英语二30分作文 写作具体要求及详解

,强化实践能力培养的考核方式、方法：要求考生在期末递交三片小作文。作文的长度约为10-15句，约100字。可选作文题目包括：1）WhyDoILearnEnglish2)TheBookILikeMost3)MyFavouriteCity4)MyBestFriend5)AChineseFestival6)ANervousExperience7)WhyILikeComputer/IDontLikeComputer8)MyOldSchool9)IWanttoSaySomethingaboutScience10)MyFamily11)IWanttoBeaTeacher/Lawyer/Millionaire12)MyFavouriteSeason,总分为30分，按5个档次给分。评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。词数少于75和多于120的，从总分中减去2分。评分时，应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性、上下文的连贯性及语言的得体性。拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写汉词汇用法均可接受。如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。内容要点可用不同方式表达，对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分。,作文要求：1、整体格式：按要求编辑完三篇作文后要统一格式；标题为小三粗体并居中、内容为四号字。2、检查语法和词汇错误：对有划波浪线和红线的部分要检查错误直至曲线消失。3、注意字数要求，不要太多也不要太少，控制在80-120。4、尽量不要自己些，可以去搜相关的语句，最后加工成自己的作品。（如何选题见各篇讲解，题材丰富，不用担心会有雷同，除非你是直接拷的别人的）,1、WhyDoILearnEnglish搜相关学习英语的好处和作用的文章，一定要该用第一人称，如以下的句子可以放在作文里。1)Englishisanimportanttoolforcommunicationsbetweenpeopleofdifferentcountriesasthemostwidelyusedlanguage.Forexamples:informationseek,exchangeandacademicstudy.2)TohaveabetterunderstandingofthewesterncountriesandtheirhistoryandculturetoaidthedevelopmentofChina,youmustexploitbyyourselfwiththeirlanguageandusetheiroriginalbooks.3)BylearningEnglish,youmaythinkbothinEnglishandChinese,whichwillopenyoureyesandhelptoenlargeyourviews.4)WithgoodEnglish,youmaydevoteyourselftointroductionofChinesecultureandup-to-datetechnologiesintothewesterncountriestopromotetheexchangebetweenwesterncountriesandChina.,2、TheBookILikeMost自己喜欢任一本书均可作文材料，搜相关的英文介绍即可，比如“钢铁是怎么炼成的”的英文介绍等等。ThebookthatIlikemostisnotastorybookbutabookthatinspiresmetostrengthenmyFaithwithGodandthatisTHEPURPOSEDRIVENLIFE.Thatbookreallytouchesyourheartandsoul.IttalksabouthowtohaveacloserelationshipwithGodanditalsotellsthepersonthatweallhaveapurposewhywearehereinthisworld.SomeofusmaybebornbecauseofaccidentorunwantedpregnancybutGodplannedusaheadoftimeandweallhavearoleinthisworld.ItalsotalksabouttrialsandthesethingsarejustforstrengtheningourrelationshipwithGod.Hegaveusthatsothatwecanallbecomestrongandineachtimethatwefall,Heisalwaystheretocarryus.WemaynotalwaysappreciatethesethingsbutitisallaboutGodsplan.SometimesloosingsomethingmakesusdepressedbutwhoknowsmaybeGodhasanotherplanforusandwearejustpushingsomethingthatisnotreallyforus.Ireallyrecommendforeveryonetoreadthatbook,itwillreallytouchallofyouanditcanevenchangeourlives.Itisoneofakindandreallyagreattreasure.,3)MyFavoriteCity任何知道不知道的城市均可，搜相关英文介绍。HongKongisayoung,pulsatingcityfullofenergy.ThisisevidenttoanyonestandingonthequayinTsimShaTsuiandlookingatIslandsimpressingskyscraperhorizon.Furthermore,thisisacitywhichhassucceededinmakinganartoutofsqueezingsevenmillionpeopleintoanareaof1000squarekilometers.Youcanfindeverythinghere:someoftheworldsmostexcitingskyscraperarchitecture,fashionableshoppingmalls,amazingnightviewoftheVictoriaBayandoneoftheworldshottestfinancialdistricts.Forthosepreferfashion,avisittoCausewayBayisrecommendedhereitischieflyforyoungpeoplewhoenjoycombingthefashionboutiquesuntillateintotheevening.AnyonewholosestheirwayinthealleysofthetechnologyparadiseofKowloonwillfindtheirwaytoaninterestingrestaurantintheChinesequarterofCentralofdecidetotakeaswiminStanleyAndsoitcontinues.AtriptoHongKongisanadventure!,4)MyBestFriend写人的，可以搜相关人物性格，事情等等。例如以下的范文：Everybodyhasabestfriendthattheycanshareeverythingwith.Ialsohaveabestfriend.Wemetinschool,andwereinthesamegrade.Mybestfriendisagoodstudentbecauseheisveryhardworking.Ilearnalotfromhim.Hehelpsmewithmath;IhelphimwithEnglish.Wealwayshelpeachother.Besidesthat,heshonestandreliable.Itrusthimcompletelyandwesharesecretsallthetime.Mybestfriendisaloyalandbraveboy.Whenabullyteasedme,hecametomyrescuerightaway.Healwaysremembersmybirthdayandheisfuntobewith.Hetellsfunnyjokesandstories.Healwaysmakesmelaugh.Finally,heisaverygoodlistenerandheknowshowtocheermeupwhenImdown.Ihopewellstayfriendsforever.,5)AChineseFestival题目也挺宽的，可以搜中国具体某个节日的英文介绍。