重点：图画大作文示例翻译.doc

绿色倾斜句：为可替换上一句的句子，防模板重复，第一次看只看黑色紫色：自己填充的以2011年爱心和时政热点”小悦悦事件”人们冷漠缺乏爱心来说明同样一篇模板的变通。( 第一段，简单描述图画) Shocked /moved as me, what I have seen in this picture/cartoon/ drawing/ painting whichis so symbolic/ interesting /educational and instructive ,as is apparently demonstrated above, 爱心像一盏明灯越在黑暗中越亮love is a lamp which functions perfectly only in darkness.（描述图画内容）.( The other picture informs us that_如果有图二，用来描述图二) . what a philosophic and thought-provoking/ compelling scene it is！（出题的哪幅图画不让人深思呢？）（最后一句的可替换句However symbolic/ interesting /educational and instructive it may seem at first glimpse ,this cartoon does carry rather thought-provoking/ compelling implications）( 换个说法的第一段，简单描述图画)I felt shocked / moved, when I see this instructive /symbolic/ interesting /educational picture, I find its apparent lesson demonstrated in it, 爱心像一盏明灯越在黑暗中越亮love is a lamp which functions perfectly only in darkness.（描述图画内容）.( The other picture shows _用来描述图二，如果有图二)， a philosophical and thought-provoking scene.我被图画描述的内容深深的震撼/感动了，它是这么的有象征意义/有趣/有教育意义/有启发性。像上幅图画/漫画中描绘的那样_。这是多么有哲理和让人深思/引人注目的场景啊!(你第一眼看它也许会觉得它有象征意义/有趣/有教育意义/有启发性，然而这幅卡通图画确实有让人深思/有引人注目的意义)（消极主题意义的第二段，原因段）Obviously /Evidently, the drawing mirrors a current phenomenon of lack of人们爱心缺乏 love in people（主旨）is both inspiring and thought-provokingwhich is so thought-provoking and inspiring 替换is both inspiring and thought-provoking. You dont have to look very far to identify the reasons for it. For one thing , with the miraculous economic better-off during more than thirty-year of reform and opening up, people tend to pay more attention to self-interest /their own interest and talk less about the spirit of奉献我们的爱的精神devotion of love.（主旨词）（注意第一个原因句前半句是国情后半句是意志品质精神类，很容易万能）For the other ,there are an increasing number of people who do not realize 爱心对建设和谐社会的重要性the importance of love in constructing a harmonious society（主旨）is indispensable to us（人们的意识也容易万能、最多换个主语比如政府、追星者、学生，即主语换成当事人）. Undoubtedly, Just as we sweep our rooms, so we should clear updated ideas in our minds./ 最后一句可替换句Any people, who is blind to this point, may pay a heavy price明显的是，图画生动形象的描写了一个让我们受到启发和深思的目前社会现象-这种现象的形成有很多原因，在这里我只说下最典型的原因。一方面，随着改革开放带来的30年的经济奇迹，人们把精力放在了自我的兴趣上，很少再谈论-。从另一方面说，有越来越多人对-不了解也是不可忽视的重要原因。毫无疑问，就像要打扫屋子一样，我们也要清除头脑中错误的东西。任何人忽略这一点都将付出沉重代价（积极主旨意义的第二段，原因段）Obviously /Evidently, the drawing mirrors a current phenomenon of爱心对社会的重要性the importance of love in society（主旨）which is both inspiring and thought-provoking . You dont have to look very far to find out / identify the reasons for it. For one thing ,with the miraculous economic better-off brought about by more than thirty-year of reform and opening up/ with the miraculous economic better-off during more than thirty-year of reform and opening up, people tend to pay more attention to love，最好的例证是陈光标love ，a typical example is Chen Guangbiao（主旨）.For another ,there are increasing numbers people who are realizing爱心对和谐社会的重要性the importance of love in building a harmonious society（主旨）is indispensable to us. Undoubtedly, 奉献爱心devotion of love（主旨） to us is just like water to fish and wing to bird. 最后一句比喻句的替换句What blood vessel is to a mans body, that _爱心love (主旨)is to our success/society. /What salt is to food, that_爱心love (主旨) )is to our success/society.明显的是，图画生动形象的描写了一个让我们受到启发和深思的目前社会现象这种现象的形成有很多原因，在这里我只说下最典型的原因。一方面，随着改革开放带来的30多年的经济奇迹，人们能把越来越多的精力放在了。从另一方面说，有越来越多人对意识的增强也是不可忽视的重要原因。毫无疑问，-对于我们就像水对鱼、翅膀对鸟儿一样。替换句_对于我们成功/社会恰如血脉对人的身体一样/_对于我们成功/社会恰如盐对食物一样。（第 三 段，措施段、总结段，一般用于消极意义主题）From my point of view/ As far as Im concerned/ personally , lack of爱心love（主旨词）will lead to the corruption of public moral and irredeemable financial losses ,and even building harmonious society will become an empty talk. Some urgent measures should be taken before its too late. On one hand, “eight honors and eight disgraces” advanced/ put forward by H u Jin t a o should be publicized so as to enhance our scenario of traditional virtues. On the other hand ,its the responsibility of the government and mass media to enhance peoples awareness of爱心love (主旨)as soon as possible ,and at the same time ,strengthening the regulations and Laws should be done.(替换句On the other hand, we should appeal to authorities that explicit laws were worked out （implemented） to control/protect爱心意识peoples consciousness of love).Only when these above-mentioned steps are carried out can we succeed in solving the problem, and our society clearly benefits as a result /and make our society enjoyable ,vibrant，and enthusiastic（efficient高效的、systematic有系统的、temperate 稳健的）. （最后一句替换句In brief, only in a reasonable, prosperous and healthy atmosphere can we witness the ideal scene in which people can enjoy their life to the uttermost.）我认为，如果缺少将导致公共道德的危机和不可估量的经济损失，甚至建设社会主义和谐社会将成为一句空话。在造成严重后果之前，需要马上采取及时有效的措施。一方面，胡主席提出的八荣八耻作为社会基本准则必须在人民大众中普及，来提高人们的传统道德。另一方面，尽可能快的提高人们的意识，是政府、媒体、学校的责任。于此同时，要加强关于的法律法规建设。只要以上提到的措施实施了，我们的世界才是适意的、充满活力的、充满热情的。（替换句：总之,只有在一个合理的、繁荣、健康的氛围中我们才能见证人们可以享受他们的生活已经到了极处的理想场景。） ( 第四段，备用段，即举例段、意义段、总结段，用于不适合写措施的题目，可代替第三段或第二段，一般用于积极意义主题)looking around, we can find similar happenings are too numerous to list, the most persuasive example is George Soros.His对东欧国家的爱心love for eastern European countries（主旨）has been pivotal in helping eastern European countries develop democratic societies and market economies （哪件积极意义的事不能促进社会和经济发展呢所以万能的例子）. If he hadnt done the good deed , eastern European countries would not get the achievements now. we should learn from him so as to keep bright the key that opens the treasury of great achievement . Today, the sprit of奉献爱心dedication of love（主旨）can also enlarge our scope of knowledge and enrich our spiritual civilization broaden our horizon and even be conducive to the building-up a harmonious society/world. In addition, to a country, its status and international image can be elevated by 爱心意识awareness of love（主旨）Altogether/ In summary/ To conclude , our personal growth a