环球雅思写作强化讲义.doc

雅思写作强化 时间：一个小时，无法超时上午九点考试，写作往往是11点开始考。一般学生考到这里的时候就蒙了。雅思写作考试是国内考试时间最长的一个，比托福等都长。图表作文只占了1/3的分数，那议论文就占了2/3。G类也要按A类要求去做。Academic writing 的特殊要求1. Some teachers dont know how to use computers to help the students effectively. 不能用缩写，凡是用了缩写的都是业余选手，专业选手必须要用，do not. Shouldnt 也是错的，特别提醒大家，cannot 中间没有空格。如果你不相信我说的话，我建议你可以翻下剑5剑6，一个缩写你都找不到。2. Historic buildings attracts lots of visitors and can improve local economy. 大家觉得哪个是口语词汇。其中lots of 是特别口语化词汇，可以用numerous或者a host of 这两个单词修饰可数名词。A great deal of 不可数。3. The impact of tourism on these neighbourhoods should be analyzed. 下次你看到任何-ze 结尾的都是美式英语，-se 结尾的都是英式英语，而这里的neighbourhood 是英式英语，而neighborhood是美式英语，有些同学会问是不是雅思考试当中只能用英式英语呢？不是这样的，在剑桥6中明确说了可以用英语或美式，但两者不能混合使用。我建议大家-our -se 是英式的，-or -ze 是美式的，这两者的区别是最常见的，其他的我们就没有必要掌握了。4. Children in wealthy families are more and more depend on their parents.这里哪里不像学术写作呢。More and more ,给大家推荐一个词，increasingly.5. Serious crimes harm peoples lives. 雅思针对的母语是非英语的人，大家看考官的作文也不是很难。但这里serious 高中词汇，crime harm 初中词汇，people 和life 就是小学词汇了，给大家推荐一个severe, criminal act, damage destroy, impair peoples health, human being 这个词太大，不建议使用，individual 6. The advantages of stopping animal experiments are more than continuing them.其中more than 换成outweigh7. Today, advertisements are everywhere. There are many ways to advertisements. 简单句不适用，中间加个连词即可。8. The environment is becoming worse. We must work together to deal with it. 因果关系，加because 就很一般了哈，加个therefore.9. So, we must take steps to deal with the environment problem! So 换成therefore,大家在写作中，千万不要用这么有激情的句子哈，好的雅思作文必定是冷静推理的来的，所以，感叹号去掉，还有，must 换成should.10. We must be friendly to others because the Bible said, treat your neighbours as you would like to be treated. 不能出现宗教语言。大作文，40分钟，最低要求240字，要求考高分的同学，建议270-280， 7分以上的同学，我建议300字以上。 大家刚看了雅思真题库，不知道大家判断出了自己认为难的部分。但是如果没有素材的话，你再好的基础都无法体现出来。 TourismEducationGovernmentWomen and familiesLanguage and cultureTechnology and the mediaDevelopment and globalizationCrimeAnimalsEnvironmental problems雅思不会出时事类的话题，只出争议比较大的话题。常见的词汇，常见的句式都可以通用。推荐大家掌握思考方法A. 分类法Some people think old buildings should be destroyed and replaced with modern buildings. To what extent do you agree?老房子可以分成要拆的，和不要拆的。这样子就有四段。这样子词汇可以成倍增加。开头用模板主题两段不要写一样长，一段可以多写一个理由，这样子你的倾向比较明显。Some high school graduates go to travel or work for a period of time before they go to university. To what extent do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantage?分成文科类，理科类的B. 替代法Some people think motorized flight was the greatest invention in the twentieth century. Do you agree or disagree?形容词最高级/ only / stop（ban）存在漏洞替代法飞机很伟大，但存在争议，主体第一段先让步，写两个理由，好处飞机的。主体第二段可以举电脑，手机，举三个反例Some people think stricter punishment for driving offenders is the only effective way to improve safety on the roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree?主体第一段可以先让步，效率很高，政府的投入很少第二段可以举三个反例，行人，警察，设施，只管司机是不够的，还要管其他的。Some people think animal experimentation should be banned. To what extent do you agree?主体第一段，残忍，传播疾病第二段，医学，制药工业，航天技术，心理学的研究。不用动物用人的话更残忍。现阶段无法禁止，只能尽量少用。C.裸奔法TM STREEC （真正的裸奔是streaker 音译啊）$Technology & efficiencyMind soul Society crimeTime space Rights responsibilitiesEnvironment healthEmployment competitionCulture populationMoney fun任何一个词汇都可以套用以上的词汇问题写作中可以引用的16句名人名言 Education1 “A child miseducated is a child lost. - -John F. Kennedy2 Education is not the filling of a pail, but the lighting of a fire. - W. B. Yeats3 “Technology is just a tool. In terms of getting the kids working together and motivating them, The teacher is the most important. - Bill Gates.Technology“ The greatest danger in modern technology is not that machines begin to think likepeople, but that people will begin to think like machines.” Albert Einstein5“As we go forward, I hope were going to continue to use technology to make reallybig differences in how people live and work. -Sergey BrinMedia6“He who controls the media, controls the mind. “-Rupert MurdockGovernment7“Millions of individuals making their own decisions in the marketplace will alwaysallocate resources better than any centralized government. Ronald ReaganTourism8“The world is a book, and those who do not travel, read only a page.”Saint AugustineWomen and Families9“The bond that links your true family is not one of blood, but of respect and joy ineach others life.” Richard BachLanguage10“To possess a second language is to possess a second soul.” CharlemagneCulture11“Culture means the widening of the mind and of the spirit.” Ruth BenedictGlobalization12“ Globalization is not something that we can hold off or turn off. It is the economic equivalent of a force of naturelike wind or water.”