高一英语写作教案.pdf

学 生 试 讲 教 案 院院别 别 外外国国语语学学院院 专专业 业 英英语语专专业业 班班级 级 20082008 级级 5 5 班班 学生姓名 学生姓名 吴吴霞霞 学学号 号 2008054127820080541278 指导教师 指导教师 黄黄萍萍 20112011 年年 5 5 月月 内江师范学院学生试讲教案 1 Teaching Plan for Module 3 SEFC Book 1 The sixth Period writing I Teaching Objectives 1 Language Objectives 1 Important words and phrases pleasant exciting excited beautiful arrive return two hours ride after that have a short long trip to set out spent on something spent in doing something remember forget doing something 2 Important sentence patterns We enjoyed ourselves very much We had a good time What a wonderful day we had We will never forger it It was the best trip I can remember 2 Ability Objectives By the end of the lesson students should know the features of narrative writing and be able to write a narrative composition 3 Moral Objective Help students to learn about the importance of environmental protection II Important Points 1 The features of narrative writing 2 How to write a narrative composition III Difficult Point How to write a narrative composition IV Teaching Methods 1 Show pictures 2 Interview 2 Discussion 3 Practice 4 TeachingAids a blackboard some pictures a projector and a computer V Teaching Procedures StepILead in 2 mins Greet students to attract their attention on this class Ask them a question How many types of 内江师范学院学生试讲教案 2 writing do you know T Good morning boys and girls S Good morning Miss Wu T Ok let s begin our class We know we have learned many types of text so how many types of writing Do you know Just like the text we have learned My First Ride on a Train Who can tell me S Narrative T Very good Besides narrative what other writing types do you know If you don t know I will show you the answer Suggested answers Narrative Exposition Argumentation Prose Fiction novel Essay Poesy T Today we are going to learn one kind of these types that s narrative Step Explanation 2 mins Explain the meaning of narrative writing T What is the meaning of narrative Who can tell me S Sorry I don t know T Ok it doesn t matter I ll show you the answer Suggested answer Narrative writing is writing that tells us a story or gives an account of something that has happened Step Interview 7 mins Show some pictures about Beidaihe and then have an interview Interviewee T Interviewer S T I knew most of you have traveled to many beautiful places right So now I ll show you some pictures Just guess where s the place 内江师范学院学生试讲教案 3 S How beautiful T Yes they are beautiful Who can tell me where the place is S It s Beidaihe T Very good These pictures are the same place that named Beidaihe It is local in Hebei province So do you want to have a trip to there S Yes T We all want to go to beautiful places but some people don t protect the environment So as high school students we should protect the environment and protect the public things at there right S Yes T You re good students And I want to tell you I have been there 内江师范学院学生试讲教案 4 S1 When did you go there S2 Who did you go with S3 T Ok calm down Now we ll have an interview Ok You can ask me any questions about this trip Now it s your turn S1 When did you go there T Last Sunday S2 How did you get there Did you go there by train T No I get there by bus S3 Who did you go with T I went with my friends S4 What did you do at there T We played games on the beach and swam in the sea We had lunch in a restaurant We walked along the beach and we took many photos S5 What do you think about there T I think it is very beautiful and we all have a good time S6 S7 T Any other questions Ss No more questions Step Discussion 8 mins T Now suppose that if you were me how could you describe this trip What words phrases and sentences will you use S travel trip T Ok now I ll give you 3minutes to have a discussion with you partner or the classmates around you Now go ahead T Time s up Now I would like some students to write your answers on the blackboard Who want to have a try Ok one two three please Go ahead S1 travel trip wonderful enjoy ourselves S2 beautiful exciting have lunch what a wonderful day we had S3 excited return spend it was the best trip I can remember T Very good Applauding I think these words phrases and sentences you will think of when you plane to write the composition 内江师范学院学生试讲教案 5 wordspleasant exciting excited beautiful arrive return phrases two hours ride after that have a short long trip to set out spend on something spend in doing something sentences We enjoyed ourselves very much What a wonderful day we had We will never forger it It was the best trip I can remember Step Features of narrative writing 6 mins T Ok I ll show you a model narrative composition Model writing 1 ATrip to Beidaihe Last Sunday my friend and I had a long trip to Beidaihe We set out in the school bus at 7 20am The weather was pleasant and we were excited After two hours ride we arrived there at 9 30 We played games on the beach and swam in the sea happily After that we had lunch in a restaurant In the afternoon we walked along the beach It is very beautiful and we took many photos We enjoyed ourselves very much Time passed quickly and we had to leave It was half past four when we returned safely What a wonderful trip we had I will never forget it T Ok you just have asked me some questions and now it s my turn to ask you questions Ok S Ok T From the first and second sentences what information can you get S The time place person and brief event T Yes very good What writing orders does the writer take S Time order and space order T How do you get this information Please give me your reasons Ok you please S1 From the sentences We set out in the school bus at 7 20am We arrived there at 9 30 It was half past four when we returned safely T Good What the narrative person does the writer use S First person narrator T Yes very good In this composition the writer uses first person narrator but when we describe other people s thing we usually use third person narrator Clear 内江师范学院学生试讲教案 6 S Yes T Ok What tense does the writer use S Past tense T Yes good When we write narrative we usually use past tense because S It describes something has happened T Yes very good Now you should focus on these sentences in red What s the function of these sentences S Show the writer s feeling T How clever you are So the features of narrative writing are S Narrative person narrative content narrative methods and narrative tense T Very good Attention please the most important feature is the narrative content so when you write a narrative composition you should take these elements into consideration The narrative content contains S time place people and event T Good job I think you ve well known about the features of narrative writing right S Yes Step Writing 10 mins T Ok now please turn to page27 We will write a composition about The best journey of my life You can fallow these questions to start your topic Where did you go When did you go How did you travel there Who did you go with What did you do see eat there Did you enjoy the trip T Give you 5minutes to write this composition Now go ahead T Have you finished S Yes T Ok that s very good Now please exchange your composition with your partner and revise your partner s composition Give you 2minutes T Have you finished S Yes 内江师范学院学生试讲教案 7 T Ok that s very good I would like someone to share your best journey with us Would you Please S1 I first traveled a long distance by bus when I was 7years old I went with my parents from Chengdu to Beijing We set out early in the morning After 8hours ride we arrived there and it was dark The next days we visited Beijing Palace Museum and we clubbed the Great Wall We were tired but we felt very happy It is the best trip I can remember and I will never forger it T Ok how do you think about S1 s composition S Very good T Yes I think so In limited time she can write such composition it is very good Now let s see the model writing Model 2 My best Journey of My Life The first time I went away from home without my parents when I was ten I have a school trip with my class to the zoo in Beijing We left home very early in the morning because we had a long journey We traveled to Beijing by bus and we spent the whole day at the zoo I can remember seeing an elephant for the first time I was very excited At midday we ate our picnic lunch in a park near the zoo After lunch we visited the reptile house and saw the snakes and crocodiles It was fantastic A t five o clock we got on the bus and drove home It was the best trip I can remember Step Summary 3 mins T Now I want someone to analyze the composition just as we have analyzed The Trip to Beidaihe Ok who want to have a try It s very easy Ok you please S1 From the narrative person it uses first person and the writer combines time order and space order to write this composition The tense is simple past tense T Yes very good Who want to analyze the narrative content Ok you please S2 When I was ten I took bus to the zoo in Beijing with my class and I was very exciting It is the best trip I can re