英语四级写作.ppt

PrepareTem4Atthelastmoment 英语四级写作 integratedskills 整体技巧 考试要求 四级考试中的写作项目为一篇命题作文 一篇应用文 命题作文要求 观点清楚 例证充分 结构严谨 层次分明 合乎逻辑 语言得体 无重大语法错误 重中之重 审题 Educationasalifelongprocess Peopleneedtobeeducatedinordertodeveloptheirpotentialsandpushthesocietyonwards Somepeoplesimplyseeeducationasgoingtoschools whereasmostpeoplevieweducationasalifelongprocess Inmypointofview educationisofgreatsignificancetoasociety Iwouldliketoexplainitinthefollowingtwopoints 跑题 Travelbroadensthemind 跑题种种讲述井底之蛙的故事介绍外出旅游的准备工作发展旅游业由当地经济的关系出国留学的利弊开头 Travelingislikereadingabook Itmakesawisemanbetter butafoolworse Tem4的作文题目是一串话 例 Everycollegestudentwouldagreethatlifeincollegeisnotthesameasitwasinthemiddleschool Now youhavebeenaskedbytheStudents Uniontowriteapassageentitled THEMAINDIFFERENCEBETWEENMYCOLLEGELIFEANDMYMIDDLESCHOOLLIFEaspartofanintroductionprogrammefornewstudentscominginSeptember 题目后面还有对每一段的写作要求 Youaretowriteinthreeparagraphs Inthefirstparagraph stateclearlywhatyouthinkthemaindifferenceisbetweencollegeandmiddleschoollife Inthesecondparagraph statewhichlifeyoupreferandwhy Inthelastparagraph bringwhatyouhavewrittentoanaturalconclusionwithasummaryorasuggestion 对每一段的写作要求因题目而异 Weseeadvertisementsontelevisioneveryday SomepeoplethinkthatTVadvertisingbringsusbenefits butothersdon tthinkso Whatisyouropinion Topic AMAJORADVANTAGE DISADVATAGEOFADVERTISINGONTELEVISION Youaretowriteinthreeparagraphs Inthefirstparagraph statejustONEmajoradvantageordisadvantageofTVadvertising Inthesecondparagraph giveoneortworeasonstosupportyourpointofview Inthelastparagraph bringwhatyouhavewrittentoanaturalconclusion 不照着段落要求来写就要扣分 又例 Topic APart timejobNowadaysithasbecomefashionableforcollegestudentstotakeapart timejobintheirsparetime Discusstheadvantagesanddisadvantagesofthistrend Youaretowriteinthreeparagraphs Inthefirstparagraph stateclearlyyourviewpointsonboththeadvantagesanddisadvantages Inthesecondparagraph supportyourviewpointwithdetailsorexamples Inthelastparagraph bringwhatyouhavewrittentoanaturalconclusionwithasummaryorasuggestion Thefirstparagraph Stateclearlywhatyouthinkthemaindifferenceisbetweencollegeandmiddleschoollife Well done Whereaslifeinmiddleschoolisfilledwithendlessexercises homeworkandexams lifeincollegeispregnantwithparties sports games interestingcontestsandothercolorfulactivities Thesecondparagraph Statewhichlifeyoupreferandwhy ill done Studyisoneofthemostimportantpartsoflife Inmiddleschool weweretaughtbyourteachermostofthetimeandwespentmuchtimetolearnbyourselves Butinuniversity teachersonlyleadustolearntheimportantpoints Asforthedetails wemuststudyintensivelybyourselves Besidesstudying standingtheteatofarigorouslifeisalsoimportant Thebiggestproblemishowtogetonwellwithroommates Livingtogetherwillgiverisetosomeunpleasantnessbecauseeverypersonhashisownway andeachoneofuswilllackprivacy Inaddition wemustwashourclothswithhandsinsteadofthewashingmachine Well done Theadvantageofthisself arrangedlifeisobvious Foronething Ifeelmuchrelaxedbothphysicallyandemotionally Pressurefromacademicstudyhasbeenreducedtosuchanacceptablelevelthatlearningbecomesakindofenjoymentandpleasure Classroomisratherastagetoshowouttalentthanabattlefieldtostruggleforscores Moreover morefreetime inasense meansmorechancesforustojoininthesociallife Takingapart timejob forinstance providesuswhoarestillunusedtotheworldanopportunitytonegotiatewithdifferentcustomersandtoadjustourselvestosucharapidlychangingsociety