-Bill ClintonCrime13“He who does not prevent a crime when he can encourages it. “-Roman philosopher SenecaAnimals14The greatness of a nation and its moral progress can be judged by the way its animalsare treated. -GandhiEnvironment15“Many anthropogenic activities foul the air, contaminate the water and devastate the forests.” - quoted in Newsweek16“Dont blow it - good planets are hard to find.” quoted in Time magazine第三讲正确理解7种句子成分 雅思需要的语法不是范围很宽，也不是很深，但对熟练度有要求。1 Smoking is just a personal choice rather than a moral issue. （主语可以是动名词，不定式和从句）2 Nowadays, more and more people agree that gambling is an unhealthy hobby. （谓语只能是动词）3 Junk food impairs peoples health （impair 是破坏的意思，固定搭配health，宾语的组成成分和主语完全一样。）4 In recent years, the Internet has been gaining in popularity at an amazing rate.（定语，这也是个常用词汇）5 Outdoor activities can greatly improve our health.（状语，修饰动词，修饰形容词，或是修饰整个句子的词都可以叫做状语。） 6 Shopping, an necessary activity in everyday life, is far more convenient in the city than in the country. （同位语，并不是修饰这个名词，而是把这个名词的成分展开来说，是补充说明）7 I found the employment situation disappointing. （补语，动词加名词，加形容词或分词，是常见的一种结构）正确使用四种特殊句式 a 状语提前 Obviously, if elderly people live at home, their children can take care of them and they feel less lonely. Overall, （雅思考官在结尾段的最爱）the function of a building is more important to a building than its appearance.I am fond of the Western culture. Specifically, I think the French culture is really second to none. Most importantly, the government should make sure that citizens can improve their lives.In terms of attitude, Teddy Bear is a very good teacher. （明显让句子变的更灵活，放在句中的话，没有这么好的感觉。）To reduce traffic jams, the government should encourage people to take the subway.（为了达到什么目的，to do sth.）Living in poverty, these people do not even have money to buy enough food. Without an IELTS score, one cannot get a visa from the embassy. （领事馆）b倒装句 Not only should the parents spend more time with their children, they should also try to communicate with their children more often. （not only 前半句倒装）Only in this way can this issue be effectively solved. c强调句 It is the slits that make a chi-pao really special. It is the traditions in Beijing that attract many foreign tourists. d 虚拟语气 If this were not true, then we wouldfind it impossible to predict how the stock market would develop. The schools would seem very impersonal were all the computers to replace human teachers.雅思强化写作精讲班第4讲讲义有效避免7种语法错误1 Employee can benefit more from telecommuting（远距离） than employer.（可数名词是不可以单独使用的）前后各加一个-s2.1 Work at home using modern technology can greatly enhance our efficiency.（动词原形不能做主语）2.2 Children who are raise in impoverished families can generally deal with problems more effectively in their adult years.（一定不要忘记被动要加-ed）2.3The problems that are created by environmental contamination（污染，可以代替pollution） is very hard to resolve.(主谓不一致，主语很长的时候一定不要忘了看下谓语动词是单数还是复数)2.4 Many students are very like studying home economics.（like 在这里是动词，什么时候是介词？）2.5 In present-day society, cultures were becoming very similar.（谓语动词的时态，）3 Intelligent students should not be treated differently by their teachers.4.1 Countries should pay attention on the disadvantages globalisation may create.(that 在这里省略)to reasons for / important to sb. / its important for sb. To do / solution to a problem4.2 The Internet has instead of teachers in many classrooms.（replace）5 Some parents do not obey traffic rules himself.(themselves)6 Some people think the Internet only has positive impact, other people think it also has negative influence on our lives.(插入and )7 There are a great many children think the main purpose of education should be to afford them pleasure and Enjoyment.