公文写作_cet4写作技巧讲练

CET4WritingSkills Practices 关于CET4作文 作文分数为142分 占总分的15 要求在30分钟之内写出一篇120词左右的短文 作文体裁包括 议论文 说明文 应用文等 CET4作文样题 PartI Writing 30minutes Directions Forthispart youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledOnlineShopping Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese 1 现在网上购物已成为一种时尚2 网上购物有很多好处 但也有不少问题3 我的建议 CET4作文结构示意图 题目 段落I 主题句 推展句1 论据或例证 下同 推展句2 推展句3 段落II 主题句 推展句1 推展句2 推展句3 结尾句1 根据需要而定 可有可无 段落III 主题句 推展句1 推展句2 推展句3 结尾句1 统揽全文 呼应中心 WritingSkills LectureSeries 第一步 审题 1 2分钟 1 题目 aboutonlineshopping2 三个段首句 A段 提出现象B段 分析现象C段 表明个人观点 建议 第二步 布局 5分钟 用英语思维 段落I 主题句 推展句1 对现象的具体阐述 推展句2 结果 段落II 主题句 好处 推展句1 原因1 convenient time saving 推展句2 原因2 diversityofproductstochoosefrom 主题句 问题 推展句1 原因1 beaddicted becheated 段落III 推展句1 budget 推展句2 choosecertainonlineshopsorsalers 结尾句1 统揽全文 呼应中心 第三步 行文 15 18分钟 用英语思维 A段 第一句 完全翻译提示 CurrentlyNowadaysWiththedevelopmentofeconomyandscience theinternet onlineshoppingbecomesmoreandmorecommonandithasbecomeafashion 近义表达法 受欢迎 onlineshoppingisgrowinginpopularityeveronlineshoppingiswelcomed 行文 15 18分钟 用英语思维 句子太简单 扩展 同位语 定语从句 状语 同位语 网上购物是什么 在网络上购买商品与服务的行为OnlineshoppingisanactofbuyingproductsandservicesovertheInternet定语从句 网上购物的影响 大大地震动了 影响了我们的生活方式Onlineshoppinghasbeensignificantlyshockingourlifestyles hasmadeabigimpactonourlifestyles 合并下列三句 Onlineshoppingisgrowinginpopularityever OnlineshoppingisanactofbuyingproductsandservicesovertheInternet Onlineshoppinghasbeensignificantlyshockingourlifestyles hasmadeabigimpactonourlifestyles 合并 Onlineshopping asanactofbuyingproductsandservicesovertheInternet isgrowinginpopularityever whichhasbeensignificantlyshockingourlifestyles 行文 15 18分钟 用英语思维 状语 onlineshoppingiswelcomedby onlineshoppingiswelcomedbymostpeople especiallyyoungpeople由于 becauseof duetodiversereasons 合并 Onlineshoppingiswelcomedbymostpeopleduetodiversereasons Onlineshopping asanactofbuyingproductsandservicesovertheInternet iswelcomedbymostpeopleduetodiversereasons 行文 15 18分钟 用英语思维 第二句 Who what Who Manyofficeemployees universitystudentsWhat havethehabitofonlineshopping showtheirinterestinitmorethanshoppinginthesupermarketItisestimatedthathalfoftheofficeemployeesorthreefourthsuniversitystudentshavethehabitofonlineshoppingandmorethan12 showtheirinterestinitmorethanshoppinginthesupermarket 第三句 resultWhatispredictableisthatthetrendlikethiswillundoubtedlycontinueintheyearstocome 增加句子结构复杂性 行文 15 18分钟 用英语思维 第二段第一句翻译提示Admittedly shoppingontheInternethasalotofadvantages amongwhichthemostimportantisperhapsitsconvenience 第二句原因一 time savingwho what why Who Somepeople particularlythosewhoworkforlengthyhours 行文 15 18分钟 用英语思维 What nothaveadequatetimetoshopduringregulartradinghours合并 Somepeople particularlythosewhoworkforlengthyhoursdonothaveadequatetimetovisitthestoreduringregulartradinghours whileonlineretailersalloworderstwenty fourhoursaday 表对比 行文 15 18分钟 用英语思维 Somepeople