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短文改错9 一When the accident was happened, I was standing near a bus stop. There I saw an old lady waiting a bus with her umbrella. The bus soon arrived at. There were too many passengers hurrying to get on it that the old lady couldnt get on. A driver closed the door without looking careful and drove away. Unluckily the old ladys umbrella was caught by the door. She shouted to the driver but he didnt hear. The bus pulled her along the road. Finally, she fall to the ground. Several minutes late, the ambulance came and took her to hospital. I think the driver should be responsible for the accident.答案： 1. was happened 删除was 2. waiting for 3. arrived at删除at 4 too many so many 5 careful-carefully 6 fall-fell 7 late-later 8 二Last week, we feel sorry to hear that our class teacher was ill. Afterwards, we had a discussion and decided manage on our own. During the followed days, all of us did a good job. None of us late for school and we did morning exercise better than ever. In class, we gave a classroom a thoroughly cleaning to welcome her. Our monitor presented some flowers to her while she stepped onto the platform. Seeing the red flag for Weekly Model Class, she was happy but moved. 1. feel-felt 2 decided decided to 3 followed-following 4 late for were late for 5 exercise-exercises 6 had won-won 7 gave a gave the 8 thoroughly-thorough 9 while- when 10 but and 三Li Ming went to the park in last Saturday afternoon after he had already finished his homeworks. He saw several boys skating in the pond happily. Suddenly he heard a cry for help. Looked ahead, he found one of the boys had fallen into the water. Li Ming jumped into icy water immediately and tried to pull the boy to safety. Then the boy was given first aid but soon came to myself. The boys parents came soon after they received the phone call. They were very much thankful Li Ming, who was trembling there with cold.1. in last- last 2 homeworks-homework 3 in- on 4 looked-looking 5 into icy-into the icy 6 tried-managed 7 but and 8 myself himself 9 much删除 10 thankful thankful to 四My secret of staying young is simple: Keeping your mind awake and you will stay young all over. Take interest in the world around you, and learn at least the new thing every day. Dont think that you are ever too young to go back to school. I know a man entered a medical college at 70. He got his degree with honors and became a famous doctor. Other man went to a law school at 71 and is now a active lawyer. You may say that staying young is easy only for that living in the future. In fact, you can do it whether you care enough to try to keep your mind awake and active, what is the only way to be always. 1 keeping keep 2 interest an interest 3 the new- a / one new 4 young- old 5 entered who entered 6 other another 7 a active- an active 8 that those 9 whether if 10 what which 五One day after school, on the way home, I happened see a little boy turning off a tap and splashing water here and there on the ground. So with hesitation I went over and turned off the water. As we all know it, water is the source of life. Without water we human beings cant live. Otherwise they will disappear from the earth. Besides, there are a very limited water resource in our world. So we mustnt take some measures to getting rid of such wasteful habits. Everyone must save water so that development of the world and mankind can continue. 1. happened happened to 2 turning off turning on 3 with- without 4 know it know 5 but and 6 alive- living 7 are is 8 mustn t must 9 getting get 10 that development that the development.六 Learning English is great importance. English is widely used all over the world. It was often used in the international meetings. Most business letters are written in English. With a help of English we can learn modern science and technology from the developed countries. We can also introduce our achievement and experiences to other countries. Because of their importance, English is a requiring subject in high schools and colleges. Now many people are working hardly at English. Its very important to learn English well. If we learn English well, we can serve for our country better. So I suggest most Chinese can learn it well.1 is great is a great 2 was is 3 a help the help 4 from the developed from developed 5 expeeriences experience 6 their its 7 requiring required 8 hardly hard 9 serve for serve 10 can learn should learn 七 Locate in Conghua, the Temple, which covers and area of 900 square meters, are said to be built between 1426 and 1435. After it was first built, much big repairs, were done in different dynasties, seven of them were recorded in words. This is first discovery of ancient buildings in our province with exact times. To let it survive, local villagers and government treasures the grand relic and protect it with great care and repair it when is necessary. Because of their great efforts, in 2003, when the Temple was given first prize as cultural relic protection from the UN.1 Locate Located 2 are said is said 3 much many 4 them which 5 first the first 6 times time 7 treasures treasure 8 is necessary it is necessary 9 when 删除 10 as for八I eager to go to college because I know there is so many to learn about the world and about human beings. Knowledge is source of pleasure for me. I want to study at a college for the fun to knowledge; I know college education can prepares me better for my future. Better education mean, more often then not, better jobs, better opportunities and better choices. I want to go to college because I know that our parents and other people care for me will be happy with that. Unless I can study at a nice university, I will make them happy. Id like not let them down. Thats why I must go to college.1 eager am eager 2 many much 3 source a source 4 to knowledge of knowledge 5 prepares prepare 6 mean means 7 our my 8 people care people who care 9 unless if 10 not let not to let 九Grain, which is used to be the main food of most people in China, is now playing a more important role. On the other hand, meat and fish has increased rapidly. The changes in diet can be accounted by three main reason. First, people are much wealthier than before. By higher income, they can afford to buy good foods. Secondly, people have realized the importance of balanced diet to their health. Lack in certain amount of meat, for example, will result in poor health. Finally, because of the economic reform, meat, chicken, fish or milk, which were scarce in the past, were produced in large quantities now. we believe that as far as the effort continues in reform and development, there will be greater changes in peoples diet in the future. 1 which is which 2 more less 3 accounted accounted for 4 reason reasons 5 By With 6 of balanced of a balanced 7 Lack in Lack of 8 or and 9 were are10 as far as as long as十My mother is a village woman, who is already in fifties. She had very little education, and she knows knowledge is of very importance to young people. She often asks me how I get along with my studies and encourages me study hard. My mother does everything she can for me so that I can spend more time with my study. Once she was bad ill and had stayed in bed for several days. When I got home, I found the light was still off and mother was sitting in bed, made new clothes for me! I was so deeply moved that tear came to my eyes. So is my mother, a kind and hard-working woman.1 in fifties in her fifties 2 and she but she 3 very importance great importance 4 me study me to study 5 with my study on my study 6 bad ill badly ill 7 still off still on 8 made me making me 9 tear tears 10 so is such is 十一One cold winter day in 1900, a small boy was called Charles Chaplin was walked along the street in London. He doesnt have breakfast or lunch. He wanted to buy some bread, and he didnt have any money. His father died since he was very young. His mother was often very sick, so she could take care of Charles or his brother. Neither of them had to work to help his mother. He was very young but his dream was very big. He wanted to be great man in the world of films. So he worked very hardly.1 was called 删除was 2 walked walking 3 doesnt didnt 4 and he but he 5 since when 6 could could not 7 neither both 8 his mother their mother 9 be great be a great 10 hardly hard 十二Good health is the persons most valuable possession. Today, it is much easier to be healthy than it was the past. Modern people know more than health, have better food, and live in clean surroundings. Also, scientists and doctors had learned how to deal with many diseases. Most people can quickly get for help from a doctor or go to a hospital since they are ill. As a result, people in the modern world generally live longer than people is used to. People in developed countries can expect to live for twice as long as people who lived a little hundred years ago.1 the persons a persons 2 the past in the past 3 clean cleaner 4 had learned have learned 5 get for get 6 since when 7 in the modern in modern 8 is used to used to 9 live for live 10 little few十三I will never forget the story that happens on a bus the other day. It was a windy day. I got off a bus after school. A young lady was standing the n