雅思大作文四段式.ppt

Howtoachieveband7 IELTSWriting Leon 四段式概述 IntroductionBodyParagraph1 BP1 BodyParagraph2 BP2 Conclusion 四段式构思Plan BrainStrom Organise Prons Cons 1 2 3 1 2 3 4 四段式构思Plan BrainStrom Organise 根据之前优缺点的分析 哪种有思路写哪种 确定文章结构 四段式如何写Introduction Introduction简单明了两句话转述题目句 中心思想句第一句简单的转述题目第二句用although或者while句型来提出自己的观点 四段式如何写Introduction 举个例子Thesedays anincreasingnumberofyoungsterschoosetoworkorstudyoverseas Althoughthismightbefrowneduponbysomeforcertainreasons Itendtocontendthatyoungpeoplearelikelytobenefitfromoverseasexperience Technologicalprogresshastakenplacethroughoutthecourseofhumanhistory Whileearlytechnologiescertainlychangedthelivesofnormalpeople Ibelievethatrecentbreakthroughshavehadanevengreaterimpact 四段式如何写BP Firstly SecondlyandFinallystructure FSF段式 中心句观点一 论述一观点二 论述二观点三 论述三总结句 四段式如何写BP Firstly SecondlyandFinallystructure FSF段式 举个例子Topic Thedisadvantagesoflivinginacity 先想出几个可写观点尽量简单 具体会有助于写作用简单的思路去说服自己 不要用中文的思维去反驳质疑自己的观点想不出多的就把大的细分 四段式如何写BP Firstly SecondlyandFinallystructure FSF段式 生活成本高 社会问题多 生活质量差 四段式如何写BP Firstly SecondlyandFinallystructure FSF段式 Cityliveshaveseveraldrawbacks Firstly thecostoflivinginacityisusuallyhigherthaninasmalltownorvillage Forexample inhabitsofcitiesoftenhavetopayhigherpricesforhousing transport andevenfood Secondly urbanarestendtosufferfromsocialproblemssuchashighcrimeandpovertyratesincomparsionwithruralareas Finally theairqualityincitiesisoftenpoor duetopollutionfromtraffic andstreetsandpublictransportsystemareusuallyovercrowded Asaresult citylifecanbeunhealtyandstressful 93words Band9 中心句观点一 论述一观点二 论述二观点三 论述三总结句 四段式如何写BP 反面论述段只论述只论述 不反驳 基本和正面的FSF结构段写法差不多 四段式如何写BP 反驳段论述 反驳委婉语气论述反面观点 然后再反驳Thosepeoplewhothink mightarguewiththat Nevertheless asfarasIamconcerned Therefore 四段式如何写BP 反驳段举个例子Somepeoplethinksportgamescanbringpeacetooursociety yetsomebelievethatitmaycausetensionbetweennations我的观点是体育可以带来和平 在第一段FSF论述后 第二段如下 进行反面论述 Ontheotherhand therearemanyconflictsrelatedtosportgames andthismightbewhysomepeoplethinksportswouldcausetensionbetweennations Forexample somefansmighthavearrgessiveactionsaftertheteamthattheyfavourlost Nevertheless inmyopinion themajorreasonofwhycertainsportfanstendtohaveoffensiveactionsisthattheylackgoodmannersthemselves andthegamesarejustbeinganexcusefortheirbadbehaviours Therefore sportsarenottoblameforsuchconflicts anditwouldinfactimproverelationshipbetweennationsiftheplayersandfansofbothsidesrepecteachother 自己写的 语言不太地道 可能有语病 但是7分段没问题 四段式如何写BP Causesandsolutions段 遇见原因 方法的文 用类似于FSF段落的写法 只要ideas丰富 很容易组织起来的 四段式如何写Conclusion Conclusion短小精简重述观点不引入新的东西只用Inconclusion 开头 不需要用别的 Tosumup等等 四段式如何写Conclusion 举个例子Inconclusion Idonotbelievethatanyfinancialconcessionsshouldbemadeforpeoplewhochooseprivateeducation Inconclusion whilesalariescertainlyaffectpeople schoiceofprofession Idonotbelievethatmoneyoutweighsallothermotivators Inconclusion theissueofsmokingischallengingandcomplex butitisbynomeansinsurmountable ThemeasuresmentionedabovewouldbeeffectivetipreventmorepeoplefromsmokingInconclusion ibelievethatthegovernmentshouldtakemeasurestostrictlyregulatetheviolentcontentsinmovies 四段式如何整体布局 第一种 IntroductionBP1 FSF正面论述 BP2 反驳式反驳反面 Conclusion 四段式如何整体布局 第一种 举个例子 Peoplehavedifferentattitudestowardschanges Althoughsomeindividualsprefertodoonejobintheirlives Itendtobelievethatitwouldbebetterifweareusedtochanges Tobeginwith changescaninfacthavebeneficialoutcomes Firstly