5月9日雅思写作考试解析+7分范文.pdf

智 课 网 雅 思 备 考 资 料 5月9日雅思写作考试解析 7分范文 5月9日的雅思考试结束了 来跟老师们一起回忆下当场的雅思写作 考题以及出题思路 同时欣赏一下7分的雅思范文吧 Task 1 table The table below shows the salaries of secondary high school teachers in 2009 Describe the main features of the figure 分析 五月第一场BC下手很仁慈 题目一点都不难 很可惜 第一时间拿 不到全部准确的数字 所以下面文章中一些xx数据 未能补充完整 同 学们主要看文字表达和句型 据参加的同学回忆 在start这块 卢森堡 最高 其次澳大利亚和丹麦 最后是韩国和日本 在15年后的一列 情 况依旧 卢森堡最高 其次澳大利亚和丹麦 最后是韩国和日本 最后的 薪水峰值 韩国和日本后来居上成了第一第二 卢森堡第二 澳大利亚 和丹麦最后 Word count 180 The table compares the income of secondary school among five countries in the year 1999 It is obvious that at the initial stage of teachers career Luxembourg s teachers earned the most salaries 800000 pound And the teachers came from Australia and Denmark had the second most income which reached at xx pound As for Korean and Japanese teachers they did not make as much income as any other countries only had xx and xx pound respectively 15 years later this situation didn t change dramatically The payment of Luxembourg s teachers rose by 30 000 pound and still won the largest payment Australian and Danish teachers income followed which increased to xx and xx respectively As is expected the figure for Japan and Korea came right at the bottom Conversely compared to the top salary in a teacher s career the incomes of Korean and Japanese teachers climbed like a rocket arriving at their highest level of 370 000 and 340 000 respectively The number of Luxembourg s teachers almost tripled But it is strange that the salaries of Australian and Danish teachers did not go up any further Task 2 题目类别 Environment 提问方式 Discussion 考试题目 Developments of technology are causing environmental problems Some people think the solution is that everyone accepts a simpler life while others believe that technology can solve these problems Discuss both views and give your opinion 分析 题目难在拓展 容易跑题 不需要提解决方法 需要你解释个人为何能解决环境问题 以及科 技如何解决环境问题 word count 271 SAMPLE There is no doubt that modern technology has caused a variety of environmental issues both in cities and towns Ironically I feel that technology can address some of these problems but at the same time personal effort is a must Theoretically addressing some environmental issues by adopting simple lifestyles is sensible According to the statistics during the last 100 years the earth s surface temperature has risen dramatically because of human activities Therefore some people feel that the changes in our lifestyles can reverse this worrying trend For example the growing number of vehicles on the road emits a large quantity of green house gases such as carbon dioxide which will worsen the air quality If residents chose other modes of transport like buses or subways this serious condition would be alleviated to a large extent However in my opinion this policy would be very unpopular with some people especially those living in the suburb who do need to travel on roads While it is undeniable that an individual s behaviour has a profound effect on the environment other people argue that the improvement in technology can tackle some problems in turn For example the technology today is available to produce electric cars that would be both quieter and cleaner to use Persuading manufacturers and travellers to adopt this new technology would be a more effective strategy for improving air quality fundamentally My own view is that apart from individual effort and environmental friendly technologies we need to do more