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15-Sentences Solution to IELTS Writing第1句：背景介绍Nowadays,anincreasingnumberofpeopleareconcernedaboutthepurposeofuniversityeducation.现在，越来越多的人关心大学教育的目的。Explanation:lNowadays,anincreasingnumberofpeopleareconcernedaboutthephenomenonthatlNowadays,anincreasingnumberofpeopleareconcernedaboutthepurposesthatuniversityeducationserves.lNowadays,moreandmorestudentsareconcernedaboutwhattheywilllearnintheuniversities.lUniversitiesareoneofthemostimportantinstitutionsinmodernsociety.如果很难再短时间内想出第一句内容，就直接表达观点，两句话写完首段。lIagreewiththeviewthatReasonsareasfollows.我赞同的观点是原因如下。第2句：交代辩论话题A.“是否应该”However,whetheruniversitiesshouldmainlyprovidejob-relatedskillstograduatesisacontroversialissue.但是，大学是否应该主要提供给学生工作相关的技能是一个饱受争议的话题。B.“是这样还是应该那样”However,whetheruniversitiesshouldmainlyprovidejob-relatedskillsorpureknowledgetograduateshascausedaheateddebate.但是，大学是应该主要提供给学生工作相关的技能还是纯粹的知识造成了激烈的争议。Explanation:However,whatkindofknowledgeandskillsuniversitiesshouldmainlyprovidetograduatesisacontroversialissue.但是，大学的应该主要提供给学生哪一种知识技能是一个饱受争议的话题。C.一些人认为;另一些人认为Somepeoplestatethat;othersbelievethatSomepeoplestatethatuniversitiesshouldfocusongivingaccesstoknowledge;othersbelievethattheknowledgeandskillsneededintheworkplacearemoreimportantforuniversitygraduates.一些人认为大学应关注提供知识；另一些人认为工作所需的技能对大学毕业生更重要。第3句：交代你自己的写作观点Inmyview,Myviewisthat(表语从句)Iagreewiththeviewthat(同位语从句),forthefollowingreasons.Myviewisthatjob-relatedknowledgeandskillsshouldbethemainfocusofuniversities.Imainlyagreewiththeformer/latterviewforthefollowingreasons.第二段第1句：本段中心句这一段的写作目的是以理服人。用itisclearthat这个主语从句写出你认为最重要、最明显的论据。Firstly,itisobviousthatformoststudents,thepurposeofreceivinguniversityeducationistoobtainpracticalknowledgeandskillswhichwillenablethemtobecomequalifiedemployeesinthejobmarketinthefuture.首先，很显然对大部分学生来说上大学的目的是学习实用的知识技能，这些技能能让他们在将来的职场中成为合格的雇员。Explanation:lFirstly,itisclear/obvious/truethatlFirstly,thereisnodoubtthatlOnereasonforthisisthat第2句：对中心句进行拓展、解释、说明。A.Thisisbecause这是因为（想上一句话的原因）Thisisbecausemostofthem,aftergraduation,willentertheworkplace,earnaliving,andsupporttheirownfamilies.这是因为大部分学生毕业之后会进入职场，挣钱谋生，建立家庭。B.Thismeansthat这意味着（想上一句话的结果）Thismeansthatthecoursesfocusingonjobswillbecomethemostwelcomedsubjectswhichthemajorityofstudentswillselect.这意味着那些专注于使用知识的课程会成为大多数学生选择的热门专业。C.Ifnot(反正中心句)Ifuniversitiesdonotpayenoughattentiontosuchskills,mostgraduateswillnotbeabletofindsatisfactorypositionsintheworkplace,leadingtoahigherunemploymentrate.如果大学不重视这种技能的培养，大部分学生将会很难再职场上找到工作，导致社会失业率增高。Explanation:可用下面的短语拓展解释中心句：lInotherwords,换句话说lMorespecifically,具体来说lMoreprecisely,准确点说第3句重申写作观点。其实是对第一段最后一句话，也就是你的写作观点进行改写表达。Souniversities,asserviceproviders,havetogivetopprioritytothesecustomersrealneeds.Explanation:推荐一个固定句型来写本句，让写作更简化：Therefore,itisnecessary/crucial/importantforsb.todosth.lTherefore,itiscrucialforuniversitiestogivetopprioritytothestudentsrealneeds.第三段第1句首句仍是该段中心句，是你绞尽脑汁想出的第二个原因论据。Moreover,focusingonthejob-relatedskillscanbenefittheuniversityitself.另外，关注工作相关的技能能使大学本身受益。Explanation:可选用Moreover,Inaddition,Besides等词开始。第2句该段第2句就是举例。Forexample,thesci-fiblockbuster“Avatar”hasmarkedamilestoneinthefilmmakingindustryanddrawnmassiveinterestin3Dtechnology.例如，科幻大片阿凡达已成为电影业的一座里程碑，并且激发了大众对3D技术的广泛兴趣。Explanation:如果感觉上面的句子单词太难，我们可以简化为：Forexample,3Dtechnologyhasbecomeahottopicafterthemovie“Avatar”madethewholeworldcrazy.例子越具体，越国际化，越时尚流行，越好。第3句上一句已经举出了阿凡达和3D的例子，为什么我们要提这个例子呢？接下来的这句话就是要写出我们举这个例子的原因，并证明本段首句的正确性。