20176月浙江省高考英语读后续写试题(卷)分析与范例点评~教育文档.doc

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One of his friends had stopped to make a bicycle repair， but they had encouraged Mac to carry on， and they would catch up with him soon. As Mac pedaled （骑行） along alone， he thought fondly of his wife and two young daughters at home. He hoped to show them this beautiful place someday. Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him. “Man， thats a big dog！” he thought. But when he looked to the side， he saw instantly that it wasnt a dog at all， but a wolf， quickly catching up with him. Macs heart jumped. He found out his can of bear spray. With one hand on the bars， he fired the spray at the wolf. A bright red cloud enveloped the animal， and to Macs relief， it fell back， shaking its head. But a minute later， it was by his side again. Then it attacked the back of Macs bike， tearing open his tent bag. He fired at the wolf a second time， and again， it fell back only to quickly restart the chase （追赶）. Mac was pedaling hard now. He waved and yelled at passing cars but was careful not to slow down. He saw a steep uphill climb before him. He knew that once he hit the hill， hed be easy caught up and the wolfs teeth would be tearing into his flesh. At this moment， Paul and Becky were driving their car on their way to Alaska. They didnt think much of it when they saw two cyclists repairing their bike on the side of the road. A bit later， they spotted what they， too， assumed was a dog running alongside a man on a bike. As they got closer， they realized that the dog was a wolf. Mac heard a large vehicle behind him. He pulled in front of it as the wolf was catching up fast， just a dozen yards away now. 注意： 1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右； 3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； 4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关?I词语。 试题要点分析 答题建议 习作点评 学生习作1 The car abruptly stopped in front of him. “Man， come in quickly！” shouted Paul. Hearing the voice， Mac got off the bicycle and jumped into the car without hesitation. Before Mac could say a word， the car rushed at an incredibly high speed. Looking back through the window， he found the wolf gradually disappeared in the dark night. After arriving at a safe place， Mac explained what had just happened and thanked Paul and Becky. Then he made a call to inform his friends of his location. A few minutes later， the other two cyclists arrived. When told about Macs frightening experience， the two were astonished with their mouths widely open， for they didnt meet any animal on their way. Worried about coming across the wolf again， Paul offered to drive them to Alaska wholeheartedly. With two bicycles placed in the back of the car， they set off in the bright sunrise. Staring at the breath-taking scenery along the way， Mac said to himself， “But I never want to show my family to this place！” 点评1 学生习作2 The car abruptly stopped in front of him. At that moment， Mac jumped to the top of the car. Fortunately， he succeeded. Then， realizing what is happening， Paul drove the car away quickly. After a few minutes， the car stopped again. Mac jumped down and thanked Paul and Becky. “It seemed that you had an exciting experience！” Paul said， laughing. “Oh， yes！ It was really exciting and I would be caught by the wolf without your help.” Mac replied， “I must wait for my friends！ Thank you again.” A few minutes later， the other two cyclists arrived. Noticing that Mac was standing alone without his bicycle， they asked Mac what had happened. Mac told them the wolf， the help of Paul and Beckys. “Wow， it was amazing！” They shouted. “But you will never know what I felt at that time. My heart jumped widely.” Mac said. “Dont worry， I think it must be an unforgettable pedaling experience for you. You should value it.” One of Macs friends tried to comfort him. “But now， how can I go home without my bicycle？” 点评2 The car abruptly stopped in front of him. Paul shouted to Mac. “Come on！” Without hesitation， Mac jumped into the car leaving his bicycle. The wolf looked angry. The wolf hit his bicycle without mercy. Wandering for a while， the wolf left. After a long time to calm down， Mac began to said in a weak voice， “I just thought I would never see my wife and my lovely daughters again. It is your kindness that saved my life！” A few minutes later， the other two cyclists arrived. They were shocked at what they have seen， a broken bicycle and Mac was worn-out. They asked， “Hey brother！ Whats wrong with you？” Mac explained what happened to him and introduced his new friends to them. Mac said， “Without their help， I wont survive. And what happened to me revealed that we should give other a hand when they are in need.” What a dangerous pedaling！ 点评3 学生习作4 The car abruptly stopped in front of him. Mac ask them for help， he said the wolf chased him long time. He was very tired. At that moment， the wolf arrived. It was very big. Paul and Becky climbed the car to found something to make it go back. They found two chair and a wood. So they slowly caught the wolf and then use the wood to make it died. They were very tired and afraid. But finally the won the “war” They felt they were lucky dogs， They all didnt die. A few minutes later， the other two cyclists arrived. Mac told his friends what happened a few minutes ago. They were very surprised and asked Mac he was ok？ Mac told them he is ok and extended his gratitude to Paul and Becky. Because they helped him， he was live. And they went back home. Mac decided to ask his parents and wife what happened. He thought it was surprised. It was a amuseing experence. It was personal and someone nerer met or experenced. He was very lucky. 点评4 学生习作5 The car abruptly stopped in front of him. But there was stil a long distance. Mac realized so long as he Predales to the car， he would be saved. Unfortunately， he couldnt even breath with running out of the energy. The wolf was going to catch him. Paul shouted in order to remind him， but he couldnt recognized what he said. when his heart couldnt jamped， his mind turned up his home with his wife and daughter. Instantly， he stuck to pedaled. The car was near and near， and the wolf was also near and near. He found the car is in the face， and gave up his bicycle， ran to the car. He made it！ He escaped from the wolf. A few minutes later， the other two cyclists arrived. They astonished what happened on their friend， and nothing could express their apology for leaving Mac alone. He was tired but still gave a smile to them， which let they knew he had forgiven them. It also let Mac knew life was So lucky that he Should take use of every seconds. ?c评5 学生习作6 The car abruptly stopped in front of him. Macs heart jumped. He know If he stop he will be wolfs teeth to tear into his flesh. So he was loud told until a people under the car. He finded he is a policeman. He pedaled to that man for help. That man saw a wolf was chase this man. So he shake it. The man was living. He could go home with his family. He thanks that man for help. A few minutes later， the other two cyclists arrived. They saw the wolf was died. They very happy. Paul thanks Mac and another. Then they brought this wolf to the zoo. 点评6 结语 费笆恒原释裔跌袋了省缓但百沈尤砷彦邓碉远淬屎援妹澳黍痰厨旷肋播垢血移羞奄派载闰隔椿已烷壁沙卜