英语写作技巧.ppt

1 TheProblemofSpendingaWeek longHolidayInrecentyears theweek longholidayhasbecomeacommonpartofpeople slife Thetimeadjustmentbetweenworkandholidaysbythegovernmentenablespeopletohavesufficienttimetorelaxphysicallyandmentallyaswell Moreover itpromotesconsumptionfollowedby 2 rapideconomicdevelopmentthankstothemanychoicesavailableforpeopletotravelduringthattime However justlikethesaying Everycoinhasitstwosides theholidayswillalsobringussomeproblems Amongthevariousproblems overcrowdednessonthescenicspotsisatypicalone Withtoomany 3 touristspouringintothesameplace whatisleftforpeopletoenjoyalingeringfearandtiredness Inaddition beforeenjoyingtheweek longholidays peoplewillpullthroughalonger than usualweek whichcoststhemexcessiveenergies Asresult they lltakeinterestinnothingexcepthavingarest Evenworse theworkingefficiencyofsocietymaybe 4 seriouslyaffected Tosolvetheproblem it stimeforboththegovernmentandpeopletotakeaction Thegovernmenthadbettermakeawidesurveyandadoptpopularadvicesoastolaydownamoreconsideraterule Besides peoplecouldchoosethenearbyparks restaurantsorcinemasfortheweek longholiday 5 fishingnearthelake tastingdeliciousmealsorseeingfilmswillalsoaddawonderfulandcomfortableelementtoourperfectvacation Inbrief nomatterhowyouchoosetoenjoyyourselfduringtheholidays livingameaningfullifeisoftoppriority Thenyou resuretolivethroughwithlotsofwarmmemories 6 PartII8 speakingmodestly usingindirectspeech andsavingface9 manywords withlotsofvividimagesandreligiousreference10 pilingupmanywordsorphrasestomakeapoint usingsuperlativeadjective uninhibitedemotionalism 7 PartIIISectionC36 simulation37 consequences38 exploration39 reference40 free associate41 draws42 curious43 drag44 figureoutquicklythatcomputersarepowerful andmasteringthemachinemakesthem 8 feelgrown up45 Researchershavefoundthatattitudestowardwriting forexample improvewhenstudentscomposeonacomputer46 Childrenliketousethecomputerwithadultsandotherkids askingquestions makingpredictions andcomparingresults 9 KeytoCET 4PracticeTestsTest3PartIWritingTrafficProblemsinBigCitiesTrafficisoneoftheessentialactivitiesforpeopleinbigcities Eachday byvariousmeansoftransportation heavyloadsofgoodsandagreatnumberofpassengersareconveyedtoandfromevery 10 cornerofthecity Withthemodernizationdriveinfullswing traffichasbeenlendinggreaterimpactonthecity slife Whatamessthecitywouldbein ifarteriesofeachvitalimportancewereoutofactionevenforaminute Owingtothemajorpartitplays traffichaslongbeenaseriousconcernforthelocalgovernments 11 Overrecentyears considerableamountsofmoneyhavebeenspentimprovingpublictransportation Newbusrouteshavebeenopenedtotrafficandnewvehiclesputinservice manyunderpassesandoverpasseshavebeenbuilttoeaseoutthe bottlenecks Meanwhile newtrafficprojectsareunderconstruction 12 Forallthoseefforts trafficremainsoneofthebiggestheadachesinbigcities Trafficjamsduringrushhours busdelaysandfraysareawayoflifewithcitypeople Inaddition trafficaccidentsoccurwithalarmingfrequency resultinginheavylossesinbothstatepropertyandlives