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六级作文评析 评析六级作文范文Part I Writing (30 minutes) Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled The Importance of Reading Classics. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below. 1、阅读经典书籍对人的成长至关重要2、现在愿意阅读经典的人越来越少，原因是3、我们大学生应该怎么做这道作文题是典型的“解决问题型”，这一类文章的写作思路就是描述现状分析原因提出解决方案，文章采用“三段总分式”展开。可以看出，题目给出的三点提纲其实很好地契合了这个思路。第一段，简要提出经典的重要性。如：1. Nobody could have failed to notice the fact that reading classics plays an important role in the growth of people. 2. Nowadays, some people, especially the elderly, are of the view that classics play a significant role in our life.之后展开说明阅读经典是如何影响成长的，可以用几本名著来辅证自己的观点。第二段，先总的说一下现在愿意阅读经典的人越来越少了，切忌less and less这样的恶俗语言。紧接着分析原因，可以想到的原因有很多，比如现代人的生活节奏越来越快，以致于忙得没有时间静下心来读书；新兴的媒体，比如网络对于人们阅读习惯的改变；现代社会快餐式文化产品的兴起对经典的冲击，等等。最后一段写大学生应该怎么做。分点分层次写总是最简单的方法，可以说大学生首先自己要阅读经典，同时可以鼓励和影响身边的人阅读经典；也可以说政府文化部门应该做什么，大学应该做什么来鼓励阅读经典，然后大学生本身要提高对经典的重视程度，等等。1、阅读经典书籍对人的成长至关重要 Nobody could have failed to notice the fact that reading classics plays an important and beneficial role in our development and growth. Personally, ever since my childhood, nothing has been more attractive than reading the classic masterpieces. Taking a look around, we can find classics from which people hugely benefit too numerous to list: The Dream in the Red Chamber, The Legend of Three Kingdoms, Bible and the like. 2.现在愿意阅读经典的人越来越少，原因是 However, it is widely acknowledged that an increasing number of people are losing interest in classics. A number of factors could account for the change, but the following are the most critical ones. For one thing, practical reading has occupied the market and students spare time in such a material possession oriented society. For another, the boom of internet industry gives rise to the change in students reading habit which consequently, in comparison, makes reading classics time-consuming and less entertaining. 3. 我们大学生应该怎么做 In view of / because of the seriousness of this problem, effective measures must be taken before things get worse. To begin with, it is essential that college rules and regulations be worked out and enforced to encourage college students to read classical works and start classics-reading campaigns on campus. Whats more, college students should enhance their awareness of absorbing the essence of the classics in which our ancestors left their wisdoms and experience. With proper rules and an alert public, it will only be a matter of time to see this problem become a thing of the past in the near future. Increased College Enrollment1） . 近年来大学入学率逐年上升2）. 大学扩招的益处及潜在问题3）. 我对大学扩招的看法这是一篇典型利弊两分法的议论文。第一段引入主题：高校扩招。第二段分析高校扩招的益处：缓解了父母和高中生们的心理压力；提高全国教育水平；培养更多有专长的人才。第三段扩招造成的一些问题：造成大学里师资和教学设施短缺；使就业市场竞争更加激烈。第四段阐述我的观点。 Recent years has witnessed a steady increase in college enrollment. To many high-school students, its definitely good news， for they would have better chance of receiving higher education. You dont have to look very far to find out the advantages of the increased college enrollment. For one thing, it lessens the worries of both high school graduates and their parents. For another，college enrollment expansion can contribute to raising the educational level of our nation. Whats more, increased college enrollment can provide more students with specialized knowledge, thus serving our development in a positive way. On the other hand, we can not deny that there are some potential problems about increased college enrollment. To begin with, with the increased number of students, the shortage of teaching staff and facilities becomes clearly seen. Worst of all, increased college enrollment leads to increased competition in the job market. Its not an easy task to tell whether the tendency should be encouraged or not. As to me, its laudable / deserving praise to grant more students higher education. But a college degree is by no means a guarantee for a better job or future. To cast a promising career, we need a lot more abilities which we can not learn from college.Direction: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Should One Expect a Reward When Doing a Good Deed? You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below. 1、 有人做好事期望得到回报； 2、 有人认为应该像雷锋那样做好事不图回报； 3、 我的观点。这是一篇典型的正反阐释作文第一段总起说一句对于是否应该期望得到回报这个话题有不同的看法，然后马上接着说第一种观点。When it comes to whether one should expect a reward when doing a good deed, peoples opinions differ.这个句子相信大家再熟悉不过。第二段直接写第二种的对立观点。最后一段写我的观点，可以赞同第一种，或者同意第二种观点，也可以两种都有条件地支持， 实在觉得最后一段字数写不够了，也可以说现在存在什么问题，并想出解决方法。 Lei Feng, a communist soldier, who “devoted his limited life to the limitless cause of serving the people”, has long been set as an outstanding example to encourage us to spare no efforts to help those in need；whereas, with the passage of time, people voice different opinions towards doing good deeds. Some insists “A good turn deserves another”, as the old saying goes, which indicates that a good deed ought to bring about a reward, the motivation or the stimulus for the favor. Meanwhile, others believe good deeds belong to voluntary work, purely out of willingness, which has nothing to do with expectation for rewards. As to me, good deeds are supposed to result from spontaneous reaction confronted with certain circumstances, ranging from giving up one seat to a silver-haired passenger aboard the bus, donating blood to the designated organization by Red Cross，to traveling to the remote and poverty-stricken areas to serve as a volunteer for a whole year. In short, rewards are by no means the trigger or purpose for intention of conducting good deeds, no matter how trivial they are. 高分作文的四句话基本准则 ：结构合理三（四）段式；中心突出主题句；层次清晰导航语；词汇闪光亮点句。