讲述规则要求主题作文九年级unit3

1 Unit 3 Teenagers should be allowed to choose their own clothes 单元话题分析单元话题分析 没有规矩不成方圆 每所学校 每个家庭都有自己的行为规范准则 该做什么 不 该做什么 本单元的核心话题就是谈论规则 发表自己的见解 英语课程标准 在情感态度和文化意识方面要求中学生在学习英语语言的同时 要学 会遵守公共行为规范 并培养自身独立思考的能力 通过对本单元话题的学习 大家一要学 会谈论允许做的事和不允许做的事 深刻了解中学生应该做什么 不应该做什么 建立自己 正确的价值观念 二要针对现实生活中的各种行为规范和要求 发表自己独立的见解 本话题常见的命题形式主要有两种 一是根据自己的实际情况讲述身边的规则 有时 要求谈论个人观点 二是根据内容提示写谈论规则的短文 这种文体通常是夹叙夹议 写 作本话题常用的结构除了课本上的含有情态动词的被动语态结构 should not be allowed to 之外 have to must can t should shouldn t you d better 等也很实用 大家应根据需要灵 活应用 解题技巧解题技巧 在很多情况下 本话题的作文常带有议论文的色彩 因此 在写作时要注意以下几个 方面 1 主旨鲜明 论点明确 即要怎么做 做什么 这是谈论规则的基本要求 因此 要做到 具体 简练 开篇名义 如果有个人见解 可在其后表达 2 讲述个人观点时 要有论据支持 要讲原因 说理要结合同学们的实际情况 尽量做到 透彻明了 3 恰当使用时态和语态 议论文或夹叙夹议的作文会涉及到多种时态 要根据内容选择 选择恰当的时态 时态也有一定的感情色彩 为了使作文内容更加客观公正 常常会用到被 动语态 为了使作文给人以亲切的感觉 常以第一人称的口吻写作 这时常用主动语态 写 作时应根据需要确定使用哪种语态 4 结构清楚 议论文常见的结构是 先摆论点 在进行论证 最后得出结论 佳篇欣赏佳篇欣赏 A Our School Rules I study in a strict school and there are many rules here I agree to some of them but disagree to others We have to wear uniforms every day I disagree with it The quality of the uniforms is bad and they make us feel uncomfortable I think students should be allowed to wear their own clothes We want to be different At our school even girls are not allowed to have long hair That is really strange Long hair makes girls look more beautiful and in Chinese culture girls should have long hair Of course there are some rules I agree with Younger students are not allowed to ride bikes It is dangerous for them to ride bikes during the rush hours We aren t allowed to eat snacks at school I think it is good for us most snacks are bad for our health 2 B My family Rules My parents are strict with me There are many rules in my family Let me tell you some of them I am not allow to spend too much time watching TV or surfing the Internet on school and I must go to bed before 23 00 because I have to do my homework and get up early the next morning I have to clean my room every morning My parents think it is a very good habit to do so But I don t agree with them because my room is not always dirty Even I don t agree with some of the rules I will obey them I think my parents won t do anything that is bad for me C The Rules of students Lab in Our School In the students lab at our school there are many rules for the students Here some important ones We must keep quite if we don t have to speak During the class we must be careful to protect the instruments in the lab While practicing we should watch carefully and take some notes We are not allowed to litter the ground with paper or take things in the lab away After class we must clean the lab and do it up before we leave All of think that these rules are necessary they make it easy for the teacher to teach here 重点结构和句型展示重点结构和句型展示 A 原汁原味 课本重点结构和句型 原汁原味 课本重点结构和句型 1 I think twelve year olds should be allowed to choose their own clothes 我认为应该允许十二 岁的青少年选择自己的衣服 Students shouldn t be allowed to have part time jobs 不应该允许学生做兼职工作 2 He should stop wearing that silly earring 他应该别再戴那无聊的耳环了 3 He doesn t seem to have many friends 他好像没有多少朋友 4 Parents should not be too strict with teenagers 家长不应该对青少年要求太严格 5 That would be a good way to keep both teachers and students happy 那将是一个让老师和学 生都高兴的好方法 6 that is good for studying 那对学习有好处 7 But sometimes these hobbies can get in the way of schoolwork 但有时这些爱好会妨碍学习 8 I am serious about running 对于跑步 我十分认真 9 So they don t allow him to practice running on school nights 因此 他们不允许他在周内 的晚上练习跑步 B 精彩例句拓展精彩例句拓展 1 Homework must be done on time 应按时完成作业 2 Smoking is not allowed in public 公共场所不允许吸烟 3 My parents allow me to choose my own clothes 我父母允许我选择自己的衣服 4 Why did you stop talking 你为什么不讲话了 We stopped to help that boy 我们停下来去帮助那个男孩 