如何让你的高考作文“靓”起来.doc

高考英文写作技巧 让整个文章“靓”起来 英语书面表达在高考中日益显得重要，高考书面表达已不只局限于把话说清楚，把意思表达完整，而是要给我们的句子润色，让我们的句子靓起来。如何让我们的英语句子靓起来呢？很多人都强调用连词、介词等词汇手段迅速提高语言水平。但这种方法需要一定的积累，也需要一定的基础。而我觉得通过对低级句型的改造，可以迅速达到这一目的。强调句：可以轻松地将时间、地点、原因、方式等类型的状语从句转变为强调句。It was not until I arrived home that I realized I had left the bag on the shop counter.It was then that I realized the importance of English.倒装句：只要句中有介词短语或状语从句，便可将其提前，变成倒装句。Only when I turned right at the crossing did that car crack towards me.Only by this means can he escape from the big fire.with引导的伴随结构：可以将状语从句或并列句中的其中一个分句变成with结构。With the sun lighting brightly and the birds singing clearly, I went to school in high spiritsHe always likes to sleep with the windows open.巧妙地使用非谓语动词：可以将状语从句或并列的动词简化为非谓语动词。Hearing that, the drivers wife quickly added that her husband often talked nonsense after drinking. (低级形式：When he heard that, )恰到好处的被动句：适合应用于较简短的句子，这样显得语言简洁生动，宾语一般是nothing、anything、everything等不定代词。Searched all my pockets, but nothing was found。感叹句：通常用于开头结尾活跃文章气氛，凡是“I feel ”之类表达感情的句子皆可如此改造。How terrible I felt today! I failed again in the math exam.高级定语从句：若定语从句中的动词带有介词，只需将介词移至先行词后。 We came to a place to which they had never paid a visit before.进行时态：有时会含有一定情绪，尤其要使用always这样的富含感情色彩的副词。I am always feeling terrible when I take a bus.婉转表达：需要使用幽默的技巧，主要用于漫画型作文题。I could find nothing but bad luck when I returned the shop after learning that my handbag had been left on the counter.what引导的名词性从句：将动宾结构转化为此结构。What he gave me, which I knew, were not only a Christmas present but also a heart full of love and a mind of my existence in it.“数词+名词”变为“as many as+数词+名词”。As many as ten years ago, my hometown used to be covered by forests适当加一些不关痛痒的插入语：一些连词、副词可以放到句子中间充当语气较弱的插入语，如I guess、however、in a way、certainly、in my opinion、probably、briefly, generally speaking, believe it or not, besides, whats more等，有时可以考虑几个插入语连用，就更像英美人士的文章了。独立主格：将主从句去掉连词，前句动词变为分词即可。The weather being fine, a large number of people went to climb the Western Hills. 把简单句改成复合句：适当的时候把两个简单句改成“too.to”或者“sothat”等高级一点的复合句。例如：I was very tired. I couldnt keep up with them.我们可以改成：I was so tired that I couldnt keep up with them.或：I was too tired to keep up with them.这样一来，英语基础不是很好的学生只要能够写出最基本的句子，然后再对这些句子进行加工、改造、润色，慢慢的，就会让句子靓起来，在高考中就可以得到比较满意的成绩。实战练习一、写作 1、（1分）提示： 张楠的父亲有位美国同事，他的孩子约翰史密斯即将来华。约翰写信向张楠询问一些有关他所在城市的问题。张楠回信，内容如下： 得知约翰要来非常高兴。告诉他可能遇到一些不同于美国的情况。 气候：冬天冷，有时下雪。夏天几乎不下雨，但一下起来就很大。提醒约翰带雨衣、棉衣。 饮食：饮食与美国很不同，他应尽力适应中国饮食，并要学会如何使用筷子。 最后，请他带一张美国地图，希望早日能见面。 字数：100120个词。翰林汇2、（1分）日记 1今天,在学校礼堂举行了开学典礼。 2全体教师、学生出席,部分科学家和官员也参加。 3校长在讲话中希望全体师生在新的学期中再接再厉取得更大进步.并宣布部分同学因 在各种竞赛中获奖而获周培源奖学金。 4三好学生受到奖励。 5著名科学家讲话,他讲述了自己的学习经验及科研成功的经验.他的讲话使我深受感 动。参考词汇： 礼堂：auditorium 奖学金：scholarship翰林汇3、（1分）提示：根据以下内容写一篇日记。 1昨天与同学外出野餐，按计划要爬西山。 2早上在校门口集合7点出发。 3不久下小雨，继续骑车，一小时后到达山脚。 4雨停，爬上山顶，领略美景。 5照像，唱歌，跳跃，做游戏，下棋，午餐，玩得开心。 6午餐后下山，4点回家。筋疲力尽。 7时间5月20日，星期三。参考词汇： 野餐：picnic翰林汇4、（1分）Read this telephone conversation：Lucia： Im so glad you called me today. I have a big problem I hope you can help me with.Clara： Whats the problem? Ill help if I can.Lucia： My cousin is coming home tonight from his trip to Europe and Im supposed to pick him up at the airport at seven.Clara： Oh? Is your car giving you trouble again?Lucia： No. I just found out I have to work late tonight. Can you possibly pick him up for me?Clara： Sure. What airline is he coming in on?Lucia： Pan Am. Flight 607.Clara： Ok. But how will I recognize him?Lucia： Well, hes medium height. And average weigh. He wears glasses, and he dresses very well.Clara： That could be almost everyone. Can you be more specific?Lucia： Well, his hair is blond and curly. I almost forget! He has a beard.Clara： Whats his name?Lucia： Ernic Norton.Clara： Okay, not problem. Ill find him.Lucia： Thank you so much!At the last minute, Clara was unable to get to the airport. She wrote her brother, Tom, a note describing Ernic so that he would be able to find him. What did Claras note say?