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inghabits It sbettertowriteforfifteenortwentyminuteseverydaythantositforfiveorsixhourstowriteovertheweekend However ifyoucanmakeadailywritingschedulewithlongerhoursonyourwritingonweekends thenit smuchbetter Oneoftheworsthabitsisnevertogethelpfromotherstoimproveyourwriting Itisadvisedthatyoushareyourworkwithothers Forexample youcansendyourwritingtoafewfriends roundupsomereadersandletthemcommentonyourwriting Thatway you llfindyourwritinggradu allyimproved 答案 写作提示 文章主要讲述好的写作习惯对提高写作水平的帮助 文章结构比较清晰 以自然段为基础概括要点即可 其中第一段是主旨段 而后面的三段为具体的做法 Onepossibleversion Goodwritinghabitscontributealottoimprovingyourwriting 要点1 First youshouldreadasmuchaspossibletogettheknowledgeandskillsforwriting 要点2 Youshouldalsomakeawrit ingplanandkeepupyourdailywriting 要点3 Besides you dbetterturntoothersforhelptoim proveyourwriting 要点4 Writing2 2018浙江金华十校一模 阅读下面短文 根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要 ThefamiliaryellowschoolbusisthelargestsystemofmasstransportationintheUSandeveryschooldaytransportsroughly25millionyoungpeopletoschoolandhomeagainaftertheschooldayends Meanwhile itisthesafestmethodforgettingkidstoandfromschool accordingtotheNationalHighwayTrafficSafetyAdministration NHTSA Childrenare70timesmorelikelytoarriveatschoolsafelyontheschoolbusthaniftheyhadtraveledtoschooldrivingthemselvesorridingwithfriends Theseschoolbusesmeetmoreofthenation smotorvehiclesafetystandardsthananyothervehi clesontheroad Also severalnewtechnologiesavailabletodayaremakingschoolbusesevensafer suchasvideocamerasontheinsideandoutside stoparmcameras GPStrackingandcolli sionlesseningsystems Anothersafetytoolonschoolbusesishighseatbacks closely spacedseatsandenergy absorbingseats Buteventhesafenessofschoolbuseswouldnotcompletelysumupwhychildrenaresaferwhenridingthebig yellowbus Thebusisonlyassafeastheprofessionalmenandwomenwhodrivethem AlldriversmustobtainaClassBorCCommercialDriver sLicense CDL Theyareran domlytestedforalcoholanddrugs usuallyhavetheirdrivingrecordchecked andaregiventhesamereviewofcriminalhistoryasteachersandotheremployeeswhohavecontactwithstudents Inordertoserveasaschoolbusdriver mostapplicantsarerequiredtosuccessfullycompleteatrainingcourse alongwithinstructionintheclassroomandbehindthewheel Schoolbusesaresafefortheenvironment notonlybecauseeachbusreplaces36passengercarsthatwould butforthebuses beontheroadtakingandpickingupschoolchildren Additionally schoolbusesusealternativegreenfuelslikenaturalgas andelectricpower ToddMonteferrario PresidentoftheNationalSchoolTransportationAssociation saidparentsshouldrememberthatthesafestandsmartestchoiceistoputtheirchildrenonthebigyellowbuswhentheycan 答案 写作提示 本文是议论文 文章主要论述校车的好处 文章的结构为 总 分 总 模式 第一段是主题段 提出了主要观点 第二至第四段分别是具体的论据 最后一段提出结论 Onepossibleversion TheschoolbusisthesafestandwisestchoicetoschoolintheUS 要点1 Firstly schoolbusesnotonlymeethighvehiclesafetystandardsbutalsoaretechnologicallyequipped 要点2 Secondly thebusdrivershavetopassstrictqualificationtestsandsafetydrivingtraining 要点3 Thirdly schoolbuses poweredbygreenfuelsenvironmentallysafebyreducingthenumberofprivatecarshittingtheroads 要点4 Thereforechildrenareencouragedtogotoschoolbyschoolbus 要点5 Writing3 2017浙江衢州高三一模 阅读下面短文 根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要 