2019上海初三一模二模英语写作汇编

2019上海初三一模二模英语写作汇编1. 杨浦VII. Writing (作文) （共20分）94. In 60 to 120 words, write about the topic “things we can do make our city a better place”. （以“我们可以做些什么让我们的城市更美好”为题，写一篇60-120个词的短文，标点符号不占格）（注意：短文中不得出现考生真实的姓名、校名及其他信息，否则不予评分。）The following is for reference only （下列单词仅供参考）2. 奉贤.Writing(作文) （共20分）94. Writing at least 60 words on the topic“_ make me a better person”(以“_ 成就更好的自己”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格) （注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分）3. 黄浦. Writing（作文）（共20分）94. In 60 to 120 words, write about the topic “ is a good habit”.（以“是好习惯”为题，写一篇60-120个词的短文，标点符号不占格）一个好的习惯会让我们终身受益。什么是好习惯？请分享你的一个好习惯，说说你是怎么养成的？它给你带来哪些好处。请结合生活实际，谈谈你的体验或想法。（注意：短文中不得出现考生真实的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）Saving Money Is a Good HabitSpeaking of good habits, saving money is undoubtedly one of them. Instead of spending tomorrows money, I prefer to save money. In order to learn to cut down unnecessary cost, I will think twice before spending money on those clothes that may not suit myself, which benefits me a lot. First of all, the sense of saving money helps me arrange my daily life properly. Whats more, saving money, to a certain extent, means I can handle emergency quickly.In addition, saving money is not only a traditional virtue but a useful strategy in life. Just as the old saying, a penny saved is a penny earned, so saving money makes me feel safe about tomorrow.4. 崇明VII. Writing (作文）（共20 分)94. Write at least 60 words on the topic “ I am an independent boy (girl) ”（以“我是个独立的男(女）生”为题,写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）现实生活中有些学生过分依赖父母和他人，不会做任何家务，不会照顾自己的生活，学习上缺乏自信，不能独立做事或作出决定。请举例证明你在学习和生活中是个独立的男（女）生。Give examples to prove that you are independent in several ways.(注意：短文中不得出现、.校名及其它相关信息，否则不与评分。）The following phrases are for reference only.(以下短语仅供参考）do houseworktake care of oneselfmake a decision on ones own5. 静安VII.Writing.(作文）94. Write at least 60words about the topic “_,a new way of life!”(请以 “_，一种崭新的生活方式”为题，从以下图片中选择其中一张图片，举例表述你的思考和理由，写一篇不少于60字的短文，标点符号不占格） Weixin MobikePoints for reference:1. Which way do you choose to write about ?2. Why do you think it a new way of life?3. Could you give some suggestions in order to make better use of it?6. 嘉定VII. Writing (作文)（共 20 分）94. write at least 60 words about the topic “ I like reading English _”（以“我喜欢阅读英语_”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）英语课外读物是我们学习英语的好帮手（helper）。我们经常阅读各种英语读物，如英文报刊，杂志，小说和故事等。请介绍你最喜欢的一种英文读物，并谈谈你在英语课外阅读中的收获和感受。 （注意：1.在答题纸上将题目补充完整。 2.短文中不得出现考生真实的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）The following is for reference only.（以下内容仅供参考）Be interested in read various books do good to learnfrom7. 宝山VII.Writing (作文)Shanghai Students post is asking for the comments on “New Century English” textbook.Write a passage of at least 60 words for Shanghai Students Post(上海学生英文报社向中学生征集对先行中学英语教材新世纪英语的评价和建议，请你根据以下内容给报纸写一篇不少于60个词的小短文，标点符号不占格）评价Comments1. Many interesting picture to go with the texts2. The passages are up to date,related to our everyday life,they can lead us to take an active part in class3. Practices our listenting ,speaking,reading and writing skills in an all-round way(全方位)建议和要求Suggestions1. There be more interesting topics2. More passage about English and American cultures3. Some English songs on the tape going with the textbook8. 闵行. Writing（作文）（20分）94. Write a letter to your American pen-pal Tony in at least 60 words according to the given situation（根据所给情景给你的美国笔友Tony写一封不少于60词的回答。要求内容适切，意思连贯，标点符号不占格。信的开头、结尾和署名已给，不计入总字数。）假设你是小明（Xiao Ming），是美国中学生Tony的笔友，你收到了他的来信。请给Tony写一封回信，回答他的问题，介绍上海良好的公共交通服务。（注意：文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）9. 青浦VII. Writing (20)Write at least 60 words according the given situation（根据所给情景写一篇不少于60字的作文，标点符号不占格)Tom 最近很苦恼，他感到和父母存在代沟，双方对很多问题看法不同，自己的想法得不到他们的理解，请你以他的笔友的名义给他写一封信，谈谈你的看法和建议。