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如何写建议信【写作任务】为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie，收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。内容要点如下：1.表示理解并给予安慰；2.提出建议并说明理由。注意：1.词数120左右；2.信中不能出现与本人相关的信息；3.信的开头与结尾已为你拟好，不计入总词数。参考词汇：temper n.脾气，情绪Hi Worried,Im sorry to know that youre having such a bad time at the moment. Yours, Jamie【写作指导】一、审题定调这是一封建议信，它是生活中常用的一种应用文文体。建议信的目的是向收信人就某事提出自己的建议或忠告。有可能是写给个人，就收信人遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点；也可能是写给某个组织或机构，就改进其服务等方面提出建议忠告。提出建议时，多用祈使句，时态以一般现在时为主，人称多用第二人称。二、谋篇布局建议信的格式和普通信件一样，通常包括以下几个部分：信头、称呼、正文、结束语和签名。因为本写作任务开头和结尾已给出，所以我们只需要写出正文部分即可。建议信的正文部分分为三部分：第一部分：引出话题；第二部分：提出建议；第三部分：表达祝愿。三、组织语言就本篇习作而言，每个部分围绕以下内容组织语言。1.第一部分：同情对方的遭遇，给予安慰，并说明写信目的。普通表达高级表达Everyone may have such bad times, so dont worry too much.Everyone has their ups and downs, so when things go wrong, dont feel too bad.Id like to offer you some advice.Here are some useful suggestions / advice / tips.I think you can make it if you follow the advice below.2.第二部分：提出合理的建议并说明理由。普通表达高级表达Talk to others about your problems.Dont keep things to yourself; try to share your problems with others.Go out and play games with your friends. It can help you relax.Go outdoors and play team games with your friends, which is an effective (有效的) way to get rid of (摆脱) anger.Always believe that good things will happen in the future.Remain optimistic (乐观的) about your future.3.第三部分：表达美好祝愿。普通表达高级表达I hope you will find my suggestions useful / helpful.I hope my suggestions will work well with you.I will highly appreciate your consideration of my advice / suggestions / tips.I hope you will feel better soon.I hope youll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal.【范文展示】普通范文Hi Worried,Im sorry to know that youre having such a bad time at the moment.Everyone may have such bad times, so dont worry too much about it. The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything bad.Here are three useful tips:First of all,talk to others about your problems.This is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting people or yourself. Second,go out and play games with your friends. It can help you relax.Third,always believe that good things will happen in the future.In this way, you may stay happy and be full of energy most of the time.I hope you will feel better soon.Yours,Jamie高级范文Hi Worried,Im sorry to know that youre having such a bad time at the moment.Everyone has their ups and downs, so when things go wrong, dont feel too bad.You should learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything bad.I think you can make it if you follow the advice below.First,dont keep things to yourself; try to share your problems with others,which is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting people or yourself. Second,go outdoors and play team games with your friends, which is an effective way to get rid of anger.Third,remain optimistic about your future.Such a positive attitude can be helpful in lifting your spirits.I hope youll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal.Yours,Jamie温馨提示：同学们，仔细阅读两篇文章之后，你会发现相同标号的内容采用了不同的表达方式来表达相同或相近的含义。因此，大家在平时的写作中，应该多使用一些复杂结构或高级词汇，同时，也应学会使用简单词汇或句式来表达复杂的意思。另外，高级表达中的部分词汇虽目前尚未学到，但都属于课标词汇，学有余力的同学可以提前学习掌握。说明：该写作任务选自2014年高考英语安徽卷，范文有改动。【实战演练】假设你是李华，最近你的英国笔友杰克刚刚转入一所新学校。由于他性格内向，不擅长交朋友，所以他感到非常孤独，写信向你求助。请你给他回一封信。注意：1.词数100左右；2.开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。Dear Jack,Im sorry to hear that you are lonely in your new school. Yours,Li Hua答案One possible version:Dear Jack,Im sorry to hear that you are lonely in your new school.However, the situation is easy to change if you take my advice.First of all,dont be too worried.Everyone may have such bad timeswhen they move to a new environment.Second, you should greet your teachers and classmates when meeting them on campus.It is always easier tomake new friends when you show your friendliness first.Third, it would be a good idea ifyo