英语医学论文写作实例分析.ppt

最大限度地展示您的研究成果英语医学论文写作实例分析张科宏博士长青藤编辑总裁同济大学生命科学院兼职教授Tel 021 51370992E mail ivyeditingmb Website www ivy www ivy 论文核心内容1 标题2 摘要3 正文 E mail ivyeditingmb Tel 021 51370992 www ivy 论文核心内容1 标题目的 在第一时刻抓住读者 审稿人的目光 www ivy E mail ivyeditingmb Tel 021 51370992 论文核心内容1 标题目的 在第一时刻抓住读者 审稿人的目光技巧 把主要研究结果 装入 标题 www ivy E mail ivyeditingmb Tel 021 51370992 论文核心内容1 标题2 摘要目的 吸引读者 审稿人引入正文 www ivy E mail ivyeditingmb Tel 021 51370992 论文核心内容1 标题2 摘要目的 吸引读者 审稿人引入正文技巧 给出一个完整的 故事梗概 www ivy E mail ivyeditingmb Tel 021 51370992 论文核心内容1 标题2 摘要3 正文目的 将一个完整的 故事 呈现给读者 www ivy E mail ivyeditingmb Tel 021 51370992 论文核心内容1 标题2 摘要3 正文目的 将一个完整的 故事 呈现给读者技巧 换位思维 撰写稿件时以读者为中心 www ivy E mail ivyeditingmb Tel 021 51370992 常见问题 www ivy E mail ivyeditingmb Tel 021 51370992 Thecurrentstudyistherandomized placebo controlledclinicaltrial www ivy E mail ivyeditingmb Tel 021 51370992 www ivy E mail ivyeditingmb Tel 021 51370992 www ivy Thecurrentstudyistherandomized placebo controlledclinicaltrial E mail ivyeditingmb Tel 021 51370992 Thecurrentstudyisarandomized placebo controlledclinicaltrial www ivy Thecurrentstudyistherandomized placebo controlledclinicaltrial E mail ivyeditingmb Tel 021 51370992 冠词运用不当 www ivy E mail ivyeditingmb Tel 021 51370992 InternationalJournalofRadiationOncologyBiologyPhysics 67 888 896 2007Duetothecomplexmolecularpathogenesisofglioblastomamultiforme therapeuticstrategiesareevolvingfromcytotoxictherapiestomolecularapproacheswhichtargetspecificsignalingcascadesthatpromotetumorgrowthsuchascyclooxygenase 2 COX 2 arate limitingenzymeinconversionofarachidonicacidintoprostaglandins www ivy E mail ivyeditingmb Tel 021 51370992 InternationalJournalofRadiationOncologyBiologyPhysics 67 888 896 2007Duetothecomplexmolecularpathogenesisofglioblastomamultiforme therapeuticstrategiesareevolvingfromcytotoxictherapiestomolecularapproacheswhichtargetspecificsignalingcascadesthatpromotetumorgrowthsuchascyclooxygenase 2 COX 2 arate limitingenzymeinconversionofarachidonicacidintoprostaglandins www ivy E mail ivyeditingmb Tel 021 51370992 InternationalJournalofRadiationOncologyBiologyPhysics 67 888 896 2007Duetothecomplexmolecularpathogenesisofglioblastomamultiforme therapeuticstrategiesareevolvingfromcytotoxictherapiestomolecularapproacheswhichtargetspecificsignalingcascadesthatpromotetumorgrowthsuchascyclooxygenase 2 COX 2 arate limitingenzymeinconversionofarachidonicacidintoprostaglandins www ivy E mail ivyeditingmb Tel 021 51370992 InternationalJournalofRadiationOncologyBiologyPhysics 67 888 896 2007Duetothecomplexmolecularpathogenesisofglioblastomamultiforme therapeuticstrategiesareevolvingfromcytotoxictherapiestomolecularapproacheswhichtargetspecificsignalingcascadesthatpromotetumorgrowthsuchascyclooxygenase 2 COX 2 arate limitingenzymeinconversionofarachidonicacidintoprostaglandins www ivy E mail ivyeditingmb Tel 021 51370992 InternationalJournalofRadiationOncologyBiologyPhysics 67 888 896 2007Duetothecomplexmolecularpathogenesisofglioblastomamultiforme therapeuticstrategiesareevolvingfromcytotoxictherapiestomolecularapproacheswhichtargetspecificsignalingcascadesthatpromotetumorgrowthsuchascyclooxygenase 2 COX 2 arate limitingenzymeinconversionofarachidonicacidintoprostaglandins www ivy E mail ivyeditingmb Tel 021 51370992 理解困难的超长复合句 www ivy E mail ivyeditingmb Tel 021 51370992 Thefrequencyofthe03alleleoftheDRB1geneinthehepatitisBandhepatitisCgroupswassignificantlyhigherthanthecontrols However theallelefrequencyofDRB1 15inthechronichepatitisB Cgroupswaslowerthanthecontrols www ivy E mail ivyeditingmb Tel 021 51370992 Thehouseisbigenough Idon tlikeitslocation 房子够大 我不喜欢它的地点 www ivy E mail ivyeditingmb Tel 021 51370992 Theearthhasrelativelylittleiron thisnewlydiscoveredplanetcontainsmoreironthananyotherelement 