独 立写作 - 强化9步

INDEPENDENTTASKStrengthenthe9steps Strengthenthe9stepsStep1 decipherthepromptStep2 writeyourthesisstatementTopic Youhavebeentoldthatdormitoryroomsatyouruniversitymustbesharedbytwostudents Wouldyouratherhavetheuniversityassignastudenttosharearoomwithyou orwouldyouratherchooseyourownroommate Usespecificreasonsanddetailstoexplainyouranswer ThesisstatementASinceIdonotgetalongwellwithmanypeople Iprefertochoosemyownroommate ThesisstatementBInthepast Ihaveoftenbeenpleasantlysurprisedbychanceencounters therefore Iwouldrathertheuniversitymakemychoiceofaroommate 练习 TopicSomepeoplethinkgovernmentshouldspendasmuchmoneyaspossibleexploringouterspace forexample travellingtothemoonandtootherplanets OtherpeopledisagreeandthinkgovernmentshouldspendthismoneyforourbasicneedsonEarth Whichofthesetwoopinionsdoyouagreewith Usespecificreasonsanddetailstosupportyouranswer ThesisstatementAThemoonisabetterplacetoexplorebecauseitisnearerthanotherplanets ThesisstatementBWhilethereisstillhunger poverty andilliteracyonEarth ourresourcesshouldbefocusedherebutnotinouterspace Step3 createanoutlineEachessayoutlinehasthreecomponents thethesisstatement mainpointsentences andsomesupportingdetails 三种提纲思路WEB网状Avs B对比2 1反证 WEB网状提纲第36题 car bike plane选择一个Thesisstatement 1 mainpointsentence detail 2 mainpointsentence detail 3 mainpointsentence detail WEB网状提纲 e g Thetwentiethcenturysawagreatchange Inyouropinion whatisonechangethatshouldberememberedaboutthetwentiethcentury Usespecificreasonsanddetailstoexplainyourchoice STEP3的提纲 Medicaladvances 1 Disease 2 Surgicaladvance 3 Healthcare 范文 第一段Althoughthereweremanychanges bothtechnologicalandcultural inthetwentieth onestandsoutabovetherest advancesinthemedicalscience Thechangesinmedicalsciencecannotbeisolatedfromthechangesintechnologicalandculturalareas Onecanmoveaheadonlywiththehelpoftheothers Wesawtheresultsofmedicaladvancesinthreeareas developmentofvaccinesandantibiotics expandedaccesstohealthcare andimprovedsurgicaltechniques 第二段 Whenmedicalresearchersdeterminedhowtopreventdiseaseandhowtostopitfromspreading thequalityoflifeformanypeoplearoundtheworldimproved Todaysmallpoxisaforgottendisease andvaccinationsarenolongerrequired Polioisundercontrolandthevaccineiswidelyavailable Thedevelopmentofpenicillinhashelpedmanypeoplerecoverfromseriousillnesses 第三段 Althoughhealthcareisnotuniversalevenindevelopedcountries itismuchbetterthanitusedtobe Localclinics visitingnurses andspecialtyhospitalshaveallimprovedthehealthcareforourcommunities 第四段 Andifyoushouldbeunfortunateandrequiresurgery youarestillmorefortunatetohavethesurgerytodaythanyouwouldhavebeeneventenyearsago Nowwithmicroscopicandlasersurgery operationsaremoreefficient Youspendlesstimeinthehospitalandyourecoverfaster 第五段 Icannotthinkofanyotherchangethataffectedthelivesofsomanypeople Ourhealthisimportanttoallofus Weallarethankfulforadvancesintheareaofmedicalscience AorB对比论证提纲 第15题 Inthefuture studentsmayhavethechoiceofstudyingathomeusingtechnologysuchascomputersortelevisionorofstudyingattraditionalschools Whichdoyouprefer Usreasonsandspecificdetailstoexplainyouchoice TraditionalschoolsV S studying homeStudyingatschoolwouldbebestforme1 Source学校家里2 Subject学校家里3 Motivation学校家里4 Interaction学校家里 2 1反证提纲结构2pros 1con 2cons 1proThewayofdebating Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement animalsshouldbeusedintestingnewdrugs