饼图和图表写作.ppt

IELTSWRITING LessonNine 小作文2 饼状图 PieChart的审题过程 1 看文字信息2 标题审题标1 2 33 极端数据及其周围 与之接近 数据4 一般数据5 落单数据 TASKI 1 每个饼块在两个饼中排名第 占 2 分类说 左饼到右饼上升 下降 保持不变3 每段中具体描写每个饼块 突出特点4 写完要素后将两个饼的数量比较一下 若两个饼的总量有不同 需要交代一下5 学会丰富百分比的表达和 占 的表达 不要一直用数字加百分比的格式 如25 特定的数字可以采取多样性的表达 如25 aquarterof 50 halfof 50 a orthemajorityof TASKI 两个饼 TASKI 占据 的讲法 A占了数据的百分比occupyconstitutemakeuptheresttheremainder TASKI A占了数据的百分比THEREBE数据做主语Thepercentageof is 饼图的三句万能句型 1 数据 抄题 导入宾语Band52 主语 占据 先特征 后数据 Band63 剩余数据Band7 解决方案 1 把相同的属性的柱状用线条勾画出来 以线状图或者是饼状图的方法来写 2 完成两维分析 TASKI 柱状图 1 将相同属性的柱子顶端连接起来2 若横坐标是数字轴或时间轴 按曲线图写 否则按饼状图写法写P63 TASKI 柱状图 Thegraphshowsthechangingpatternsincommutingbytrain car tubeorbusforcommutersinLondonintheyears1960 1980and2000 Thenumberofpeopleusingtrainsatfirstrosefromjustunder20 in1960toabout28 in1980 butthenfellbacktoabout23 in2000 Useofthetubehasbeenrelativelystable fallingfromaround27 ofcommutersin1960to22 in1980 butclimbingbacktoreach25 by2000 Ontheotherhand theuseofcarsincreasedsteadilyfromjustover5 in1960to23 in1980 reachingalmost40 by2000 whereasthepopularityofbuseshasdeclinedsince1960 fallingfromjustunder35 in1960to27 in1980andonly15 in2000 TASKI 表格题审题顺序 确定写作顺序 横 纵 表格审题编号 先趋势 后数据在表格左边空白区域标上trend写出alltrends那句话 总分句 2min在表格右边空白区域进行数据方法的编号2 3min进行数据的描写10min TASKI TABLE1 表格的描述顺序是以时间 趋势 作为主线 非时间作为辅线2 极端数字举例法3 范围法4 平均值举例法5 类比法6 反比法 TASKI 类比的四种句型 1 Thiswasthesimilarcasewith 2 Thiswastrueof 3 Sodid 4 Thiscanbeparalleledwith 反比的三种句型 1 Thiswastheoppositewith 2 Thiswasconversewith 3 Thiswascontraryto TASKI 混合图 WRITINGTASK1Youshouldspendabout20minutesonthistask ThetwopiechartsshowtheproportionyoungmenandyoungwomenwenttoGymandthebarchartbelowshowshowoftentheydidinLondonlastyear Writeareportforauniversitylecturerdescribingtheinformationshownbelow Youshouldwriteatleast150words TASKI WecanseetheproportionofyoungmenandyoungwomenwenttoGymfromthetwopiechartsandthebarchartshowshowmanytimestheywenttherelastyear Ingeneral femaleswenttoGymlessfrequentlythanmalesandexercisedmostlytwiceinaweek ThepiechartshowsthatabouttwothirdofthemalepopulationwenttoGymlastyear whileonlylessthanhalfofthefemalepopulationwentthere ThehighestpercentageofwomenwhowenttoGymwasapproximately33 wasfortwiceinaweek However thispercentagewaslessthanthepercentageofmaleswenttoGym whichwasapproximately42 Malesworkedoutthemselvesmorecommonlyforonceaday whichconstitutedjustover23 3timesinaweek about12 onceinweek approximately10 andtwiceinaday 6 FemaleswenttoGymmorecommonlythanmaleswerefor3timesinaweek 21 andonceinweek 18 Sevenpercentofmenandabout14 ofwomenseldomwenttoGym TASKI WRITINGTASK1Youshouldspendabout20minutesonthistask InJune1996 anexperimentalfluvaccinewastrailedinalargecountrytownonfemalesonly Writeareportforauniversitylecturerdescribingtheinformationshownbelow Youshouldwriteatleast150words TASKI TASKI TASKI Thefigureshowdataforafluepidemicwhichhitalargecountrytownin1996 Figure1givesthenumberofpersonswhodiedandFigure2givesthenumberofcasesofflubeforeandduringtheepidemic InFigure1itcanbeseenthatthefluwasresponsibleforthedeathsof2femalesbutnomalesintheperiodfromMarchtoMay However fromJunetoAugust therewere4femaledeathsand1maledeath FromFigure2itisclearthatthenewvaccinehadapositiveeffectonthenumberofnewcasesofflureportedinfemales Therewerejustover1000casesreportedinMay climbingrapidlytoapeakof3500inJuly Ther