地球含铁量很小 这个新发现的行星含铁高于任何其他元素 www ivy E mail ivyeditingmb Tel 021 51370992 Theearthhasrelativelylittleiron Thisnewlydiscoveredplanet incontrast containsmoreironthananyotherelement 地球含铁量很小 这个新发现的行星则相反 含铁高于任何其他元素 www ivy E mail ivyeditingmb Tel 021 51370992 Thefrequencyofthe03alleleoftheDRB1geneinthehepatitisBandhepatitisCgroupsweresignificantlyhigherthanthecontrols However theallelefrequenciesofDRB1 15inthechronichepatitisB Cgroupswerelowerthanthecontrols www ivy E mail ivyeditingmb Tel 021 51370992 Thefrequencyofthe03alleleoftheDRB1geneinthehepatitisBandhepatitisCgroupsweresignificantlyhigherthanthecontrols However theallelefrequenciesofDRB1 15inthechronichepatitisB Cgroupswerelowerthanthecontrols TheallelefrequencyofDRB1 15inthechronichepatitisB Cgroups incontrast waslowerthanthecontrols www ivy E mail ivyeditingmb Tel 021 51370992 科学逻辑表述不正确 www ivy E mail ivyeditingmb Tel 021 51370992 InternationalJournalofRadiationOncologyBiologyPhysics 67 888 896 2007Duetothecomplexmolecularpathogenesisofglioblastomamultiforme therapeuticstrategiesareevolvingfromcytotoxictherapiestomolecularapproacheswhichtargetspecificsignalingcascadesthatpromotetumorgrowthsuchascyclooxygenase 2 COX 2 arate limitingenzymeinconversionofarachidonicacidintoprostaglandins www ivy E mail ivyeditingmb Tel 021 51370992 www ivy Despiteofthecomplexmolecularpathogenesisofglioblastomamultiforme therapeuticstrategyareevolvingfromcytotoxictherapiestomolecularapproaches Activationofcyclooxygenase 2 COX 2 therate limitingenzymeinprostaglandinbiosynthesis promotestumorgrowth andthereforerepresentsapromisingtargetforintervention Duetothecomplexmolecularpathogenesisofglioblastomamultiforme therapeuticstrategiesareevolvingfromcytotoxictherapiestomolecularapproacheswhichtargetspecificsignalingcascadesthatpromotetumorgrowthsuchascyclooxygenase 2 COX 2 arate limitingenzymeinconversionofarachidonicacidintoprostaglandins E mail ivyeditingmb Tel 021 51370992 www ivy Recentevidencesuggeststhatinterleukin 17mayplayaputativeroleininnateimmunity E mail ivyeditingmb Tel 021 51370992 www ivy Recentevidencesuggeststhatinterleukin 17mayplayaputativeroleininnateimmunity E mail ivyeditingmb Tel 021 51370992 www ivy Recentevidencesuggeststhatinterleukin 17mayplayaputativeroleininnateimmunity Interleukin 17hasrecentlybeenimplicatedininnateimmunity E mail ivyeditingmb Tel 021 51370992 www ivy 概念表述重复 E mail ivyeditingmb Tel 021 51370992 www ivy ResultsInordertoexaminetheeffectsofsitagliptinonglucoselevel diabeticratsweretreatedwithvariousdosesofsitagliptin ThebloodglucoselevelwassignificantlydifferentbetweentheHandMgroupscomparedwiththeCgroup TheLgroupwasnotstatisticallydifferentfromtheCgroup E mail ivyeditingmb Tel 021 51370992 www ivy ResultsInordertoexaminetheeffectsofsitagliptinonglucoselevel diabeticratsweretreatedwithvariousdosesofsitagliptin ThebloodglucoselevelwassignificantlydifferentbetweentheHandMgroupscomparedwiththeCgroup TheLgroupwasnotstatisticallydifferentfromtheCgroup E mail ivyeditingmb Tel 021 51370992 www ivy ResultsInordertoexaminetheeffectsofsitagliptinonglucoselevel diabeticratsweretreatedwithvariousdosesofsitagliptin ThebloodglucoselevelwassignificantlydifferentbetweentheHandMgroupscomparedwiththeCgroup TheLgroupwasnotstatisticallydifferentfromtheCgroup E mail ivyeditingmb Tel 021 51370992 www ivy ResultsInordertoexaminetheeffectsofsitagliptinonglucoselevel diabeticratsweretreatedwithvariousdosesofsitagliptin ThebloodglucoselevelwassignificantlydifferentbetweentheHandMgroupscomparedwiththeCgroup TheLgroupwasnotstatisticallydifferentfromtheCgroup E mail ivyeditingmb Tel 021 51370992 www ivy ResultsInordertoexaminetheeffectsofsitagliptinonglucoselevel diabeticratsweretreatedwithvariousdosesofsitagliptin