Amongallthefastgrowingscienceandtechnology theresearchofhumangenes orbiologicalen gineeringaspeoplecallit isdrawingmoreandmoreattentionnow Discussionsaboutitarein creasinglyheatedaroundtheworld Thegreatestthingthatgenetechnologycandoistocureseriousdiseasesthatdoctorsatpresentcanalmostdonothingwith suchascancerandheartdisease Everyyear millionsofpeoplearemurderedbythesetwokillers Andtodate doctorshavenotfoundaneffectivewaytocurethem Butifthegenetechnologyisapplied notonlythesetwodiseasescanbecuredcompletely bring inghappinessandmorelivingdaystothepatients butalsothegreatamountofmoneypeoplespendoncuringtheirdiseasescanbesaved thereforeitbenefitstheeconomyaswell Inaddition thehumanlifespan 寿命 canbeprolonged Genetechnologycanhelppeopletogivebirthtohealthierandclevererchildren Somefamilieshavegeneticdiseases Thismeanstheirchildrenwillforsurehavethefamilialdisease whichisagreattroubleforthesefamilies Inthepast doctorscoulddonothingaboutgeneticdiseases Butgenetechnologycansolvethisproblemperfectly Scientistsjustneedtofindthewronggeneandcorrectit andahealthychildwillbeborn Somepeopleareworryingthatthegeneresearchcanbeusedtocreatehumanbeingsinlargequan tities Inthepastfewyears scientistshavesucceededincloninganimalssuchasmice sheep anddogs therefore thesepeoplepredictthathumanbabieswouldsoonbeclonedandthatitwouldbebeyondcontrol leadingtosomedisastrousconsequences Butmanybelievethatclonedbabieswillnotcomeoutinlargequantities formostcouplesintheworldcanhavebabiesinaverynormalwayandtheyalsobelievemeasureswillbetakentocontrolgenetechnology 答案 写作提示 文章首先介绍了基因工程的好处 最后一段说明了一些不同的观点 在概要写作时 以自然段为概括的基础 Onepossibleversion Genetechnologyisnowahottopicworldwide 要点1 Itcanhelppeoplecuredeadlydiseasesandallowthemtoliveahappierandlongerlifewithbettereconomicconditions 要点2 Genetech nologyalsomakesitpossibleforpeoplewithgeneticdiseasestogivebirthtohealthybabies 要点3 However somepeopleareconcernedthatgenetechnologywillbelargelyusedinhumancloningwhileothersdon tseeitasaproblem 要点4 高级语块givebirthto生出小孩 造成 某事的产生 beconcernedthat 担心 Writing4 2017浙江 七彩阳光 联盟3月 阅读下面短文 根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要 Ican tdecidewhatIwanttoeatfordinnertonight DoIfeellikeItalianfoodorThaifood IndianorChinese AmericanorTurkish Idon tneedtotravelaroundtheworld allthesechoicesareavailableinatypicalinnercityinAustralia Australianfoodhasmanydifferentculturalinfluences Overthepastcentury peoplefrommanycountrieshavecometoAustralia Thesemigrants 移民 havecontributedtothemeltingpot thatis Australianfood Whetheryou reaftermodern traditionalorexoticflavors Australia seclecticdiningsceneof fersawiderangeoftheworld sgreatcuisines 菜肴 theVisitVictoriawebsitenoted SomeAustralianfamiliesmayrestricttheirdiettothebasic meatandthreeveg meal onesortofmeat chicken beef lamb andsoon alongwiththreedifferenttypesofvegetables usuallypotatoes peasandcarrots Butmostpeopleenjoythevariety IfIweretopickfourmealsthateveryAustralianeats theywouldbeItalianspaghettibolognaise 意式肉酱面 Chinesefriedrice BritishfishandchipsandThaigreenchickencurry ChinesestudentsinAustraliafinditeasytogetaChinesemeal CitieslikeSydneyhavelargeChi natowns butmanytownsinthecountryalsohaveaChinesetakeawayrestaurant PopularAustralian Chinesedishesmaynotalwaysseemauthentic