2012高中英语写作教学6课件-2012年高考英语书面表达观摩课课件课件.ppt

,英语书面表达,English Composition Writing,What makes a good essay?,The essay,A good essay is usually made up ofa topic paragraph, some supporting paragraphs and a concluding paragraph.,Topic paragraph Supporting Paragraph 1 Supporting Paragraph 2 Supporting Paragraph 3Concluding paragraph,Topic paragraph(Introduction) paragraph General statement Topic statement,To many students, school life is boring and tiring. However, I find my school life meaningful and colourful.,Our school (big, modern and beautiful),Another example, Our school is large, modern and beautiful. TS: Our school is really large. ss-ss-ss-ss-ss Our school is a very modern one. ss-ss-ss-ss-ss Our school is well-known for its beauty. ss-ss-ss-ss-ss Im proud of being a student of such a good school.,Topic paragraph Supporting Paragraph 1Supporting Paragraph 2 Supporting Paragraph 3Concluding paragraph,Supporting Paragraphs(Body) Paragraphs,TSSSSSSSSS,ConclusionI thinkPersonally,Obviously, we can draw the conclusion thatto sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus,Thus, it can be concluded that, Therefore, we can find thatFrom what has been discussed above, we may draw the conclusion that . In summary, it is wiser . In short.,The paragraph,What makes a good paragraph?,A good paragraph is one that consists ofa topic sentence and supporting sentences.,There are different kinds of bee. Some live in large groups like the honey bee, and make their nests in trees or holes in the rocks. Other species make their nests in holes in the ground. There are also varieties that do not live in groups at all. Among the different kinds of bee, it is the honey-bee that has interested scientists most because of the language,topic sentence,Wherever you go in our school, you see green lawns and trees and beautiful flowers. Dotted among these trees and flowers are many buildings of different styles. A stream runs through our school and you always see everything reflected in the water.,Topic sentence:_,just like a garden.,Our school is,just like a garden.,Our school is,A good paragraph is one that contains proper linking words.,I believe English is more important than other foreign languages for many reasons. First of all, English is spoken by a large number of people, and these people are the most widely spread across the world in a great many countries. Secondly, English is the most widely used language on the internet. It has become an on-line language. Thirdly, the 2008 Olympic Games will be held in our country and English will be very useful. Lastly, ,Other linking words1）first, second, third, last2）firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally3） in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly4） to begin with, then, furthermore, finally,5）to start with, next, in addition, finally6）first and foremost, besides, last but not least7）most important of all, moreover, finally8）on the one hand, on the other hand9）for one thing, for another thing,A good paragraph is one with varied sentence patterns.,As a creature, I eat; as a man, I read. Although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of the mind, they are in a way quite similar.,Summary:,A good essay is usually made up of a topic paragraph, some supporting paragraphs and a concluding paragraph.,A good paragraph is one that consists of a topic sentence and supporting sentences.,A good paragraph is one that contains proper linking words.,A good paragraph is one with varied sentence patterns.,2008年全国高考考试大纲中，语文作文“每错一个字扣一分，重复不计”的新规定，引起考生和家长的极大关注。请你就以下要点给某英语报社写一篇英语报道。（不必翻译新规定内容）,Writing practice,The computer is more and more widely used. Young people like to chat on line. When they are chatting, they dont care about their writting. There have many wrong characters in their compositions, too. Every day, they have many homework. They cant remember the characters. The government has carried out a new policy. It will make people pay attention to Chinese. It will help students learn Chinese well. We dont have much time. Its high time that we took action. We can develop our country by improving our mother tongue first.,What do you think of this essay?And why?,A students essay,Lets improve it:,Lets improve it:,The suggested structure: Paragraph 1: Problem and analysis. Paragraph 2: Effect of the new policy. Paragraph 3: Your advice.,Lets divide it into parts:,Para.1,Para.2,Para.3,The computer remember the characters.,The government help students learn Chinese well.,Its high time that we by improving our mother tongue first.,Paragraph 2: To deal with the situation, the government carries out a new policy.,Paragraph 3: As far as I am concerned, its high time that we took action.,Paragraph 1: It is common that there are many wrongly-written characters in a students composition.,The topic sentence of each paragraph:,Lets improve it:,Lets improve it:, they dont care about their writting. There have many wrong characters in their compositions, too. Every day, they have many homework.,writing,are,much,When they are chatting, they dont care their writing.Every day, they have much homework. They are too busy to remember the characters. It will make people pay attention to our mother tongue. It will help students learn Chinese well.,Can you improve them?,When they are chatting, they