翰林汇5、（1分）提示： 外籍教师Lynne任教期满准备回国，学校答应派车送她去机场。她在临行前一天写了张便条提醒办公室李老师： 1请检查(check on)明天的车是否落实，提醒司机(remind sb. of sth.提醒某人做某事)。 2她之所以要确定一下，是因为太早不好叫出租车。 3感谢费心，并感谢一年来的关心。 4在学校一年来，生活愉快、难忘，很可能再来。 5留下一些英语书给贵校图书馆，希望对学生有用。 字数：100120个词。翰林汇6、（1分）提示：李明的父亲在美国威斯康星大学进修。李明写信给父亲汇报自己的高考情况。 1考上自己渴望已久的北京大学。 2学校校园很美，设备良好，有一座很大的图书馆。 3教师很出色，对学生和蔼耐心。 4自己对这里的一切非常满意，决心更加刻苦学习。 5请爸爸不要为自己担心，自己已经长大了，会处理各种事情，并祝父亲身体好。 字数：约100个词。翰林汇7、（1分）根据下列内容和提示，写一篇口头通知稿。提示： 1事由：欢迎日本学生来校参观。 2参观日期：9月15日。 3参观时间：上午9：00至12：00。 4参观人数：约20人。具体安排： 19月15日上午8：45在校门口集合，欢迎来校参观的日本学生。 2带客人到接待室(reception room)开联欢会(get-together)。 3带客人参观图书馆、实验室和校办厂。 411：30和日本学生在食堂共进午餐，并互赠小礼物。 5客人在12：00左右离开学校.注意： 1通知稿须包括所给要点，但不要逐条翻译。 2字数：80100个词。翰林汇8、（1分）提示： 李明在光明路一家中外合资公司买了一台电冰箱，使用半年后出现了问题。即向公司写信要求来人修理。内容如下： 1去年我在你们商店买了一台电冰箱，外形和颜色我都很满意。 2但是，最近发现电冰箱时常发出噪音，从低到高，有时甚至停止工作。 3我们对此深感失望。希望能尽快派人来修理。来时请打电话联系。电话：6606.5531 我们将在家恭候。翰林汇9、（1分）提示： 几位外国旅游者到公园的“英语角”参观。假定你是“英语角”的负责人，请用英语准备一段介绍，内容如下： 1简况：“英语角”三年前成立,许多中学参加，至今已有几百人.许多大学生和外国友 人也常光顾。 2活动内容：练习英语会话,谈论有兴趣的话题，交流学习英语的经验。 3活动时间：每周日上午。 4效果：通过参加活动学习了许多东西，对英语课堂学习是一个补充。学生、家长、老 师都非常欢迎，认为对学英语很有帮助。如果还想了解更多，可问在场的学生。参考词汇： 对补充：a supplement to翰林汇10、（1分）提示： 假设由你接待一组加拿大中学生代表团。该团经广州、成都等地在北京只逗留两天。团长向你征求意见在北京先参观何处，请按以下提示提出你的口头建议： 1首先建议去长城。长城是世界是最长的墙，是世界八大奇观之一，有20个世纪的悠 久历史，全部由手工建成，令人惊叹不已。 2其次是故宫，它建于1406年，曾有24位皇帝在那儿居住过。皇帝在那儿发号施令。 参观它，可以更多地了解中国历史。 3对其逗留时间短暂深感遗憾，否则，可以参观许多具有历史意义的地方和景区，如 颐和园、北海公园等。参考词汇： 发号施令：issue orders 令人惊奇：amazing参考答案：写作-1 范文一、写作 1、（1分） Dear John, I was excited to hear that you would come to China next month. Now let me tell you something different you may meet here. To begin with, the weather here is totally different from that in your place. It hardly ever rains but whenever it does, it rains heavily. So youd better bring a raincoat and overcoat. Another big difference is food. The Chinese food is quite different from yours. You have to try to get used to it, and learn how to use chopsticks. Im sure you can do it. Finally please bring me a big American map if possible. Thank you very much. I am looking forward to meeting you.YoursZhang Nan2、（1分） Sep.Sec. 1995 Wednesday Fine Today our school had an opening ceremony in the school auditorium. All the teachers and students as well as some famous scientists and government officials attended. Our principal made a speech. He hoped everybody in our school would work harder and make even more progress in the new term, “three-good-deed” students were rewarded with prizes. Principal also announced that some honour students received Zhou Peiyuan scholarships because they had won medals in various competitions. A famous scientist then made a speech. He told the students about his learning experience and how he achieve success in his research work. I was so moved by what he said.3、（1分） May 20th Wednesday Cloudy and drizzle Yesterday my classmates and I went to on a picnic. According to our plan we would climb the West Mountain. Early in the morning all of us gathered at the gate of our school, we started of at seven, soon it began to have a little rain. We kept on riding for an hour till we reached the foot of the mountain. The little rain stopped then. We began to climb. Soon we reached the top of the mountain. How beautiful it was when we looked at the view from the top. We ran. sang, jump, played chess, and had the pictures taken on the top of the mountain. and had lunch on the rocks. How happy we were! After the lunch we went down the mountain. We got home at four, all of us almost gave out.