madeHanfuwasproudlydisplayedontherunaway Atthatmoment ourheartswerefilledwithprideandjoy 3 感想和意义 高分档 Thememorableexperiencewillalwaysserveasareminderofthebeautyofourbrilliantculture whichcanstrikeeveryoneevenifinthemodestmaterial 运用valuable meaningful memorable等修饰性词汇 基本句式 升华思想 中低分档 Ithinktheactivityisbothnecessaryandmeaningful Itnotonlymakesusawareoftheimportanceofteamworkbutalsodevelopsourbrilliantculture 全文 Lastweek I aswellasmyclassmates hadfuninparticipatinginaTraditionalCultureFestivalorganizedbyourschoolthroughmakingHanfuwithnewspaper Beforethefestival whenwedecidedtomakeHanfu wedidn tknowwhattodobutturnedtotheInternetforhelp Andthen wesearchedforitsinformationabouttheHanfuculturebybrowsingthewebsiteofBaiduintheclassroom Gradually webegantogainanunderstandingofHanfuculture AftercollectingenoughinformationaboutHanfu wedevotedourselvestothedesigningworkanddrewasketchonapieceofpaper Thoughitwasharderthanweexpected westilldidn tgiveupandsparednoefforttofinishit Withasatisfyingonedone webegantomakethedesignareality Whatwedidafterthatwastofindsomeabandonednewspaperasmaterials Wemeasuredthelengthofeachpart cutnewspaperintopiecesandstuckthemtogetherstepbystep Withourjointeffort wesucceededinmakingtheHanfuwithnewspaper Thetraditionalcultureshowwehadbeenwaitingforeventuallycame whereourhand madeHanfuwasproudlydisplayedontherunaway Atthatmoment ourheartswerefilledwithprideandjoy Thememorableexperiencewillalwaysserveasareminderofthebeautyofourbrilliantculture whichcanstrikeeveryoneevenifinthemodestmaterial 低分段作文对比 Lastweek I aswellasmyclassmates participatedinaTraditionalCultureFestivalorganizedbyourschoolthroughmakingHanfuwithnewspaper Beforethefestival wesearchedforinformationabouttheHanfuculturebybrowsingthewebsiteofBaiduintheclassroom AftercollectingenoughinformationaboutHanfu wedevot