Words and expressions for referencegeneration gap old-fashioned complain about misunderstanding between . exchange ideas respect ones opinion (注意文中不得出现姓名 校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分)Dear Tom I am very glad to hear from you. But from the letter, I know you are very troubled recently because of the generation gap between you and your parents. You may think that your parents are old-fashioned and they also complain about your behaviors. However, in my view, there must be some misunderstanding between you and your parents. Therefore, it is really essential to exchange the ideas with them, which enables both of you to understand each other better. In addition, if you want to get the respect from your parents, youd better show yours to them first. These are my suggestions for you. I hope they can do you a favor. I look forward to your good news.Write to me soon. Yours Peter 【分析】这是笔友之间的一份回信，书信格式，属于应用文类型。就信得内容而言，是写和父母之间存在代沟，贴近中学生生活，学生们还是有话可写的。文章最终要落实到自己的看法和建议，这些建议需要有层次的表述出来。文章结构可以分为第一段阐述Tom的苦恼，并表明自己的观点：和父母之间的代沟主要由于误解和缺乏有效沟通造成。第二部分针对存在的问题给出自己的建议，可以包括：交换想法、对父母表达尊重、良好有效的沟通。最后部分表达希望以上三点建议能够帮助到Tom，使他的生活得到变化。10. 松江VII. Writing（作文）94. Write at least 60 words on the topic “Something I want to do for my family”.（以“我想为家人做件事”为题写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格。）（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）The following questions are only for reference;1. What do you want to do for your family?2. Why do you want to do it?3. How do you plan to do it? No one can deny the fact that flowers can relax people from hard work and make them delighted. Thus, I am eager to build a small garden for my family. First, the reason why I want to plant flowers is that my family like flowers. We all enjoy the beauty and the nice smell of flowers. Second,one of the advantages of owning a garden is that we can enjoy ourselves in it in our spare time. Now, the only thing I can do is to buy flowers, plant them in the garden and then water them twice a week. To sum up，building a flower garden is something I really want to do for my family.作文三步走：审题，列提纲，语法，句法的检查。做到紧扣题意，结构完整，逻辑清晰。本篇作文也是围绕学生生活，为家人做的一件事为题，学生可能比较容易想到做家务，题材上不太好想。但是给到三个问题的提示，分别是是做什么事，为什么做和怎么做，让学生在内容上有话说，结构上不容易乱，逻辑上也更清晰一些。难度基本和中考相当。11. 徐汇VII Writing:(20)94 Write a passage on the topic “A party for /to _ “ in at least 60 words. 请设计一个主题派对，并以“_派对”为题介绍派对主题，对象及活动内容等，写一篇至少60个字的短文，（标点符号不占格子）（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名，校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分）The following is for reference only.1 organize2 it is to 3 invite to.4 be able to12. 长宁VII. Writing (共20分)94. Write at least 60 words on the topic “A story about_”.(以一个关于的故事“为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格。)（注意： 1. 在答题上将题目补充完整。2. 短文中不得出现任何姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）A story about my fatherIn daily life, my father is not only my first teacher but also one of my dearest friends. At the age of seven, I started primary school and father picked me up from school every day. Once on the way home, I was knocked down by the bike. It was so painful that I couldnt help crying loudly and blaming on the biker. My father rushed to me to check if I had been hurt immediately. Luckily, I was fine. Then, he asked me to stop blaming the person who bumped into me because it was also my fault -I didnt pass the street on the pavement. After the biker apologized to me, my father let me forgive him and admitted that I hadnt obeyed the traffic rules. I will never forget the saying which my father told me “Think about yourself before blaming on others.” Fathers words enriched my life and did a lot of good to my growth. Im sure my fathers love will lead me to my success and I will love him forever!13. 虹口VII. Writing（作文）（20分）94. Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “My joy of living”（以“我的生活乐趣”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）生活有艰辛，也有乐趣，你的生活乐趣是什么？你为何觉得这是你的乐趣所在？你是怎么想的？怎么做的？My joy of living There is no doubt that we all have to face difficulties and stress in life, so we should