dont care their writing.When chatting, they dont care their writing.,(Ellipsis 省略句),Every day, they have much homework. They cant remember the characters.Every day, they have so much homework to do that they fail to remember the characters.,(sothat; fail to do),(with),With so much homework to do, they have trouble in remembering the characters.,It will make people pay attention to our mother tongue.,(raise the awareness of),It will raise the awareness of our mother tongue.,It will help students learn Chinese well.,(have a positive effect on),It will have a positive effect on students Chinese learning.,It will raise the awareness of our mother tongue. It will have a positive effect on students Chinese learning.,_ the awareness of our mother tongue, it will have a positive effect on Chinese learning.,(non-verbal非谓语）,(not onlybut also),It will not only raise the awareness of our mother tongue, but also have a positive effect on students Chinese learning.,Raising,_. _, when young people chat online, they attach little importance to their writing. _, with so much homework to do, they have trouble memorizing the characters. The new policy is intended to deal with the situation. Raising the social awareness of our mother tongue, it will have a positive effect on Chinese learning. _, its high time that we took action. _, we should refer to a dictionary for unknown characters. Second, collect the mistakes and review them frequently. In a word, only by working hard can we achieve our goal.,There are several reasons behind. B. As far as I am concerned C. For example D. Moreover. E. First of all,A,C,D,B,E,Which ending do you like better? Why?,In my opinion, the policy is beneficial to us. It makes sense in protecting our culture.b) As far as I am concerned, its high time that we took action. We should collect the mistakes and review them frequently. Only by hard working can we achieve our goal.,It is common that there are many wrongly-written characters in a students composition. There are several reasons behind. For example, when chatting on line, teenagers attach little importance to their writing. Moreover, with so much homework to do, they have trouble memorizing the characters. To deal with the situation, the government carries out a new policy. Raising the social awareness of our mother tongue, it will have a positive effect on Chinese learning. As far as I am concerned, its high time that we took action. We should collect the mistakes and review them frequently. In a word, only by working hard can we achieve our goal.,Summary:,paragraphs,topic sentence,details,to the point,advanced vocabulary,sentence patterns,linking words,structure,content,language,writing,few mistakes,The writing task of the College Entrance Examination in Jiangsu Province of the past five years,04年江苏高考,假如你是李晓华，住在江城。你的加拿大笔友Bob来信谈到了他所居住的城市，并希望了解你家乡江城的情况。请你用英语写一封回信。回信须包括下表中的内容。,05年江苏高考,假设你是李晓平，是“江苏中学”的学生。请你围绕“建设和谐社会”的主题，根据下面所给出的要点提示，用英语给全省中学生写一封倡议书。要点提示： 1人与社会：祖国、家乡、学校，热爱关心 2人与人：家人、师长、同学，诚信互助 3人与自然：能源、环境、动植物，爱惜保护 4你的态度：(内容由考生自己拟定),06年江苏高考,据报道：2008年北京奥运会将选拔约十万名志愿者为之服务。请你以“Dos and Donts for the 2008 Olympic Volunteers”为题，用英语写一篇短文，讨论志愿者应该做什么，不应该做什么。 短文应包括下表中的内容：,2007年4月29日上午10点到11点，全国亿万学生阳光体育活动在各地大中小学校同时举行。江苏省1,110万学生积极参与了这项活动。教育部倡导学生： 每天锻炼一小时 健康工作五十年 幸福生活一辈子请根据以上指示，用英语准备一份发言稿，向同学们讲述一下阳光体育活动的有关情况，并就高三学生是否需要每天花一小时锻炼，谈谈你的看法及理由,07年江苏高考,实现有效的沟通，建立良好的人际关系，不仅要善于言表，更要学会倾听。请你根据下表中所提供的信息，写一篇题为“Being a Good Listener”的英文演讲稿。,（请考生联系自己拟定内容，列举两至三点。）,怎样倾听,增进友谊，互帮互学，,了解学生，满足需求，,老师倾听学生,理解孩子，消除代沟，,谁来倾听,表示尊重，增进理解，建立良好的人际关系,为何倾听,家长倾听孩子,同学相互倾听,08年江苏高考,From the writing task of the past five years, we can find something in common. That is, the writing task requires you to write something as suggested; at the same time, it requires you to express your own opinion. Wed better pay special attention to this part.,苏州市2009届高三教学调研测试,最近，国家教育部要求中小学生参加冬季长跑活动：建议小学生每天跑1000米，初中生1500米，高中生2000米。对此，有些人表示支持，有些人表示反对。请你根据以下材料，写一篇以“Should we give more attention to students health or grades?”为题的短文，谈谈你的看法。,注意：1词数150左右。短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数； 2对所给要点，逐一陈述，设当发挥，不要简单翻译。,One possible version:Should we give more attention to students health or grades? The Ministry of Education of China has urged all the students to participate in the winter long-distance running activity. It is suggested that primary school students should run 1,000 meters a day, junior school students, 1,500 and senior school students, 2,000. However, it aroused various arguments among people including education specialists, teachers, parents and students. Some people say yes to this activity. They think, for one thing, it can make more people care about physical education; for another, running can improve students health and promote their learning efficiency so they can have good grades.,However, others hold opposite opinions about the activity. They believe that learning is the most important task for students and their future depends on what they will achieve in their subjects. Meanwhile, high requirements dont mean good health and many cant do it every day. Whats worse, some will suffer cold and injuries. In my opinion, its all right for schools to pay more attention to students health and carry out the activity step by step. Remember a good body helps make high efficiency.,What do you think about the concluding paragraph? Is