【写作】大小作文练习【版本五】.doc

【第一段】简要描述图片，略微引向主题；图片基调先关细节引向主题【第二段】点明图片寓意，进行充分拓展；1. 化立论为驳论大众观点质疑大众详实论据得出结论2. 化苍白为哲理哲理引入主题阐释详实论据（举例）（正反）（因果）（利弊）重申主题3. 化平淡为修辞Under the amusing appearance of the cartoon is a simple truth that . Are not the following cases sufficient to prove this point? | However, such a doctrine has been waved aside by a significant number of us. Any case? Havent you ever noticed ? Havent you ever found ? Why? Why? Why? Arent they .? 【第三段】根据上文论调，进行有效评论。1. 社会弊病（生态环境）方案措施：外控；内控Corresponding laws and regulations (School regulations) should be carried out to Penalties and fines should be put on the matter of to direct this situation to a positive one. Official intervention should be activated to New social norm should be established to .Media supervision should be cast on to .The ability of self-discipline should be cultivated among those who .Self-restrictSelf-restrainSelf-controlThe awareness of .should be nurtured among those who .The right attitude toward should be advocated among those who从外控走向内控：How can we put this problem of environmental destruction under control? It occurs to many that what we demand is a package deal, involving intervention from environment organizations, legislation from department concerned, and supervision from the mass media. But is that deal comprehensive enough? Actually, we also need the awareness by public education that we would be “homeless” if we mistreat the planet earth, our only home, with the assistance of which we can fundamentally put this delinquency to an end. Such misconducts of should be put under control immediately! But how? Suggestions from the general public involve , , and . These proposals have been put into practice for years, with fruitful rewards. But is that enough? Actually, what we need is more than what mentioned above, but a new way that .2. 社会风尚态度决心：支持：理由：惠及自身与他人惠及当下与未来参与：Asked about my attitude towards , I am to say is either beneficial to individuals or elevating to society. Actually, this escalating effect will not last for merely several years. As it is a social wealth, we are willing to deliver it from one individual to another, from one decade to another, and from one generation to another. As a college man, I am determined to .(As college men, we are supposed to .)狗镇GraceTom3. 箴言哲理个人见解：求助：长者、老师、朋友、书籍；自助：环节性突破。How can we step out of the shadow of indecisiveness? Facing this delicate situation, one may be suggested by many to seek advices from friends, seniors or experts. That is a way, but a passive one. Suggestions from them are not always available, and not necessarily suit him. Therefore, once exposed to the situation, I am determined to bring forth such suggestions: to be aware of the innermost need, to make clear the current conditions and situations, to work out feasible plans, and to head on according to the plans without any hesitation.Exercise 1Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should1) describe the drawing briefly,2) interpret the phenomenon it reflects, and then3) give your comments.You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points)学生的对联40 = 2 + 3 + 30 + 5审题拓展行文修改【第一段】图片基调 sarcastic先关细节 CoupletThe first lineThe second lineHorizontal scroll引向主题DishonestEmerging from the cartoon is an ironic scene that the couplet pasted by students mirrors undesirable attitude toward college examinations. The first line reads “no cheating deserves no upgrade”, while the second line bears “in their minds, success in exam outweighs dignity.” The horizontal scroll summarizes their idea: they intend, regardless of the virtue of honesty, to pass exams by any means. By means of .Want toIntend to DeservePersonalitydignityPrefer A to BA is preferable to B.In ones mind, A outweigh BOne desires less B than A大众观点 最诚信It is generally accepted that It is a “conventional wisdom” that It is imagined by many that It is shared by the general public that It is deeply rooted in the mind of the masses that .Generally, .is viewed as .Traditionally, .is considered as 质疑大众 反问详实论据 作弊：交谈，手势，手机得出结论 失去诚信美德：个人、教育、社会It is widely shared that no other groups in this world can be as honest as college student. But is that the truth any longer? Cases against the public view are abundant and within easy reach. From college examination alone, it is not surprising to see some candidates transmitting keys by whispering, by gesturing, or even by forwarding a short message by mobile phone. Evidently, students in mounting numbers dont cherish the virtue of honesty any more, which may be detrimental to either their personal growth or the quality of current education, not to mention social atmosphere in the future.Is harmful to Is poisonous to .Is detrimental to N. in increasing numbers n. in mounting numbersn. in expanding amountSendingForward Exercise 2Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should1) describe the drawing briefly,2) explain its intended meaning, and then3) give your comments.You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points)The dream of a Bird图片基调 alarming先关细节A bird is holding a gunHe is hiding in the bushHe is staring at the skyHuman beings are flying over the skyHe wants shoot people for revenge引向主题People once did with him like this.Displayed by this cartoon is an alarming scenario that, holding a gun and hiding in the bush, a bird is staring at the sky where human beings are soaring. He intends to shoot people for revenge. Evidently, his “dream” comes from / derives from / is rooted in / is triggered by / is evoked by /is provoked by / is induced by / is sparked by /is give rise by what people once did with him.