particularlythosewhoworkforlengthyhourshavinginadequatetimetovisitthestoreduringregulartradinghourswillfeelgreatexcitementwhenjustsittinginfrontofthecomputer kickingthekeyboardandlookingatthescreentochoosethethingtheywanttobuywithoutsteppingoutoftheroom 行文 15 18分钟 用英语思维 第二句原因二 diversityofproductsFurthermore What smore Aswell onlineshoppinggivesthecustomersthefacilitytocomparepricesandfeaturesofadiversityofproductsthankstothedetailedproductdescription 第三句原因三 lessexpensive conventionalstoresInmostoccasions theitemsarelessexpensiveonlinethanintheconventionalstores makingitanappealtomostpeople 行文 15 18分钟 用英语思维 第二段 主题句 坏处 Whilethereare Despitenumerousadvantagesofonlineshopping therearealsothreatsandfearsregarding concerning respectingthiswayofshopping 原因 不用顺序词 简要些 beaddicted becheatedBecauseofvarietiesof avarietyofchoicesandgreatconvenience peoplearelikelytobeaddictedtoonlineshopping whichwillresult resultinginoverspending Anotherproblemofonlineshoppingisencounteringmisleadingandfalseproductinformation 行文 15 18分钟 用英语思维 第三段 不需要主题句 建议要针对问题 Budget choosereputedonlineshopsFrommyperspective Inmyviewpoint InmyopinionIsuggestthatonlineshoppers should restrictthemselvestoreasonablepurchasesbysettingabudget Andbuyingonreputed reputableonlinestores onlymakingordersfromreputedonlineshopsisagoodsolutiontoensurethepleasureandcomfortoftheinternetshopping CET4作文常用词汇或套语 一 转承语 Besides inaddition moreover however nevertheless despiteof noun thefactthat inspiteof 二 列举要点 foronething foranother Ontheonehand ontheotherhand Firstly Secondly Thirdly Finally CET4作文常用词汇或套语 三 罗列观点用词 argue insistthat consider think maintainthat recommendthat suggestthat 四 描述趋势 动态用词 主要用于图表作文 increase decrease drop fall rise decline fluctuate sharply dramatically slightly greatly moderately CET4作文常用词汇或套语 五 时间词 inrecentyears inthepastfewdecades nowadays today inmoderntimes inourtimes age 六 引述个人观点用词 AsfarasIamconcerned Asforme Inmypart speakingfrommyownexperience 七 引述原因用词 Whyisthat It sprobablybecause Whathascausedtheproblem Thereasonwhy isthat CET4作文常用词汇或套语 八 总结论点用词 Tosumup Inconclusion Allinall 九 表述明确观点用词 Itgoeswithoutsayingthat Undoubtedly Nodoubt 十 引述结果用词 Asaresult Asaconsequence Asamatterofthefact 3 怎样写好英语段落 主题句的位置主题句通常放在段落的开端 其特点是开门见山地摆出问题 然后加以详细说明 其作用是使文章的结构更清晰 更具说服力 便于读者迅速地把握主题和想象全段的内容 主题句可以放在段中起到承上启下的作用 或放在段尾起概括全段的作用 但初学者比较难于掌握 因而在四级考试中 考生应尽量采用将主题句放在段落开头的写作手法 写作中常用的经典句型 1 the est 名词 that 主词 haveever seen known heard etc Ofallthefactorsthatcontributetoone ssuccess hardworkandopportunityarethemostimportantonesthatmostpeoplehaveacknowledged 2 Nothingis erthanto Vor Nothingis more 形容词 thanto V Nothingismoreimportantthantoreceivegoodeducation Nothingismoredifficultthantobesuccessfulbothinfamilylifeandpersonalcareerinone slife 3 Thereisnodenyingthat S V 不可否认 Thereisnodenyingthatthequalitiesofourlifehavegonefrombadtogood Thereisnodenyingthatourglobeisbeingthreatenedbyenvironmentalpollution 4 Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat 句子 全世界都知道 Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthattreesareindispensabletous 全世界都知道树木对我们是不可或缺的 Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthattheeconomicglobalizationishavingmoreandmoreinfluenceonourlives 5 Thereisnodoubtthat 句子 毫无疑问 Thereisnodoubtthatoureducationalsystemleavessomethingtobedesired 毫无疑问 我们的教育制度令人不满意 Thereisnodoubtthatpeaceanddevelopmenthavebecometheessentialaspectsinourmoderntimes 毫无疑问 和平与发展已经成为当今时代的主流 6 Anadvantageof isthat 句子 的优点是 Anadvantageofusingthesolarenergyisthatitwon tcreate produce anypollution Anadvantageofkeepingpetsisthatpetscanbecomepeople sgoodcompanions 7 Thereasonwhy 句子 isthat 句子 的原因是 Thereasonwhywehavetogrowtreesisthattheycanprovideuswithfreshair ThereasonwhypeoplechoosetomakefriendsonlineisprobablythattheywanttobroadentheirsocialcirclesthroughInternet 8 So 形容词 be 主词 that 句子 是如此 以致于 Sopreciousistimethatwecan taffordtowasteit 时间是如此珍贵 我们经不起浪费它 SorewardingiscollegelifethatthereisnothingthatIwilltradeforit 9 Adj as Subject 主词 be S V 虽然 Richasourcountryis thequalitiesofourlivingarebynomeanssatisfactory bynomeans innoway onnoaccount一点也不 虽然我们的国家富有 我们的生活品质绝对令人不满意 10 The er S V the er S V 越是 越是 Theharderyouwork themoreprogressyoumake 越是努力 你就会越进步 Themorebooksweread themorelearnedwebecome 我们书读越多 我们就越有学问 11 By Ving can 凭借 能够 Bytakingexercise wecanalwaysstayhealthy 凭借运动 我们能够始终保持健康 Bybeingfriendlytoothers wewillmakeallkindsoffriendswhereverwego 12 enable Object 受词 to V 使 能够 Listeningtomusicenableustofeelrelaxed 听音乐使我们能够感觉轻松 Readingextensivelywillenableustoacquireallkindsofknowledgefrombooks 13 Onnoaccountcanwe V 我们绝对不能 Onnoaccountcanweignorethevalueofknowledge 我们绝对不能忽略知识的价值 Onnoaccountshallwedisregardtheexistenceanddignityofothers 14 Itistime S 过去式 该是 的时候了 Itistimetheauthoritiesconcernedtookproperstepstosolvethetrafficproblems 该是有关当局采取适当的措施来解决交通问题的时候了 Itishightimethatwerealizedthenegativeeffectsofstudents playingPCgamesinclasshours 15 Itisconceivablethat 句子 可想而知的 Itisobviousthat 句子 明显的 Itisapparentthat 句子 显然的 Itisconceivablethatknowledgeplaysanimportantroleinourlife Itisobviousthatthedevelopmentofanationreliesmuchontalentsandthecultivationoftalentsdependsoneducation 16 Itpaysto V 是值得的 Justasasayinggoes givesomeonearoseandthefragranceremainsinyourhand Soitpaystohelpothers 有句话说得好 给人玫瑰 手有余香 因此 帮助别人是值得的 Itpaystoinvestoneducationinthelongrun 17 bebasedon 以 为基础 建立在 之上 Theprogressofthesocietyisbasedonharmony 社会的进步是以和谐为基础的 Asisknowntoall therelationshipbetweentwocountriesisbasedonequalityandmutualinterests 18 Sparenoeffortto V 不遗余力地去 Weshouldsparenoefforttobeautifyourenvironment 我们应该不遗余力的美化我们的环境 Althoughitisstillalongwaytogo wemustsparenoeffortstomakeoursocietymoreharmoniousanddeveloped 19 Haveagreatinfluenceon 对 有很大的影响 Internetishavinggreaterinfluencesonourlives Itcannotbeignoredthatourdietsarehavingmoresignificantinfluencesonourhealth 20 dogoodto 