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写作高分特征: 内容相关（切题即可）结构清晰（新闻联播三段式）语言精彩（句子结构词多变）主要步骤：现象描述 危害分析 原因分析 建议措施 观点阐述 意义案例一：（自行车）第一段提炼：第一句模板提炼：1，In china , bicycles have gained great popularity among Chinese people.2, in the recent decade,.3, in the contemporary society,.第二局模板提炼：1, In china ,no means of transport is more popular and important than bicycles.2, Almost every family in the city has two or three bicycles.3, Based on a recent report, a majority of Chinese families in the cities acknowledge that they have two or three bicycles.(调查式描述)第三局模板提炼：During the rush hour, it can be noticed/seen that thousands of people.第二段提炼：(利弊分析)1，to begin/start with,. Whats more / moreover . Finally/lastly/eventually/ultimately2，on one hand . On other hand / for one thing . For another原因分析段：原因分析段 = 原因分析主题句 + 具体原因（2到3句） + 原因总结主题句1：generally speaking , several reasons(/factors/causes) can account for/be accounted for / be responsible for the phenomenon.2，in general , there are several purposes responsible for _,but the following may be the most critical(中性话题)3，it is evident / obvious / apparent that the causes of _ are diverse.4，to solve ( / resolve / tackle / settle / deal with) this worrying / disturbing issue, it is of vital to determine / explore / investigate the possible reasons.原因/危害/建议/意义分析逻辑：原因1:(原因+原因描述：即现象)In the first place , _ is the root cause . An illustration of this point would be that _(或调查法：based on a survey , .)2， in the second place , _constitute another major reason . Specially , _(原因+具体描述)3，in addition , (social prejudice / ignorance ) plays a critical role in the issue .负面：社会忽视/偏见正面：重视emphasized4，（法规） besides, the _ policy being carried out in _(doest) enables _ to _原因总结1， consequently , _ has not been emphasized.2，as a result , _ pay relatively less attention to_ .危害分析：=主题句+危害1.2+总结句主题句1，such _ be bound to / generate / result in / give rise to / lead to / provoke / trigger / commune to severe / negative / serious / grave consequences 2，apparently enough , there are some negative impacts which we should not neglect /ignore / be ignorant of.3，quite obviously , it is of great necessity to figure out the negative influences behind it . 4，to tackle this problem , it is of great vital to analyze the potential / negative impacts of this matter .危害1，to begin with,_ may damage / hurt / harm / impair / undermine the _ of _ .2，moreover , (强调句式) it is _that exerts / produces / generate bad impacts . (on physical health / psychological fitness)3，in addition / furthermore / what is worse / besides , _set bad examples to others , leading them to _（对他人影响）4，then , it is manifest（明显） that _ are developing / gaining _ at the expense / cost of_5，besides , it can be argued that _ means a grave waste of time / energy / natural resources .危害总结1， as has been noted , _ do / does impact our _ negatively to a large / some extent .2，to conclude , it is undeniable that the bad impacts of _ can never be turned a blind eye to .建议措施：=总结+建议1,2+展望总结1（针对负面问题建议） in view of the seriousness of the situation ,effective measures should be taken before things get worse .2，therefore / thus / hence / according , to tackle this problem , it is high time that we took feasible step to stop / limit this trend .3，peoples way to _ do vary / differ .建议1，on the one hand , it is essential that laws and regulations should be worked out / lay out and enforced to ban / support / regulate _(法规监督)2，on the other hand , it is suggested that _ should enhance / promote / cultivate / strengthen their awareness of _ .3，(发动群众) additionally ,we should educate advocate and encourage our friends , classmates and acquaintances to _ acquaint sb with sth .4，(讲座) then ,_ lecture or courses about _ are highly hoped / expected to be set to guide_ .展望未来1，only by adopting these measures , can we hope / expect_.2，if we spare no effort to do so , a promising and hopeful future of _ is just awaiting us .3，undoubtedly , if we spare no effort to do so, the future / prospect（前景）of _ will be rosy ,hopeful and promising .观点阐述：（正反对比，问题解决） 陈述现状 原因后果 解决措施第一段：陈述现状The past several years have witnessed a not uncommon social phenomenon that . (注意句中的双重否定)It is widely acknowledge that . Has become an increasing serious problem .双重否定：almost no one in china have failed to notice the phenomenon that . In recent years .第二段：原因后果What exactly contributes to such phenomenon ? Its a though-provoking questions . Firstly . Secondly .The phenomenon mentioned above is bound to generate severe consequences , if we keep turning a blind e