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HowtoGetYourCompositionAdvanced good Whatkindofwritingisgood Bewell organized Usegrammaticalstructures Useadvancedvocabulary Uselinkingwordstomakewritingfluent 已找到的住处 11 芳草街 下一站建新华文学校 书面表达 1 假如你是李华 你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文 来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房 请根据图画提供的信息 写信介绍住房的情况 并告知住房面积为25平方米 月租500元 注意 1 词数150左右 2 参考词汇 房租rent n 1 2 3 Bob Ihavesearchedaflatforyounearyournewschool ThebuildingisinFangcaostreet Itisintwofloors Ithasasleepingroom abathroomandachicken Itis25metersquares Itisveryconvenitforyoutogotoschool becausethehouseisnearthebusstop Andlastbutnotleast therentis50yuanspermonth Ican thelptomeetingyouatthegateofJianxinChineseSchoolsoon Yours LiHua found bedroom abathroom kitchen convenient 500yuan waittomeet onthe2ndfloorwitha squaremeters Errors 用词标点介词冠词拼写 DearBob Score DearBob Howiseverythinggoing I mwritingtotellyousomethingabouttheflatIfoundforyou ItisquitenearJianXinChineseSchool Ifyouwanttogetthere youcanjusttaketheNo 11busatFangcaoStreetstopwhichisjustunderyourwindow andthenextstopistheschool Besides theflatisverycomfortable Itisnotverybigwiththeareaof25squaremetres butisveryconvenientwithabedroom abathroomandakitchen Therentis500yuanpermonth Ithinkitcanmeetyourneedsverywell Bestwishestoyouandpleaseremembermetoyourfamily Yours LiHua DearBob Howiseverythinggoing I mwritingtotellyousomethingabouttheflatIhavefoundforyou ItisquitenearJianXinChineseSchool Ifyouwanttogetthere youcanjusttaketheNo 11busatFangcaoStreetstopwhichisjustblewyourwindow andthenextstopistheschool Besides theflatisverycomfortable Itisnotverybigwithanareaof25squaremeters butisveryconvenientwithabedroom abathroomandakitchen Therentis500yuanpermonth Ithinkitcanmeetyourneedsverywell Bestwishestoyouandpleaseremembermetoyourfamily Yours LiHua Goodbeginning Goodending Linkingwords Well organizedsample Grammaticalstructures DearBob I vereceivedyourlettersayingthatyouarecomingtostudyChineseinSeptember Iamhappyandcan twaittoseeyou Ihavefoundaflatforyou ItislocatedonthesecondfloorofaflatinFangcaoStreet InfrontofthebuildingisabusstopwhereyoucantakethebustoJianxinChineseSchool Itisveryconvenientandnear Theflathasthreerooms thatis akitchen abedroomandabathroom Itcoversanareaof25squaremeters Youonlyneedtopay500yuanforitpermonth Isn titagoodbargain Ihopeyouwilllikeit Yours LiHua idiomaticwords ITV是目前比较流行的网络互动电视 它极大的方便了人们收看电视节目 但是 网络电视也有其不利的一面 用户 subscriber传输速度transmittingspeed词数150左右 开头已给 不计入总词数 ITVisaverypopulardevicecurrentlyusedbypeopletowatchTVprograms 书面表达 2 Outline organization let smakethingsbetter Vocabulary Grammaticalstructures Linkingwords ITV是目前比较流行的网络互动电视 它极大的方便了人们收看电视节目 但是 网络电视也有其不利的一面 用户 subscriber传输速度transmittingspeed词数150左右 开头已给 不计入总词数 ITVisaverypopulardevicecurrentlyusedbypeopletowatchTVprograms Part 1 Part 2 Part 3 Part 4 outline ITV是目前比较流行的网络互动电视 它极大的方便了人们收看电视节目 但是 网络电视也有其不利的一面 用户 subscriber传输速度transmittingspeed词数150左右 开头已给 不计入总词数 ITVisaverypopulardevicecurrentlyusedbypeopletowatchTVprograms Part 1 Part 2 Part 3 Part 4 操作简单 只要轻轻一按 就可以得到大量可供选择的节目和电影 grammaticalstructures Aslongasyoupushabuttonslightly youcangetalotofprogramsandfilms Pushabuttonslightly andyoucangetalotofprogramsandfilms Onlybypressingabuttonslightlycanyougetalotofprogramsandfilms 搜索信息方便 提供或下载即时信息如天气 商品价格 出行等 Itisconvenientforyoutosearchforanddownloadthenewestinformationonbusiness weather ortravel 形式主语 grammaticalstructures 点播音乐 电影 稍作选择 就可观看最新 最受其他用户欢迎的电影和电视剧节目 Youcanordermusicandfilms Youcanwatchthenewestandmostpopularprograms Theseprogramsarepopularamongothersubscribers Ifyoulikemusicorfilms youcanmakeaselection andyouwillbeabletowatchthenewestfilmsandTVprogramspopularwithothersubscribers 并列复合句 grammaticalstructures 1Whensomeonehurtsus weshouldwriteitdowninsand Thewindsofforgivenessoverthesandcanblowitaway 从句 2Wemayhavemanydifficulties Butwehavedecidedtobuildanothermiddleschoolinthecity 从句 3Hedidnotknowwhathadhappeneduntilhereadthenewsinthenewspaper 倒装 Heiscleverbuthedoesnotworkhard 倒装 5Ifeachofusrealizestheimportanceofwater 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addto givesriseto vocabulary SuddenlyIthoughtoutagoodidea Agoodideasuddenly me 高级 Asaresult theplanwasafailure Theplan afailure 高级 Asfarmersstillmakeupmorethanhalfofthepopulation iftheirgenerallivingconditionscanbeimproved itwillbegoodforthewholenation Asfarmersstill morethanhalfofthepopulation iftheirgenerallivingconditionscanbeimproved thewholenationwill 高级 occurredto turnedouttobe accountfor benefit vocabulary ITV是目前比较流行的网络互动电视 它极大的方便了人们收看电视节目 但是 网络电视也有其不利的一面 用户 subscriber传输速度transmittingspeed词数150左右 开头已给 不计入总词数 ITVisaverypopulardevicecurrentlyusedbypeopletowatchTVprograms ITV是目前比较流行的网络互动电视 它极大的方便了人们收看电视节目 但是 网络电视也有其不利的一面 用户 subscriber传输速度transmittingspeed词数150左右 开头已给 不计入总词数 ITVisaverypopulardevicecurrentlyusedbypeopletowatchTVprograms 互动电视的不利因素 增加家庭经济负担 网络传输速度慢 Itgivesrisetosomeproblems ITVwilladdtoone shouse holdfinancialburdens Thenettransmittingspeediscomparativelyslow Isthisagoodparagraph 互动电视的不利因素 增加家庭经济负担 网络传输速度慢 Despitethoseconveniences italsogivesrisetosomeproblems Foronething ITVwilladdtoone shouse hold sfinancialburden Foranother thenettransmittingspeediscomparativelyslow Isthisagoodparagraph Timesequencewords Causeandeffectwords Contrastingwords Additionwords 注意句子的组织和篇章结构 合理地使用语句间的连接成分 使上下连贯通顺 Timesequencewords firsly secondly finally intheend etcCaseandeffectwords nowthat thanksto dueto asaresult of inthatcase therefore thusContrastingwords onthecontrary comparedwith to similarlyAdditionwords moreover furthermore inaddition to moreimportantly worsestill tomakethingsworse 注意句子的组织和篇章结构