句子分类和正误句子举例.ppt

MakingCorrectandEffectiveSentence Agrammaticallycompletesentenceisonethatcontainsatleastasubjectandapredicateverb iftheverbistransitive theremustbeanobject iftheverbisalink verb theremustbeapredicativeorcomplement TypesofSentences Accordingtotheiruse sentencesaredeclarative interrogative imperative orexclamatory Accordingtotheirstructure sentencesaresimple compound complex orcompound complex varietyofsentencepatterns 1 wecanimaginethebeautifulsurroundings Therearemanytreesalongthestreets Thereisacleanriverinthecity Therearemanyfishesintheriver Therearewillowtreesontheoneside Therearesomepiecesofgrasslandontheotherside Therearemanyflowersonthem 1 Justimaginethebeautifulsurroundingsifwehavemadeourcitiesgreener Greentreeslinethestreets Acleanriverwindsthroughthecity inwhichalotoffishesabound Ontheonesidestandrowsofwillowtrees Ontheothersideliesastretchofgrasslandsprinkledwithmanyyellowandredflowers 2 therearefewerandfewercitizenswholiketoseefilms 2 filmsarenowlosingtheirappealformanycitizens 3 therearemanypeoplewhocomplainofseverehousingshortages 3 housingshortagesbecomethesourceofgreatcomplaint e g fauty BorninasmalltowninSouthChinaintheearly50s hegrewuptobeafamousmusician Revised HewasborninasmalltowninSouthChinaintheearly50s inhischildhoodhelikedtosingsongs Laterheenteredaconservatory Inthe70shebecameafamousmusician Fauty Iwasborninasmalltown inthetowntherewasonlyoneschool Istudiedthereforsixyears Iwasborninasmalltown Inittherewasonlyoneschool Istudiedthereforsixyears InasmalltownwhereIwasborn therewasonlyoneschool Istudiedthereforsixyears IstudiedforsixyearsattheonlyschoolinthesmalltownwhereIwasborn Fauty Thedoctorsfirstdiscussedthepatient sconditionsandthenthepreparationforanoperationbegan Thedoctorsfirstdiscussedthepatient sconditionsandthenbeganthepreparationforanoperation 写句子时 要注意 1 围绕一个中心 为句子选择和组织细节 2 如无必要就不转换主语 时态 语态以及语气等 3 句子包含的细节要有逻辑联系 细节也不宜过多 Ex 1 Thepolicehelpedhimwhenhisimportantdocumentswerelost Hefoundthemseveraldayslater Helosthisimportantdocuments buthefoundthemwiththehelpofthepoliceseveraldayslater 1 Shakespeareistheworld sgreatestdramatist andmarriedwhenhewasonlyeighteen Shakespeare theworld sgreatestdramatist marriedonlyattheageofeighteen 1 AlthoughwegenerallythinkofFranklinonlyasastatesman hewasamanofmorethanonegift Althoughthoughtgenerallyofasastatesman Franklinwasamanofmorethanonegift Firstmakethefireandyoucookthedinner Firstmakethefireandthencoolthedinner Thestudentwasdisobedientandtheteacherpunishedhim Theteacherpunishedthestudentforhisdisobedience 1 Thegameswereveryinteresting andIwasgreatlyabsorbed andwhenIstartedhome IfoundthatIhadtornalargeholeinmybestbluesilkgown IwassoabsorbedintheveryinterestinggamesthatuntilIstartedhomeIdidn tfindalargeholeinmybestbluesilkgown 1 LastnightSmithbrokehisarm losthiscarkeys couldnotdrivehimselftotheuniversityandhewasabsenttoday Lastnightwhenbreakinghisarm Smithlosthiscarkeysandcouldnotdrivehimselftotheuniversity That swhyhewasabsenttoday Being20yearsofage ZhangYinghasbeenparalyzedfromthewaistdownwardssinceshewasattheageofsix Whenherparentstaughther shehaslearnedtoreadandwriteChineseandalsolearnedtoread writeandspeakEnglish Herspiritisindomitable becauseshehasevenlearnedacupuncture Byusingacupunctureshehascuredmanypeopleoftheirdisease ZhangYing a20 year oldgirl thoughparalyzedfromthewaistdownwardssincetheageofsix haslearnedwithindomitablespiritbothChineseandEnglish andevenacupuncturesowellthatshehascuredmanypatients e g 我在哪儿也找不到这张车票 ButnomatterhowhardIsearched thereceiptwasnowheretobefound Icouldn tfindtheticketanywhere Ididn tknowwheretheticketwas NowherecouldIfindtheticket Theticketwasnowheretobefound There snoplaceformetofindtheticket Theticketcouldnotbefoundanywhere Ifinallyfailedtofindtheticket Itriedtolookforthetickethereandthere butIfailed Where