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Fast foodFast food is becoming more and more popular in China, especially among children and teenagers.There are several reasons for its popularity. First, it is very convenient and saves a lot of time. Second, you can either eat it there or take it away. Third, the environment of fast food restaurants is both clean and comfortable. However, in terms of nutrition, fast food is far from satisfactory. It is usually not a balanced diet and low in nutritional value.Fast food is only a good choice when you are in a hurry and turn to it once in a while. Its good for people, especially children, to eat fast food as little as possible.Outer Space Explorations, YES or NO?We had an argument over whether it was necessary to carry out outer space explorations at a class meeting the other day.Some of us held it important to research the outer space because, first of all, people can get a better understanding of the outer space through their exploration. Second, new resources can be found there for human use. Third, this exploration can possibly bring about new living space for human life. However, others think very differently. They said this kind of exploration is much too costly. Besides, it is very dangerous fro astronauts to do such work.In my opinion, people should be pioneering and therefore such explorations into the outer space are worth trying out.Dear Jim, I am so exciting that you will come to ChinaI will free from December 18 and will excited behave a plenty of time to be together with youIll meet you at the airport and then you willwetake Bus No8 for my homeYou worry about the weather here in your emailIn fact, the weather to worriedhere is quite different from it in your cityIt isnt very cold, but you neednt bring many clothes that so/andwith youDuring your stay here, Ill take you to some places of interests and you can taste some interestlocal snacksIm sure we will have greatly fun together. greatLooking forward to meeting you soon.When I was ten years old, I went to Yangzhou with two AmericanI became their guideAmericansFirst, we went to the Shouxi RiverThey wanted to look around the river by the boatAfter buybuyingthe tickets, we got into the boatWe went around seeing the beautiful sightAfter that, we went shoppingThe sellers couldnt spoke EnglishThough it was very harder, I tried my best listenspeak hard toto their words carefully and translate the sentencesThey bought some little things with theirmyhelpNext, we went to a small zoo but took some picturesWhen w