基础写作--人物介绍.doc

人物介绍写作技巧1. 介绍概况：同位语结构、分词结构，使文章简洁。如：（1） Abraham Lincoln, the son of a poor family (一个贫苦家庭的儿子), was born in Kentucky on February 12, 1809. (同位语)（2） Sun Shuwei, a world champion in diving (一位跳水的世界冠军), is a boy of 14 from Guangdong. (同位语)（3） Born in Maryland, USA in 1985 (他1985年出生于美国马里兰州), Michael Phelps is a famous swimmer. (分词短语)2. 描写外貌：巧用with短语。 如：My history teacher is a beautiful woman, with long hair and big eyes (她长着两只大眼睛，留着长发).3. 生平事迹：尽量用复合句、并列句、非谓语动词短语和倒装等高级语句。如：（1） In his life, he got many honours, one of which is the 2005 CCTV Moving China Award (其中包括获得“2005感动中国年度人物”称号). (定语从句)（2） In 2006, having broken the world record and got the gold medal (在他打破世界纪录并获得金牌之后)， he became the idol of the youth. (分词短语)（3） Not only does he show interest in science (他不但对科学极有兴趣), but also he has a gift for music. (倒装)4.评估： 尽量运用短语。如：Lei Feng set a good example to us (给我们树立了一个良好的榜样), so all the people show great respect to him (很敬重他). (一)John Snow 英国著名医生，流行病学的创始人之一。人类公共卫生史上的传奇人物。1813年3月15日出生于劳工家庭。14岁开始随一名外科医生学医。1836-1850年间潜心于正规医学学习。John Snow 看到百姓深受霍乱戕害，下定决心根治该疾病。经过认真调查和分析，他发现污染的水源是病因所在，一举战胜霍乱。John snow was a British physician who is considered one of the founders of epidemiology. Born into a laborers family on 15 March 1813 in York, he started to learn medicine from a surgeon at 14 and was devoted to his formal medical education from 1836-1850. Seeing many ordinary people died of cholera, he was determined to save people from the deadly threat. Through careful investigation and scientific analysis, John Snow finally drew a conclusion that polluted water was the cause of the disease and found ways to defeat it. John Snow is recognized as a legendary figure in the history of public health care.(二)邓亚萍，河南郑州人，前国家队乒乓球运动员，1988年入选国家队，1997年退役；其运动生涯中，获得过18个世界冠军，连续2届4次奥运会冠军，被誉为“乒乓皇后”。北京申奥形象大使，2001年帮助北京成功申奥；2009年，被任命为共青团北京市委副书记。邓亚萍与前国际奥委会主席萨马兰奇忘年之交的故事被传为佳话！Former Ping-Pong player Deng Yaping was born in Zhengzhou Henan and got enrolled in the national team in 1988. In her professional career, she was titled world champion 18 times, including four Olympic gold medals in two Games in a row, therefore, she is recognized as “Queen of Pingpang”. Since her retirement in 1997, she had been devoted to her role as the ambassador of the Olympic bidding and played an important part in Beijings success in bidding in 2001. After the 2008 Beijing Olympics, Deng started to serve as a government official and was appointed Deputy Secretary of Beijing Communist Youth League in 2009. A much-told story is Dengs legendary friendship with Samaranch, late former president of IOC (International Olympic Committee). (三)一代音乐大师和发明家Les Paul已经离世，但他却给我们留下了永不磨灭的音乐享受。在世界任何角落，他的音乐永远魅力非凡 ，他的技术始终无与伦比。姓名：Les Paul 出生日期：1915年6月9日出生地：Waukesha, Wisconsin 生平简介：1. 八岁开始弹奏口琴（harmonica）、班卓琴(banjo ) ，显示音乐天赋。2. 13岁，作为酒吧吉他手公开登台演出，17岁辍学离开学校，开始职业生涯。3大约在1941年，Les Paul发明了著名的吉他和独特的录制装置，这些改变了整个20世纪的流行音乐进程。4 Les Paul 于2009年8月去世，享年94岁。Les Paul 一生保持一个扎实的表演家风范，他的理念就是让人们感到幸福。