2015年6月27日雅思写作真题回忆-智课教育出国考试.pdf

智 课 网 雅 思 备 考 资 料 2015年6月27日雅思写作真题回忆 智课教育出国考试 本文为大家带来的是2015年6月27日雅思写作真题回忆 考生们不 论自己的考试结果如何一定不要放弃 学习就是要有恒心 最后胜利一 定会来到 话不多说 赶紧来看一下吧 Task 1 line graph The first graph gives the number of passengers travelling by train in Sydney The second graph provides information on about the percentage of trains running on time 范文 The first line graph shows the number of people who went out by railway in Sydney from 1995 to 2004 The second line graph compares the on time performance of Sydney trains network over the same period It is dear that there was a gradual increase in the number of passengers over the nine year period Overall the service of rail transport was not satisfying About 230 million passengers preferred to travel by train and this figure rose steadily and reathed a peak of 300 million in the year 2001 After experiencing a slight drop to 280 million Sydney s railway system served nearly the same loads of travallers in the following years Sydney tram s on time target was 94 As shown in the second graph except the years 1999 and 2002 most train failed to arrive on time in the majority of years It is interesting to note that the year 2004 witnessed the worst performance in terms of punctuality around 72 Task 2 议论文 题目 Many people do not feel safe either at home or they are out What are the causes and what can be done to make people feel safer 话题 社会生活 题型 Report 分析 此题虽然看起来像是一道关于社会生活类的新题 但在写作 中 依然可以把我们评时练习过的关于犯罪类 电视累力和电子设备利 弊的索材运用到此文中 文章结构 4段 首段 导入话题 概述主体 主体段1 导致人们缺乏安全感的原因一 主体段2 导致人们缺乏安全感的原因二 主体段3 能够让人们感到安全的措施 结尾段 总结上文 范文 Security is always a frequently talked topic in the modern society Looking into the factors leading to dangers helps people to protect themselves from insecurity This essay will mainly analyse the reasons for this problem and provide some solutions There are two main factors contributing to the phenomenon that more people feel insecure In general the detailed description of violence on the mass media should be responsible for this problem When criminal cases such as shooting theft and driving after drinking are often reported on the TV the viewers safety and security will probably be threatened and they will be in the belief that they are likely to be subject to offences at anytime This problem can also be attributed to the widespread use of mobile devices With more applications installed in people s smart phones they save too many secrets on this device the online bank passwords and the information of their social network which may include significant business opportunities It is not exaggerated that their lives and property will be threatened if they lose their precious mobile devices To solve this problem governments police stations and citizens themselves should cooperate with each other First of all the government should impose a restriction on the representation of crimes reducing the plots focusing on the detailed description The governments and police stations need to set up a security system through which citizens personal information can be prevented from being stolen It is also of great essence that citizens should raise the awareness of security As mentioned above the occurrence of crime on the mass media and the storage of