theexperienceofengagingindifferentoccupationswouldbeanadvantageforcareers Thisisbecauseemployersusuallyvaluethosewithawiderangeofworkingskills Secondly adaptingtoanewworkingenvironmentalsomeansmeetingnewcolleaguesandfriends andthisislikelytoenlargeone ssocialcircle Therefore Ithinkpeople especiallyyoungsters canbenefitfromchangesbygainingvariouslivingandworkingexperience Ontheotherhand thosewhoavoidchangesintheirlivesalsohaveunderstandablereasons Oneconcernmightbethatpeoplewouldhavetolearnnewprofessionalskillstoadapttothenewposition whichseemstobecounterproductive Additionally someindividualsdonotwanttochangejobssimplybecausetheyaresatisfiedwiththecurrentones However asfarasIamconcerned weshouldlearnhowtoadapttochangesanywaybecausethewholeworldischangingrapidlyitself Asaresult lessandlessoccupationscanberegardedaslife longtoday Forexample manypostmenmightlosetheirjobs eveniftheyhavebeendoingitwell becauseoftheubiquityofEmails Inconclusion peopleshouldgetusedtochanges Thisisnotonlybecausechangescanoftenbepositive buttheyaresometimesinevitable 自己写的 估计7分 四段式如何整体布局 第二种 IntroductionBP1 FSF正面论述 BP2 FSF论述反方观点 Conclusion正论和反论的顺序可变 四段式如何整体布局 第二种 举个例子 Somepeoplethinkthatinthemodernworldwearemoredependentoneachother whileothersthinkthatpeoplehavebecomemoreindependent Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion Peoplehavedifferentviewsaboutwhetherwearemoreorlessdependentonothersnowadays Inmyview modernlifeforcesustobemoreindependentthanpeoplewereinthepast Therearetwomainreasonswhyitcouldbearguedthatwearemoredependentoneachothernow Firstly lifeismorecomplexanddifficult especiallybecausethecostoflivinghasincreasedsodramatically Forexample youngadultstendtorelyontheirparentsforhelpwhenbuyingahouse Propertypricesarehigherthanever andwithouthelpitwouldbeimpossibleformanypeopletopayadepositandamortgage Secondly peopleseemtobemoreambitiousnowadays andtheywantabetterqualityoflifefortheirfamilies Thismeansthatbothparentsusuallyneedtoworkfull time andtheydependonsupportfromgrandparentsandbabysittersforchildcare However Iwouldagreewiththosewhobelievethatpeoplearemoreindependentthesedays Inmostcountries familiesarebecomingsmallerandmoredispersed whichmeansthatpeoplecannotcountonrelativesasmuchastheyusedto Wealsohavemorefreedomtotravelandlivefarawayfromourhometowns Forexample manystudentschoosetostudyabroadinsteadofgoingtotheirlocaluniversity andthisexperiencemakesthemmoreindependentastheylearntolivealone Anotherfactorinthisgrowingindependenceistechnology whichallowsustoworkaloneandfromanypartoftheworld Inconclusion whiletherearesomereasonstobelievethatpeoplenowdependoneachothermore myownviewisthatwearemoreindependentthanever 四段式如何整体布局 第三种 IntroductionBP1 从一个角度用FSF正面论述 BP2 从另一个角度FSF正面论述 Conclusion 四段式如何整体布局 第三种 举个例子 band9tourismItissometimesarguedthattouristsfromoverseasshouldbechargedmorethanlocalresidentstovisitimportantsitesandmonuments Icompletelydisagreewiththisidea Theargumentinfavourofhigherpricesforforeigntouristswouldbethatculturalandhistoricalattractionsoftendependonstatesubsidiestokeepthemgoing whichmeansthatresidentpopulationalreadypaysforthesesitesthroughthetaxsystem However Ibelievethistobeaveryshortsightedview Foreigntouristscontributetotheeconomyofthehostcountrywiththemoneytheyspendonawiderangeofgoodsandservices includingfood souvenirs accommodationandtravel Thegovernmentsandresidentsofeverycountryshouldbehappytosubsidiseimportanttouri