(afford sb. Sth. Thinking )高分范文讲解范文讲解In Britain, when some people get old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. The government has to pay for his care. Who should be responsible for our old people? Give reasons for your answer.Example 2 Band 8One of the most challenging problems of todays society is(主语是one) the question about who should be responsible for our old people. It is not only(not，only 没有放句首不用倒装) a problem with money but also a question of the system we want our society to have. In my essay, I would like to present four possible models.Firstly, the company could be responsible for its retired employees. To do this, （状语提前）a special fund could be established. The advantage of this model is that if one believes in the capitalist system, it should be the cheapest solution. One possible problem is that the companies may have competition disadvantages due to higher staff costs.A second solution is that the government has to take the responsibility for the old peoples care. It can finance this with its tax incomes. Actually,(状语提前) this is the most democratic model since everybody gets as much money as he or she needs. Unfortunately, as the present situation in our country shows, this solution seems not to work very well. The government can no longer afford to support all the old peoples(错了).Another way of solving the problem is to give back the responsibility to the individual, which means that everybody has to save money during their working life for the live（life） after their retirement. This seems to be not a very fairmodel because there will certainly be people who cant(学术类不能用缩写形式) afford to save part of their salary; therefore, the government would have to care for them.A last solution is to go back to the old model of the “big family who cares for all their members. I do not think this is possible in our days society because the family structures have changed.To sum up, I have to admit that I cannot find a really good solution for this problem. All models have both advantages and disadvantages. Certainly we have to think about this topic much more in the future.雅思考官9分范文Writing Task 2You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic:Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to reduce the amount of rubbish produced?It is true that in almost every country today each family produces a large amount of waste every week. Most of the rubbish comes from the packaging of the things we buy, such as processed food. However, even if we buy food without packaging, we still produce rubbish from the plastic bags that are used everywhere.The first reason why we have so much packaging is that we consume so much more every day than families did in the past. Also, convenience is very important in modern life; therefore, we buy packaged food that can be transported over long distances and store it until we need it, at first in the supermarket, then at home.Further, the amount of waste produced is also a result of our habit of using something once and throw it away. We forget that even the cheapest plastic bag has used valuable resources and energy. Above all, we also forget that it is a source of pollution and difficult to deal with.Therefore, I think that governments need to raise this awareness in the general public. Children should be educated about environmental issues at school while adults need to take action. Governments can encourage such action by collecting taxes on packaging, such as plastic bags and fining families and shops that do not try to recycle their Waste.雅思强化写作精讲班第5讲讲义 雅思议论文6分必备100个词汇分类讲解 vt 表示及物动词，后面需要跟宾语 背诵的时候尽量联系话题来记（比如教育，犯罪，环境），在写作的时候也可以根据话题来随时查阅这个词汇表，这样反复熟悉，大家将很快掌握这个精彩的作文词汇 Cultivate the awareness How should i address you? (称呼)Strictly ban 雅思强化写作精讲班第7讲讲义 （A）IELTS作文复杂句的六种内在关系 1 cause and effect 因果关系 标志词 1） 表示原因的 as , since ; due to , owing to 2） 表示结果的 hence(因此)， thus(因此) ， therefore（因此）（放在句首不算错，最好放句中，前面加分号，高级） As a consequence,（作为结果） As a result,（作为结果） Consequently（作为结果） 3） thereby( 以此达到的目的) （前面只能用逗号，后面必须加动名词）1 The ecological problems are being aggravated ; hence , it is imperative that we take measures to curb the pollution of the environment. 2 The government should raise the public awareness of environmental preservation, thereby promoting sustainable development and creating a more livable environment. 2 exemplification举例关系 标志词 Takefor example.(以为例) for instance,（比如）To illustrate,(例如.) As an apt illustration,（作为例证,）Consider, for example(以为例) 1 The Asian countries are getting westernized at a staggering rate. Take China for example, when youngsters go to the movies, it is common for them to choose Hollywood blockbusters over domestic films. 