5 It seems that she is very old She seems to be old 看起来她似乎很老了 6 My English teacher is very strict with us and she is also very strict in her teaching 3 我的英语老师对我们要求严格 她对自己的教学也要求严格 7 We must keep our classroom clean and tidy 我们保持教室干净整洁 I am sorry to keep you waiting 对不起 让你久等了 8 Doing exercise is good for health 运动有益于健康 Watching TV too much is bad for your eyes 看电视太多对眼睛有害 9 We practice speaking English every day 我们每天练习讲英语 原创习作点评原创习作点评 假如你是某班的班长 班主任让你明天早上在班上讲一下有关的班级管理制度 请按 一下要点写一篇发言稿 内容要点 1 上学要穿校服 服装整洁 2 不迟到早退 3 保持教室清洁 4 课前要有准备 要求 1 词数不少于 80 个 2 可适当增加细节 使短文更连贯 分析 这是一篇发言稿 讲话的内容是说明班级管理制度 写作时要注意发言稿的格式 发言稿一般有称呼 正文和结束语三部分构成 写发言稿要注意用词要得体 要符合讲话 者的身份 这篇作文是由班长向同学们介绍班级管理制度 因此语气上要有利于大家接受 在说明每条纪律规定时 视情况使用本单元的重点句型结构 be allowed to 为了保证作 文的连贯性 可在要求后简单说明理由 结束语部分可以包括希望和致谢两项内容 习作 1 Good morning class Now I will tell you our class rules First we must wear school uniforms at school Our clothes should be clean and tidy Second we are not allowed to be late for class or leave school before school is over Third it s our duty to keep our classroom clean So from today on we will take turn to clean the classroom every day Finally in order to have good results it s necessary for us to get things ready for class before it starts All the rules are necessary for everyone if you want to stay in a good class and learn something here Let s work together to make our class a good one Thank you 教师点评教师点评 得分点得分点 这是一篇较好的学生习作 1 格式正确 称呼 正文和结束语齐 全 符合发言稿 讲话稿 的要求 2 条理清晰 恰当地使用了 first second third 和 finally 等词 3 适当增加了一些细节内容 如划线 部分 使短文更流畅连贯 失分点失分点 处为避免重复 school 改为 it 处应为 take turns to 意为轮流做某事 习作 2 Now I will tell you some of the rules of our class Everyone is asked to wear school uniforms at school and you must keep your clothes clean and tidy We can t be late for school and we are not allowed to leave school earlier We must 教师点评教师点评 这是一篇一般的学生习作 得分点得分点 内容提示的要点完整 讲清了班级管理制 度 4 keep our classroom clean and tidy We should be ready for class before it starts or our teachers may be angry I hope everybody can obey our class rules That s all Thank you 失分点失分点 1 发言稿个是不完整 只有结束语 没有称呼 2 层次不够清晰 在陈述班级规定时 应强调层次 使用表示先后顺序的词 如 first second 等 3 处表达错误 早退应为 leave school before it is over 拓展练笔拓展练笔 1 明天 星期六 全班同学将去参观历史博物馆 由你通知全体同学 请根据内容提示写 一篇发言稿 内容提示 1 早上 8 00 整在校门口集合乘校车前往历史博物馆 2 参观要求 认真听讲 做记录等 3 遵守博物馆的规则 不许拍照 大声喧哗 要求 80 词左右 开头和结尾已给出 Fellow students Thank you One possible version Fellow students May I have you attention please Tomorrow our class will visit the history museum We will meet at the school gate at eight o clock Then we will go to the museum by the school bus In museum we must listen to the guide carefully and take some notes Everybody will write a report after the visit Everyone should obey the rules of the museum We are not allowed to take photos in the museum Remember don t speak loud or we may bother the other visitors Remember the time Don t be late Thank you 2 2007 年潜江市 仙桃市 江汉油田中考英语试题 俗话说 国有国法 家有家规 为了使子女身心健康 顺利成长 使家庭成员之间的关系更融洽 更和谐 每个家庭都会 有这样或那样的家庭规矩 比如 必须按时回家 不准打电子游戏等 请你结合家庭的实 际情况 根据下面的提示和要求 以 My Family Rules 为题 写一篇短文 提示 1 家里有哪些家规 2 对家规的感受 3 对父母的建议 要求 1 必须包括提示内容 可以适当发挥 2 词数 80 个左右 3 文中不得出 现真实的地名和人名 5 My Family Rules One possible version My Family Rules My parents are very strict with me and they have made some basic rules which I must obey Firstly I must finish my homework in time Secondly I cannot play computer games even in my free time or on weekends Thirdly I have to do some chores such as making the bed and tidying my bedroom and so on If I break one of them I will be punished But thanks to these rules I can live a healthy and regular life I think the second rule is unfair to me I hope sometimes I could be allowed to play computer games for a while it will make me relaxed 3 江苏省徐州市中考题