2018年广州市中考英语作文专题复习(七)饮食健康

1 2018 年广州市中考英语作文专题复习 七 饮食健康年广州市中考英语作文专题复习 七 饮食健康 一 相关话题一 相关话题 饮食 Food and drinks 卫生与健康 Hygiene and health 二 与专题相关的知识准备 二 与专题相关的知识准备 1 相关单元 九年级上 Unit 6 Healthy diet 2 相关词汇 高频词 menu bread milk noodles rice potatoes beef vegetables fruit grains restaurant hamburger cola healthy unhealthy waiter traditional service knife fork contain dish 高频短语 restaurant review order food have dinner fried food stay away from a glass of lemon tea soft drinks lose weight medical examination plenty of treat oneself to coffee with milk and sugar chicken wings different kinds of change one s diet fast food be good for be bad for 拓展词及词语 protein dairy products eating habits serve food recommend regular 3 经典句型 I have bread and eggs for breakfast It s necessary to have a balanced diet You should ought to You d better Why not We should instead of Some people think that If you you will can help you It s adi for sb to do Here is some advice Try to order dishes with vegetables and low fat meats 2 4 参考谚语 1 An apple a day keeps the doctor away 一天一苹果 医生远离我 2 Health is better than wealth 健康胜于财富 3 Health is happiness 健康就是幸福 4 He who has health has hope 留得青山在 不怕没柴烧 三 经典例题三 经典例题 2012 年广州中考题 你是学校英文报的小记者李华 请给你校初三学生写一封公开信 就如何保持考前健康提出 建议 主要内容如下 1 早睡早起 保持充足睡眠 2 饮食均衡 少吃垃圾食品 3 多做体育运动 4 你的其他建议 注意 1 词数 80 左右 信的开头和结尾已给出 不计入词数 2 不得透露学校 姓名等任何个人信息 否则不予评分 Dear students As we all know good health is important for success in the exams so I m writing to Best wishes and stay healthy Yours Lihua 1 审题 本文共有 4 个要点 时态涉及 一般现在时 人称是 第一人称 2 抓要点 我们 早睡早起和保持充足的睡眠 We should sleep early and get up early have enough sleep 3 我们 饮食均衡 balanced diet 我们 少吃垃圾食品 have less junk food 我们 多做体育运动 do more exercise 3 连词成句 主要使用句型 1 2 5 8 9 12 使用谚语 2 3 4 连句成文与修改评分 学生作文 Dear students As we all know good health is important for success in the exams so I m writing to students who is studying in grade nine Firstly we should sleep and get up early and it s important to have enough sleep Secondly we should balance our diet don t eat too many dim sum Thirdly ding much exercise is very important we can play basketball and badminton after school Lastly we can listen to music when we feel tired It can relax ourselves Best wish and stay healthy 点评 整篇文章行文流畅 调理清晰 并且对要点的描述到位 但是有拼写和简单的语法错误 要 点拓展也可适当补充例子 尝试运用不同句子的表达 5 检查思路 完成作文自查表 1 如果没有问题的 请在项目后打 2 如果有问题 请在项目中圈出来 并在文中做出修改 项目 第一次自查第二次自查 布局与内容要点 人称 时态 主谓一致 动词搭配 介词搭配 拼写错误 4 好词好句 分项分档评分表分项分档评分表 项目要素给分表 切合题意 体现要点内容 6 分 有所发挥 6 5 5 6 5 4 54 3 53 2 521 510 语 法 词 汇 准确 性 6 分 机械性 大小写 拼 写和格式等错误 6 5 55 4 5 4 5 4 3 53 2 521 510 流畅 性 3 分 结构3 2 52 1 5 1 5 10 50000 自评总分 12 满分 6 6 3 15 6 参考例文 Dear students As we all know good health is important for success in the exams so I m writing to tell you that during this period of time you need to get up early and go to bed early to ensure enough sleep As a saying goes you are what you eat I suggest you have a balanced diet and avoid eating junk food these days Although your will be very busy I still suggest you make some time to play some sports to help yourselfer relax Also you can do other things to reduce stress like listening to music and reading some interesting books Best wishes and stay healthy Yours Li Hua 5 三 练习 适当的饮食习惯是健康成长的保证 请你以 Good Eating Habits Good Health 为题 并根据下表 提示 可适当补充内容 用英语写一篇不少于 80 个词的作文谈谈你的看法 开通已经给出 字数不计算在内 Good Eating Habits Good Health 不良习惯不良习惯不吃早餐 爱吃零食 偏食 饮食过量 良好习惯良好习惯饮食多样化 饮食定时定量 良好发热饮食习惯有助于身体健康 个人看法个人看法 注意 1 词数 80 100 个 2 文中不得出现真实的地址和姓名 3 可适当发挥 解题思路 1 审题 a 本文共有 个要点 b 时态主要采用 c 人称是 2 可能用到的词语 写在要点旁边 3 可能用到的句型 6 4 成文 检查思路 完成作文自查表 1 如果没有问题的 请在项目后打 2 如果有问题 请在项目中圈出来 并在文中做出修改 项目 第一次自查第二次自查 内容要点 人称 时态 主谓一致 动词搭配 介词搭配 拼写错误 好词好句 参考例文 Good Eating Habits lead to Good Health So it s very important for us to form healthy eating habits However many students still have bad eating habits Some go to school without breakfast some like to eat snacks all the time some always like to the same food and still some eat or drink too much All these habits are bad for our health To keep fit