(浙江卷)2016年高考英语母题题源系列 专题02 书面表达(含解析).doc

母题二书面表达【母题来源】【2016浙江】【母题原题】【2016浙江】书面表达（满分30分）“Planning is good ,but doing is better”是一句英国名言。请以此为题目用英语写一篇100-120词的短文。要求如下： 1.简述你对这句名言的理解； 2.用一个具体事例加以说明； 3.给出恰当的结尾。注意：1.文章的标题已给出（不计词数）： 2.文中不得以任何形式透露地区、学校、老师或同学姓名等真实信息，否则按作弊行为认定。Planning Is Good ,But Doing Is Better【答案】One possible student versionPlanning Is Good ,But Doing Is Better Planning is good as it decides in detail how we do. However, a plan can bear no fruit without being actually carried out. My experience in the English speech contest last October is a case in point. A month before the event, I spent hours working out a schedule outlining my goals and practical steps. After that, I set out to read widely for an inspiring topic, wrote a speech, and practiced its delivery in beautiful pronunciation with good public speech skills. I finally came out of the contest as the first prize winner. I know how I achieved my success. It came from good planning and better doing combined.考点：考查开放式作文【命题意图】本题考查了学生的语言的运用能力和发挥想象的能力。从微观上考查了学生写句子的能力。【考试方向】把语言知识和能力结合起来，综合考查学生的语言运用能力和临场发挥的能力。【得分要点】本篇范文短小精悍，结构合理，语言简练，时态人称准确，很好的完成了写作任务。在文章开头作者紧扣题目，提出自己对plan的理解，同时引出下文，然后用自己的亲身经历表明要将计划付诸实施这点非常重要。在文中作者用到了短语in detail , bear no fruit ,carry out, set out to等短语，避免了文章句式的单一。此外，还用到了宾语从句how we do , It came from good planning and better doing combined.等，这些都给朴素的语言带来了亮点。【母题1】【来源】2016届广东惠州市高三上学期第三次调研考试英语试卷（带解析）书面表达假如你是高三学生李华，期末获评年级“进步之星”。你校英语俱乐部邀请你做一个励志的英语演讲。请写一篇标题为：“Time And Tide Wait For No Man” (机不可失，时不再来)的演讲词，内容须包括:1.你对该格言的理解感悟;2.体现该格言含义的个人经历;3.表达对其他同学的希望。注意：1. 词数100字左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 演讲稿开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数;4. 参考词汇：进步之星：“Star of Progress”Dear fellow students,Its my great honor to be invited here to give a speech. The topic of my speech today is “Time and tide wait for no man”._Thats all. Thank you!【答案】 one possible versionDear fellow students,Its my great honor to be invited here to give a speech. The topic of my speech today is “Time and tide wait for no man”.In my understanding, the proverb means that if we allow the invaluable time to waste, it never comes back to you. As a Senior Three student, time is limited for study, so none can afford to waste time.I still remember I slipped away the golden time in playing two years ago, as a consequence of which I fell far behind others. Realizing that opportunity seldom knocks twice, I seized every moment to study. Gradually I made great progress and was awarded the honorable title of “Star of Progress”.Dear fellows, with Gaokao drawing near, we should not be content with what we have done. Value your time from now on and it will bring you benefits.Thats all.Thank you! 【解析】 试题分析：本篇书面表达属于提纲作文，根据提示写一篇演讲稿。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确要点就是主要内容。2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象，按照一定逻辑关系来写。本文写作时可以按照提示的三个方面（1.你对该格言的理解感悟;2.体现该格言含义的个人经历;3.表达对其他同学的希望。）的内容进行介绍。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该主要用一般现在和过去时，人称为第一人称。4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如Realizing that，which 引导的宾语从句，复合结构with Gaokao drawing near。此外还有短语afford to、made great progress和be content with等的使用。连词as，and，so 使文章内容更具有层次感，也使语言更加连贯。考点：考查提纲作文。【母题2】【来源】2016届福建福安市高级中学高三3月月考英语试卷（带解析）书面表达 “Your family are Gods gift to you, as you are to them.” 是1984年诺贝尔和平奖得主Desmond Tutu 曾就个人与家人关系说过的一句话。请认真品味这句话，然后按要求用英语写一篇短文。内容要求：1. 你对这句话的理解；2. 结合具体事例说明；3. 恰当的结尾。注意：1. 短文开头已给出，不计入总数；2. 文中不能出现考生的具体信息；3. 词数：120左右Desmond Tutu, winner of the Nobel Peace Prize in 1984, once said, “Your family are Gods gift to you, as you are to them.”, which tells us that【答案】One possible versionDesmond Tutu, winner of the Nobel Peace Prize in 1984, once said, “Your family are Gods gift to you, as you are to them.”, which tells us that parents are to us what lighthouses are to ships. Without parents, we would get lost when we grow up; without us, parents would feel sad and lonely.Im the apple of my parents eye. As a pupil, I couldnt remember English words, often failing exams. So bitter was the feeling of being defeated that I thought of giving up. To encourage me, they told me to fill a glass with rapid running water. Unexpectedly, I found however hard I tried , my glass was only half full. Only then, did I realize what I needed to learn English well were right ways. With their help, I mastered the methods of memorizing vocabulary. Now, English has become my strength, which has also become their pride and joy.No doubt both parents and we are important to each other.【亮点说明】Only then, did I realize what I needed to learn English well were right ways.运用了