ThebloodglucoselevelwassignificantlydifferentbetweentheHandMgroupscomparedwiththeCgroup TheLgroupwasnotstatisticallydifferentfromtheCgroup ResultsSitagliptinsignificantlydecreasedbloodglucoseconcentrationindiabeticratsat10and20mg kg d butnotatalowerdoseof5mg kg d E mail ivyeditingmb Tel 021 51370992 www ivy 概念表述不到位 不具体描述 不友好 干预分组缩写 E mail ivyeditingmb Tel 021 51370992 Ananti ErbB2antibodyreversesresistanceofbreastcancercellstopaclitaxelbydown regulatingAkt NF B www ivy E mail ivyeditingmb Tel 021 51370992 Paclitaxelisthedrugofchoicewithsignificantanti tumoractivitytowardsbreastcancer ovariancancer cervicalcancer amongothers However thesuccessofpaclitaxelinthetreatmentofadvancedordrug resistantbreastcancersislimitedbecauseoflargelyassociatedhighlynon specificcytotoxicity Furthermore thereisnospecifictreatmentformetastasisthatfollowssurgery radiotherapy andchemotherapy Tumorstendtoacquireresistancetochemotherapeuticagents includingpaclitaxel Aktissuggestedtobeinvolvedinchemoresistance www ivy E mail ivyeditingmb Tel 021 51370992 www ivy Ananti ErbB2antibodyreversesresistanceofbreastcancercellstopaclitaxelbydown regulatingAkt NF B E mail ivyeditingmb Tel 021 51370992 www ivy Ananti ErbB2antibodyreversesresistanceofbreastcancercellstopaclitaxelbydown regulatingAkt NF B1 paclitaxel是治疗乳腺癌的首选药2 癌细胞长期暴露于paclitaxel产生耐药3 乳腺癌耐药的主要机理4 ErbB2 Akt NF B通路和耐药的关系 E mail ivyeditingmb Tel 021 51370992 Paclitaxelisthedrugofchoicewithsignificantanti tumoractivitytowardsbreastcancer ovariancancer cervicalcancer amongothers However thesuccessofpaclitaxelinthetreatmentofadvancedordrug resistantbreastcancersislimitedbecauseoflargelyassociatedhighlynon specificcytotoxicity Furthermore thereisnospecifictreatmentformetastasisthatfollowssurgery radiotherapy andchemotherapy Tumorstendtoacquireresistancetochemotherapeuticagents includingpaclitaxel Aktissuggestedtobeinvolvedinchemoresistance www ivy E mail ivyeditingmb Tel 021 51370992 概念层次多余 不合理 www ivy E mail ivyeditingmb Tel 021 51370992 Wangetal NeuroscienceLetters382 236 241 2005Acupuncture apearlintheTraditionalChineseMedicine hasbeenshowntobringaboutfunctionalrecoveryafterspinalcordinjury ithasbeenwidelyusedbydoctorsandfavorablyreceivedbypatients www ivy E mail ivyeditingmb Tel 021 51370992 Wangetal NeuroscienceLetters382 236 241 2005Acupuncture apearlintheTraditionalChineseMedicine hasbeenshowntobringaboutfunctionalrecoveryafterspinalcordinjury ithasbeenwidelyusedbydoctorsandfavorablyreceivedbypatients www ivy E mail ivyeditingmb Tel 021 51370992 南宋末年 金兵大举入侵中原 朝廷昏聩无力 百姓生灵涂炭 话说嵩山脚下一对杨姓夫妇 年过半百 膝下尚无子嗣 www ivy E mail ivyeditingmb Tel 021 51370992 海上起了风暴 老约翰还是开着破船驶离了港湾 南宋末年 金兵大举入侵中原 朝廷昏聩无力 百姓生灵涂炭 话说嵩山脚下一对杨姓夫妇 年过半百 膝下尚无子嗣 www ivy E mail ivyeditingmb Tel 021 51370992 Acupuncture apearlintheTraditionalChineseMedicine hasbeenshowntobringaboutfunctionalrecoveryafterspinalcordinjury ithasbeenwidelyusedbydoctorsandfavorablyreceivedbypatients Acupunctureexpeditesthefunctionalrecoveryafterspinalcordinjury www ivy E mail ivyeditingmb Tel 021 51370992 文化差异 www ivy E mail ivyeditingmb Tel 021 51370992 AbstractThepresentstudyexaminedtheroleofdopamineD4receptoronprepulseinhibitioninrats Gatingdeficitwasinducedpharmacologicallyusingketamine RatsthenreceiveddailytreatmentwiththeD4 selectiveantagonistCP 293 019vs saline www ivy E mail ivyeditingmb Tel 021 51370992 www ivy AbstractAbberantinformationprocessing e g gatingdeficit isthebasisofmanycognitivedeficitsinschizophrenia SincedopamineD4receptoriselevatedinthebrainofschizophreniapatients weexaminedwhetherD4receptorantagonismcouldalleviategatingdeficitinaratmodel Prepulseinhibitionwasdisrupted E mail ivyeditingmb Tel 021 51370992 摘要缺乏 故事 情节 www ivy E mail ivyeditingmb Tel 021 51370992 Effectsofnifedipineonbloodpressur