Ifauniversitycanquicklyrespond,andconsolidateteachingresourcestooffercoursesabout3D,notonlywillitsgraduatesbemorecompetitiveinthejobmarket,buttheuniversityitselfwillkeeppacewiththetechnologicaldevelopmentandmoveforward.如果一所大学能迅速反应，整合教学资源提供3D相关的课程，那么不仅毕业生在职场上将更有竞争力，大学本身也能跟上技术发展并向前迈进。Explanation:这里没有固定句式要用，可随意发挥，要写出例子和中心句之间的联系。当然还可以再举一例：Anotherexampleissth.然后解释说明。如在考场上实在想不出好的例子或并列例子，该段从第2句开始参考第二段的写作框架，再讲一次道理。第四段第1句写让步段落的两大好处：大多数考生绞尽脑汁也想不出第三个原因论据。我们何不换一个角度，想一想支持反方的一个原因或例子呢，那会容易得多。兼顾了反方观点，不会出现评分标准中因为partlyaddressthetask而丢分的情况。A.Thatisnottosaythat.not.这并不是说（反方观点完全没有道理）Thatisnottosaythatuniversitiesshouldnotpayanyattentiontodevelopingpurescienceandknowledge.B.Itisalsotruethat.(反方观点中的某些方面)也是事实。Itisalsotruethatuniversitiesshoulddeveloppurescienceandknowledge.C.Thosewhoharbourtheviewthat.believethat.那些持有（反方观点）的人们认为.(这个句型中包含了定语从句、同位语从句和宾语从句)Thosewhoharbourtheviewthatthemainfunctionofuniversitiesshouldbetogiveaccesstotheknowledgebelievethatthetheoreticknowledgeisthefoundationofanypracticalskill.Explanation:在讨论优势和劣势的文章中，我们可以直接使用下列句型：lThisisnottosay,however,thatweshouldneglecttheproblemsithascaused.lButtoacknowledgeonlythepositiveimpactwouldbeshortsighted.第2句想反方观点的论据，或在特殊、极端情况下的一些合理性。进一步说明该段第一句话。Thereare,ofcourse,studentsinterestedinknowledgeforitsownsake,andtheywilllaterbecomescientistsandscholarswhowillmakegreatercontributionstooursociety.Explanation:可选用Ofcourse或Indeed开始本句。第3句让步后最终转折。表达“即便如此，反方观点在大多数情况下还是不可行的”或“即使存在上面提到的负面，正面影响仍是大于负面的”。Butunfortunatelythesepeoplearefewandfarbetween.Explanation:可选用But,However,Yet等词开始本句。该段为文章次要信息，可点到为止，不可花费过多时间和笔墨纠缠。实在不知如何反驳了，可用无赖写法：“（虽然反方观点也有道理）但正方观点仍然更有道理。”lButstill,job-relatedskillsaremoreimportantformoststudents.lButstill,thecosarefargreater.其实本句还可以不用反驳，再写反方第二论据，或针对第一论据的拓展、支持、举例。不过这样处理后在结论段要表达相对中立的观点态度。第五段第1句结论段。重申写作观点。这句话其实是针对首段最后一句话改写。lInsummary,总之lInconclusion,总之Insummary,themajorfunctionofuniversitiesshouldbeprovidingmoststudentsjob-relatedskills,guaranteeingahighrateofemployment,andthushelpingthesocietyfunctionbetter.Explanation:通常，考官读完一篇作文后印象最深的会是文章中的例子和结尾段。所以该句不是简单的改写，而应是递进或强调。可用强调句型：Itissth.that.第2句照顾反方观点。表达“同时，我们不能忽视反方观点的价值，或低低估某事的负面影响”。Explanation:模板句式Meanwhile,weshouldnotignore/neglect/overlook/underestimatesth.snegativeeffects.第3句其实末段有了上面两句话已经完整了。如果要冲刺高分，我们要再加一句话，给文章画一个有力的句号，或提升文章的思想境界，立意升华。lBydoingsowecanensurethat.lOnlybydoingsocanwemakesurethat.(only在句首注意倒装)15句高级作文写作分析Youshouldspendabout40minutesonthistask.Writeaboutthefollowingtopic:SomepeoplethinkwatchingTVisbadforchildren,whileothersthinkthatwatchingTVhasmorebeneficialeffectsonchildren.Discussbothsidesandgiveyourownopinion.Givereasonsforyouranswerandincludeanyrelevantexamplesfromyourownknowledgeandexperience.Writeatleast250words.ModelEssayWatchingTVisoneofthemostimportantchildrensleisureactivities.However,discussionnowcentresonwhetheritbringsmoreharmthangood.Myviewisthattoomuchtimespentonitsurelyhasnegativeimpactsonkidsandparentsshouldfilterouttheinappropriateprogramsandchannelsforthem.首段第1句背景引入第2句交代辩论话题第3句作者观点，中立Withtherapiddevelopmentofscienceandtechnology,TVshowsaredesignedsovividandattractivethatnotonlykidsbuteveadultsaremucheasiertogetaddictedtothem.Whenchildrenspendmoretimesittinginfrontofascreen,theyareisolatedfromtherealworld.Theydonothaveenoughtimetosocialize,ortoengageinoutdooractivitieswhicharecrucialfortheirphysicalgrowth.Also,theireyesightwillbeweakenedbystaringatthescreenfortoolong.第2段第1句第一论据：看电视易上瘾（形式问题，对儿童身体发育不好）第2句展开支持。其实写的是：看电视上瘾的结果是什么。省掉了Thismeansthat.第3句继续展开。其实是不良结果并列第4句继续并列。因为思想充分，想说的太多，代替了so,.重申观点这个句子Moreover,questionablecontentsonTVwillhavenegativeeffectsonchildrensincetheirmindsareimpressionable.Thefactthatmanyde