2 Animals are humans companions. To illustrate, dolphins often rescue sailors from sinking ships. 3 comparison and contrast 对比关系 标志词 while/ whilst /whereas （句内对比，主句和从句对比）By contrast, 1 While/ Whilst modern man leads a stressful life, our ancestors could often perform their business in a leisurely fashion. 2 The educational and medical facilities in big cities are mostly very advanced. In contrast, their counterparts in the country tend to be of inferior quality. 4 Concession 让步关系 标志词 Despite/In spite of/Notwithstanding(尽管) Nonetheless/ Nevertheless， (尽管如此) Even though(尽管) = Although 1 In spite of the disadvantages animal experimentation can bring about, many scientists insist on continuing this practice. 2 The government plays a crucial role in scientific research; nonetheless, private companies hold certain advantages in conducting scientific research. 5 Supposition 假设论证 标志词 provided that（如果） If 1 Provided that we can minimize the pain of test animals, animal experimentation should be continued. 2 If large companies are moved to the countryside, the traffic congestion in cities will be alleviated substantially. 6 Modification 修饰关系 that, who, which 1 In this day and age, we have a proliferation of buildings that look exactly like the buildings our ancestors built. 2 Today, teenage students are under increasingly severe stress in their studies, which has disturbed and armed many adults. al (B) IELTS写作34个基础句型 前进类 1 benefit from People who look for information can benefit from the amazing development of the Internet. 2 invest in The medical facilities in the rural area are still not very developed; therefore, the government should invest more money in these facilities. 3 promote the development of The widespread use of English has promoted the development of English training schools in China.4 It is obvious that It is obvious that a DVD can hold more information than a book. More importantly, it is more entertaining. 5 play a key role in Ones job and age play a key role in deciding what one wears. 6 enrich ones experience Working for a period before going to university can greatly enrich students experience and make them more capable in university. 7 keep society safe and stable Harmony can keep society safe and stable, while clashes make a country unlivable. 8 relax their bodies and ease their minds Even though on holiday students spend less time studying, holidays relax students bodies and ease their minds. 9 have a duty to do National sports teams represent(代表) their country; therefore, the government has a duty to invest in these teams. 10 afford people entertainment and pleasure Overall, computer games afford people entertainment and pleasure than trouble. 11 create employment opportunities International business can create employment opportunities. On the other hand, it may damage cultural heritage of a nation. 12 is less time-consuming and more economical Advertising makes our shopping experience less time-consuming and more economical. 13 broaden ones horizons Not only can traveling broaden ones horizons, it can relax ones body and soul as well. 14 fulfill ones potential Working under pressure can help employees fulfill their potential. 15 remove the barrier for Machine translation has removed the barrier for people who do not speak the same language. 16 promote the cultural communication and interaction between and Multi-cultured societies promote the cultural communication and interaction between differentethnic groups 17 curb the proliferation of The government should take immediate measures to curb the proliferation of pollution. 18 raise peoples awareness of The media should raise the public awareness of the significance of preserving the ecosystem. 倒退类 1 live a stressful life It seems that the people in developing countries live a more stressful life than the people inindustrial countries. 2 lead to crimes The widespread violence and pornography on TV often lead to youngsters crimes. 3 the competition is stiff The competition in modern society is increasingly stiff, which makes many people cold and cruel.4 avoid To avoid making mistakes, we should be very careful in answering IELTS questions.5 suffer from Nowadays, many citizens of Beijing suffer from mental illnesses because the compet