“It” is used as a subject:It cannot be denied that/ must be admitted that the overgrowth of tourism may destroy the ecological balance of some scenic resorts.It is known to all that physical exercises can improve and enrich our physical and mental well-being.It is obvious (evident, clear, undeniable, apparent) that the situation is caused directly by excessive commercial fishing. It is currently difficult for a university student to find an ideal job upon his graduation, especially those majoring in fundamental courses such as history and mathematics.It is imperative that something urgent be done to combat the widespread use of illegal drugs among teenagers.It is highly necessary for our government to stop the corruption of government officials. with/as With the growing number of college graduates being turned out each year, the situation in the job market is getting tighter and tighter.As the reform process of state enterprises speeds up, more and more workers are likely to be laid off, entering the competition in job marketAs industry and agriculture develops, the problem of water shortage will be more serious. there be Recently, there has been a strong debate on whether human beings should be cloned. There are still quite a number of children who cannot afford to go to school because of poverty. There is no need for people to worry about the possible effects of donating blood. makeobjectadj./ makeit +adj.for sb. to do sthThe widespread introduction of information technology will make our work and life more convenient and more beautiful. Advanced medical science has made it possible for human beings to lead a much longer life and suffer less from different kinds of diseases. sothat They are so eager to master new skills that they can be qualified to the job market. There are so many people, bicycles, cars in the streets that you will sometimes feel it difficult to move along.Nonrestrictive Attributive ClauseLakes and rivers are becoming seriously polluted, which aggravates (worsens) the shortage of fresh water.The increasingly high divorce rate will cause a series of problems, which deserves great public attention.Participle phrase:People, not realizing that water resources on the earth are limited, waste a great amount of water every day. With the improvement of living standards, more and more people begin to buy cars to meet the needs of work and life, thereby worsening the traffic problems.Contrast structure:Some people believe that reading selectively is a good way for us to enrich our knowledge while some others insist that reading extensively is way too better. Most men would like their spouses to be young and beautiful whereas women often put emphasis on their spouses character, education, profession, income or family background.Sentence structure about “reason”:Several reasons/factors are responsible for/may account for/contribute to the coming back of many Chinese overseas students. Its popularity is due to/results from/is caused by/can be attributed to the clean and comfortable environment and the excellent service.As for (as to) ; for Thus, for some students, cheating, though risky, is absolutely a shortcut to get a satisfying academic evaluation.As for (as to) the society, the 7-day holiday well serves the purpose of stimulating consumption and promoting the development of tourism. When it comes to ; as far as is concerned When it comes to whether college students should be involved in business activities, there are different opinions/ people voice different opinions . As far as individuals are concerned, no matter what reasons drive them to buy lottery tickets, they actually contribute to the society by lending a helping hand to unfortunate people and to the development of sports in our country.Admittedly/Undoubtedly , there are advanced research environment and better living conditions in developed countries, and students from developing countries can not resist the temptation of earning more salary in the west. No one can deny that/There is no denying the fact that E-economy has great potentials and advantages in many aspects. It is indisputable that（无可争辩）there are millions of people who still have a miserable life and have to face the dangers of starvation and exposure. No one can deny the fact （没有人能否认）that a persons education is the most important aspect of his life. In fact, we have to admit the fact （我们必须承认）that the quality of life is as important as life itselfWith ; Without With private cars, people are able to enjoy their leisure time to the full by making trips in their cars to the countryside or seaside at the weekends.Without adequate latest information necessary in his work, one will achieve no success in his career.regard/think of as In spite of these arguments, there are those who see (view) it as a hasty decision, which has some potential problems. However, some people consider mankinds exploration into the space as a waste of time, money and resources. How to express opinions:There are different opinions on (People have different ideas about / Different people may hold different views about) whether drunk driving should be banned. Recently, there has been a heated debate (discussion) over whether or not sports stars can go to college or graduate school without taking the entrance exams. Views on the issue in question vary widely from person to person. Quite a lot of people hold/claim/argue /advocate /suggest/believe that owning private cars is of great benefit, while others assume/maintain /stress that there may be problems with the increasing number of private cars/ (but others set/(put forth a different argument about/ oppositive views on the matter in question). Some (people) advocate/endorse/favor/are for (或oppose/object to/are against). Yet others stick to/hold on to/cling to the opposite views/argument/points. To some peoples mind /From some peoples point of view/ In the eyes of some people, the matter in question is/seems/should be/means.But to others mind /from others point of view/in others eyes, it is just/quite the other/contrary/opposite way around (或the opposite/reverse is the case/true.)Based on the above discussion, I hold the opinion that both sides of the argument are right in some way. However, I would like to take a more neutral position. Some other important sentences:The problem of international tourism has caused wide public concern over the recent years. (近些年引起了广泛关注） Despite many obvious advantages of , it is not without its problem. (但是它也存在问题)Although rural emigrants contribute greatly to the economic growth of the cities, they ma