PRO1 medicalresearchinvolvinganimalshasdramaticallyimprovedthehealthofthehumanrace d withoutanimaltest thecureforpolioanddiabeticswouldsufferfromtheirdiseases 2 animalslikemonkeys rabbitshavesimilarphysicalprocessestohumans d ifadrugproducesadverseeffectsinanimals itisunfitforhumanuse 3 animaltestischeap Animalsareeasilybredandmaintainedsafelyinlabs thecostoftestinginhumanswouldbeextremelyhigh 4 反证 Isanimaltestingcruel inhumane Yes However itwouldbemuchmoreinhumaneorirrationaltotestnewdrugsonadults children Itismanifestthatthegreatmajorityofpeopleeatmeat wearleatherwithoutanyguilt whereisyoursympathy Whatisyouropinionaboutsmoking Shoulditbebannedinallpublicplaces PRO1 Healthisthemainissueregardingthebanonsmoking Overwhelmingevidencecitestobaccouseasthemaincauseofprematuredeathandmanydiseases cancers bronchitis pneumonia emphysema eyeirritation sorethroat dizziness morningcough badbreath darkfingers yellowishteeth 2 itisawastefulandcostlyhabit itisaddictive peoplemightgobrokebecauseofit CON1 smokingmakessocializingeasier itactsassociallubricant 2 smokingisapleasurableandrelaxingexperience whichhelpsstrainedpeopletorelievetheirheavypressureandrefreshtheirenergy 3 反证 Themanufacturingoftobaccoresultsinenvironmentalpollution However itisobviousthatcarsemithazardousfumeseverysingleday Shouldwebancarstoo Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement itiseverjustifiabletoexecutecriminals PRO 1 lawisauthoritative manyinnocentpeoplearekilledbyreleased paroled orescapedmurderers 2 prisonsareover crowdedandunder funded Whyshouldthetaxpayerbearthecostofsupportingamurdererforanentirelifetime CON 1 byexecutingcriminals youarerulingoutthepossibilityofrehabilitationthattheymayrepentoftheircrime serveasentenceaspunishment andemergeasareformedmemberofsociety 2 反证 Whenimplementingauthoritativelaw thewholeprincipleisoutweighedbytheprovenriskofexecutinginnocentpeople Mentallyincompetentdefendantswilloftenanswer yes toquestions whichcanleadtofalseconfessions 182 185Manypeoplehaveacloserelationshipwiththeirpets Thesepeopletreattheirbirds cats orotheranimalsasmembersoftheirfamily Inyouropinion aresuchrelationshipsgood Whyorwhynot Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouranswer 77 185Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement Boysandgirlsshouldattendseparateschools 28 185Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement Television newspaper magazines andothermediapaytoomuchattentiontothepersonallivesoffamouspeoplesuchaspublicfiguresandcelebrities Usespecificreasonsanddetailstoexplainyouropinion Strengthen列提纲时 三大方法 拆解词汇加入条件万能理由 拆解词汇 e g 166 185Peoplerecognizeadifferencebetweenchildrenandadults Whatevents experiencesorceremonies makeapersonanadult Usespecificreasonsandexamplestoexplainyouranswer 105 185Itisgenerallyagreedthatsocietybenefitsfromtheworkofitsmembers Comparethecontributionsofartiststosocietywiththecontributionsofscientiststosociety Whichtypeofcontributiondoyouthinkisvaluedmorebyyoursociety Givespecificreasonstosupportyouranswer 万能理由详见PPT独立写作 STREEC Step4 WritetheintroductionStatingyouropinionTheintroductiontoyouressayshouldtellthereaderwhatyouropiniononthetopicis Theessayoftheindependenttaskisapersonalessay Yourideasonatopicareimportant Thereaderslooktoseehowyouexpressyouropinion Youshouldshowsyntacticvarietytoscorehigh