对 有益 doharmto 对 有害 Readingdoesgoodtoourmind 读书对心灵有益 Overworkdoesharmtohealth 工作过度对健康有害 21 Poseagreatthreatto 对 造成一大威胁 Pollutionposesagreatthreattoourexistence 污染对我们的生存造成一大威胁 Terrorismhasbeenposingagreatthreattothepeaceandstabilityoftheworld 22 doone sutmostto V doone sbest 尽全力去 Weshoulddoourutmosttoachieveourgoalinlife 我们应尽全力去实现我们的人生目标 写作中常用的句式 1 复合句 定语从句名词性从句状语从句 2 非谓语动词短语 不定式短语现在分词短语过去分词短语 3 虚拟句式 If Without Butfor that Itishightimethat Suggest advocate propose that 4 强调句式 Itbe that 用于表达对某种因素的强调 e g Itisoutofremarkablebenefitsthatmanymanufacturersproducefakeorpoor qualityproducts 5 倒装句式 Bynomeans Onnoaccount Never 引导的部分倒装结构 用以加强观点 e g Bynomeansshallweseelessofthenegativeeffectsthatchattingonlinemighthaveonourlives 6 并列句式 常见由notonly butalso aswellas inaddition moreover onthecontrary therefore asaresult等连接的并列句式 7 对比或比照句式 Justas e g Justaseverycoinhastwosides hasitsadvantagesanddisadvantages Like Unlike Likemostcountriesintheworld Chinaisalsofacedwiththesocialproblemsofagingpopulation 作文练习题 CET作文练习题 KeepingPets随着生活水平的提高 越来越多的人喜欢养宠物 分析潜在的原因 养宠物对动物是祸是福 Model Inrecentyears withtheimprovementofpeople slivingstandard moreandmoreChinesepeoplechoosetokeepallkindsofpets suchasdogs cats parrotsandthelike Whydosomanypeoplelikekeepingpets Ontheonehand somepeoplepursuementalsatisfactiononbasisofmaterialenjoymentbykeepingpets ontheotherhand peoplekeeppetsinhopeofrelievingtheirworkpressure Inaddition someoldorsinglepeoplekeepcompanywiththeirpetstoeasetheirloneliness Lastbutnotleast keepingpetsisalsoareflectionofpeople sgrowingawarenessofanimalprotection Iskeepingpetsablessingormisfortuneforanimals Justaseverycoinhastwosides keepingpetshasitspositiveandnegativesenses Ontheonehand keepingpetshelpstoenhancepeople sawarenessofanimalprotectionandtodevelophumanaffectionsforanimals Ontheotherhand livinginhumancommunitieswilldepriveanimalsoftheirwildnaturetogetherwiththeirfreedomandabilitiestosurvive whichwillturnouttobeamisfortuneforanimals Ifwehumanbeingscantreatourpetsinmoreproperways maybewecanbalancebetweenthegoodandbadsidesofkeepingpets 提示 勿提及传播疾病 玩物丧志等 以免离题 CET作文练习题 MakingFriendsOnline为什么许多人热衷于网上交友 网上交友的利与弊 我的看法 Model WiththerapiddevelopmentofITtechnology Internethasbecomeamostadvancedmeansofcommunicationforpeople Asaresult moreandmorepeopleenjoymakingfriendsonline Justaseverycoinhastwosides makingfriendsonlinehasbecomeadouble edgedswordforpeople Ontheonehand Internetprovidesuswithwidersocialcirclesinwhichwecanmeetandmakefriendswithpeopleinallpartsoftheworld andwecanbroadenourhorizonbymakingfriendsofdifferentraces sexes culturesandprofessions Ontheotherhand sinceInternetisavirtualworld wecaneasilyfallintothetrapshiddenbehindit Moreover addictionstothevirtualspacemay inthelongrun depriveusofthenormalsocialabilitiesandfurtherisolateusfromtherealsociety AsfarasIamconcerned sincemenaretheholdersofthedouble edgedsword it salluptoustomakegooduseofth