HoneyChicken forexample butyoucanstillfinddumplingsandnoodles Evenso Australiahasitsown veryAustraliansavory 可口的 dish meatpie It sarealclassic Thedishisonthemenuateveryhousepartyandsportingvenue 场所 andiseateneverymorn ingafterabignight Andwhocouldforgetdesserts WeAustraliansoftenfightwithNewZealandersoverwhohastherightfulclaimtothepavlova 奶油水果蛋白饼 andlamington 拉明顿巧克力椰丝方形蛋糕 desserts bothequallydeliciousandsweet 答案 写作提示 文章主要是关于澳大利亚饮食的多元化现象 本文段落比较分散 但是其中心主旨还是很明确的 阅读时注意几个相关中心的把握 Onepossibleversion VariouschoicesoffoodfromaroundtheworldareavailableinatypicalinnercityinAustralia 要点1 DifferentculturalinfluencescontributetoAustralianfoods 要点2 ButsomeAustralianfami liesmayrestricttheirdiettomeatandthreevegwhilemostenjoyitsvariety 要点3 ThoughChi nesedishesareeasytogetinAustralia Australianshavetheirownspecialdishes meatpieanddesserts 要点4 深度解析很多概写的文章的自然段结构就反映了文章的要点线索 但是也有的文章 其自然段比较零碎 因此不能依靠自然段的结构来概要写作 这时就要考虑各个自然段在中心方面的相似度 一次来进行概括 高级语块contributeto对 做出贡献佳句背诵VariouschoicesoffoodfromaroundtheworldareavailableinatypicalinnercityinAustralia DifferentculturalinfluencescontributetoAustralianfoods Writing1 2018浙江学军中学领航卷 阅读下面短文 根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要 CallingLatinadeadlanguageisamatterofsemantics 语义学 Therearethosewhowouldsug gestLatinisnotdead andthatitlivesonineverydaylanguageusedbybillionsofpeopleworld wide Othersarguethatbecausethere reroutineupdatesonLatinpublishedbytheRomanCatholicChurch itisstillaliveanddeveloping However Latinisnolongerused onadailybasis bythevastmajorityofpeopleoutsideofspecificreligioussettings wheretraditioninfluencesitsuse Itisnolongeranyone snativelanguage Whileitsuseisstilltaught Latinisnolongerconsideredtobeadevelopinglanguagetothedegreeofmostmodernlanguages ThereasonsforLatindyingoutarenumerous PerhapsthemostsignificantonehastodowiththedeclineoftheRomanEmpire DuringtheRomanperiod languagewasstandardizedtoagreaterdegree BecauseRomewasthemostpowerfulpoliticalcountryintheWesternworldatthetime B组2016 2018年高考模拟 综合题组 mostofthosewhohadanyambitiontosucceedhadadesiretolearnLatin Asaresult thelanguagespreadrapidly However thatrapidexpansionwouldeventuallybegintoplateau 处于停滞状态 andfinallydecline Latincontinuedtobeusedduringthemedievalperiod ThroughoutEurope itremainedthelan guageofchoice However withnothingtounitethecontinent therewasnoneedforauniformlanguage Soslowly overaperiodofhundredsofyears Latinbegantochangeasdifferentregionsdevelopedtheirowndialects 方言 knownastheRomancelanguagestoday amongwhichthemostcommonlyspokenandrecognizableareSpanish Portuguese ItalianandFrench ThoughnotdirectlyrelatedtotheRomancelanguages Latinstillhasaneffectonmanyotherlan guages English forexample whichisnotoneoftheRomancelanguagesbutaGermanicone cantracenearlytwo thirdsofitswordsbacktoLatinroots 答案 写作提示 本文主要介绍了拉丁语的兴衰 文章有五段 每段自成一个信息群 概括要点时以段落为基础进行即可 Onepossibleversion SomepeopleassumeLatinisalivinganddevelopinglanguageratherthanadeadone 要点1 Butmostpeopledon tuseitindailylifeanymoreexceptonspecificreligiousoccasions 要点2 ItsgradualdisappearanceresultedfrommanyfactorsespeciallythefalloftheRomanEmpire 要点3 WiththeRomanEmpirerisingandfalling Latinexperienceditsexpansion stabilityandthendecline 要点4 AlthoughLatinchangedastheRomancelanguagescameintobeing itstillinflu