SetPhrasesinmyopinionItismyopinionthatAccordingtomeIbelieveTomywayofthinkingIthinkInmyviewItseemstomethatTomeAsformeFrommypointofviewTomymind VerbsAgreeinferBelieverealizeGuesssupposeHopethinkImagineunderstand AdverbialsAllinallbasicallygenerallyAllthingsconsideredbyandlargeAltogetheressentiallyonthewholeAsaruleforthemostpartoverallSotospeakForallintendsandpurposes E g 1 185VersionAIbelievethatpeopleattendcollegeformanydifferentreasons VersionBIbelievethatpeopleattendcollegeformanydifferentreasons Ibelievethatthethreemostcommonreasonsaretoprepareforacareer tohavenewexperiences andtoincreasetheirknowledgeofthemselvesandworldaroundthem 6 185VersionAIthinkchangesarenecessaryinmyhometown Therehastobesomethingdifferent VersionBIfIcouldchangeonethingaboutmyhometown Ithinkitwouldbethefactthatthereisnosenseofcommunityhere Peopledonotfeelconnected theydonotlookoutforeachother andtheydonotgettoknowtheirneighbors Drills 115 1851 Thesisstatement nothingismoreimportantthanmyfamily Paragraphfocus Ilearnedabouttrust ambition andlove Drill2 111 185Thesisstatement Iwouldpreferspendingtimealoneratherthanwithmyfriends Paragraphfocus Ineedthisalonetorechargemybatteries Ineedthistimealonetore energizemymindandspirit Itisthetimealonethatformsyouaperson Drill3 44 185Thesisstatement travelingaloneistheonlywaytotravel Paragraphfocus youmeetnewpeopleyouhavenewexperiencesyoulearnmoreaboutyourself Step5 WritethebodyparagraphsMD无敌结构 Opinion类 家长是最好的老师 你同意吗 disagree 1 M parentsdon tallowchildrentravellingaloneconsideringaboutsafetyD story 2 M parentsinsistonchoosingmajorsfortheirkidsD example 政府应花钱在太空还是基本地球需要上 Spaceresearch中间段一Mainpoint FindnewsolutionstobenefittheEarthinproducingfoodandclothesDetails 1 preservefoodintheaerospace tohelppoorcountries Details 2 thecultivationoffood saveresourcefortheEarth Details 3 spaceoutfits 中间段二Mainpoint acceleratecommunicationtechnology Detail GPS satellitephone中间段三Mainpoint internationalcommunication Detail spacestation 中间段落无敌式MMainpointDexplanationgeneralspecificexampleexamplecomparecontrastsummary 中间段的DETAIL包含 ExplanationGeneralexamples Parallelismsentences SpecificexampleStatisticsCompare contrastQuotation allusionSummary Quotation 示范 Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement Itisbettertohaveoneortwoclosefriendsthantohavealargenumberofcasualacquaintances 中间段一段展示Mainpoint Afewclosefriendsunderstandyou Detail Unlikefamilymembers especiallyparents whoalwaysgiveyouvaguedirectionsthatyoudonotwant closefriendsusuallyknowyouwellandunderstandyourfeelings Generalexample Forexample ifyoufallinlovewiththegirlnextdoor youcantellthembutnotyourparents whowillalwaysremindyoutheimportanceofstudyinthiskindofsituationandletthemhelpyou Contrast However ifyouhavealotofcasualfriendsandnoclosefriends thingswillbemuchworsebecausefriendswhodon tknowanythingbutyourlastnamewon tcarewhetheryouarehappyornot theymayturnyouin shareyourlittlesecretswithalotofguyswhoyoudon tevenknow andmakefunofyou Specificexample TakeZhangsan mybestfriend forexample whenhefellinlovewithLisi abeautifulgirlnextdoortohim ateleventhgrade hedarenottellhisparents whoalwaysirrationallyforcehimtostudyalldayevenonSundayandnationalholidays Instead heconfidedinmethathewasgoingtoaskLiSiout Ashisbestfriend IdidallIcouldtohelphim Ihelpedhimplanthedate deliveredthemessageforhimtoLiSi andtoldhisparentsthathewasatmyhouse