Mr Paul, born on June 9, 1915, in Waukesha, Wis, began playing the harmonica, the banjo and the guitar at the age of eight, with a gift for music. At the age of thirteen, he performed in a pub as a guitarist and then he dropped out from school and began his career when he was 17 years old. Around 1941, Les Paul invented his famous guitar and special recording device, which changed the course of 20th-century popular music. Les Paul died in 2009 at 94. All his life, he remained a down-home performer, whose main goal, as he often said, was to make people happy. (四)请根据下面表格，用英语介绍美国现任总统巴拉克.奥巴马姓名Barack Obama出生时间1961年8月4日出生地点夏威夷檀香山( Honolulu, Hawaii)家庭父亲是肯尼亚黑人，母亲是美国白人儿时梦想当美国总统教育背景哈佛法学院（Harvard Law School）, 博士职业经历毕业后一直从政。2008年11月4日，在美国总统大选中击败麦凯恩（McCain）,成为美国第44任总统，首位黑人总统. 他的成功对人们尤其是黑人产生极大的激励作用.Barack Obama, the son of a black father from Kenya and a white American mother, was born in Honolulu, Hawaii on August 4, 1961. When he was a boy, he dreamt of being president of the United States. Since he graduated from Harvard Law School with a doctors degree, he has been struggling for success in politics. On Nov 4, 2008, he defeated John McCain in the general election and was elected the 44th president of the United States, making him the first African American president of the country. The success of Obama Greatly inspired people from all over the word, especially black people, to work hard to achieve their goals. (五)根据以下表格中的信息，写一篇题为A famous painter, Xu Beihong 的短文出生及病逝时间和地点1895年7月出生于江苏省宜兴县；1953年9月在北京病逝从事绘画的历程及遭遇9岁开始从父学画，13岁随父到上海卖画，后来到上海谋生，情况开始好转，但生活依然很艰辛，几次产生自杀的念头。出国留学的经历及成就自1919年起8年中，先后多次到欧洲求学，开始把西方绘画的技术融入中国画中。这段经历被他自己称为“生平最开心的时光”。最出色的作品名画-奔马The famous painter, Xu Beihong, was born in Yixing, Jiangsu Province in July, 1895 and died in September, 1953 in Beijing. He began to learn drawing from his father at the age of 9, and joined his father in selling paintings at 13. Later, when he came to Shanghai for a job, luck began to came his way, but life was still so hard that he had the thoughts of committing suicide for several times. During the eight years from 1919, he was sent to Europe to study drawing and he developed his own style by mixing Western art into Chinese art, so he considered this time as “the happiest days in his life”. His most outstanding painting was the famous painting, Racing Horse.(六)请你根据下面的中文提示，用英语写一篇短文介绍诗人海子。【写作内容】原名查海生笔名海子出生1964年3月26日，出生在安徽怀宁县一个小村庄逝世1989年3月26日，在山海关卧轨自杀主要经历1979年，被北京大学录取20世纪80年代初，开始创作诗歌大学毕业后，坚持向各类报纸、出版商投稿影响他的短诗最受欢迎，且对中国的流行文化影响很大Hai Zi is the pen name of the Chinese poet Zha Haisheng, who was born on March 26, 1964 in a small village in Huaining County, Anhui Province, China. He was admitted to Beijing University in 1979. He began to write poems as a student in the early 1980s and kept on sending his works of different newspapers and publishers after graduating from university. He ended his life by lying on the path of a train in Shanhaiguan on his 25th birthday on March 26, 1989. Hai Zis short poems are his most popular works, having strong influence on the popular culture of China.（七）请根据下面的材料，用5句话介绍唐宋八大家之一韩愈的情况。l 韩愈（768824），唐朝文学家，思想家和哲学家；l 三岁丧父，由其兄抚养。虽然家庭贫困却刻苦好学，在文学上终有所成；l 名作师说，阐述了师道的理论，对现代教育产生了深远的影响；l 在政治上主张天下统一，提倡仁政。参考词汇：唐宋八大家 Eight Masters of Tang and Song