2018年广州市中考英语作文专题复习(二)社交人际

2018年广州市中考英语作文专题复习（二）社交人际写作专题二：社交人际一、与专题相关的话题项目：family, friends and people around, personal environments, interpersonal relationship二、与话题相关的知识准备：1.相关单元：七上Unit 1 Making friends七下Unit 1 People around us八下unit 1 Helping those in need, unit 2 Body language九上Unit 3 Family life, Unit 4 Problems and advice2. 相关词汇：be friendly to , make friends with sb, get on/get along well with sb, share happinessandsadness with sb, argue with, argument, be angry with, fair, housework, be responsible for, expect, concerned, generation gap, suggestion, sadness, self-control, apologize, neighborhood, lazy, duty, wash the dishes,counselor, bully, peaceful, guidance, fault, relationship, reliable, advise3. 相关句型：Its adj for sb to do sthIts adj of sb to do sthYoud better (not) do sthYou should/must/ can (not) doInmy opinion/view(1) 我父母每个月都给我一笔数目可观的零用钱My parents give mea generous amount of pocket moneyevery month.(2) 我父母从来不为我做家务付费。My parents neverpay me for doinghousework.(3) 我对学习网球认真。Iwasserious aboutlearningtennis.(4) 他们说指望不劳而获是不好的。They say its bad to expect thingsfor nothing.(5) 我对他们感到十分遗憾。Ifeel sorry forthem.(6) 我有时会和Katie吵架，但她让我有一个可以倾诉的人。Iargue withKatie sometimes, but she gives me someone totalk to.(7) 被人欺负会让你觉得很孤独和生气，但你不是孤立无援的。Being bulliedcan make you feel very lonely and angry, but you are not alone.4.相关语法：一般现在时，一般过去时,情态动词【例题】班里进行了中学生有必要干家务活的辩论。请根据以下两位同学的观点，为校报写一篇关于Should students do housework?的文章，可适当发挥，字数80字左右。（文章的开头已给出，不计入词数）John没有必要做家务。作业很多，父母也不让做家务，只要学习好就行Lily应该要做家务。虽然作业多，但仍可挤出时间做简单的家务，如扫地，洗碗你的观点？Should students do housework?There is a debate on“should students do housework?”in our class. _解题思路：1、审题：a.本文共有5个要点b.时态主要采用一般现在时c.主要人称是_三_，_一_两种人称2、列要点John没有必要做家务。Its not necessary作业很多(too much homework)，父母也不让做家务( make sb (not) do，只要学习好就行study hardandwellLily应该要做家务(should do housework)。虽然作业多，但仍可挤出（spare time）时间做简单的家务，如扫地，洗碗(clean the floor, washthedishes)你的观点？可能用到的句型或连词：its adj.For sb to do, sothat , because, for these reasons, therefore3、连词成句，连句成篇Should students do housework?There is a debate on“should students do housework?”in our class.John thinkits not necessary to do housework because too much homework to do.Besides, many parents make children not do housework.In their opinions, study hardandwell is everything. Lily has different idea.She thinks students should do housework.In her opinion, though we students have too muchhomework , we can spare time to help parents do housework.We can clean the floorandwash the dishes.As for me, its our responsibility to do houseworkbecausewe arethemember of ourfamily.点评：优点：本文用词基本准确，有适当的连词和较丰富的句型缺点：本文有少数语法错误；文章的布局不是很清楚4.检查思路：完成作文自查表：1.如果没有问题的，请在项目后打。2.如果有问题，请在项目中圈出来，并在文中做出修改。项目第一次自查第二次自查布局与内容要点人称 时态、主谓一致动词搭配、介词搭配拼写错误好词好句分项分档评分表项目要素给分表内容6分切合题意，体现要点6-55654.54-3.53-2.521.510有所发挥准确性6分语 法6-5.554.54.54-3.53-2.521.510词 汇机械性：大小写，拼写和格式等错误流畅性3分结构3-2.52-1.5210.50000自评总分：12.5参考范文：There is a debate on“should students do housework?”in our class.Different students have different opinions.John thinks its not necessary for students to do housework because we have too much homework to do.Besides, many parents dont ask their children to do housework.In their opinion, studying hardandwell iseverything. Lily has opposite idea.She thinks students should do housework. According to her,though we have too much homework to do, we can spare time to help parents do some simple things such as cleaning the floorandwashing the dishes.Iagree with Lilybecausewe are part of our family, so its our responsibility to do the housework.三、练习最近你校进行了一次“说出你的烦恼”(Dont keep your worries)的调查活动，请你用英语写一篇短文。要求：1） 内容包括：调查结果（如图所示）2）对老师和父母的建议3）字数80左右。文中不得出现真实的校名、姓名Our school has made a survey-“Dont keep your worries.”_1.审题：本文共有个要点时态主要采用人称是_2.抓要点（写在要点旁边）3.可能用到的句型或连词_4.连词成句，连句成文：_5、完成作文自查表：如果没有问题的，请在项目后打。如果有问题，请在项目中圈出来，并在文中做出修改。项目第一次自查第二次自查布局与内容要点人称 时态、主谓一致动词搭配、介词搭配拼写错误好词好句参考例文：Our school has made a survey-Dont keep your worries.Here are the results.About 50%of the students in our school are worried about their homework.They have so much homework to do every day that they feel stressed too much.About 30%of the students think their parents are too strict with them in their studies.They think the only thing their parents care for is study so its difficult for them to communicate with their parents.The other 20% of them say they are weak in health.They complain that they almost have no time for their hobbies or after-school activities.According to the survey we know