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1小时提高英语作文 我曾经参加过托福考试，作文25分，还算可以，所以为大家提供一些写作建议，当然我写作能力有限，可能在写作过程中会有一些小错误，请写作很好的同学勿喷，仅供参考。描述图片部分我就不详细说了，但一定要简练，一两句话。提供一个词：caricature 讽刺画，记住必须是有讽刺意味的话才用，比方说四个子女不养老的那个图。一、论述部分的结构在我看来，论述要避免凑字数，没话可写的方法就是将抽象的问题具体化，然后就具体后的观点进行分析论述，大的问题化小，小的问题有例子，这样才可以避免写的大而空，而且段落发现逻辑关联不强，甚至前后两句话颠倒位置都能讲得通，说明连一点顺承关系也没有，这样你就要注意了。我的具体化方法有两种“what”和“why”，就是不停的问自己是什么和为什么，然后在文章中有层次的予以解释，这样一条线下来，整篇文章就显得很有逻辑。比方说：文化火锅有营养，右边那个图。用我们的话说就是 吸收多种文化对我们有好处。这里的“文化”和“好处”是可以具体化的。我来问自己：文化是什么? （what） 是中国文化和国外文化，中国文化有名著，京剧，建筑，历史，节日等等，国外文化有电影，歌剧，节日等等。它们为什么有好处（why） 中国的名著可以让我们更加了解我们的历史，增强我们对自己国家传统的理解，了解京剧可以让我们欣赏到中国传统艺术，再跟国外友人交流时有“料”可以介绍等等。而国外的电影可以让我们了解国外的文化，开阔视野等等。 还可以再问自己文化为啥有这么多好处（why），中国的名著还原了古代中国的生活，让我们真切的感受到了中国文化的内涵，所以可以增加我们对传统文化的领悟深度。 而观看国外的歌剧可以让我们分析学习到国内外音乐、戏剧的不同特点，再举例分析（why），哈利波特那个电影怎么着在这个过程中让自己获得对文化差异更加真切的理解。上面的内容挑几点论述清楚就能把文化多样化的原因、影响、好处一条线分析下来，而不是东扯一句，西扯一句，文章结构不清晰。光这一段就能写200字，所以还用凑字数吗？如果实在不够，再on the contrary,反面写写文化带来的不仅仅是好处，还有很多的坏处，比方说国外的饮食文化KFC对身体不健康等等。每个人问自己的what和why得到的答案是不同的，所以即使套模板，得到的文章也不尽相同。我简单写几个句子，提高一下表达： On contemporary period, we have been witness that the spread speed of culture approaches frantic. Admittedly, cultural variation has been becoming an essential engine on the promotion of our living standard, on the precondition that all the side effects have been considered. The fusion among different cultures is not merely a matter of aesthetic, though the majestic beauty of nature is indeed an important consideration. 举例要具体化：这是原句Now a day, thanks to the promotion of various cultures, people can broaden their horizon by watching foreign films, novels and classical compositions. 这是具体化后的句子For a sophisticated merchant, importation of some fashion cultural goods, say, films and novels, from foreign countries can bring a lot of money; for a diligent student majoring in literature, numerous classical compositions can broaden his horizon; for a retired man who is interested in traveling, tasting all different culture from beautiful pictures of foreign countries may be his final dream in life. 我用右边这个题目简单做个例子，供大家参考。两个人都有残疾，而他们利用了彼此的优点，在合作中弥补了缺点，从而获得发展。 这里的残疾人和发展是可以具体的，残疾人可以表示真实的人，不同学科，不同的阶级，团队中不同的组员等等，他们互补之后能获得相应的好处，我就不详细说了。Admittedly, (总述)cooperation has become an imperative element in human history, along the modern society providing a burgeoning abundant recourse, (具体了，what，合作在科学领域中)especially in the sphere of science. (立刻承接上一句，继续具体化“科学”)Variety of subjects, say, chemistry, mathematics and physiology, are hampered by some unavoidable clogs which are brought by the limitation of those subjects; (逻辑因果关系why，because 单独学科内在的缺陷 so 多学科合作)thus, cooperation among different subjects has become an emerging effective method to breach those clogs, (递进，继续因果关系，次级学科产生，why) and subsequently, many sub-subjects are created. (举例论证，why)For example, (排比，有气势，言简意赅，围绕不同学科的融合促进了发展)for a sage scientist in the field of chemistry, using the knowledge of biology will form a new subject called biochemistry; （句间用分号，连接句子可以不用连词，而且可以两句话关系密切）for a diligent student majoring in classic music, adapting the view of ancient literature may be helpful to excavate the covert emotion of composers; for a sophisticated professor focusing on climate change, analyzing the data of universe with the theory of astronomy may map out a more accurate forecast. 在短时间里思路提高是决定性的，如果还有余力可以用这种思路多分析一下以往的考题。二、整理一些小词、短语和句型。因为我说只要一小时，所以我给的词都会很简单，不求全，只求常用，仅供参考但建议大家使用前先查查词典，看看词典里的例句。我认为：from my perspective, I deem/maintain/argue/repute/opine thatEg: I deem that the book is good. the book is good, I deem.最好的：bestoptimal 更好的，更可取的：better preferable重要的，必要的： important imperative, prominent鼓励，促进：encourage foster, facilitate, 另外：in addition, besides, for good measure从古到今: in recent decades hitherto(adv. 到目前为止), in retrospect(回顾).Eg: Hitherto, the implement of transportation has revolutionized the world.The implement of transportation has revolutionized the world, in retrospect.表转折：counterproductively adv. 事与愿违地 ironically adv. 讽刺地；说反话地 conversely adv. 相反地Eg: We designed Internet for a comfortable leisure; however, ironically, the amazing efficiency of its massage transportation has lured us into a life with a breathless living rhythm.以为代价 at the sacrifice of eg: We should not devote ourselves in studying at the sacrifice of our health. 否定：not，disagree ridiculous, inadvisable, unjustifiable(adj. 不合理的); I gainsay (vt. n. 否认，反驳) that.Eg: It is ridiculous/ inadvisable to deem that. or Ridiculously, all food are harmful. 没效率的：Time-consuming adj. 费时间的 inefficient Shape ones social attitude 形成社会观 Outlook of the world 世界观 Human value 人生观努力做，尝试做：try to do Seek to do 试图 Strive to do 努力做 Take pains to do 努力做#这个在论证时常用 by no means indicates that 不能代表 = Do not equal 不等同于Eg： We should embrace the various culture, but, that by no means indicates that we should learn all the culture around the world. 我们应该去接触各种各样的文化，但是那不代表我们要把全世界的文化了解个遍。一些社会问题的表达：Moral depravity 道德沦丧, environmental pollution环境污染, enlarging disparity between the poor and the rich贫富差距加大, war, nothingness of human values 人性品德缺失Positive/ negative cycle 良性/恶性循环At the personal level 在个人层次上 At the community level在社区层次上 At the global level 在世界层次上句型简单看看就行，时间太紧的话，掌握不好还不如不掌握，建议掌握第一个句子的短语（在的前提下）。Loyalty is the high-degree identification of a person with another person or institution, on the precondition that it must not damage universal human values such as liberty, equality, respect for life and dignity. The eradication of pollution is not merely a matter of aesthetic, though the majestic beauty of nature is indeed an important consideration. 消除污染不仅仅是一个美的问题，尽管大自然壮丽的美的确是一个重要因素。Under