NowZhangSanandLiSiaremarried andI mthebestmanattheweddingceremony ContrastforSpecificexampleIfbackthen ZhangSanhadhadalargenumberofcasualacquaintances whowouldnotcaretohelp ratherthanme hisbestfriend hewouldnothavemarriedLiSisoeasily SummaryTherefore afewconfidantswhoknowyoubetterandactuallycareaboutyou ratherthanalargegroupoffriendswhobarelyrememberyourname isbetterforyou Writingdrill 135 Somehighschoolsrequireallstudentstowearschooluniforms Otherhighschoolpermitsstudentstodecidewhattoweartoschool Whichofthesetwoschoolpoliciesdoyouthinkisbetter M 校服便宜M Schooluniformsarenotasexpensiveasbrandnameclothing D Aschooluniformusuallycostsunder 50 andeverystudentneeds2to3peryear Designerjeansandabrand nameshirtplusapairoftrendyshoesaretentimesofthatamount soacompleteschoolwardrobecancostthousandsandevenhundredsofthousandsdollars Severalpopularnovelsorafewpricytestpracticebooksontheprofessor sreadinglistwilldefinitelybeabetterbenefit AndforstudentsfrompoorcountrieslikeIndiaorRussia themoneysavedfromuniformscanbeputintoasavvyaccountintofood books andcars SpecificexampleMainpointsentence Studentsshouldwearschooluniformsbecauseitislessexpensivethanbrandnameclothes sothatwecanusethemoneysavedtopurchasesomebookswhichcanenrichourlivesandmovieswhichentertainus sothatwecanbemoreexcitedinstudying Takemyfriend Tommy asexample Heisanormalstudent Oneday hisschoolannouncedthatalltheschoolstudentsshouldwearschooluniform hebegannottobuyanyexpensivejacksonandsuits Itsavedhimalotofmoney andhealsochosetospendthemoneyonbooksinordertoread Becauseofhislargereadingnumber hebecametopstudentinclass Healwaysgotfullmarksinhisquiz healsowonthechampionshipinbothMathandGeographycompetition andhewasthechiefeditorinschoolnewspaper FinallyhewaspickedupbyPekingUniversity Ifbackthen theschoolhasn tforcedhimtouseuniform hewouldn tattendPekingUniversitysoeasily 修改后Takemybestfriend Zhangsan forexample hewasnotoutstandinginitiallyinhisclass Untiloneday thehighschoolheattendedannouncedthatalltheschoolstudentsshouldwearschooluniformtoschool Helostinterestintakingpartinclothescompetitionamongstudents hewouldnotbuyexpensivejacketsorbrand nameshirtsanymoreandinvestthemoneysaved hewasamazedtofindthathecouldsaveabout1 000dollarsayearwhenhechosetowearschooluniforms onbooksofvariouskinds WorldWar2 BlackHoles andevenLeonardoDavinci sAutobiography Hewasimmediatelyfascinatedbythesebooks Becausehewassoabsorbedinsuchkindsofbooks heeventuallybecameadistinguishedstudentinhisclass hefrequentlygotfullmarksinquizzes hewonthechampionshipsfortheschoolinbothMathandGeographycontests andhewasalsoelectedchiefeditorofschoolnewspaper Finally hewasadmittedbyPekingUniversity oneofthemostrenowneduniversitiesinChina Andabrilliantfutureiswaitingforhim Ifbackthen hisschoolhadn trevisedtheschoolpolicy whichdemandedallthestudentstowearschooluniformtogotoschool hewouldn thaveabandonedhishabitoffocusingmoreonwhattowearthanonacademics andthus hewouldn thavebeensosuccessfulandadmiring Therefore wearinguniformsshouldbehighlyrecommendedtoallhighschools 300words 第五步写中间段时强化语言模块DictionvarietySynonyms discuss discussion Lastmonth Ihadadisputewithmyparents Itstartedasasimpleconversationthatturnedintoanargument Iwantedtotakeayearofffromschool Ofcourse myparentsarguedthatIshouldstayinschool Itriedtoreasonwiththem Itriedtopersuadethemthattakingayearofffromschoolandworkingwouldbevaluableexperience