This undeniably agreatdealofwealthwecanbenefitfromthroughourlife Thethirdparagraph Bringwhatyouhavewrittentoanaturalconclusionwithasummaryorasuggestion Well done Allinall collegelifeismuchdifferentfrommiddleschoollife Itisatransitionfromcampustosociety Weshouldvalueandmakegooduseofit Well done Tosumup IliveaquitedifferentlifeincollegefromwhichIbecomemuchmoreresponsibleformyownlifeandstudy Tothosenewstudentsintheuniversity Iwouldsay Welcometojoinusandenjoyanindependentcollegelife 善于开拓话题 考生的作文浅表化比较普遍 缺乏新意和深度 暴露出生活积累薄弱和感悟能力差等弱点 Morepressurefromacademicstudiesdoesnogoodtous Itisknownthatinterestisthemotherofsuccess Butweneversaypressureisthemotherofsuccess Infact excessivepressureisthemotherofresistance Wegrown upuniversitystudentsdonotneedmorepressurefromacademicstudiesbecauseitwilldoharmtousmentallyandphysically Wherethereisoppression thereisresistance Whenstudentsgetmorepressurefromacademicstudies theymaynaturallyrejectitintheirdeepmindbecausetheyfeelthattheyareforcedtostudybythepressurebutnottheirownwilling Sotheymayadoptsomeimpropermeanstogetridofpressure whichfinallywilldamagetheirinteresttoacademicstudies Ontheotherhand morepressurefromstudieswillmakestudentsnervousandtiredeasily whichwillvisiblydoharmtotheirhealth Inconclusion givingmorepressuretostudentsinacademicstudiesisanincorrectwaytoencouragethemtostudywell Teachersshouldgiveitupquicklyandfindanotherwaytoarousestudents interestinstudy intra sentenceskills 句际技巧 扩展与收拢 Mozartisoftenquotedasafamiliarexampleofardentinterestandsustainedendeavor Walking oratthetheater orevenwhileengagedinsocialamusements helivedinaself createdatmosphereofmusic Hisheadwasworkingallthetime 扩展与收拢 Whateveronedoes oneshoulddoitwithconfidence Ifonehasnoconfidence thereislittlepossibilitythatonewouldeverachieveanything especiallywhenoneisfacedwithdrawbacksorhardships Thistruthseemstobeself evident 第二段中一定要举例 Whyistheworldgettingsmallerandsmaller Foronething fasterandsafermeansoftransporthavegreatlyreduceddistance InthepastittookpeopleeightweekstocrossthePacificOcean butnowanairjourneyfromShanghaitoNewYorkonlytakeseighthours Foranother thequickeningpaceofmodernsocietycreatesmoreopportunitiesforpeopletovisiteachother Forexample businessactivitiesandculturalexchangehavebroughtpeopleintoconstantcontactwiththeworld 不一定非要用forexample Thisdoesnotmeanthatthinkingmustalwaysbeconscious Theevidencethattheunconsciousmindcanjoininpurposefulmentalactivityisoverwhelming Themostdramaticexampleofthisisthefactthatinsightsoftencometouswhenwearenolongerworkingonaproblem Taxiesalsocausealotofproblems Somedriversusuallyparktheircarsatanyplacetheylike Theyblockthetraffic Otherdriverssometimesdriveveryfasttosavetimesothattheycanearnmoremoney Theycausemanytrafficaccidents Stillotherdriverschargemuchmorethantheyshould andmakethecustomersquiteunhappy 出租车也造成大量的问题 有的司机通常随意停放车子 阻塞了交通 其他一些司机有时把车开得飞快 好赚更多的钱 造成许多交通事故 还有些司机漫天要价 把顾客弄得相当不愉快 加入语篇标记词Adddiscoursemarkers Taxiesalsocausealotofproblems Somedriversusuallyparktheircarsatanyplacetheylike Asaresult theyblockthetraffic Otherdriverssometimesdriveveryfasttosavetimesothattheycanearnmoremoney Consequently theycausemanytrafficaccidents Stillotherdriverschargemuchmorethantheyshould andthusmakethecustomersquiteunhappy coherence 连贯 Thedevelopmentofindustrydemandslargeareasofland Thealreadylimitedlandisdecreasingveryrapidly Weshouldmakethebestuseofourland