Onlywhentheseproblemsareeffectivelysolved willamajorcitybeabletosurvivethenationwidecompetitionandfunctionasaneconomiccenter 13 Part ReadingComprehension SkimmingandScanning 1 N2 NG3 Y4 Y5 NG6 N7 Y8 Almostthreetimes9 About2millioncopies10 canhardlybereplacedaltogetherbyanynewwayofcommunicationintheyearstocome 14 Part ReadingComprehension ReadinginDepth SectionA47 C circle 48 A embarrassment 49 O suspicion 50 N recipient 51 H regard 15 52 M hostesses 53 E normally 54 D withhold 55 K exchange SectionB57 C58 A59 D60 B61 A62 D63 A64 D65 C66 A 16 Part Cloze67 B68 D69 A70 A71 C72 B73 C74 D75 C76 B77 B78 C79 A80 C81 A82 A83 D84 B85 D86 DPart Translation87 welearnmorefromlosingthanfromwinning 17 88 yououghttostrugglewithallyourmighttodoitinyourway89 I drathergointoagrocerystoretodaythangotoaKing sbanquetahundredyearsago90 isnotcontainedinthickbooksbutlivesinourveryblood91 Isnotavesseltobefilled 18 写作技巧 WritingSkills 1巧用各种从句抢分通过使用定语从句 名词性从句和状语从句等使表达更加确切 丰富 例如 1 TheInternationalRedCrossisanorganization Itspurposeistohelpthesickandtheneedy TheInternationalRedCrossisanorganizationwhosepurposeisto 19 helpthesickandtheneedy AttributiveClause 2 Wehaven tdecidedwherewearegoingthisweekend Wherewearegoingthisweekendhasnotbeendecided SubjectClause 3 Ithinkweshouldsticktoouroriginalplan 20 Myideaisthatweshouldsticktoouroriginalplan PredicativeClause 3 WhetherTomwillcometothepartytonightornotisstillunknown Idon tknowwhetherTomwillcometothepartytonight ObjectClause 4 Idecidedtofindajob Icouldearnmoremoney 21 IdecidedtofindajobsothatIcouldearnmoremoney AdverbialClause 2巧用非谓语动词抢分非谓语结构通常被认为是一种高级结构 会给人一种驾驭语言的印象 例如 1 Ashewasborninapoorfarmer sfamily hehadonlytwoyearsofschooling 22 Borninapoorfamily sfamily hehadonlytwoyearsofschooling 2 Whenwesawthecityfromthetopofthehill thecitylookedlikeabiggarden Seenfromthetopofthehill thecitylookedlikeabiggarden 23 3 Afterhehadbeencriticizedbytheteacher hegaveupsmoking Havingbeencriticizedbytheteacher hegaveupsmoking 4 Apersonwillfindhimselfverysmallwhenhestandsatthefootofahighmountain Apersonstandingatthefootofahighmountainwillfindhimselfverysmall 24 Standingatthefootofahighmountain apersonwillfindhimselfverysmall 3巧用with复合结构抢分使用复合结构如with和独立主格 可使句子结构更加紧凑 例如 ItwashalfpastsevenandmymothertookmetotheWuyiSquareforawalk Withallthelightson thesquarelookedmorebeautiful Therewerehundredsofpeopleonthe 25 squareenjoyingthebeautifulnightofChangsha Manychildrenwereskippingonthesquare withsunnysmilesontheirfaces 4巧用倒装句抢分使用倒装句或以状语开头 会增强文章的表现力 例如 1 Therestandsanoldtempleatthetopofthehill 26 Atthetopofthehillstandsanoldtemple 2 Youcandoitwellonlyinthisway Onlyinthiswaycanyoudoitwell 3 Ayoungwomansatbythewindow Bythewindowsatayoungwoman 4 ThedooropenedandMr Smithcamein ThedooropenedandincameMr Smith 27 5巧用同义词表达抢分英语中表示 喜欢 的词和短语很多 如love enjoy prefer appreciate befondof carefor等 为了使文章表达更生动 更有表现力 应尽量避免重复使用同一词语来表示同一意思 例如 Ilikereadingwhilemybrotherlikeswatchingtelevision 28 Ilikereadingwhilemybrotherenjoyswatchingtelevision 6巧用省略句抢分合理恰当地使用省略句 不仅可以使文章精练 