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深圳英语口语培训学校 浅谈下定义在议论文中的用途 深圳英语口语培训学校 浅谈下定义在议论文中的用途 太平洋英语 中教小班精讲 外教 1 对 1 听说 108 天突破口语 先免费试学 效果满意在报名 请搜索 太平洋英语免费试学 写作一直是困扰考生的一个难点和瓶颈 不论是 A 类或是 G 类的同学 想要在 写作中取得 7 分以上的高分是非常困难的事情 就考试本身而言 Task 2 的得分起 着关键的作用 在接下来的文章里 笔者并不是要探讨大作文的全盘攻略 而是围 绕一种特殊的写作思路和切入点来诠释它在议论文中的运用 以期帮助大家提高大 作文的得分 下定义 可以给读者一个直观的概念或者清晰的思路 并且有利于后文的发 展 而它本身并非只是字典上的解释 可以灵活使用 接下来 朗阁海外考试研究 中心的老师将介绍一些它在大作文不同阶段里的应用 一 一 引言段中的应用引言段中的应用 1 Globalization Globalization the international spread of products ideas and information is bringing the world closer together But globalization is not a new concept For thousands of years nations have roamed the earth in search of new markets and new sources of raw materials for their own industries 关于 全球化 这个名词 考生并不陌生 但是如何用合理的语言来赋予它一个 含义 这并非易事 上述的引言段就很好地做到了这一点 先是从字面上诠释了 全 球化 的定义 进而又从实际生活角度赋予了它另外一层含义 2 Telephone Mobile phone Imagine using smoking signals carrier pigeons or riders on horseback to send an important message Although those methods may sound strange years ago people used them to communicate Today all a person has to do is pick up a telephone mobile phone 对于电话这一现代通讯工具 地球人都知道它是干嘛的 不过呢 我们可以从 对于电话功能的定义上做文章 同样也可以赋予它一个生动的含义 并且一下子可 以吸引读者眼球 3 Studying abroad Every year students around the world leave behind the comforts of home to pursue a study abroad experience in a foreign country While many would say that studying abroad is advantageous some would argue otherwise 出国留学同样是一个非常熟悉的话题 若直接用字典上的定义直接去解释它显 然多此一举 因此 我们不妨从侧面突破 通过引入大量学生出国留学的事实和目 的来诠释这个再也不能熟悉的话题 同样可以起到很不错的效果 4 Success As Thomas Edison once said If you wish to succeed you should use persistence as your good friend experience as your reference prudence as your brother and hope as your sentry This essay is going to look at factors that constitute success 如果你希望成功 当以恒心为良友 以经验为参谋 以谨慎为兄弟 以希望为 哨兵 这是伟大的美国发明家爱迪生曾经说过的一句话 借助名人名言来下定义又 是一种非常有效的开头方式 这样做一方面揭示了文章接下来的主题 另一方面也 增强了说服力 可谓是一举两得 二 二 主体段中的应用主体段中的应用 1 Some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace Others think that the true function of a university should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake regardless of whether the course is useful to an employer What in your opinion should be the main function of a university 剑七 Test 4 以下是此题目一篇范文的第 2 个主体段 However reaching the conclusion that other functions such as giving access to knowledge for its own sake are no longer important is biased For hundreds of years especially in the west the undergraduate education is indeed a liberal education which means the undergraduates learn a wide range of curriculums such as psychology economics politics that has no direct relations to jobs The upsides of this is that it firstly enables students to become broad minded and help them lay a solid theoretical foundation then they will be able to choose the most appropriate field based on their own interests for further studies 这个段落的论述的中心是大学以传授知识本身为目的 作者使用了 通才教育 这个在西方国家非常流行的教育方式为佐证 在给出 通才教育 定义的本身 又用 定语从句补充到了和题目第 2 个论点间的关系 从而进行了有力的对比 深化了段 落中心 2 Education When people leave school they wish they could breathe a sign of relief and leave learning behind However learning should last a lifetime You exercise your body to stay strong and you should exercise your mind to stay sharp 在这个关于教育的话题中 作者在论述时用终身教育的好处来诠释教育的长期 性和必要性 从而为下文的扩展作了很好的铺垫和过渡 3 School should teach children academic subjects which will be beneficial to their future careers Therefore other subjects such as music and sports are not important To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion 08 年 5 月 22 日 A 类考题 Academic subjects such as reading and writing play a vital role in the education system Apart from activating creativity and imagination it helps students lay a solid foundation of knowledge Some might say that academic subject is to a student as a rifle is to a soldier without which he is unable to fulfill his mission 在这个主体段中 作者在开头便举出了一些学术课程的具体内容 从而给读者 一个概念 同时也展现了作者对题目的解读能力 接下来我们再来看一个相似的用 法 4 Why have not alternative energies already replaced fossil fuels There are also problems with production stability The amount of energy we need varies throughout the day and conventional energy production such as coal and oil can be increased or decreased based on these variations Alternatives like wind and solar power are limited because they can only produce electricity when i