英语作文高分秘笈(教学设计).docx

Teaching plan for English Writing (书面表达教学设计)湖北省秭归二中 郑俊红Teaching aims:一.Knowledge aims:1. To learn to analyze the main points.2. To learn to translate the sentences.二.Ability aims:1.Guide the students to use what they learn to write.2. To write some advanced sentences with useful sentence patterns.三.Emotional aims: Practice makes perfect.四.Important points: To translate the following sentences.五.Difficult points:1. To list some key points.2. To form the article.六Teaching proceduresLead-in: (导入)Review the excellent sentence patterns in units 13 to instruct students to put what they have learned into writing.1.It seemed that the water was to blame .（承担责任）(Book5 page2)2.John Snow suggested that the source of all the water suppliesshould be examined.（检验）( Book5 page3)3. Worried about the journey ,I was unsettled for the first few days.（担心着）( Book5 page17)4. What interested her most was the longitude line.（最使她感兴趣的）( Book5 page14)5.There is a system where the waste is disposed of using the principles ofecology.( Book5 page22)（在那里，废弃物被处理）6.Our third stop shows the changes that have happened towork practices.（已发生在）( Book5 page22)Step1自主学习，发现问题小华找了一份要用到英语的工作，由于她的英语掌握得不是很好，希望她的英国朋友Tom 能为她提供一些提高英语的建议。Tom 的建议如下：（1）在空闲时间，参加英语培训班，这样可以使你频繁地接触到英语。（2）读英语杂志和看收听英语节目（3）唱英语歌曲，在容易记住单词的同时还能使你放松。（4）多用英语交流，就能取得很大的进步。（5）具有信心和决心，就会掌握好英语。假设你是Tom，给小华写一封回信。要求：120字左右Step2生生交流，合作学习Get students to list the useful expressions that can be used in the composition by discussingStep 3师生交流探究点拨一 师生交流（get a few students to tell the useful expressions that can be used in the composition.）Useful expressions:in ones spare time take an English course have access to pick up English programs keep .in mind as well as make great progress be armed /equipped with have a good command/knowledge of English 二探究点拨（make students to finish the sentences and then instruct them to try to put the excellent sentence patternsinto the composition.）句型结构1：(It is +名词/形容词+for sb.to do /that.)A.It is necessary for us to form a good habit while we grow up(form).在我们成长期间，养成良好的习惯很必要 B.对你来说，读英语杂志和收听英语节目是很有帮助的。It is helpful for you to read English magazines and pick up English programs.句型结构2. （简单句，thus doing）A. He was careless, thus failing the exam.(fail)他很粗心，这样就考试没及格。B. We made every effort to help the elderly, thus enriching their lives.(enrich)我们努力地去帮助老人,这样就丰富了他们的生活。 C.你最好参加英语培训班，这样就可以让你频繁地接触到英语。 You had better take an English course, thus making you have access to English frequently.句型结构3.（简单句，which、when/where）A.We can make friends ,send E-mails and shop on the Internet,which brings much convenienceto us.(bring) 我们能够在网上交友,发邮件和购物,这可以给我们带来很多便利。 B.你应该学会唱英语歌曲，在容易记住单词的同时还能使你放松。You should learn to sing English songs ,which helps you keep words in mind as well as make you relaxed.句型结构4：（only +状从/介词短语/ then 或not until 放句首，主句倒装）A. Only by working hard can we succeed.（succeed）只有通过努力学习我们才能成功。B.Not until I witnessed my uncles life did I realize how important health is（realize）只到我目睹了我叔叔的生活，我才意识到健康是多么重要！C.只有用英语与别人多交流，你才能取得很大的进步。（only if）Only if you communicate with others in English can you make great progress.句型结构5.（非谓语/分词短语作状语，简单句）AFaced with difficulties, they never give up.(faced)面临着困难，他们从不放弃。B.Addicted to playing computer games, he was not admitted by any university.(addicted)沉迷于网络游戏，他没有被任何一所大学录取。 C.具有信心和决心，你就会掌握好英语的。Armed with confidence and determination, you will have a good command of English.句型结构6.(It is + 被强调的部分+that.)A.It is you not the driver that are to blame for the loss.(blame)是你而不是这位司机该为这损失负责。B.是你的努力决定你的成功。It is your hard work that determines your success.Step 4练习反馈1.Give students 15 minutes to write a composition.2.Get students to exchange their compositions to correct the mistakes. 3.Get several students to read out their compositions for the class and point out their highlight.Step 5 纠错释疑1.Correct the mistakes in the passage.2. Explain some excellent sentences and points.Step6拓展延伸Point out the highlight in the model.Model:Dearxiaohua,I am happy to hear from you .From your letter I know your present situation. In order to help you improve your English, I want to give you following suggestions. Above all, you had better take an English course, thus making you have access to English frequently. Second, it is helpful for you to read English magazines and pick up English programs. Third, You should learn to sing English songs ,which helps you keep words in mind as well as make you relaxed. Besides, communicating with others is a good way to improve English. Only in this way can you make great progress .More importantly, armed with confidence and determination, you will have a good command of English. In a word, it is your hard work that determines your success. Yours,Tom.附：1. 板书设计 : (见ppt)2. 教学反思:引导学生把已经学过的好的词