具体的节日见下页：ChineseNewYearstartswiththeNewMoon（新月）onthefirstdayofthenewyearandendsonthefullmoon（满月）15dayslater.The15thdayofthenewyeariscalledtheLanternFestival（元宵节）,whichiscelebratedatnightwithlanterndisplaysandchildrencarryinglanternsinaparade.NewYearsEveandNewYearsDayarecelebratedasafamilyaffair,atimeofreunionandthanksgiving.ThecelebrationwastraditionallyhighlightedwithareligiousceremonygiveninhonorofHeavenandEarth（万物）,thegodsofthehouseholdandthefamilyancestors.,6)ANervousExperience自己的某种经历，激动的，紧张的，面试的，考试的，冒险的，均可Theideaofmovingtoafarawayplacecanbefrighteningforyoungerchildrenandparents,butfordifferentreasons.Whilechildrenareconcernedfortheunknown,parentsmaybeconcernedaboutthechildshealthandsafety.Shotsandimmunizationscankeepchildrenfromcontractingillnessesanddiseasesthathavebeenallbutforgottenasathreatforyearsinsomecountries,butareatruethreateverydayinothers.Internationalhealthinsuranceplanswilllikelycoverthecostofimmunizationsandphysicals,andparentsshouldexplaintochildrenoldenoughtounderstandthattheyneedtogotothedoctorsofficebeforethetrip.Adiscussionabouthowthatmightbedifferentfromthedoctorsofficetheygotooncetheyvemovedcanalsobehelpfultopreparechildrenfordifferences.,7)WhyILikeComputer/IDontLikeComputer搜电脑的好处、坏处的英文文章，在改成第一人称即可。Thereisnodoubtthatcomputersareveryusefulintechnologyandbusiness.Inspace,computershelpastronautsandpilotscontrolthespeedanddirectionofaspaceshipsflight.Withthehelpofcomputers,doctorscanfinddiseaseseasilyandsolveotherproblems.Forexample,tinycomputersinsidepeoplesbodieskeeptheirheartsbeatingwell.Infactories,robotscontrolledbycomputerscandoworkthatisdangeroustohumans.SincetheInternetcameintobeing,peopleslivesathomehavechanged，too.Moreandmorepeoplehavepersonalcomputers,andtheyusethemtoplaygamesandwatchmovies.ThankstotheInternet,peoplecandoshoppinganddobusinessathome.Insteadofwritinglettersonpaper,peoplecommunicatebysendinge-mailsandchattingonline.Thewholeworldisconnected.Computershavemadetheworldsmaller,likeavillage.Computershaveimprovedourlives,buttheyhavebroughtproblems,too.,8)Myschoollife学校生活的事情，小学初中高中大学里发生的事情，学习、感情、爱情的都可，不要写成小说那么长的。Thereisnodoubtthatalmostallstudentsdislikeschoollife,buteveryonehastheresponsibilitytoendthetheexamination-orientededucation.IamastudentwhostudyinaschoolwhichislocatedinYongchang.Iwasadmittedintothisbeautifulschool.IstillrememberthedaywhenIfirstwenttoschool.Inmyeyes,everythingwaspretty.Igetonwellwithmyclassmatesandteachers.SinceIwenttothisschool,Ithinkofmyteachersasmybestfriendslikeleavesandflowers.Ineverlookuponthemasothers.ItisreasonwhyIoftenquestionmyteachersonsomeproblemsisthatIlovethem.WhenIamtroubleandloseheart,theyalwayshelpmesettletheseproblems.Ofcourse,Iamalsosatisfiedwiththeireducation.Ihavealotoffriendswhocanmakemetrytoformthemgoodstudyhabits.Becauseofthat,Ioftengetupearlyandtrymybesttostudywell.,9）IWanttoSaySomethingaboutScience与电脑的作文相似，就是科学的优缺点，及给人类带来的影响等Sciencemakesourlifemoreconvenient。Ifnoscience，wemayusecandlestolightinginsteadofelectriclights；wemaygoover5mountainsand7riverstomakesurethatthepeopleyoulovearewellinsteadofmakingaphonecall；wemayoutofdatebylackingTVs。,10)MyFamily写家庭人和事均可，要用第一人称11)IWanttoBeaTeacher/Lawyer/Millionaire谈理想的文章，就是写些选择这一职业的原因和职业特点等Toeveryonewhowanttobeateacher,heresaquestion:whatmakesagoodteacher?howtobeagoodteacher?Inthepast19years,Ihavebeenstudyinginprimaryschoolinasmalldistantvillage,keysecondaryschoolinacounty,topuniversityofChinainthecapitalofChina,Beijing.Therearemanypeoplewhoplaytheroleof“teacher”inmylife,butonlyfewofthemwhoreallyimpressedme.Whattheyimpressedmemostisnothowgoodthelessontheygave,howgoodtheyarelookingorhownicetheyare(well,