2016-2018年高考短文改错题精校版

1 2016 2018 年高考短文改错题汇总年高考短文改错题汇总 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文 文中共有 10 处语言错误 每句中最多有两处 每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加 删除或修改 增加增加 在缺词处加一个漏字符号 并在其下面写出该加的词 删除删除 把多余的词用斜线 划掉 修改修改 在错的词下划一横线 并在该词下面写出修改后的词 注意注意 1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词 2 只允许修改 10 处 多者 从第 11 处起 不计分 20182018 全国卷全国卷 1 1 During my last winter holiday I went to countryside with my father to visit my grandparents I find a big change there The first time I went there they were living in a small house with dogs ducks and another animals Last winter when I went here again they had a big separate house to raise dozens of chicken They also had a small pond which they raised fish My grandpa said last summer they earned quite a lot by sell the fish I felt happily that their life had improved At the end of our trip I told my father that I planned to return for every two years but he agreed 20182018 全国卷全国卷 2 2 When I was little Friday s night was our family game night After supper we would play card games of all sort in the sitting room As the kid I loved to watch cartoons but no matter how many times I asked to watching them my parents would not to let me They would say to us that playing card games would help my brain Still I unwilling to play the games for them sometimes I didn t realize how right my parents are until I entered high school The games my parents taught me where I was a child turned out to be very useful later in my life 20182018 全国卷全国卷 3 3 It was Monday morning and the writing class had just begin Everyone was silent wait to see who would be called upon to read his and her paragraph aloud Some of us were confident and eager take part in the class activity others were nervous and anxious I had done myself homework but I was shy I was afraid that to speak in front of a larger group of people At that moment I remembered that my father once said The classroom is a place for learning and that include leaning from textbooks and mistake as well 2 Immediate I raised my hand 20172017 全国卷全国卷 1 1 In the summer holiday following my eighteen birthday I took driving lessons I still remember how hard first day was Before getting into the car I thought I had learned the instructor s orders so once I started the car my mind goes blank I forgot what he had said to me altogether The instructor kept repeating the word Speed up Slow down Turning left I was so much nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left A few minutes late the instructor asked me to stop the car It was a relief and I came to a suddenly stop just in the middle on the road 20172017 年全国卷年全国卷 2 2 Mr and Mrs Zhang all work in our school They live far from the school and it takes them about a hour and a half to go to work every day In their spare time they are interesting in planting vegetables in their garden that is on the rooftop of their house They often get up earlier and water the vegetables together They have also bought for some gardening tools Beside they often get some useful informations from the internet When summer came they will invite their students pick the vegetables 20172017 年全国英语卷年全国英语卷 3 3 When I look at this picture of myself I realize of how fast time flies I had grown not only physically and also mentally in the past few years About one month after this photo was took I entered my second year of high school and become a new member of the school music club Around me in picture are the things they were very important in my life at that time car magazines and musical instruments I enjoyed studying difference kinds of cars and planes playing pop music and collecting the late music albums This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of your high school days 20162016 全国卷全国卷 1 1 My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I love Though not very big but the restaurant is popular in our area It is always crowded with customers at meal times Some people even had to wait 3 outside My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time Instead he hopes that our business will grow steady 20162016 全国卷全国卷 2 2 The summer holiday is coming My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday We can chose between staying at home and take a trip If we stay at home it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money But in that case we will learn little about world If we go on a trip abroad we can broaden you view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby I thought that it is a good idea It does not cost many yet we can still learn a lot 20162016 全国卷全国卷 3 3 The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me They were also the best and worse years in my life At the first I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself However my parents didn t seem to think such They always tell me what to do and how to do it At one time I even felt my parents couldn t understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes Now I am leaving home to college At last I will be on my own but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help 20162016 浙江卷浙江卷 When I was a very young children my father created a regular practice I remember well years late Every time he arrived home at end of the day we d greet het at the door He would ask who we was and pretend not to knowing us Then he and my mother would have had a drink while she prepared dinner and they would talk about his day and hers While they chat my father would lift my sister and me up to sit in the top of the fridge It was both excited and frighte