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HowtoWriteBetter HuipuForeignLanguageSchoolisagoodplacetostudy Itisbeautiful Theteachersaregreat Thestudentsherearehardworking Connectives 连接语 anddifferencesareimportant 2017年英语中考书面表达最新评分标准 Connectives 连接语 Mydog snameisLucky agoodnameforhim Ifeelveryluckytohavehim 八上p14 表原因 because Wow that samazing Whydidtheancientemperorsbuildthewall wastoprotecttheirpartofthecountry Asyoucansee itisquitetallandwide 八 下 p50 Themainreason 表原因 Themainreasonisthat Whydosomanyclimbersrisktheirlives peoplewanttochallengethemselvesinthefaceofdiff iculties Thespiritoftheseclimbersshowsus 八 下 p51 Oneofthemainreasonsisthat 表原因 Oneofthemainreasonsisto Formanytourists thissmallislandinSouth eastAsiaisawonderfulplacetotakeaholiday morethanthreequartersofthepopulationareChinese soyoucanspeakPu tonghuaallthetime SingaporeisanEnglish speakingcountry soitisalsoagoodplacetopracticeyourEnglish 八 下 p70 Ontheonehand Ontheotherhand 表原因 Themainreasonisthat Anotherreasonisthat YoumustbeexcitedaboutleavingforChina Yeah butIamalittlenervous too Why Well Idon tknowhowtousechopsticksverywellandIdon tknowhowtobehaveatthedinnertable 九年级p144 foronething foranother thing 另一方面 表原因 Formanytourists thissmallislandinSouth eastAsiaisawonderfulplacetotakeaholiday morethanthreequartersofthepopulationareChinese soyoucanspeakPu tonghuaallthetime SingaporeisanEnglish speakingcountry soitisalsoagoodplacetopracticeyourEnglish Foronething Foranother thing 表原因 and besides also what smore 表原因 becauseThemainreasonisthat Oneofthemainreasonsisthat Ontheonehand ontheotherhandAnotherreasonisthat Foronething foranother thing And Besides Also What smore Ourschoolisagoodplacetostudy Itisbeautiful Therearemanygreatteachershere Thestudentshereareveryhardworking Whatdoyouthinkofyourbestfriend Ithink Inmyopinion Inmyeyes Inmymind Inmyheart 表观点 表结果 lifeintheschooliscolorful Becauseof Withhis herhelp Thankstohim her Asaresult Inthisway That swhy wassohelpfulthatForthisreason manypeoplepraisehimasthemusicianwhohasgreatlyinfluencederhumusic 九年级p71 Forthisreason Isyourbestfriendthesameasyouordifferent Giveexamples Mybiggestchallengeislearninghowtobehaveatthedinnertable Asyoucanimagine thingsareverydifferentfromthewaytheyareathome you renotsupposedtoputyourbreadonyourplate You resupposedtoputitonthetable you renotsupposedtoeatanythingwithyourhandsexceptbread notevenfruit ifyoudon twantanymorefood youshouldjustsay Thatwasdelicious you renotsupposetoputyourelbowsonthetable I mgraduallygettingusedtoit Idon tfindFrenchcustomssostrangeanymore Forexample 九年级p782b Also Anotherexampleisthat Anotherthingisthat ThemoreIgettoknowaboutmyfriend themoreIrealizewehavealotincommon wehavenothingincommon Forexample Anotherexampleisthat Anotherthingisthat Also And besides What smore 举例子 表转折 but yet however Wecaninfer 推断 thatthepassageaboveisabout someonewhoisgoodatrecycling Thesentenceisusedto 承上启下 九年级p102 九年级p62 AnotherpopularideaisthatStonehengemightbeakindofcalendar Thelargestoneswereputtogetherinacertainway Onmidsummer smorning thesunshinesdirectlyintothecenterofthestones Otherpeoplebelievethestoneshaveamedicalpurpose Theythinkthestonescanpreventillnessandkeeppeoplehealthy Asyouwalkthere youcanfeeltheenergyfromyourfeetmoveupyourbody saidonevisitor Thepassageaboveisabout However manyAprilFool sjokesmayendupbeingnotveryfunny Wecaninfer 推断 thatthispassageisabout Thepassageaboveisabout 九年级p94 Shouldteenagersbeaskedtomoveoutwhentheystartworking InmanyWesterncountries