Incities acarefulandelaboratecityplanshouldbeworkedout Inthecountryside farmersshouldbeeducatedtousethelandwisely Thegovernmentshouldreinforcethelawstopunishthosewhowastetheland Thedevelopmentofindustrydemandslargeareasofland Asaresult thealreadylimitedlandisdecreasingveryrapidly Therefore weshouldmakethebestuseofourland Incities acarefulandelaboratecityplanshouldbeworkedout Inthecountryside farmersshouldbeeducatedtousethelandwisely Moreover thegovernmentshouldreinforcethelawstopunishthosewhowastetheland 句际技巧要点 主题句分主题句扩展与收拢举例连贯 用语篇标记词 inter sentenceskills 句内技巧 Brainstorming keywords synonymousexpressions近义表达 antonymousexpressions反义表达 Diamondwords闪光措辞 学过的例子 Confidence faith buildupfaith feelcapableofdoingsth lackofconfidence loseheart feelfrustrated平时练作文时就要养成找同义表达和反义表达的习惯 DiamondWords Takeone scourageinbothhands勇往直前 敢作敢为Have lackthecourageofone sconviction有 没有勇气做自己认为对的事 Diamondsentences Anounceofdiscretionisworthapoundofwit Holdfasttodreams forifdreamsdie lifeisabrokenwingedbirdthatcannotfly 摆脱汉语思维 加利福尼亚州南部阳光充足 气候宜人 是拍摄影片的理想场所 TheconstantsunshineandmildclimateofsouthernCaliforniamadeitanidealsiteforshootingmotionpictures 摆脱汉语思维 独享欢乐是一种愉快 独自忧伤也是一种愉快 Happinessenjoyedaloneisapleasure soissorrowtastedprivately 摆脱汉语思维 口试时 问了十个问题 她全都答对了 Shewasaskedtenquestionsintheoralexaminationandansweredeveryoneofthemcorrectly 摆脱汉语思维 一群人立刻把他围住了 向他提出一个又一个问题 Verysoonhewassurroundedbyacrowdandwassnowedunderwithquestions 摆脱汉语思维 主语和谓语动词之间适宜安插评述性状语他们没有答复 这完全是意料之中的事 They notunexpectedly didnotrespond 我觉得那个人靠得住 Theman Ibelieve isreliable 摆脱汉语思维 主语和谓语动词之间不适宜安插修饰性状语他在巴黎就读一年 完成了学业 HeroundedouthiseducationbyspendingayearinParis 有些照片技术高超 内容有趣 值得一提 Afewofthepicturesareworthmentioningbothfortheirtechnicalexcellenceandinterestingcontent 标点 分号后面可以接有连接意义的副词 Thenewsmaybesurprising nevertheless itistrue Nobodyexpectedhimtosucceedintheexamination however hecameoutfirst It stoolatetogoforawalk besides it sbeginningtorain 学生笔下的佳句 Loveisimportant Hewholoseswealthlosesmuch hewholoseslovelosesmore buthewholosescapacitytolovelosesall 学生笔下的佳句 Firstofall beinginagoodmoodmakeseverythingarounduspleasantandourselvespleasanttoothers 学生笔下的佳句 Sometimespressurecanencourageonetoworkharder However pressuretostudentsiswhatfoodtopeople Itcan tbelacked itcan tbetoomuchaswell Methodsoftraining ImitatethesamplestructuresRefinement 描红 炼句 imitation 描红 Mozartisoftenquotedasafamiliarexampleofardentinterestandsustainedendeavor Walking oratthetheater orevenwhileengagedinsocialamusements helivedinaself createdatmosphereofmusic Hisheadwasworkingallthetime 范文 描红 ChenQinghuaisoftenquotedasagoodexampleofhardworkinganddiligence Walkingoratthecanteen orevenwhileengagedinsocialentertainments shelivedinaself createdatmosphereofEnglish Herheadwasworkingallthetime 描红 LuXunisoftenquotedasafamiliarexampleloyalpatriotismandsustainedendeavor Walking orathisownpavilion orevenwhiletalkingwithotherpeople heneverstoppedthinkingaboutthepublicandthefutureofChina Hisheadwasworkingallthetime refinement 炼句 Awfulorganization Butthequestionis howcanthetouristsenjoythemselvesunderthecontroloftravelagency Howcanyoutravelaround5citiesineasternChinaduring4days RefinementButthequestionis howcanthetouristsenjoythemselvesunderthecontrolofthetravelagency Howcanatourist forexample travelaround5citiesineasternChinaduring4days Awfulorganization Packagetourissurelyconvenientfortouristsandalsosafe Igiveupth