Myexplanationfellondeafears andtheyrefusedtoletmecontinuethediscussion TheyfeltIhadnotthoroughlyexaminedtheissueandsawnoreasontodebatethesubjectanylonger Iconferredwithmysisterwhofeltwecouldhashitoverlaterwhenmyparentswereinabettermood TransitionalwordsTimeBeforenextthenoftenafterduringalwayssometimesSinceatthesametimewhilemeanwhile DegreeCrucialsignificantprimaryessentialVitalfundamentalbasicprincipalChiefmajormostimportant ComparisonandcontrastTocompareSimilartosimilarlyresemblecommoninAtthesametimeasjustasinthesamewayTocontrastDifferfromhoweverneverthelessIncontrasttoontheotherhandwhileyetinstead CauseandeffectSothusconsequentlythereforeForthisreasonasaresultbecause becauseofOwingtosinceduetosothat ExemplificationInotherwordstoclarifytoexplainToparaphraseaslikeThatisforexamplesuchasForinstancetoillustratenamelyTake asanexampleAsanexampleInsomecircumstances AddingmoreinformationInadditionbesidesfurthermoreAswellasmoreoveralsoWhatismoretobemorespecificTogofurther Drill 1 thetrafficimmediately 2 and 3 aftertheschoolday therealsowouldbetraffic 4 therewasasportingevent 5 abasketballorfootballgame oractivitiesattheschool Wouldtherebeenoughparkingintheschoollotforeveryoneattendingthoseevents Probablynot 6 thoseextracarswouldendupinourneighborhood 1 A Furthermore 2 A before 3 A meanwhileB InadditiontoB whenB immediatelyC whatismoreC nextC during 4 A often 5 A suchas 6 A duetoB sometimeB toparaphraseB sinceC wheneverC toclarifyC consequently ParallelverbsWepressabutton waitforashorttime andremovethefoodfromthemicrowave ParalleladjectivesIfoundthemovielongandboring Syntacticvariety1 ParallelstructuresParallelsubjectsworkandplayshouldbemoreevenlydividedinmyday workingandplayingshouldbemoreevenlydividedinmyday ParalleladverbsAthletesoftenmovegracefully easilyandpowerfullyParallelgerundsIenjoyshoppingandkeepingupwiththelateststyles butnotpayingforthebills ParallelsentencesWhilethereareadvantagesanddisadvantagestobothmachine madeandhand madeproducts Iprefermachine madeproducts Whilehand madeproductsaregenerallyhighquality Ifindthemexpensive WhileIappreciatehigh qualityproducts Icannotaffordthem 2 CoherenceRepeatingRephrasingThecountrysidewhereIgrewupisveryisolated youcandriveformileswithoutseeinganothercar Itseemsinalldirectionsyoulookatabreathtakingvista Suchasecluded remoteenvironmentisaprefectplacetorelax Thespectacularviewsbringouttheartistinme Sentences4typesSimplesentenceAsimplesentencehasonesubjectandoneverbTelevisioncommercialsarethemosteffectiveformofadvertising CompoundsentenceAcompoundsentencehastwoormoresimplesentenceslinkedbytheconjunctionsand or andbut Newspaperadsareoftenignored andradioadsarequicklyforgotten ComplexsentenceAcomplexsentenceismadeupofasimplesentenceandoneormoresubordinateclauses Mostpeoplelistentoradiowhentheyaredrivingtowork Compound complexsentenceAcompound complexsentencehastwoormoresimplesentencesandoneormoresubordinateclauses Althoughfamiliesmaylistentoaradioduringtheday theparentslistenonlyfornewsreports andthechildrenuseitforbackgroundnoise SubjectVersionAMyparents generationhasstrictstandardsaboutacceptablebehavior Myparents generationhasadifficulttimeacceptingotherstandardsofbehavior Myparents generationisstillveryconcernedaboutwhatotherpeoplethinkofthem Myparents generationgrewupinsmallcommunitieswhereeveryonekneweverybody VersionBMypar