encesmanyotherlanguages likeEnglish today 要点5 高级语块resultfrom由于withtheRomanEmpirerisingandfalling随着罗马帝国的兴衰expansionn 扩张stabilityn 稳定declinen 衰落 Writing2 2018浙江温州二模 阅读下面短文 根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要 Lookinsideanyfamilyhomeintheevening andyoumightseeatypicalenoughscene MomandDad eachontheirownlaptoportablet streamingmovies catchinguponworkormaybeanswer ingemailsontheirsmartphones Meanwhile onechildischattingonlinewithoneschoolfriendwhiletextinganother Theotherisplayingavideogamewithafriendontheothersideofthecityatthesametime Eachmemberofthefamilyistotallyabsorbedinhisorherownpieceoftech nologies Accordingtosomeexperts theeffectoftechnologyonhumanrelationshipsisworryingastech nologybecomesasubstituteforface to facehumanrelationships Itappearstobethecasethatmanypeoplewouldmuchratherspendtimewiththeirelectronicgadgets 电子产品 thanwithoneanother Youngpeoplesayitisdifficulttogettheirparents attentionandtheyhavetocompetewithsmartphones tabletsandothertechnologies However areportfromthePewInternetandAmericanLifeProjectoffersamorehelpfulanden couragingview suggestingthatfarfromreplacinghumancontact technologycanactuallybetter familyrelationships Justoverhalfofthe2 253peoplesurveyedagreedthattechnologyhaden abledthemtoincreasetheircontactwithdistantfamilymembersand47percentsaidithadim provedthecommunicationwiththepeopletheylivedwith Moreover eventheclosestmembersoffamiliesneedtimeawayfromeachotheratsomepointtoseektheirowninterests Familymem berswhomightotherwisehavesatinseparateroomscannowbeinthesameonewhilestilloccu pyingadifferentmentalspace Lookbackatourtypicalfamilysceneabove Isitanydifferentfromfourpeoplereadingtheirownbooks Orisitdrivingfamilyapart Wheretechnologywillleadusremainstobeseen Yetthereisnoneedtoworry Asamatteroffact howitaffectsourfamilyrelationshipsdependsonouratti tudetowardtechnology 答案 写作提示 本文结构清楚 但是概括要点时要注意文章的观点在前后有很大的转折和对比 而且其观点和我们平时的对电子产品的社会主流观点并不一致 因此在写概要前一定要读懂原文 不要受固有观点的影响 Onepossibleversion Nowadaysfamilymembersareoftenfoundlostintheirownelectronicproducts 要点1 Someex pertsfearthattechnologycanaffectfamilyrelationshipsforlackofface to facecommunication 要点2 However areporthasfoundtechnologybenefitsfamilybondsinthatitmakesmemberscloserandprovidesprivatementalspaceaswell 要点3 Actually nottechnologyitselfbutpeople sattitudetowardsitinfluencesfamilyrelations 要点4 高级语块inthat因为 由于belostin沉迷于 attitudetowards对 的态度 Writing3 2018浙江宁波重点高中联考 阅读下面短文 根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要 Smalltalk Chitchat Thesearetheshortconversationswehaveatparties whilewewaitinlineatthestore atfamilyeventsorwork Sometimeswemakesmalltalkwithpeoplewealreadyknowbutnotwell Oftenwehavetomakesmalltalkwithcompletestrangers Manypeoplefindsuchsmalltalkaboutrandomtopicsdifficult Somepeoplesaytheyhateit Otherssaysmalltalkisawasteoftime Theymayevencallitidlechitchatoridlechatter meaningitdoesn tdoanything Theyconsidersmalltalknotimportant However smalltalkisimportant Smalltalkcanopendoorsthatmayleadtolarger moremeaningfulconversations Whenyoufirstmeetsomeoneortalktosomeoneyoudon tknowwell itwouldbeawkwardtobeginaconversa tionaboutareallydeeptopicsuchaswar politicsorthemeaningoflife Smalltalkalsogivesyouthechancetodecideifyouwanttogetknowthatpersonbetterornot Let