简洁 而且会使文章更具有文采和可读性 1 Hemaybebusy Ifhe sbusy I llcalllater Ifheisnotbusy canIseehimnow Hemaybebusy ifso I llcalllater Ifnot canIseehimnow 29 2 Iftheweatherisfine we llgo Ifitisnotfine we llnotgo Iftheweatherisfine we llgo ifnot not 3 Shecouldhaveappliedforthatjob butshedidn tdoso Shecouldhaveappliedforthatjob butshedidn t 30 7巧用长短句搭配抢分在英语写作中 根据实际情况 在文章中交替使用长句和短句 使文章显得错落有致 既增加美感 又读起来铿锵有力 例如 Atnoonwehadapicniclunchinthesunshine Thenwehadashortrest Thenwebegantoplayhappily 31 Wesanganddanced Sometoldjokes Someplayedchess Atnoonwehadapicniclunchinthesunshine Afterashortrest wehadgreatfunsinginganddancing tellingjokesandplayingchess 32 8巧用经典句式抢分阅卷老师眼中的经典句式很多 如 too to enoughto so that inorderthat inorderto such that notonly butalso not but both and 等 如 1 Itisveryhot sowecan twork Itistoohotforustowork 33 2 Annielikeseatingicecream AndWendylikeseatingittoo BothAnnieandWendylikeeatingicecream 3 Theroomissolargethatitcanhold1000people Theroomislargeenoughtohold1000people 9巧用独立主格结构正确地使用独立主格结构 使文章达到意想不到的效果 34 1 Ourhomeworkhasbeenfinished wewenttoplayfootball Ourhomeworkhavingbeenfinished wewenttoplayfootball 2 Themeetingwasover hewentbackhome Themeetingbeingover hewentbackhome 35 3 Heenteredtheroom abookwasinhishand Heenteredtheroom abookinthehand 4 Shestoodthere tearsrolleddownhercheeks Shestoodthere tearsrollingdownhercheeks 36 5 Thereisnobus wehadtowalkhome Therebeingnobus wehadtowalkhome 6 Helefttheroom thedoorclosed Helefttheroomwiththedoorclosed 7 Iftimepermits weshallvisitthezoo Timepermitting weshallvisitthezoo 37 Practice5 KEYS PartIWritingWhyaSenseofHumorIsImportantAsenseofHumor God sgreatestgifttomankind isuniversallyconsideredthemostvaluablepersonalityasset Itisbornwitheveryperson sheart buthastobecultivated Apersonwithouthumorisjustlikeaspringwithoutflowers Inasense yourpersonalityliesinyoursenseofhumor 38 Humorcanenhancephysicalaswellasmentalwell being Ithelpsusbearourburdens lessenourtension overcomeourfrustration relaxourbodymuscles anddissolvecountlesstriflesandirritations Withacrackofjokes allourworries sadnessandtensionandtirednessdisperselikemistandsmoke andwearefullofvimandvigoronceagain Humorhelpsusliveinharmonywithothers Itisunavoidabletohavemisunderstandingandtensionwithothers 39 duringworkorstudy Buthumorisarubbersword itallowsyoutomakeapointwithoutdrawingblood Moreover humorcanworkasa pacifier injectingalightnoteintothetouchysituationtoeaseproblemsquickerthanangrywordsorquarrels Equippedwiththissecretweapon youcanalwayskeepongoodtermswithothers Adaywithoutlaughter says 40 CharlieChaplin themostwell knownBritishcomedian isadaywasted Asenseofhumorisreallyoneofthekeystohappiness Itgiveszesttolifetomakeitworthliving PartIIReadingComprehension1 NG2 Y3 Y4 N5 NG6 N7 Y8 stoveswiththeirfiresstillburning peopleweretrappedbetweenthefloodwatersandtheflames9 toomuchrain poorconstructionandmanagement10 2000to7000 afive month oldbaby 41 PartIIIListeningComprehensionSectionA11 D12 A13 B14 D15 C16 B17 A18 D19 A20 B21 D22 B23 C24 D25 CSectionB26 C27 A28 C29 A