teenagersareallowedtomoveoutateighteen Theirparentsbelievethattheyshouldbeeducatedtotakecareofthemselvesfromayoungage whentheystartworkingtheycanmanagetheirownlives Chineseparentsbelievethatitisbetterforchildrentolivewithparentswhocantakecareofthem Buttheyoungshouldlookaftertheirparentsastheygotolder manyChineseadultscontinuetolivewiththeirparents 在空格处填入适当的连接语 九年级p524b Shouldteenagersbeaskedtomoveoutwhentheystartworking InmanyWesterncountries teenagersareallowedtomoveoutateighteen Theirparentsbelievethattheyshouldbeeducatedtotakecareofthemselvesfromayoungage whentheystartworkingtheycanmanagetheirownlives Chineseparentsbelievethatitisbetterforchildrentolivewithparentswhocantakecareofthem Buttheyoungshouldthenlookaftertheirparentsastheygotolder manyChineseadultscontinuetolivewiththeirparents Thisway Thatiswhy However inmostAsiansocieties itisnotcommonforteenagerstomoveout Shouldteenagersbeaskedtomoveoutwhentheystartworking inmanywesterncountries inmostAsian societies Shetoldmetoworkhard ShetoldmenottogiveupandshetoldmethewaystoimprovemyEnglish Makingdifferences Shetoldmetoworkhard SheencouragedmenottogiveupandshetaughtmethewaystoimprovemyEnglish Inmanywesterncountries In Asian Teenagersareallowedtomoveoutwhentheystartworking Opinions Itisnotcommon Itisbetterfor areencouragedto Reasons societies most Thisway That swhy 当 时when as Makingdifferences DifferentwordsDifferentsentencepatternsDifferentconnectives Makingdifferences Shetoldmetoworkhard SheencouragedmenottogiveupandshetaughtmethewaystoimprovemyEnglish Shetoldmetheimportanceofworkinghard SheencouragedmenottogiveupwhenImetdifficultiesandsheeventaughtmethewaystoimprovemyEnglish Shetoldmetoworkhard ShetoldmenottogiveupandShetoldmethewaystoimprovemyEnglish Asthetwo childpolicycomes manyparentsbegintothinkabouthavingasecondchild Andwehadadiscussionaboutitinclassyesterday Moststudentsthinkthatit sbettertohavealittlebrotherorsister becausetheyhaveapersontoplaywithandtheywon tbelonelyanymore Also itwillbemoreconvenienttolookafterparentsinthefuture Manygirlslovekidssomuchthattheyreallywanttohaveabrotherorsister However someofusdisagree Intheireyes havingabrotherorsisterissomethingtheycan stand Ontheonehand pa rentswillpaymoreattentiontothetinybaby Ontheotherhand theywillgetfewerandfewerchancestogooutwiththeirparents Theythinkit sunfairandit sterriblewhenababyiscryingallnight Inmyopinion youcansharehappinessandsadnesswithyourbrotherorsister Youtwowillbethebestfriendsintheworld Howgreatitwillbewhenapersonisalwaystheretolisten 20 Accordingtowhatwehavelearned discusswhyitisgood 1 Connectives2 Makingdifferences Asthetwo childpolicycomes manyparentsbegintothinkabouthavingasecondchild Andwehadadiscussionaboutitinclassyesterday Moststudentsthinkthatit sbettertohavealittlebrotherorsister becausetheyhaveapersontoplaywithandtheywon tbelonelyanymore Also itwillbemoreconvenienttolookafterparentsinthefuture Manygirlslovekidssomuchthattheyreallywanttohaveabrotherorsister However someofusdisagree Intheireyes havingabrotherorsisterissomethingtheycan stand Ontheonehand pa rentswillpaymoreattentiontothetinybaby Ontheotherhand theywillgetfewerandfewerchancestogooutwiththeirparents Theythinkit sunfairandit sterriblewhenababyiscryingallnight Inmyopinion youcansharehappinessandsadnesswithyourbrotherorsister Youtwowillbethebestfriendsintheworld Howgreatitwillbewhenapersonisalwaystheretolisten 20 Connectives1 表观点 think intheireyes inmyopinion2 表原因because also ontheonehand 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