ssayyoumakesmalltalkwithsomeoneataparty Buttheyonlywanttotalkaboutcats Youmaynotwanttobuildafriendshipwiththemunlessyoureally reallylovecats Chitchatcanalsoincreaseyourfeelingofunderstanding towardpeopleyouknowbutnotwell Chattingwithacolleagueabouttheirchildmayhelpyoutounderstandmoreoftheirlifeoutsidetheoffice Thiscouldhelpbuildhealthyworkrelationships Smalltalkcouldevenhelpyourlargercommunities yourrelationshipswithneighbors Exchang ingrecipeswithaneighborinyourapartmentbuildingmaymakehernoisesupstairseasiertolivewith In2011 mostcommuters 通勤者 inthecityofChicagosaidtheywouldenjoy quietcars wheretheysataloneanddidnottalktoanybody ResearchersattheUniversityofChicagothenaskedsomeparticipantsinastudytotalktopeoplewhilecommutingtoworkonatrain Theyfoundthatthosewhomadesmalltalkwithstrangerswerehappierthanthosewhosatalone 答案 写作提示 概要写作一般要以自然段为基础归纳概要 但是本文自然段比较多 而个别段落的中心比较接近 可以将这些相关的段落进行合并 Onepossibleversion Althoughsmalltalkisdislikedbymanypeople itisactuallyofvitalimportanceinourdailylife 要点1 Firstly smalltalkcannotonlyleadtomeaningfulconversationsbutalsohelpyoudecidewhethertofurtheryourrelationship 要点2 Besides throughsmalltalk youcanbuildbetterrela tionshipswithyourcolleaguesandneighbors 要点3 What smore researchersalsofindthatsmalltalkcanmakepeoplehappier 要点4 高级语块beofvitalimportance具有重要的作用furtheryourrelationship推进你们的关系buildbetterrelationships建立更好的关系 Writing4 2017浙江温州中学3月模拟 阅读下面短文 根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要 GUANGZHOU Atleast25peoplehavebeenconfirmeddeadafterTyphoonUsagimadelandfallinChina sGuangdongProvinceonSundayevening accordingtotheprovincialfloodcontrolheadquarters ElectricityandwatersupplywerecutoffintheHuilaicounty Jieyangcity andhouseswerecol lapsedaswindspeedsatthecenterexceeded180kmperhouronSundayafternoon saidLiFeng aborderpoliceofficerofthecity IntercitytrainsbetweenGuangzhou ShenzhenandZhuhaiweresuspendedat6pmandnearly50trains includingthosealongthehigh speedlinestoBeijing ShenzhenandHongKong willbesuspendeduntilTuesday accordingtotheGuangzhouRailwayCorporation AtaXiechenggasstationonNationalRoad324nearShanweicity whereatleast13ofthe25vic timswerekilled windswerestrongenoughtoblowcarsofftheroadandalltrafficwasstopped ResidentLiHuolongsaidhewasonhiswayhomeinShanweiwhenthebackwindowofhiscarwasbrokenbythewind Educationalauthoritiesin14citiesorderedschoolstosuspendclassesonSunday aschooldayinChinabecauseofthethree dayMid AutumnFestivalwhichjustended Morethan47 000fishingboatswereinharbor withnearly20 000fishermenkeptonshore Allbeachesintheprovincehavebeenclosed 答案 写作提示 本文是说明文 介绍了台风 天免 对广东造成的破坏 概括时要注意要点 要照顾到台风破坏的各个主要方面 因为涉及并列信息的叙述 因此要注意概写的句子之间的顺畅连接 Onepossibleversion TyphoonUsagistruckChina sGuangdongProvincejustaftertheMid AutumnFestival causingatleast25deaths 要点1 Inadditiontohavingdamagedmanyhouses italsostoppedtrafficandtransportsandevensomecarswereblownofftheroad 要点2 What sworse electricityandwa tersupplywerecutoff anditalsokeptfishermenonshoreandstudentsoffschool 要点3 Allbeachesintheprovincehavebeenclosed 要点4 高级语块inadditionto除 外beblownofftheroad被吹离了路面 Writing5 2017浙江台州高三期末 阅读下面短文 根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要 Collegesareattachingtoomuchimportancetotests StudentswhoreceivehigherscoresontheSATandtheACTareconsideredtobemorein