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thousand 0 100 200 300 400 500 123 30 424 136 440 374 29 44 45 64 65 Age Group Women Men HeartAttacksperyear USA 下面是关于美国心脏病发病率和年龄性别关系的柱型图表 据图内容写100自左右的短文 图表 table graph picture pie chart diagram table form 一览表 如 graph picture chart diagram barchart piechart flowchart curvediagram form 图表作文的要求 一 该图表的内容 总体 是关于什么的 二 该图表的具体内容 数据要准确三 该图表反应的规律 结论 thousand 0 100 200 300 400 500 123 30 424 136 440 374 29 44 45 64 65 Age Group Women Men HeartAttacksperyear USA 1 这是关于美国心脏病发病率和年龄性别关系的抽样柱型图表 该调查抽样500000人 一审要点 2 4 3 5 男性易得心脏病 65岁以上女性患者增加 二 译要点 1 这是关于美国心脏病发病率和年龄性别关系的抽样柱型图表 该调查抽样500000人 Thegraphofasurveyin500000peopleshowshowageandgenderinfluencethefrequencyofheartattacksintheUSA 2 在29 44年龄组 女性心脏病患者不到6 30000 可以忽略不计 男性有123000人得心病 Thenumberofwomenwhosufferheartattacksinthisgroupisnegligible maybeoverlooked Lessthan6 ofallheartattacksoccurinthe29 44agegroup only30000peryear comparedto123000men 3 在45 64年龄组 女性心脏病患者迅速增加 每年男的有424000人而女的有136000人 However therate proportion 比率 ofmenandwomensufferingfromheartattacksrisesdramaticallybetween45and64 with424000menand136000womenayear 4 在64岁以上的年龄组 女性心脏病患者迅速增加 374000人 而男的患者上升慢 440000人 Forthoseovertheageof65 thenumberofmenwithheartattacksincreasesslightly 440000inall whilethereisahugeincreaseinthenumberofwomenvictimsofheartattacks already374000 5 男性在各年龄段都易得心脏病 65岁以上女性患者增加 Inconclusion menaremorelikelytobethevictimsofheartattacksatallages butwomenareincreasinglylikelyovertheageof65 三 连篇 Thegraphofasurveyin500000peopleshowshowageandgenderinfluencethefrequencyofheartattacksintheUSA Thenumberofwomenwhosufferheartattacksinthisgroupisnegligible maybeoverlooked Lessthan6 ofallheartattacksoccurinthe29 44agegroup only30000peryear comparedto123000men However therate proportion 比率 ofmenandwomensufferingfromheartattacksrisesdramaticallybetween45and64 with424000menand136000womenayear Forthoseovertheageof65 thenumberofmenwithheartattacksincreasesslightly 440000inall whilethereisahugeincreaseinthenumberofwomenvictimsofheartattacks already374000 Inconclusion menaremorelikelytobethevictimsofheartattacksatallages butwomenareincreasinglylikelyovertheageof65 1 数字number figure amount2 比率rate3 百分比percentage4 threein outoffour或threefourths5 30 thirtypercent 30 或thirtyin outofonehundred 心脏病患者1 those thepeoplewhosufferfromheartattacks2 those thepeoplewhoareinfectedwithheartattacks3 those thepeoplesufferingfromheartattacks4 those thepeopleinfectedwithheartattacks5 those thepeoplewithheartattacks6 thevictimsofheartattacks 体会 1 对数据的处理2 表达的多样化 1 Lessthan6 ofallheartattacksoccurinthe29 44agegroup only30000peryear comparedto123000men 2 Therateofmenandwomensufferingfromheartattacksrisesdramaticallybetween45and64 with424000menand136000womenayear 3 Thenumberofmenwithheartattacksincreasesslightly 440000inall whilethereisahugeincreaseinthenumberofwomenvictimsofheartattacks already374000 模板 一 Asisshown indicated illustratedbythefigure percentageinthetable graph picture pie chart hasbeenonrise decrease 下降 goesup increases drops decreases significantly dramaticaly steadilyrising decreasingfrom in to in Fromthesharp markeddecline riseinthechart itgoeswithoutsayingthat Thereareatleasttwogoodreasonsaccountingfor Ontheonehand Ontheotherhand isduetothefactthat Inaddition isresponsiblefor Maybetherearesomeotherreasonstoshow Butitisgenerallybelievedthattheabovementionedreasonsarecommonlyconvincing AsfarasIamconcerned Iholdthepointofviewthat Iamsuremyopinionisbothsoundandwell grounded 下表是中国某大城市的住房拥有情况的调查 请描述变化 说明原因和个人看法 个人观点 该变化对社会发展影响大 有益于社会和个人 Asisshowninthechart theownershipofhousesinabigcityinChinahaschangedinthepastfifteenyears In1994 75 ofthehouseswerestate owned In2000 therateofstate ownedhousestoprivateoneswas3to2 whilesofar80 ofthehouseshavebeenprivate Thereareatleasttwogoodreasonsaccountingforthechanges Ontheonehand since1994 thepeople slivingstandardshavebeenimproving Mostofthemcanaffordtobuythehouses Ontheotherhand thechangesareduetothefactthatmostpeopledonotsavealotofmoneyinthebankfortheirchildrenastheirideasofparentsdidinthepast Theywanttohavetheirownhomeandenjoylife AsfarasIamconcerned Iholdthepointofviewthatsuchchangeshavehadagreateffectonthedevelopmentofsociety Itdoesgoodtoboththecitizensandthegovernment Asisshowninthechart theownershipofhousesinabigcityinChinahaschangedinthepastfifteenyears In1994 75 ofthehouseswerestate owned In2000 therateofstate ownedhousestoprivateoneswas3to2 whilesofar80 ofthehouseshavebeenprivate Thereareatleasttwogoodreasonsaccountingforthechanges Ontheonehand since1994 thepeople slivingstandardshavebeenimproving Mostofthemcanaffordtobuythehouses Ontheotherhand thechangesareduetothefactthatmostpeopledonotsavealotofmoneyinthebankfortheirchildrenastheirideasofparentsdidinthepast Theywanttohavetheirownhomeandenjoylife AsfarasIamconcerned Iholdthepointofviewthatsuchchangeshavehadagreateffectonthedevelopmentofsociety Itdoesgoodtoboththecitizensandthegovernment 图表 ta