【第二段】版本一：化立论为驳论It is widely shared that no other decades can lay so much emphasis on environmental protection as today. But does every of us participate in the campaign? Cases against the public view are abundant and within easy reach. Specifically , it is not surprising to see some of us hunting wild life for food, for fun, or even for huge profit. In addition, it is also not uncommon to find some factories over-mining with geographic disasters recurring. Evidently, people in mounting numbers have let go of the motto, that what we did with the nature is to be answered for.版本二：化苍白为哲理哲理引入：The nature may treat us the way we treat it. It is our duty to get on well with the nature.What we do with the nature is to be answered for.As a wise man once put it, “”Never let go of the simple truth, “”Never shrug off the simple truth, “”The intended meaning of the cartoon can be summarized as a motto: “”主题阐释In other words, That is, .Put it another way, .Simply put it, 详实论据（举例）（正反）（因果）（利弊）重申主题The implication of the cartoon can be summarized as a philosophic topic in daily life: the nature may treat us the way we treat it. That is, the nature may reward us fruitfully on condition that we are on good term with it, while punish us if we mistreat it. In the past, our ancestors never went too far in exploiting the gifts from nature, so such resources were available anytime, anywhere, and anyhow. However, currently our greediness puts these resources to the edge of running out. No wonder the bird in the picture revenges on human. He is warning us that we may pay a heavy price for what we did with the nature.版本三：化平淡为修辞Under the amusing appearance of the cartoon is a simple truth that what we did with the nature is to be answered for. However, such a doctrine has been waved aside by a significant number of us. Any case? Havent you ever noticed some of us over-hunting with species endangered? Havent you ever found some enterprises emitting toxic gases with atmosphere polluted? Where has their sense of social responsibility gone? Where has their conscience gone? Where has their insight to the future gone? Arent the virtues swallowed by their greediness, seeking instant satisfaction at the expense of long-term eco-balance?Where has all the flowers gone?Instant satisfactionSacrifice for Seek at the cost of Pursue at the expense of GreedyPut sth. to the edge of .Running out Fish out of waterRewardBe on good term withMistreatAbuse nowadaysX is to be answered for.People may pay a heavy price for XExercise 3Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should1) describe the drawing briefly,2) explain its intended meaning, and then3) give your comments.Have you ever been caught in a dilemma? If so, you may feel the same awkwardness as the man in the picture does. In the drawing, he is walking back and forth, feeling puzzled and wondering where to go. The caption reminds him, as well as all of us, that what troubles us is nothing else than our indecisiveness.RemindWarninformBetter trying than crying.Better late than never.The implication of the cartoon can be summarized as a philosophic topic in daily life: decisiveness is the first step leading to success(better trying than crying). That is, if keep hesitating when facing delicate situation, we may fail to grasp the opportunities (if we keep wondering or pondering, opportunities may escape our attention). Indecisiveness may grind off our passion and judgment. On the contrary, decisiveness may earn us new chances to step out of the shadow. The sad guy in the picture, through his lessons, is warning us that we should better choose the latter.1999 El NinoGRE黄禹诚 1650 CRACK何眉萱 2350May I SorryPleaseNo wayCome on Shut upEarn sb. sthExercise 4Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should1) describe the drawing briefly,2) explain its intended meaning, and then3) give your comments.Exercise 5Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should1) describe the drawing briefly,2) explain its intended meaning, and then3) give your comments.Reading makes a full man, conference a wise man, and writing an exact man. 孔子孟子庄子老子李子马子Under the amusing appearance of the cartoon is a simple truth that God makes human, while mutual assistance makes human society. | However, such a doctrine has been waved aside by a significant number of us. Any case? Havent you ever noticed some of us sitting still even if a pregnant lady standing before him? Havent you ever found others stand with arm folded even though the injured groaning in a car-accident? Where has their generousness gone? Where has their unselfishness gone? Where has their sense of social responsibility go