高考作文概要写作Summary-Writing(必修三第四单元课文)

Summarywriting 2017高考新作文概况 PARTI应用文写作 80 20词共15分PARTII读后续写 原文350词左右续写150 20词PARTIII概要写作 原文350词左右概要60 20 Asummaryisashortstatementthatgivesonlythemainpointsofsth notthedetails 牛津高阶英汉双解词典 读者在正确理解文章的基础上 在不改变原文中心思想 体裁和结构的前提下 用简明 精练的语句高度浓缩文章的主要内容和观点 Itisabrief thoroughandobjectiverestatementofthemainideaandkeypointsofalongercomposition a60 wordsummaryuseyourownwordsinthethirdpersonwithabriefsentenceconnectionbetweensentences 句子衔接 Step1 Determinethetypeofwritingandidentifythetopicaswellastheauthor spurposeStep2 Dividethepassage summarizethemainideaofeachpartStep3 HighlightthekeyinformationofeachpartStep4 MakeanoutlineofthepassageStep5 WritethefirstdraftStep6 Revisethesummary Unit4Astronomy thescienceofthestarsSection3 TextRevisionTask1 Listenforthemainidea Step1 确定体裁 明确主题 Step2 划分文章结构 划分层次Step3 找出每层主旨信息Step4 列出文章提纲Step5 拟写草稿Step6 修改文章 Step1 Determinethetypeofwritingandidentifythetopicaswellastheauthor spurpose 确定体裁 明确主题体裁 主题 记叙文 文艺复兴时期的艺术 提炼要点整合 删除细节删除具体例子 引用一两个说明问题即可 避免重复 同义转换 近义词 同义词等替换语言句子重构 调整词类 时态 语态等 逻辑 衔接 照应 替代 省略 连接和词汇衔接 1 确定文体thetypesofthepassage Step2 Dividethepassage summarizethemainideaofeachpart 明确文章结构 Para2 Para1 Para3 Para4 Para5 Step3 Highlightthekeyinformationofeachpart划主题句与关键信息 Para1 Theory Mainidea However accordingtoawidelyacceptedtheory theuniversebeganwitha BigBang thatthrewmattersinalldirections Tip1 注意语句标记词如however后所说的话往往就是point 然而 如何改写用自己的话来概扩呢 Mainidea The bigbang theoryexplainedtheorigionoftheUniverse Tip2 省略定语从句 改写主语和宾语的位置 Para2 Earth TopicSentence None 6个句子的逻辑关系理清楚 Information theearthwasacloudofdust thedustsettledintoasolidballproducegasestobeatmospherewaterappeared Tips 有些段落需要把信息点提炼出来在进行归纳 因此此句概括为 Theearthexplodedviolentlybutintimecreatedatmosphereandwaterappeared 如何和第一段 The bigbang theoryexplainedtheorigionoftheUniverse 概要相连接呢 Afterthat theearth Para3 water TopicSentence WatermadelifedeveloppossiblyTips 补充说明第二段水的作用 可以作为次要点放在第三段结合处理 Para4 TopicSentence Nonepoints plantsinwater shellfish fish plantsonlandlandanimals forest reptiles dinosaurs mammals Mainidea Thankstothewater variouswildlifedevelopedandappearedontheearth Tips 学会使用概括性词汇来代替具体事实 Para5 Humans TopicSentence Nonepoints finally cleveranimalsappearedandspread notlookaftertheearthwell theearthmaybetoohottoliveon whether dependon Mainidea Fianlly Humansruletheearthbutthetimeoftheirexistenceisuncertain Tips 积累概扩性词汇 Step4 Makeanoutlineofthepassage Para1Para2Para3Para4Para5 TopicSentence TheoryEarthWaterLifeHumans Step5 Writethefirstdraft The bigbang theoryexplainedtheorigionoftheUniverse Afterthat Theearthexplodedviolentlybutintimecreatedatmosphereandwaterappeared Thankstothewater variouswildlifeappearedanddevelopedontheearth Fianlly Humansruledtheearthbutthetimeoftheirexistenceuncertain 49 Rewrite Rewrite Step5 Rewritethesummary ThetheoryexplainedthattheorigionoftheUniversebeganwithabigbang Afterthat Theearthexplodedviolentlybutintimecreatedatmosphereandwaterappearedonitssurfacewhichmadelifepossilbe Thankstothewater variouswildlifeappearedanddevelopedontheearth Fianlly Humansruledtheearthtilltodaybuttheirexistenceandfuturedependsontheirproblemsolving 62 Idea1 Peoplebegantoconcentratelessonreligiousthemesandadoptamorehumanisticattitudetolife Rewrite Firstly peoplefocusedmoreonhumanisticthemesratherthanreligiousones Idea2 AtthesametimepaintersreturnedtoclassicalRomanandGreekideasaboutart Theytriedtopaintpeopleandnatureastheyreallywere Rewrite Secondly paintersreturnedtoclassicalideas whichattachedgreatimportancetorealpeopleandnature focusedmoreon 同义转换 句型转变 短语连接 删除细节 Para1 IntheRenaissance newviewpointswereinplaceofthosehundredsyearsago Firstly peoplefocusedmoreonhumanisticthemesratherthanreligiousones Secondly paintersreturnedtoclassicalideaswhichfocusedonrealpeopleandnature 38words Step6 RevisetheSummary PeoplehadnewviewpointsduringtheRenaissance Meanwhile painterspreferredtheclassicalideasandpaintedrealpeopleandnature Firstly Secondly PeoplehadnewviewpointsduringtheRenaissance Peoplefocusedmoreonhumanisticthemesratherthanreligiousones Meanwhile painterspreferredtheclassicalideasandpaintedrealpeopleandnature 29words OnepossibleversionofPara1 Tips CoverallthekeypointsWriteincorrectlanguageUseproperconjunctionsAvoidcopyingtheoriginalsentencesCountthewords 60 20 Onepossibleversion PeoplehadnewviewpointsduringtheRenaissance Peoplefocusedmoreonhumanisticthemesratherthanreligiousones Meanwhile pa