翰林汇4、（1分） Dear Tom, My friend Lucias cousin is coming home tonight from his trip to Europe on Flight 607. I have promised Lusia to pick him up at the airport. But I have just got something important to do. Would you please go to the airport to pick him up instead of me? His cousin is medium height and average weight; he wears glasses, and dresses very well, his hairs is blond and curly. He has a beard, and his name is Ernic Norton. Thanks a lot.YoursClara翰林汇5、（1分） Hi, Mr. Li, Could you please check on the car to take me to the airport? Please remind the car driver of this. I want to be sure of this car, because it will be too early in the morning to call a taxi if the school car doesnt show up. I am sorry to trouble you again. Here I thank you again for all you have done for me during my stay in your school. I really enjoy teaching here, and will never forget the day I spent with my students. Probably I will come back some day. I leave some English books to your library. I hope they will be useful to your students.YoursLynne翰林汇6、（1分） Dear Dad, I am very excited to tell you that I have passed the entrance examination and been admitted into Peking University-the famous university which I have been longing for. The university is beautiful and has excellent equipment. There is a large library in it. The teachers here are very good. They are very kind and patient to the students. I am satisfied with all these and determined to study harder. Dont worry about me. I have grown up and can deal with all kinds of matters. Wish you a good health.RespectfullyLi Ming翰林汇7、（1分） Attention please, everyone： About twenty Japanese students will come to our school for a visit on September 15th. Well meet at the school gate at 8：45 a.m., and give them a warm welcome when they arrive at 9：00. Then well take them to the reception room. After a get-together there, well show around the school, the library, the labs and the school factory, At 11：30 well have lunch with the Japanese students in the dining-hall, and then give the presents each other. The Japanese students will leave at about 12：00. Thats all. Thank you.翰林汇8、（1分） Dear sir, Last year I bought a refrigerator in your store on Chang An road. We all like the shape and colour of the refrigerator. But recently I find something is wrong with it. It begins to make noise when it is turned on. At first it is low but gradually it becomes louder and louder. To make the matter worse, it even stops working sometimes. We all feel disappointed with. I am writing to you to ask for help. Would you please send somebody to repair it. I will be at home this weekend. Please call me before you come. My telephone number is 6606.5531. Thank you very much.CustomerLi Ming翰林汇9、（1分） Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our English Corner. This Corner was set up three years ago. Every Sunday morning,students from different schools gathered around here. Many college students and some foreigners often join us,We practice spoken